Traditional Art Kingdom Hearts: Victory and Loss

Well I'm relatively new at this so to speak.....so please don't judge my art too harshly..Also this is my first time putting together a Kingdom Hearts story...so bare with me alittle on the plot....


But first off I would like to state a few things about the comic:

Org. XIII returns under mysterious circumstances.

Sora and Riku lose use of the keyblade.

The comic is..about..ages 12 and up...if it has to be rated.

I messed up on drawing Axel, Lexaeus and Saix on the cover...

I didn't draw it in typical Kingdom Hearts style...

I also only have the first eight members...as the others aren't THAT important...but they're all still there....

Lastly if you have any questions about it(I won't spoil it though...) just ask me or p.m me....

And here's the preview.....the first few pages should be posted tommorow....so please comment anso I won't end up double posting....

 

May I just say that I love your version of Vexen? He looks like he's gonna snap at any moment, like a mad scientist! XD

Anatomy is a bit off, you'll want to use helping lines to keep it under control. Otherwise it may appear way too funky, even for the cartoony style. One hint I can share with you - the eyes are in the middle of the head's hight, always. If you look at pictures with this on your mind you'll see what I mean.

I don't know what my opinion about the plot is yet, I'd like to see how it starts like first. :>

 

Well I've improved my drawing style a bit...but I won't be asle to post it up until my computer is fully fixed(I'm using my dad's.) And I just shortened the number of Org. XIII members in this.....

Another fact:

I based the main and as of yet unrevealed plot off of a movie...any guesses on which one?

 

Agreed. But it looks good. Great job!