Kingdom hearts: the lost chapters................chap 1

I never expected any of this to happen, but it did. Me, Sora, and Kiari were all on our island. It was a normal sunny day we were all being lazy (as usual).

“Tell us about what happened again!†begged Titus, looking as if he was about to pass out from excitement. “Not now!†I sigh. Our other friends from the island were always wanting to hear that story, the story of all that had happened while we were gone. “Guys….not again†Sora sighed. He was sitting in the paupu tree with his arms around Kiari while she leaned on his chest. I couldn’t help feeling a little jealous of Sora. We all sat and watched the sunrise in silence. “We are so lucky†Kiari sighed. “Yeah†I replied.
I watched a Kiari looked up at Sora and they kissed, not a long romantic kiss, but a peck on the lips. I looked at the way they looked at each other and I wanted that. I wanted that love that they had.

Late that night, back at my house, I heard a noise. It woke me from my sleep. It was odd yet familiar. I quickly got dressed and rowed out to the island. There was no one there. The island looked a bit creepy at night. The wind whistled through the palm trees. I shivered and hurried to the secret place. As soon as I got through the hole a storm came and rain started pouring. I’ll sleep in here tonight, I thought to myself. I made my way into the large room. I stared at the drawings on the walls and smiled. So many memories in this little room. Just then the wid howled over the hole in the roof. Thankfully, it was protected with trees, keeping the rain from pouring in. I remembered when me and Sora were kids and Sora thought he had heard a monster, but it was just the wind blowing over the hole. I smiled as I lay on a dry spot in the floor and fell asleep. At about dawn I lurched awake, the door in the wall was open and there was a black haired, beautiful girl standing in the doorway. She reached out her arm to me but took a few steps and passed out. The door closed, I sat in the floor, shocked, after about thirty seconds I picked her up and carried her out of the secret place.

 

this is awesome, I wanna know what happens next!

 

OMG!! AWESOME! message me whenever the 2nd chapter is posted!

 

What she said. But I think you could do with a bit more emotions, and somemore detail from your point of view, but other than that good job!

 

I agree but otherwise it was awesome:D *eagerly waits for next chapter*
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chap 2

Hi this my second chapter to the mysterious story.

Chap2
I carried this beautiful, raven-haired girl out and layed her on the warm sand. I had this strange feeling in the pit of my stomach, a feeling I had never felt before. I tried to shake it of, but I couldn’t. So, I just ignored it. Sora and Kiari came rushing to my side, Sora had that worried look on his face, the one he always gets when he knows things are very wrong. Kiari had a ind look in her eye, like when you meet a best friend, before you even know each other, it must be destiny. I scooped up some water and splashed it on the girls face. Her eyes opened just a little. “Where am I?†she groaned. “You are on Destiny Islands.†I replied, getting frustrated with my long hair (It kept falling down into my face). She finally sat up, “My name is Arianu (it is pronounced ah-ree-ah-noo) I last remember I was playing in the streets of……†she sighed. “I can’t remember!!!! Where did I used to live? I don’t remember†She started to freak out. “It’s ok! You can stay here and once we figure it out we can go to it in the gummi ship!†Sora said. King Mickey had given us a gummi ship of our own, we hid it in a very secret place. We never told anyone where it was. I stared into the girls beautiful, blue eyes. She looked back at me, all of the sudden the was a spark between us. It was like nothing I had ever felt before. She quickly looked down, blushing. “How ‘bout we prepare and just fly to the King’s castle and ask the king and queen†I answered, trying to get her to look at me again. She finally looked back up at me and she couldn’t look down, neither could I. I know love at first sight is supposedly a myth, but it was real for us! “ What is a gummi ship?†she asked, still staring into my eyes as I stared into hers. “It is basically a rocket ship made of this elasticy stuff and we fly to other worlds on it!!!†Kiari said moving closer to Arianu.
We kept staring at each other, captivated, I moved closer to her and she move closer to me. “I’m Riku†I stated, still captivated by her beauty. “That’s Sora and that’s Kiari.â€
“Hi, nice to meet you,†Sora stated in his polite manner. “Hi!†Kiari stated cheerfully, as she took Arianu’s hand. “We need to prepare.†I stated. “Yeah, Me and Kiari will get the supplies. You guys stay here and chat. We will be back in a jif!†Sora said as he took Kiari’s hand and they dashed off. I took one step closer to her. She stood up. “Letâs take a walk,†I said with a kind look on my face. “Sure,†She said ,smiling. We walked on the beach for hours.
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YAYNESS!!!!!!!!!!!! You did a much better job with the Emotions. And one more thing. You spelled Kairi wrong. Its spelled K-a-i-r-i. Besides that its all good!

