"w-were back" smiled sora "your home" said kairi and she helped him out of the water.sora got up and he saw namine smiling at him not kairi and kairi saw roxas smiling at her not sora.and they knew that it was roxas and namine coming threw them."sora is that you?" said a womans voice he looked aroud kairi and there stood his mother and father.he said"yeah." "oh sora!" cried his mother kairi let go of his hand and he went over to his perants "hi" he said shyly "sora!" cried his mother again and she grabbed him and hugged him he hugged her back after all it had been a year since the last time she`d seen him and he`d missed her alot. she let go and he went over to his father "welcome back son" he said sora smiled and hugged him. riku was over with his perants and kairi was standing with her`s who had come over to see what was happening.later that night sora`s perants asked him where he`d been all this time.he told them all about it. he told them about becoming a heartless to save kairi in.he told them about going back for riku.he told them about fighting xehanort`s heatless. he told them abotu riku being stuck in the relm of darknees with the king.he told them about kairi going back to the islands and him staying to find away for riku and the king to get out of the relm of darkness.he told them about roxas and namine. he told them being asleep for a year. about fighting the orgnisation.and winning and then being on the dark beach with riku then getting kairi`s letter then going in the door to light. then his mother asked "but who are roxas and namine?" "mine and kairi`s nobodies mum" " is he like your brother?" "no! he`s is...was the other half of me!" "what do you mean was?"said his father " he was but now i`m whole again he`s inside me the same for kairi and namine". "what weapon did you use son?" said "look" sora said and he closed his eyes and gatherd all his strenght and called the keyblade.then there was a burst of sparks and sora help a key shaped blade "this is what i used." he said " what is it?" said his father "a keyblade" he said. later they had dinner and they talked somemore. sora felt so drained and when he yawned his mother said "oh! i`m so sorry hunny you must be so tired!" "its okay mum" he yawned " i think you should go to bed sora if your tired" said his father "yeah. i`m just gonna give riku and kairi a call first" and he went up to his room and called riku on his phone riku answerd it "hello?" he said "hi its sora" "oh" "just seeing if your okay ad how oyur feeling and stuff"" i`m fine what about you? did you mum and dad keep questioning you? my dad couldnt belive it when i told him i went evil" " yeah my mum couldnt belive it when i told her about roxas. any way are you as tired as i am?" " yeah my mum told me to go to bed i`m in my room just now" "yeah same here.i`ll let you go to bed i`m gonna call kairi" " okay see you tomorrow" and riku hung up and sora called kairi " hi sora" she said " hi" and they talked for an hour then sora started to fall asleep and he said "kairi i need to go i`m really tired" " no wonder sora" he laughed and said "see you tomorrow" "okay bye" sora lay down in bed and deep in his head he herd roxas say"so thats your perants?" "yeah.but there your too roxas. because your my nobody and your in me. so your like my twin brother or something" "yeah" and then sora drifted off to sleep only to have nightmares about heartless attacking the island,riku becoming evil again and kairi losing her heart.suddenly a heartless jumped up and scratched him on the cheek and he put his hand up to his cheeck it was bleeding it"ow!" he said and he woke up. he looked at his clock 6:00 am! "oh man!" he said "sora! sora? what is it?" cried his mum and she came in and saw the cut on his cheek "what happend to your cheek?" "huh?" he put his hand up to his cheek and said"ow" as he felt the long gashes on his face "my dream.....must have done it myself...not a heartless. he got up and got dressed. kingdom hearts keyblade war=chap 2 on the beach sora went to the beach and got in a boat and sailed over to the other island. as he got out he saw kairi sitting on the beach.he went over to her."hi kairi" "hi so-sora what happend to your cheek?"she said. just then riku came over and he looked at sora and said"heartless nightmare?" "how`d you know?" "cos i had one too. but i didnt cut myself." "it wasnt me it was a heartless. or was it? oh i dunno!" said sora and he threw himself down on the sand next to kairi who looked at him with concren."what?" he said "didnt you have nightmares about the heartless a couple of days before the island dissapperd? wasnt that the last time you had dreams of heartless? when they were running around?" "yeah....but what are you getting at?" he said raising his eyebrow "maybe the heartless are coming back......oh i dont know" she said and she looked out to the ocean.sora and riku followed her gaze.sora now had a worring feeling in the pit of his stomach.sora closed his eyes."anyway you two are going to school tomorrow arent you?"said kairi sora opend his eyes and sat up and looked her and said" aw come kairi we`re just back i was hoping for some time to just you know chill out. i dunno about riku but i`m not going!" he said "aw come on sora everyone wants to see you! they missed you!" said kairi "please!" se knew she had him when she said "please" "fine!"he cried "i`ll go!" and he fell back down on the sand and said"but i wont like it!" kairi smiled at him."thanks sora!" she bent and kissed him on the cheek and his face turned bright red.riku looked at his face and started laughing."what are you laughing at?" riku shook his head.kairi looked at soras red