Kingdom Hearts: The New Legend

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  1. Kristian the Hidden Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Hey guys. Kristian here. I opened a new thread here about this story, but I can't close the other in the general Creativity Corner forum. Anyway, here's the synopsis for this story:

    This story takes place 25 years after Xemnas's defeat. Sora and his friends are all grown up and have families now. Maleficent, like she promised, took over the Organization's stronghold and has a new assistant. Who is he? No one knows but Maleficent.

    New villians have arisen in old worlds. Can Sora's son, Kai, and his friends, Max Goof and Danny Duck, stop them? Read and find out!


    Kingdom Hearts: The New Legend
    Prologue
    The New Legend


    (Note: The reason why the boys and their hair colors are labeled is so you can identify them.)


    It is a peaceful, starry night on the Destiny Islands. A young boy, about the age of 14, was lying on the shore. The boy had spiky reddish-brown hair, sky blue eyes, and was wearing a red shirt, red shorts,a blue belt, large yellow shoes, and a white vest with black sleeves. The boy listened to the calming waves as he drifted off to sleep.

    In his dream, the boy saw himself standing on the shore where he was sleeping and a few feet away, he saw a second boy, about the age of 18 with the same spiky hair, but brown, and a girl, age 18 as well with long red hair. They were talking to a man who was wearing an Organization XIII cloak. The three talked for a few moments and then the man turned around and ran. The second boy and girl ran after him. The first boy wanted to know what was going on and ran after them.

    As they were running, the first boy noticed that as the second boy and the girl began to age year by year, until they caught up with the man at the other end of the shore, the second boy and the girl, at age 40, while the first boy and the man remained the same age. After a second the boy realized, the now man and woman.... were his parents. The man turned around again to face them and swiped at them with his hand and they turned to dust and, as he saw it he turned to dust as well and the dust that his parents became and the dust that he became joined over the ocean as he appeared again, dropped into the ocean head first and began to sink.

    He kept sinking further until he flipped onto his feet, and landed on something. A second later, many birds flew up from underneath his feet revealing that he was standing on a platform which possessed a portrait of Belle and the Beast.

    To be continued...


    R&R!
     
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    Good storyline and I'm looking forward to reading the rest but it was sort of hard to follow.
     
  3. Kristian the Hidden Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Yeah, sorry. I just wanted to keep the identities a secret until a bit later.
     
  4. SORA! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    this is brillaint.keep going
    cant wait for next chapter!