Larxene's Crush Chapter 3

Awsome!! Can't wait to read it!

 

AHHHH! ME TOO!!!!!!

Did you notice that Larxene is the only girl in organization 13? (unless your count Marly... j/k)

 

N0 \/\/4i! =O

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:D :D I don't know...techniquily Marluxia is a guy(<.< i think >.>), but from what ive seen from the movies....i have my doubts..not that im callying Marluxia a woman<cough>...not at all <cough, cough>...

 

Larxene's Crush Chapter 4

Ch 4 is out! From the poll, the meanine's in this story are Marluxia, Zexion, ans Saix! And we get to find out why Larxene is always so mean! Cool! Here's ch 4:

~Chapter 4~

“Can you tell me?â€
“Tell you what?â€
“The feeling I had…what was it called?â€
“Wouldn’t you like to know…â€
“Please!â€
“You felt—“

Larxene woke suddenly. She punched the wall next to her. Why’d I have to wake up? Why couldn’t I have slept just long enough to hear the answer? She thought. She cursed in her mind as she got out of bed, changed clothes, and headed down stairs.

She had a feeling that today was going to be a bad day.
+++
This morning, instead of a ‘good morning’ from Demyx, she received a snicker from him.
“What are you laughing at, water boy?†She said sharply. Demyx just snickered louder and walked out into the living room. Larxene rolled her eyes. Everyone still remembered—like they would forget that easily. Well, she thought, At least today can’t possibly get any worse.

“Hey lover girl!†Marluxia called.

Larxene sighed. Obviously it could get worse. Marluxia walked into the room, followed by Saix and Zexion. They all started to laugh.
“What do you want, flower pot?†Larxene said smugly.
“I heard you and Axel are going out tonight.†Zexion said. The three of them burst out laughing. Larxene rolled her eyes and walked into the living room to escape them. Axel was reading some manga, and Demyx, Xaldin, Lexaeus, and Xemnas were watching T.V. Unfortunately, Marluxia and his ‘lackeys’ followed her into the living room.
“Hey Saix, guess what?†Marluxia said.
“What?†Saix replied.
“A Nobody is in love with another Nobody!†Marluxia said. At that point, the three of them howled with laughter. “Don’t they just make the cutest non-existent couple ever?†At that comment, all the members in the room started to laugh, except for Axel and Larxene. Both of them by now were blushing, completely embarrassed.
“Shut up!!!†Larxene yelled. This only made them laugh harder. Hearing all the commotion in the living room, Xigbar, Vexen, and Roxas came in from the next room over.
“What’s going on?†Vexen asked.
“We’re having a little chat with Larxene.†Zexion said.
“So Larxene,†Marluxia started, “how does it feel to be the only Nobody with a boyfriend?†Everyone laughed (except for Axel, Larxene, and Xigbar).
“Knock it off!†Axel said, annoyed.
“Awww, Axel’s sticking up for his girlfriend!†Saix said. They all roared with laughter. Larxene turned to walk out of the room, but Marluxia stood in front of her, and pushed her against the wall. Then he put his arms out on the wall, trapping and pinning her against the wall.
“Where’s lover girl going?†Marluxia said in her face. Larxene looked down at the ground. Her eyes started to sting. She knew what was coming.

~FLASHBACK~

“What’s with your hair, bug?†Iota, Ralene’s (Which was Larxene’s name before she joined the Organization) older sister said.
“Leave me alone!†Ralene cried, her eyes starting to sting.
“Ralene, what’s wrong with you? You actually like those antennae that stick out of your hair?†Iota said, tugging hard on her hair.
“Ow! That hurt!!!†Ralene yelled, starting to cry. Her older sister laughed hard.
“You’re such a baby!â€
“Am not!â€
“Are too! You cry at every single little thing!â€
“I do not!†Ralene yelled, crying harder, her sobs shaking her little 7-year-old body.
“You need to toughen up!†Iota said, pushing her against the wall. Ralene wiped her face with her sleeve.
“How do I do that?†she asked. Iota laughed.
“Well, first you gotta stop crying about everything.†She plucked her younger sister’s head. “And you gotta act tough. Don’t let people see you cry. Taunt other people before they can taunt you. Be mean, and stop being so nice!†She said, punching Ralene in her arm before walking off, laughing viciously. Ralene watched her sister walk away with evil eyes.
“No one is ever gonna see me cry again!†She said, her voice low with anger. “I promise…â€

~FLASHBACK ENDS~

Now, the vicious laughs were back. Their insults and taunts cut into her like knives. A tear slipped down her face. I’m not going to cry. She thought. I won’t let myself. I won’t let them see that they’ve hurt me. But, another tear came. By now the whole living room was shaking with laughter.
“Leave me alone….†Larxene said quietly, shaking. Marluxia laughed.
“Oh, look! Lover girl has something to say!†He said cruelly.
“Leave me alone.†She repeated, louder. She couldn’t take much more of this. Part of her, the changed part of her, the ‘Larxene’ part of her, wanted to take out her Kunai and slice him to pieces. But the part of her that stayed the same, the ‘Ralene’ part of her, wanted to stand there and cry like a little kid. She just wanted this to be over.
“What was that, lover gir—â€
“I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!†She yelled so loud that Marluxia had backed away in surprise. She looked up at him. Tears were coming down her face.

“Are you happy now? Are you ALL happy now???†She yelled, surveying the room (that had now become quiet) wildly. “So what if I like Al??? There, I said it: I LIKE AXEL! Are you happy now? That you’ve got what you wanted? To cause me pain? To see me cry??? Are you satisfied??? Was that your goal? Thanks to you, I can never talk to him again!!!†She yelled uncontrollably, still crying. “ARE YOU HAPPY NOW??†She ran out of the room and up the stairs to all of the member’s rooms. She went in hers and slammed the door.

 

OH...................I felt so bad for Larxene....I could actually see it happen since you described it with such detail!!! I luv it!!! Can't wiat til the next chapter!!!

 

OMg.. this is gettin intense! I love this one!! It's awesome! When are you gonna make chapter 5? THIS IS SOO COOL! I love this story!


AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! *srry. I had to do it cause YOU ROCK!!!1*

 

wow this is great !;D
I enjoyed reading every chapter :3
Keep up the good work :D

 

*claps*

Very well done! ^-^

Why didn't Xigbar say anything, though?

 

I'm gonna work on chapter 5 after more people vote on the poll. I hope to finiahe the story today. :D And thanks! :) *is happy*

Hmmm...I'm not sure. Probably because everyone was laughing so much. He does say somethings in the next chapter, though

 

TALK TO AXEL, TALK TO AXEL!
LARXEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENE! TALK TO AXEEEEEEEEEEEEL!
lol
GREAT STORY!
What KHC said as well!

 

After you finsh this story, will you make another? PLEASE??????

 

I'm not sure...possibly...but it's not definate!

lol thanks! don't worry! they will talk!

 

*screams for 10 seconds*sorry its just that was so AWESOME!

 

lol thanks! :D

 

these stories are da bomb! I'm gonna start making my own!! AWESOME!!! but not right now. maybe in a few hours I might

 

:D Good for you! :) *goes to work on ch 5*

 

They went a little to far with Larxene. But great story none the less.

 

Yeah, I really didn't want them to make her cry (cause it was sorta sad), but i wanted to show she had a softer side, and a rough past. :)

 

Wow...I like this story! Poor Larxene....I'm going to do stories on her too,and she had a tricky life in my eyes. Anyways,great job! I can't wait to read the rest!!