Kingdom Hearts(without disney)

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Daenerys Targaryen, May 7, 2007.

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Like my story?

  1. yea:)

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  2. nah:(

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  1. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    Kingdome Hearts

    Hakia=me(That is a cool name but,not my real one:))

    ~Chapter One~

    Sora woke up on the sand to see everyone crowding about him laughing and dumping sand on his head."Stop!"He got up and Riku started to crack up."We were bored...Gosh.."Then he continued to look at Sora with his famous Riku smirk.It always got Sora to give and just forgive him for his fun.A lot of fun that is.But,they were best friends....Most of the fun they shared.Kairi and Hakia were giggling.Kairi wore that same smile he fell in love with the first day they met eight years ago.Hakia was a new addition to the group she had a warm smile and pretty laugh and long,soft brown hair she liked to braid and tie up in a bun at the top of her head."So..."She said standing up at last."Icecream?"She looked up for hands."On me..."She added.Hands went up.She turned away and got in her sail boat.When she finally reached the other sands where you could see Destiny Islands from afar they all turned to face Kairi.Who was now humming sweetly to a lovely tune she had gotten stuck in her head.Her pink outfit was covered in sand and she turned away to look how far Hakia was to the stand.But,she couldn't see that far.Hakia was back ten minutes later.She wore a blue bikini top and tight denim shorti-shorts.Her navy blue boots came just below her knees.Naminé and Roxas didn't hesitate to grab their favorite flavor sea-salt.They all looked at each other smiling.The sun was setting and a redish-orange glow filled the corners of the sky and lavender and teal filled everything else.The waves brushed the sand leaving foam on the very edges of their now bare feet."Red sky at night sailor's delight.."Hakia muttered.Kairi nodded.Another peaceful day at Destiny Islands.Starting a bit salty and ending so so sweet.

    By:~~Namine~~


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    How'd you like it please respond and tell me if I should write more or not...Thanks:)

    ~~Namine~~
     
  2. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    It's nice, but you're not allowed to make polls on the Creativity Corner anymore. Be sure to read the stickys on the page of threads, kay?

    All in all, nice start for a story! :D
     
  3. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    oh really kay bc I haven't been on here in awhile so sorry 'bout dat.

    I made up Hakia bc I love me in the story:) LOL I will put other ppl to only if it'd not your real name.I wanted to look a little like Rikku LOL def.proven right?
     
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