Kingdom Hearts: W7FHAX Style

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  1. Kelly Killz Merlin's Housekeeper

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    YES! An update! Frickin' finally.

    *reads*

    You're greatness is back. MORE MORE MORE!!!

    EDIT: A thunderstorm!? *is sad for you, and for me, 'cuz even when you are done writing it down, you can't post 'till the storm is gone...*
     
  2. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Wow, you're fast. Are you like, constantly hovering around on this site? Jeez... Get a life *laughs softly at self, for its exactly what I do*.

    Anywayz, the sorm is gone now, but St. Augustine got hit hard. Feel sorry for them. Labor Day weekend is officially sucking right now. Ah wellz..

    Note: I are currently typing up another section of my fic. I'm taking it slow, trying to avoid deep frieing my brain, and also attempting to avoid speeling arn grammamatical errors? I apuloggize for the weight!?!
     
  3. Forever Love Life Without Limits

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    YAY!!
    A new chapter..eek!

    I loved it.. very entertaining.. even though it was shorter than the others.
    Thank you for updating.. now if you could continue this daily..
    Hmm..

    Just kidding.. you dont have to do it daily.. I understand that you are busy.. As am I with my own story.. which I thank you so much for reading it =]

    Keep up the good work.
    You're a good writer (a great one at that).

    =]
     
  4. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Lol, its short for a reason. My chapters are so long, and I'm so lazy (and I've got a few friends over tonight), that I'm only posting tiny parts of the chapter at a time. For instance, as soon as I finish answering your post, and thanking you for reading my story, I am going to post another tiny piece of Ch. 8. Get it? Got it? Good.
     
  5. Forever Love Life Without Limits

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    So, I just read the section you just added.
    Very good. =]

    I need moree.
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  6. Kelly Killz Merlin's Housekeeper

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    YAY! Even more! -reads-

    OMG! I need my fix, and ur story is it! More bish!
     
  7. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Wow... Thanx Kairi2011 and Kelly. I'm still typing up more. Hope you like the next part (which will be up within probably the next half hour). Keep checking back. Comments are nice, but criticism is better. As you're reading, if you find spelling/grammatical errors, or a part that just isn't explained well enough, lemme know, 'kay?
     
  8. Thebazilly King's Apprentice

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    Hooray for updates!!!!

    Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
     
  9. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Alright, I lied again. I ended up not typing out the rest, so it wasn't up by 3 o' clock like I thought it'd be. I'm so lazy x_X. I SWEAR I am typing RIGHT NOW, and the next bit will be up shortly.

    EDIT: HAH! Told ya'. Next wee bit of teh storeh bez upzorz.
     
  10. Zexion13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    This was a good section. It got Sora and Kairi to the second island, and revealed a little more about this 'Organization'.

    I can't wait to read more!!! ^^
     
  11. Thebazilly King's Apprentice

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    *Reads next part.*

    So... wait... what's the green guy's emotion? Adon?

    Excited for the next part.
     
  12. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Admon is almost as bad off as a Nobody. He had real emotions (that weren't his own) shoved into his body. Mistah White (I'm sorry I have to keep calling him this, but I have to leave a few things in the dark, right?) put too much 'Fear' in with 'Anger'. Fear and Anger, (even in real life), don't mix very well (and both are VERY powerful emotions, even in small amounts). The 'Fear' placed in him consumed him, cloaking the anger. Ireal life, some people can become so paranoid, they break. Admon, only having 'Fear' left, broke like these people do. So, now he's like those people in straight jackets, but to a much lesser degree, because somehow he has managed to gain the ability to absorb other's emotions around him for a short amount of time. Its like an advanced form of regular Nobodies pretending they have emotions.

    Oh, and Admon? The name doesn't fit with his emotion this time, it goes along with his power. Admon = Earth, in... Was it Hebrew? I can't remember. I wasn't going to originaly reveal his powers so early, thus the hint with the name. But things changed. I needed to pick things up a bit. The next part will be posted late tonight, or late Friday night, all depending on how fast I finish my homework. Expect an update Friday, =p. I've got Algebra II homework. I suck at math.

    EDIT: I made another lil' update. Its only a paragraph or two more, not even worth mentioning, really. Like I said, Friday night (or early Saturday morning), will be the 'big' update. I should be done with Chapter 8 by then.
     
  13. Thebazilly King's Apprentice

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    Okay. So pretty much, Amon is crazy. :P

    Yay updatez! ^^

    And I feel your pain on the math homework. I had an entire page of Calculus problems today. And that's only one class.
     
  14. Kelly Killz Merlin's Housekeeper

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    YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! another part added!

    I love this junk! Gimme mah fix!

    *read quickly. Thinks "gotta do homework!"*


    OMG, you're torturing Riku again!? I officially hate you all over again. Meany-face. What's they goin' to do to 'im? O.O
     
  15. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Umm... That's an easier way to put it. ROFL. I guess I wasted my time typing all of that out *feels slightly dumb*

    Calculus? *cries, just thinking about it* Only one class eh? Yeah, same problem here. I got some English homework too. Poetry *grimaces*. I hate poetry. Maybe I should start listening to rap. Might make me better at poetry. Lol. *Tries to get Sidewinder by Avenged Sevenfold out of head*

    EDIT: Lol @ Kelly. I ish Sorreh?
     
  16. Thebazilly King's Apprentice

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    It isn't that bad, actually. Pre-Calc is way harder.

    But anyway, oops. I keep butchering Admon's name. :P
     
  17. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Meh, who cares? Admon, Adon, Amon... Close enough. I guess? Anywayz... Post +1 *****es! And a bump too. I really shouldn't have posted.. Hmm... Gotta think of something relevant to this thread. 'Kay! I've decided!

    **** HOMEWORK!!!

    I'll continue typing. Grades just dropped.
     
  18. Thebazilly King's Apprentice

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    Okay, I'm going to stop spamming your thread now, I promise. :D

    You should do your homework... as much as I want to see this updated. *Bounces and waits for Friday.*
     
  19. Forever Love Life Without Limits

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    YAY!
    New chapters (or shall I say.. parts) make me happy W7FHAX!

    *eves drops on Thebazilly and W7FHAX's conversation*
    And pre calculus eh?
    Yeah.. I'm in CP Geometry.. It's only to get harder..
    Ewwww.
    =/

    Good couple paragraphs there.
    Can't wait for Friday.. or Saturday morning.
    =]
     
  20. W7F King's Apprentice

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    Yeah... I gotta 'pologize about how weird my updates have been. I've been typing up a paragraph or three between individual homework assignments to keep me from going totally insane. I just post them up here whenever I have the time. CP Geometry eh? Owie. I suck at Math in general, so even Algebra I sounds evil to me. Right now, I have to write a report on Ivory and its use in ancient civilizations, of all things. Sounds simple right? "They used it to express themselves by making wonderful forms of art in statues..." etc. Well, its gotta be two pages. I can't ifnd much information on it other than that, so I think I might have to do some bull-****ting. Lyke I keep saying, check back Friday night/in the wee hours of Saturday morning. I think this will be the last time I have a few seconds to hop onto the internet for a school-unrelated thingy, so ta' ta'!

    P.S.: Glad ya' liked, Kairi. @ Bazilly: Good. No spam. Like I just did. I pretty much repeated what I've been saying. I phailed. I Sorry.
     
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