Kingdom hearts:the New keyblade masters

This might be very intersiting for me because i will read it all

 

OMG! Excellent! Can't wait for more!

 

Nice story Sora! though i have a question. (this is gonna sound really dumb but:) is axel's kid one of the friends? and if so, does he/she have a keyblade. (oh, and before anyone insult's me, i have read it, i just can't figure out who's kid's who's) oh, and Axel's kid(if he is in it, and has a keyblade) really shouldn't have a Keyblade but Axel's Chakrams (the spikey things he uses :D)

 

heres the next chapter :D
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chapter four-disney castle

Akiko awoke to find herself,laying on grass outside a great white castle,she got up slowly,looking around,she heard a groan and looked behind her,Kite,Hiro and Yumi where all lying at the same spot

"owie....where are we?"Yumi said rubbing her head

"dunno"Kite said rubbing her upper arm,he got up,noticing they still had the key-like blades he said "what is this thing?",before akiko could answer there was another voice

"its called a keyblade...and they have chosen you four to weild them...."they turned to see the speaker,who was a small mouse

"who are you?"Hiro said

"king mickey.."He replied"and you four...?"

"grawrsh your majisty....this one looks mightly like Kairi...and Sora...."said goofy who had come from behind a bush"you got something to do with sora and kairi kid?"

"yeah....they're my parents...."Akiko said,she glanced at the others,mickey looked at Kite

"by my guess...your riku's son...ainti ya?"he said


"yeah....im Kite.....",the king turned to Yumi

"Looks like roxas and namine this one..you their kid?"

"yeah....im Yumi....",he turned to Hiro

"and you boy?"

"im Hiro...my parents are Axel and Larxene...."

"nice to meet you all....come inside....we must talk...."the king lead them inside into the thron room,he sat in his chair,and began to tell them of the war that was going to happen,

"and so we must train you...but how?"he said

"My king...."said another small mouse"they have come along way...perhaps they should rest....then you can train them?"

"yes...yes ofcourse....mini...do take them to a room....i will send a letter to your parents ...not wait...even better i will send donald and goofy....",after she had her room,Akiko lay on her bed...looking around the white room,she sighed...she missed the islands.....even if she had been gone for a few hours...and this war...there was nothing to prevent it....nothing to stop it coming....only to fight when it did...she sighed again...closing her eyes...she drifted off to sleep

 

OMG
mabey more plz?
I NEEEEEEEEEED MORE!!!!!

 

I like your story SORA! It's really good! :D

 

this is realy good i love it

 

great story! still reckon axel's kid should have Chakrams instead of a keyblade though... soz.

 

thanks for the CnC guys here the next chapter
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chapter five-the prophcy and the attack

The next day Akiko walked the white halls of disney castle,she was waiting for the others to wake so they could talk to them king...she walked outside and saw that donald and goofy were back...

"Mustve already been to the islands..." she tought,she started going over to them planning to ask them if her parents were ok until-

"Akiko!"the king called"time to talk..."she followed him inside,noticing the others,looking drosy and pale,where standing in the coner,she walked over,the king stood int front of them

"there is no time to train you four...as there is a fleet of heartless a-coming here...your parents said that they would meet you in hollow bastion...dont worrythey're fine..."he added when akiko open her mouth
"Listen...you must know...while you go on this trip...two of you,one each to different people will betray the others...now im not sure which one it is...but there is a prophcy about you four and it clearly states two of the four chosen children will betray the others and it also says that only one will go back,one betrayer will be lost in darkness,the other will still being following his or her orders..." and so the king talked and talked,for hours he spoke to them,telling them what would happen,what would come to pass...he stopped when he herd loud noises,he summond his keyblade,the others followed his example,then heartless swarmmed into the room

"Quick! your four! go to the gummi hanger! now!"he orderd,they did as he said,climbing into the gummi,Hiro hit the ignition button,while akiko was still trying to get in,she screamed as they zoomed off,Kite grabbed her hand

"I GOT YOU!"he yelled,they soon were passing over worlds,she was slipping and he was going with her,akiko saw this,she looked at him

""Akiko dont you dare let go!"he said,

"sorry kite..."she said then she tugged her hand free and fell

"AKIKO!"kite yelled,"HIRO YOU IDIOT! THIS IS YOUR FAULT! IF SHE'S DEAD YOU'LL JOIN HER!"he was right in hiros face

"SHUT UP KITE! JUST BECAUSE YOU LOVE HER! I DIDNT MEAN TO HIT THAT BUTTON! AND ITS HER FAULT SHE LET GO OF YOU! SHE WAS THE STUPID LITTLE TWA-"he never finished his sentense because at that moment,kite hit him,and hiro was on the floor,holding his face

"STOP IT! JUST STOP IT!"yumi said"this isnt going to help her! lets just...lets just find the nearest world and see if they can help us....." hiro got back up,glaring at everything,and kite sat down,holding his hand and looking outside....one question going through his mind

"what if they never found her?"

 

good story. so let me guess, Kite and Hiro are the betrayers, Kite will be the on who follows Riku's example, Hiro will be lost to the darkness, something will most likely happen between Yumi and Hiro before he gets lost to the darkness, Kite will come back (as i've explained) because of Akiko, one of the original main characters will die at some point (might be a new one though) causing one of the four to beckom and emotional wreck. Still vote the Chakrams (yes i'm persistent.) and did you get Hiro from the name Heiro? (anyone besides Sora! reading this: don't worry about who Heiro is) and yeah. no offense but it's going kinda classical >_< soz if i insulted you... oh and if i got anything wrong send me a pm please!

 

heres the next chapter....
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chapter six-the crash and hollow bastion


"sh! you'll wake her up leon!"

"maybe we should wake her up...shes been out for awhile now.."

"where did you find her again cloud?"

"in the bailey...she was on some ruble...looked like she hit her head...."

"well...atleast you helped her..."

"uh...is she waking up now?",she screwed her eyes up,then opend them,she found herself in a small house,laying on a couch,people,adults,crowded around her

"are you ok?"asked a woman with green eyes and long brown hair

"whats your name kid?"asked a guy with short blonde hair,she noticed two other guys,one with spikey blonde hair and the other with spikey brown hair,then she saw two other girls,one with long black hair the other short black hair,

"Im Akiko..."she said sitting up,but felt dizzy,she had pain in her head,she closed her eyes

"easy girly...you hit your head pretty bad,acording to cloud there..."said the guy with short blone hair,jerking his thumb at the other blonde

"where am i?"she asked

"Hollow bastion..."said the girl with long black hair,the guy with brown hair was looking at her

"Akiko....i've herd that name before....from someone..."the girl with short black hair was saying

"you herd it from sora and kairi yuffie...this is their daughter....i remeber her now..."

"Oh! your right leon!"said the girl with green eyes

"all grown up now eh kid?"

"yeah...she is cid..."said yufffie"she looks alot like kairi dont she aeirth?",the girl with brown eyes nodded

"Oh! thats right! akiko...the king said your parents would be here in about a day or so..."she said

"really?!"she asked hopefully

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"Oh no! the gummi's losing power!"Hiro saidpushing buttons

"Oh great hiro!"yumi said pushing buttons too

"we'll have to jump! were losing hight!"Kite yelled

"are you mental?!"hiro said"we cant jump !",suddenly there was a banging against the ship and kite,who was at the open door,fell out the gummi ship.

"KITE!"yumi yelled,the wind from the open door was too much,then they crashed into some sort of castle,neither of them moved,their eyes closed tight,

 

DUN DUN DUN!!!!
the SUSPENSE!!!