Larxene's Transformation

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  1. BaseSebastian Kingdom Keeper

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    Where is the rest?

    We want more!

    I want to build a mental image of every Org member strangulating Vexen is brutal ways through reading it!

    Is Larxene going to be the only transformation,....or will you make more mishap and choas through the rest of the Org?
     
  2. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Sorry, but I'm suffering with a writers block D:

    And Larxene isn't going to be the only person transforming in this story, I'm not telling you any more than that :3
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  3. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    XD Comic is a perfect example of how to get rid of writer's block XD
     
  4. BaseSebastian Kingdom Keeper

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    I almost never get writer's block because I'm a good scenario maker.

    If you need some help or suggestions, just PM me.

    I'm a good hand at Fanfics.

    Other people to ask would be DestinyForce or Destined.

    There's more but DestinyForce and Destined are my favorite Authors. XD
     
  5. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks for offering, but I already know what stuff needs writing better and which character does what.
    I'm starting on the next chapter tonight :3
    If I ever need help, I'll keep that in mind ;)
     
  6. xXx1998xXx Moogle Assistant

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    I really enjoyed this! Keep IT up!
     
  7. naminestwinsister Destiny Islands Resident

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    this is the first fan fic i have read and so far i doubt a fan fic can get better than this one i'd just love vexen to say no to turning larxene back then thunder and lightning
     
  8. Dibship Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Great, man! Can't wait for the next chapter!
     
  9. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Next chapter should be up later ;)
     
  10. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Keep it coming!
     
  11. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Sorry it wasn't up yesterday like I promised, but KHV died before I could post it D:
    Enjoy anyway :)
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    Chapter 3: Painful Ending
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    As Axel and Larxene walked down the empty corridor, Axel started to sing.
    ♪Feel the magic, hear the roar,
    Thundercats are loose!♪
    Hearing this put a smile on Larxene's furry face, but it didn't distract her from what was happening.
    "AAAAGH!!" Larxene's spine cracked
    'I don't wanna, I don't wa-AAGH!' Still screaming, she doubled over in pain as her backbones reshaped themselves.
    "Ugh, I think I'm gonna puke!" Axel stated, he opened the nearest window, leaned out and vomited, not realising Marluxia was standing in the garden just below.
    'Okay... I think that's it' Larxene thought, she was now a full kitten. Crawling out of her coat, Axel wiped his mouth and opened the door.
    The whole organization was in the lab, with Marluxia standing at the back picking chunks of Axel's breakfast out of his hair.
    Before Axel could ask what everyone was doing there, Roxas explained.
    "We all heard Larxene screaming, even so we teleported here to find out what the noise was about"
    "Now..." Vexen said, holding a new blue potion.
    "Now to put this thing to the test!"
    He poured the thick substance into a small dish then put the dish on the floor.
    "Drink up!"
    The kitty purred as she lapped up the potion. She started to grow, her tail worked it's way back into her spine and her fur slowly disappeared
    Axel jumped with joy "I'm gonna have my girlfriend back, YAY!"
    "I worked out most of the kinks, so you shouldn't feel a thing" Vexen added casually
    "Great!" Larxene replied with a grin
    She was now back to her normal human self, but everyone was staring at her again
    "What?! You never seen a girl's body before?" Not noticing her voice was deeper...
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    Chapter 4
     
  12. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Oh my god! XDDDDD I so know what's going on!
     
  13. sweet_and_silent Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Lol this sounds funny sounds to me like it's not a girls body
     
  14. BaseSebastian Kingdom Keeper

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    So Larxene isn't a cat no more...That was shortly lived...XD

    And Larxene is sorta like Axel's Girlfriend, due to their conversations in CoM...I...guess...So long as it ain't oxas he's after! XD

    OMG! I cannot wait 'til chapter 4...I've waited so long on all these chapters I've neglected my own Fanfic...so maybe while your writing I should add onto mine...that's...probably a better idea...

    Still, Larxene can talk again (YAY!) but at a cost...I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!

    Sorry for the sorta randomness, but as you're the head of the random family, I have a good guess you might understand...XD
     
  15. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    She wasn't a cat very long.
     
  16. BaseSebastian Kingdom Keeper

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    Technically she didn't have to stay like that for long.

    The title is "Larxene's transformation" so anything could happen over and over again.

    A smart move by Gomiez If I may say so.
     
  17. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    Hehe!I think I know whats next!Shes a he!Hehehehehe!Larxenes a boy!Change the name to Larx!or...is she a guy?
     
  18. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    One word: NO
     
  19. BaseSebastian Kingdom Keeper

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    One word: That's disturbing....

    Seriosuly, something must have happened though, because everybody's shocked and awed.

    This is by far the best non-realistic (on't take that in a bad way, it just means it doesn't play the way KH plays out in storyline, ex: Sexual content, mild cussing, etc...) Fanfic starring Larxene to ever be made. Maybe even the best Org. Fanfic in a while. A stunning first for a person new to Fanfic writing.
     
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    Chapter 4: Run! Run away!

    Sorry for the long delay folks, chapter 4 is finally here *shoots writer's block* :P It's a little bit short, but a chapter nonetheless
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    Chapter 4: Run! Run away!
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    "Well... So much for girlfriend" Xigbar muttered while patting Axel's shoulder.
    "Good luck buddy!"
    The members of the organization all left in a hurry fearing for their lives.
    "Uh... Larxene?" Axel started, "... Look down"
    She obeyed and looked down slowly, and as she saw it, her eyes went to the size of apples.
    Vexen edged his way towards the door, but Larxene charged at him, slamming Vexen into his equipment.
    "WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO ME?!"
    "I'M SORRY!! The 'human male' and 'human female' potions look exactly the same! I just forgot to label them!" Vexen replied as chills shot down his spine.
    Sighing Larxene walked away.
    "Good enough excuse... But if this change is permenant, I want you to give Axel the female potion... I don't like yaoi"
    Larxene teleported out leaving Axel with the injured scientist.
    Axel helped Vexen to his feet, surprisingly Vexen could still speak.
    "Even if it is permenant. I won't be allowed to give you the potion... It'll be breaking the laws of the story"
    Axel was puzzled as he heard this.
    "Story? Man, that slam must've knocked out a few brain cells aswell as teeth!"
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    It was now night at the Castle (If it's what you'd call night). Larxene was busy posing nude in front of the mirror
    "Wow... I'm so much sexier as a guy..." Before she could strike another pose, Roxas shouted to her from outside,
    "Larxene! Stop checking yourself out and get in the shower!"
    She didn't want to waste their time, so she turned the shower on.
    "This is so wrong on many levels..."
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    Chapter 5