Kingdom Hearts: W7FHAX Style

"Just leave the damn thing alone, it would make my job a lot easier"


That part cracked me up


xD



Damn it, now I'm hooked >: (


MORE!!!!
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I must say.. this is im-press-ive!

Agh!! Why must everyone in Creativity Corner get me hooked on these stories!!

They're too damn good!!

MORE!! More I tell you!

-Kairi2011

 

OMG!!!

That was a good part. Jabez....he is interesting....

When Jabez quoted Axel I was like, "What????" I can't believe it took Sora longer to figure that out.

I can't wait to read more!!

okay

 

This story ROCKS!!! I can't wait to see what happens!

 

Thanks again for all of the comments and support, its been a lot of fun. I have decided to say "**** the essay!", that I've gotta do for my AP World History class, (and my Algebra II, English II, and Chemistry homework...) so I might post some stuff tonight, early tomorrow. I'm revising what's in my head right now. I don't like how long this conversation with Jabez is going to continue, 'cuz it gets boring, and also exposes A LOT about the big picture that is slowly forming. I wanna' leave some gray areas (don't hate me), that I'm going to reveal later on, when Sora meets Cel - Oh, ****! Almost gave away something...

 

Ah, AP World History. I feel your pain. Took it last year. Do the reading, it helps. ;)

I like the fanfic, it's very good. You're not afraid to cause Sora and Co a little pain.

 

Mmkay. I've got all the way up to Ch. 10 planned out in my head. I could type it up tonight, and post it all at once. But, my parents are making me go to bed at midnight. Like, WTF. Anyway, I am currently in the process of typing another portion of CH. 7. I'm going to try and post as much as possible before they force me to go to bed, since its been awhile since I last updated this thing. Alright, better finish up.

 

Score!!!

YES! New part up! *Goes off to read*

Omg, I loved it. Kairi/Celosia almost kicked his ***. Crazy good. I think you are better with dialogue/explaining events that are going on throughout the story than describing a fight scene though. It felt forced in some parts, but it was still cool. Try to add more description, but don't overkill, alright?

P.S.: Jeez... What took ya' so long though? I had gotten used to the regular updates.

 

You haven't been paying much attention. I've been busy. Teachers are already piling on the homework. I'm about ready to drop all of my AP classes and Honors classes, and go to standard. The only reason why I haven't done that yet, is 'cuz I've been told its not much better there. Yeah, I totally agree with you about the two 'fight scenes' I've typed up so far. It looks so cool in my head, I just have problems putting it into words. I'll try to make it better for the next dozen fights I've got planned.

 

This story is great work.
I enjoy reading it.
It's very descriptive and I can imagine every detail in my head.
Great job.
Keep up the good work.

And dont worry. You're not the only one having school get in the way of your writing. It's happening to me too. Maybe you can check out my story?
Man, school is such a drag. =/

Anywho.. keep it coming.
I enjoy it. =]

Much love- Kairi2011<3​

 

I'm glad that you've enjoyed reading my fanfic. Its been a lot of fun writing it, and gives me something to do when I actually have some time to myself. I'll definitely check out your story. I'll keep an eye out for it. Or, you could post the link here, somewhere.

 

Like many other people, I also like this story. You have really good writing styles and great descriptions.

The plot is original and I can see you are either creative or then falling asleep head full of thoughts (most likely both). And you do write fast! I guess you have pretty clear image of what is happening...
Hey! Look! I'm doing it again! Writing everything pointless and obvious... Pointless and obvious... wow, I actually thought for a second that that rhymes! I guess I should stop now. Yeah, I'll do it.
Anyway, keep writing (I'm not pushing, I just can see you have a great story).
Okay, I'm done.

End of line.

 

Yet again, I say this, I liked the new section you put up. The details are amazing. Keep up the good work! ^^

Your style of writing paints pictured in my mind on what is going on.

PS: I don't mind the wait. Your busy, so it is hard. I understand that. Just not too long till the next update, kay? lol

 

You are suffering from seemingly a serious case of... Lack O' Sleep. Brought on by the Kingdom Hearts fansite, kh-vids.net, It is a common thing found these days among teenagers. I believe a day off from school that should be spent sleeping is required.

xD. Seriously though, the next time you do what'cha did above (something that happens to me all the time, like now, for instance), go to sleepers.

Thanx all for such nice comments!!

Thanx, and yeah, I'll try REALLY hard to stop procrastinating with my homework. Normally, I'm not alowed on the pc until its done, which is the whole reason why it took me so long. By the time I'm done procrastinating, and I sit down and do it? Its 11 at night... My brain's also fried, so I just go straight to bed. So, as I said earlier, the biggest updates will be on weekends, but once in a while, I'll get a huge idea, and I'll cuss out the school system, and just... forget about my homework... XD

 

*backs off* Okay... Sorry? I'll leave you alone. Hey, I skimmed your other fanfic. Stick to this story, lol. Or, stop guzzling the Tylenol and rewrite the thing... Jeez. I'm addicted to this site, its official. I come home from school during lunch break, and I get on this site, instead of eating like a normal person. Wow...

 

Lol, sorry. I didn't mean to come across mean or anything. I think I posted that the day I first began feeling sick. When was that? *checks* Yeah, Sunday. I'm (just a wee) better now. But yeah, I'm going to try and post the beginnings of Ch. 8 up ASAP. But, I've missed school Monday (yesterday) and today, so I'm going to have a lot of make-up work to do... Wunduhful, sounds as if another procrastination party is being called for.

 

More I say. MORE!

Haha. Silly me.
Anywho.. next chapter pwease?

I know you have school getting in the way of your writing. So do I. CP Geometry just kills me. And the amount of homework my school gives out in one day... it just amazes me.

Keep up the good work.
And don't make us wait too long, okay?

Much Love- Kairi2011<3​

 

I PROMISE, that I'll have up to Chapter 10 posted here by Sunday. Oh god, watch... Since I promised, it won't happen, and then someone's gonna quote me, and say "Like, WTF!?" Unfortunately, all I will be working on that's related to this site during the week (excluding Friday) will be Bingo Night. I have to hurry up and kill the damn thing.

 

Actually I'm NOT suffering from lack of sleep. I sleep healthy amount of hours almost every night. My mind just works in a strange manner sometimes... or most of the time. I usually write what first pops into my head. But I really meant when I said this story was great.

 

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Either way works fine. Saturday will be the main update day for this story I've decided. Most of the Chapters will be put up then. So, keep an eye out 'till then.