Kingdom hearts-you included

do you have a character sasumi?

 

yesh, Rambo. The dude who hates math (like meh)

 

lol i didnt know xD

 

Itz ok, he hasn't been in much.

 

You're doing well! If you're unhappy with the action, I can help. If you want, just PM me the details of an action scene i.e. Who's in it, what their abilities are, what their weapons are, their personalities and how the fight ends, then I could whip up a fight scene for ya! just look at my Dante v Ansem work, I've got plenty more where that came from!

 

tank jou. Ill be needing it!But...thats exactly what I don't like. See I'm a writer who hates writing! I start something, like it, then hate it. So I don't want more action...although I've just sent the demon leader orders for more action...cripes....I have to do some work....
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Mickey glared at the two organization members, jumping into the air when the ground burned up, leaving molten lava.
Fire launched in different directions, missing Mickey by a bit.
The King jumped onto one Axel, using him as a trampoline, jumping off of him, slashing him, then diving at the other one, straight through.
Score 2 For Mickey!
Mickey then grabbed the other Axel by the hand, twirled him around, then launched him at the other one. He cartwheeled through the air as lava explosions launched up.
Mickey swung his keyblade, bearing it down hard on an Axel. The Axel fell down by the attack, into the lava.
Then Mickey swirled around (is that even a word?) smiting the other Axel even harder into the lava.
The fire that circled the battle scene spread through the forest, burning down everything in its path. Heartless, trees, animals, and the other fighting adventurers ran for their lives.
The two Axels, stood up from the lava, and got pretty mad.
Now I warn you that Axel has a very hot temper......yeah. And together....ow...
The flames rose higher and higher....and Mickey had nothing to do. He burned with it, losing his....heart.
Back at the evil lair....
Zero smiled at his new triumph. Four down. A bonus, its Mickey down. Now we send the queen down, too.
"Melissa. Send an army of heartless towards the castle. Tell them to steal all the hearts there." Zero said.
"Uh...sir. They have the power of the cornerstone of light. All the heartless will die....." Melissa said.
Zero though, scratching his horns. "Then steal it. Send in Vexen."
Everything is falling. My rule will come.
Merlin walked, knowing that the Kings heart was stolen. How he knew that, I don't know, and I'm the author.
Two cloaked people stood in front of him.
"Piece of cake." One said.
"Burnt cake. You always burn things. And its not your powers. Its your cooking." The other said, giggling.
"Shut the (Beeeeppppppp!!!!!)(censored..)!!!!" The other yelled.
"Rambo. Xarlene. Now what order have the leader have in store for the land?" Merlin said, patting his hat.
"Shut yer mouth!" Rambo yelled.
"Don't mind him." Xarlene said, baring her kunai.
"Ah. So they've brainwashed the last organization and risen them." Merlin mumbled, as fire around them spread, but never reached them, Merlins power.
"Going against the master of the keybearers. That'll give our reputation a boost!" Rambo said, taking off his hood.
Larxene took off hers, and her face was the same as Larxenes, but curly, blonde hair, with a long ponytail at the back.
Rambo beared his claws, and the fight began.
"No weapon?" Xarlene said, running at him, with Rambo behind.
"No weapon. I can take you all down with a hat!" Merlin chuckled.
MAJOR BURNAGE!!!!!!
Rambo was furious, and he sent the fire around them closer, preserving his powers for another time...
Fireballs flew, one hitting Xarlene, none hitting the master Merlin.
"Watch it freak!" Xarlene yelled.
"Be quiet! You don't even know how to fight!" Rambo yelled.
Merlin sighed, as the whole battle was filled with the two members dissing each other.
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All of the members disapeared into darkness as the fire burned closer. All of the adventurers had nowhere to run but away from the direction it was going.
They ran away, now a group, realizing the ones they lost.
They ran out of the forest, past Merlins tower, and onto the traintracks.The fire burned down Merlins tower, slid down....and onto the tracks.
"Run!" Sora yelled.
The fire went across the tracks after them, and the adventurers heard something.
They turned their heads.
CHOO CHOO!!!
"WAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!"

 

wow that was messed up... MICKEY LOSING HIS HEART WERE DOOMED

except me

speaking of which were are the twerps (sora donald and goofy)

and im still a secratary? aww lol wanna watch me bash someone up

and do you know how late it is? it's 11.30pm haha

 

oh sweet! thanks for putting Rambo in, I've been a very impatient person hunh? :sweatdrop: Organization rules cuz dey took mickeys heart!!! *dances

 

yeah but im still getting no action except for my hand oh well its his choice

 

Doncha worry I will get you to do action.

 

yay... lol sorry im a bit impatient

 

Eh...the twerps...I think they are burning right now.

 

Yay! BURN THEM TO CRISPS!!! *evil laugh*whoops, sorry for the impulsive outburst...

 

*turns into axel* *sets barney on fire* MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
*me again* am i gonna get pwnt too? JUST LET ANYONE TRY! I'LL KILL THEM ALLLLLLLLLLLL!!!! *evil laughter*
sorry, a bit hyper lolz

 

KILL BARNEY!!!!!!!!!!!! BURN HIM!!!!

 

*axel* HOLD YOUR HORSES, WOMAN, I'M TRYING AS HARD AS I CAN!!!

 

Rambo: Lemme help! *accedentaly scorches Axel's coat* Whoops...*runs*

 

*burst into tears*NOOOO!!!!!!!MICKEY LOST HIS HEART!!!!!!!!RIP MICKEY!*goes and cries in corner*

 

*plays funeral music* lol this is spammed up.

 

*Puts roses on casket*I'll miss you Mickey....I'll never forget your laugh and voice....*continues to cry*


Oh by the way loved the story*continues to cry even more*