Knocked Out

I walk down the hall,
See my friend,
But there's someone else,
Who is she?

They're both yelling,
Arguing,
Curse words fly,
Insults soar.

Running over,
My friend's on the ground,
I start to yell,
A crowd gathers.

My ears are ringing,
The stranger's yelling,
I yell back,
Something hits my face.

Cool tile against my back,
A warm liquid on my head,
Vision fading,
Blackout.

Yeah... School issues... *shakes head*

CnC please? :3

 

Hmm...interesting poem...suspenseful mood...definately emotion and thought process being accounted for....good poem Destiny....

 

Thanks, Last. ^^

Oh, and because I just noticed I may have given the wrong picture, no, that did NOT happen... That's what I believe will happen if I get involved with this issue. :/

 

It has a nice tone of emotion to the poem, and I must say I can agree with the message you are providing.
School sucks no matter what you do with it. :/

And when I saw the title, it reminded me of my previous poem Knocked Back, Lovely.

 

Thanks. ^^ And school doesn't ENTIRELY suck... As long as you find the right friends. :)

 

Holy snap....this reminds me of a scenario I played in my head of what would happen if I tried to break up a fight involving a friend. Anyways. Not Bad. Very nice. More emotion than what my poem had anyway.