 

really good..I just have 2 things to tell you....Post these in different threads...and you bunch up everthing...

For example...

You are doing this:
"Hi I am Sora"..."Hi I am Riku" They both looked happy..."Wanna be friends?"

You should do this instead...
"Hi I am Sora"
"Hi I am Riku" They both looked happy.
"Wanna be friends?"

 

Cool! Don't stop this story!

 

This was awesome cant wait for the next chapter!:D and its heaps better with the emotions and stuff! pm when the nxt chapter is up! :D:D

 

chapter 3

Chap 3
After a few hours of circling the Island and occasionally splashing one another, Arianu and I saw Sora and Kairi in the distance. I was disappointed, I liked this time alone with this beautiful girl. Sora and Kairi were lugging a few crates, obviously supplies. We ran to meet them.
“Hey guys!” I said, a big wide grin on my face.
“Hey! Sooooo we might as well start loading the gummi ship. We will leave tomorrow morning.” Sora said, a bit out of breath.
I gave Arianu one of my grins. One of the ones Kairi is always saying are cute. Blecht.
I was bursting with an unexplainable happiness. I looked at Arianu and thought
So this must be love! I wonder if she feels the same way I do?
We loaded the ship and then the two lovebirds prepared to leave.
“Well, we will see you guys in the morning!” Kairi said, staring at Sora.
I was SO jealous at first, but now that I had met Arianu, this beautiful, mysterious girl, I wasn’t. We walked some more and got to know each other. There was much I could find out about her since she had amnesia. She found out EVERYTHING about me though.
We finally got in the bout and prepared to head out to the main island. I rowed and she sat and watched me. About half way there, I stopped rowing.
“ Look, you see that glowing on the surface?” I asked her
“ Yes” she said, looking confused.
“ They say that you can only spot that if you are in love.”
“You spotted it.”
“Yeah”
We moved closer and slowly our lips moved closer. I was drawn in by her beauty. Our lips touched and we had stayed in that embrace for about thirty seconds when the boat tipped. Arianu squealed and I laughed as we crawled back into the boat, dripping. When I looked at her she blushed and looked away. I grinned and started rowing. We got back to the island and I walked her to my house where she slept on the couch and I slept in my room.

 

Awwwwwwwwwwww. So cute!!!!! But you could strech it out longer so that it doesnt seem so rushed.:D

 

k thanx!!!!!!!!

 

nawww cute XD this is really good!!:D keep it up and pm when the nxt one is posted:D :D

 

chapter 4

I wake to the bright sun shining through my window.
I yawn, stretch, and get dress and head downstairs
I look at the coach.
Arianu is nowhere to be seen.
I hear some thing in the kitchen and head towards the noise.
I walk in to see Arianu cooking some breakfast.
I walk up behind her and hug her around the waist and kiss her.
"Hi" She says, blushing.
"Hi!" I say, turning her face towards mine and staring into her eyes.
She turns away, blushing even more.
"Where is the rest of your family?" She asks.
"I.......don't have any" I say, looking pained.
"I'm sorry. I shouldn't have brought it up." Shes says, looking ashamed.
I flashback. I remember a time when I could live in happiness with out fear.
When I had a brother and a little sister who was the light of my life. When I had parents and made them proud. I remember the time......
"RIKU!" Arianu looks annoyed
"Oh, I'm sorry." I shake my head as I try to wake up from my daydream, no wait....my daynightmare.
"i'll tell you what happened to my family...." I say
"You don't have to if you dont want to." She says
"I want to."
"okay"
"Well, i used to have a sister, a brother, and a mom and dad. I loved my sister. She looked up to me in a way no one can or could.
Well one day we were visiting some of the other islands. We came upon and storm. It wasn't a normal storm. I now know it was a storm of darkness. We were in our family boat. I fell out and a hand reached from the storm and grabbed the boat and my family with it. Like that, it was over. The storm was gone. My family was gone. I was alone. I was too shocked and scared to swim. I just floated until I passed out from exhaustion. I floated onto the main island shore. Sora's family took me in until i got on my feet." I trailed off. The memory of that day was too overwhelming.
"Wow, I'm so sorry!" Arianu says as she jumps into my arms and holds me.
We stand there hlding each other. Paused in time. Just holding each other.