Kingdom Hearts: Worlds Aligned Chapter 1

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Does this sound interesting?

  1. Very interesting... *puts hand on chin*

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  2. kind of interesting... still good

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  3. didn't really catch my eye.

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  4. meh, try harder next time.

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  1. DogBoyX King's Apprentice

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    Yeah, i had this story in my head for a while now and decided to write... go me!

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    KH: Worlds Aligned chapter 1

    (Setting: Realm of Darkness)
    (Three Unknowns are conversing)
    “They have re-united, only to be separated…” (Unknown 1)
    “That boy has no clue as to how much power he really holds” (Unknown 2)
    “He is what we need; we must turn him into a Heartless again” (Unknown 3)
    “But what use is Roxas to us now?” (Unknown 1)
    “Roxas is not the one we need… We need his Chaser” (Unknown 3)
    “But therefore, we still need Roxas… but half of him, so you are wrong! I am right! End of story! Ha ha ha-” (Unknown 2)
    *Unknown 3 smacks Unknown 2 in the back of the head*
    “Quit rubbing it in!”(Unknown 3)
    *Unknown 3 rubs head*
    “Now how…” (Unknown 3)
    “The worlds will come into Alignment soon, we must take advantage, anything could happen.” (Unknown 1)
    *Unknowns laugh maniacally*

    (New setting: Destiny Islands)
    (Sora, Riku and Kairi are speaking near the Tree)
    Sora: So… nothing really to do now since we have restored peace to the worlds and defeated Organization XIII, What now?
    Riku: We could build another Raft.
    Kairi: Fine with me… As long as you two don’t slack off like last time.
    Sora: Can’t really promise you anything there.
    (A ball of light crashes into the water)
    Sora: What was that?!
    Riku: We could check it out.
    Sora: But it’s too far out! We can’t just swim there
    Kairi: This is why I wish we still had the Raft…
    (A while later)
    Kairi: Okay, So we need Four logs, some Rope, and a cloth. Riku is getting the rest. Sora?...
    *Sora sleeping*
    *Kairi sighs*
    (After Sora wakes up)
    Kairi: Okay, so we need-
    Sora: Four logs, some rope, and a cloth. Right? I’m on it.
    (5 Raft-Building hours later)
    (In the water)
    Sora: So where exactly did it land?
    Riku: I think around that cluster of Rocks.
    (Sora, Riku and Kairi quickly approach the rocks)
    *raft bumps into something*
    Kairi: What did we hit?
    *Sora looks in front of the Raft*
    Sora: Nothing?!
    Riku: Something’s not letting us go any further.
    Kairi: What could it be?
    *Sora Reaches out to make sure nothing is there*
    *Sora falls into “The Invisible Wall”*
    Riku & Kairi: Sora!
    (Sora lands in an area that looks like a Beach in the sunset)
    Sora: Where… Am I?
    Wait, How did I end up in another world? The routes are closed!
    (Unknown appears)
    Unknown: Anything can happen when the worlds align, Sora.
    Sora: Wait, Who are you! How do you know my name?!
    Unknown: Everyone knows who you are, Sora. But in our universe… you no longer exist.
    Sora: W-what!? Your universe?
    *Unknown takes off hood*
    Sora: X-xemnas?!
    Xemnas: Alternate universes open up when the worlds align, Sora.
    Sora: Whats with all this alignment crap?!
    Xemnas: all will be clear… in time.
    *Xemnas disappears*
    Sora: Organization XIII… still exists?
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    Might be crappy… it’s the intro, it’ll get better.

    No posts or votes yet? do you people check the creativity corner?
     
  2. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    That was interesting. In a good way. For me, it looks too much like a script of a play or something, but I think you wanted it to be that way. Good job though, and I think this is an interesting story line.
     
  3. N Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Your story's interesting. But, I just wanted to remind you so you won't be in trouble. Sara posted a sticky about Polls in this forum, and that they will be removed.
    But otherwise, keep going!!
     
  4. Luka Deafening silence

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    That was great Dogboy
    very interesting
    I loved it
     
  5. DogBoyX King's Apprentice

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    I'm working on CH2
    holy crap this was old... sorry, was in a rush...
    Ch1 is meant to look like a script, for i am going to use it to help with the comic...
    and i didn't know about the polls rule when i posted this thread...
     
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    Closed at request of author.
     
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