face and she felt her own face go red"oh no i shouldnt done that" "oh no she might see from my red face that i like her!".they sat on the beach all day then they went home to rest up for school. kingdom hearts keyblade war=chap 3 back at school. sora woke up.and thought why did i agree into going to school? no! its for kairi! he got up out of his bed then he put his school uniform on.he looked at himself in his mirror this feels werid.but i have to admit it does fell good to be normal again.but am i really normal? he thought.he picked up his school bag and went down stairs.okay.kairi and riku will be here at 7:30 and school starts at 8:55.i gusses i have time for breakfast as he went in the kitchen he saw his mum making something "morrning mum" he said his mother turned a suprised look came across her face as she saw he had his uniform on." sora your going to school?" "yeah i kinda promised kairi" he said "well i know you keep your promises that you made to her.seeing as you really like her" she said turning away "mum!" sora said his face going red."sora you cant hide it from me! im your mother!" she said and she winked at him.sora had breakfast then at 7:30 kairi and riku came for him."bye mum!" he cried as he left the house.as they walked to school they meet selphie,tidus and wakka. who piled sora and riku with questions.when they got to school kairi took them to the head of the school. and they got their timetables.riku was in the year above sora and kairi.so he went alone.sora and kairi where in the same class.their first class was english when they walked threw the door kairi gave the teacher a note that told him about sora.he looke at sora and said "is that really you sora?" sora nodded.then the teacher called his class to attention "sir is that a new boy? are you brother with the other new boy?"asked a girl in the front row. the teacher looked at sora who said "riku" "oh"he said "no this is not a new boy. now class you all remeber sora dont you?" the class all gaped at sora and a boy said "your not sora! sora was a little wimpy kid that always got beat by riku!" sora smiled and said "thats me" they stared at him wish they would stop sora thought."sora would you like to take a seat next to kairi?" sora paractaically ran to his seat.his face really red everyone was still looking at him"i new this was a bad idea! why did i let you talk me into this?" sora said to kairi.she laughed.after three classes of people staring at him he was happy to be in there secret place in the school.he and kairi went to the place and found riku sitting there.a look of relife came over him."oh its just you two." he said "had everyone been staring at you too?"asked kairi and riku nodded "well i think i really rude.sora cant conceantrate with people looking at him" she said.they sat in there for half an hour then te bell went and sora had three more classes of staring then he practically ran home. kingdom hearts keyblade war chap4= first kiss and two whole nobodies it was three months after sora and riku came back.everyone was getting used to them being back now.sora was sitting on the peir looking out into the ocean.the a voice said "you miss it dont you?" he turned and saw kairi standing there."kinda" he said "i just miss beating bad guys,fighting heartless,stopping the nobodies and ......."he trailed off."and what?" said kairi looking into his deep blues eyes. he sighed and said "and rescuing you.kairi" his face went red at this part."oh!"said kairi and her face went red too. "come on sora just tell her!" he herd roxas say deep in his head. "only if you tell namine!" sora answerd "aw sora.i already did! we`re kinda going out" roxas said "oh right "sora sighed.meanwhile kairi was talking with namine "oh namine.he`s so cute when he`s shy." she said namine laughed and said "well tell him! me and roxas told eachother how we felt and now we`re going out!i can tell you and sora would be good together!" "i-i cant! what if he doesnt like me back the same way!" namine laughed "your right! i dont want to wait anymore!" "did you know that when you and sora relise your true feeling for one anoter me and roxas will be whole?" namine said "really? ok fine i`ll make the first move!"kairi said at the same time roxas had just told sora the same thing."sora?" "kairi?" they both turned at same time and pressed their lips onto each others.riku was walking along the beach when he saw sora and kairi.he started running towards them then he saw what they were doing "bout time!" he thought he stood over them.sora pulled away from kairi.he smiled at her and she smiled at him.then they both jumped when someone said "having fun?" they looked up and a grinning riku.they both blushed. then sora and kairi stood up.then they started to glow suddenly they felt really dizzy.kairi fell fist and sora caught her then sora fell.but he still had a hold of kairi but lucky riku caught them both.sora didnt know what was happening all he knew was in darkness. when he woke he was stareing at the cealing of his bed room."hey your awake!" said a voice that wasnt riku`s or kairi`s.he turned his head and saw roxas grining at him."huh? roxas how did you-" sora said "i told you! when you and kairi relise your true feelings for one another me and namine will be whole." "kairi...kairi!" sora said bolting up rigth in his bed. "relax she`s fine" roxas said "where is she?" "in her house with namine." sora got up and said "im going to see her!" "you cant . you have to explain to your parents what happend.your mums treating me like your brother!" "you kinda are now.anyway how can i explain when i dont even know what happend!" he and roxas went down stairs and sora told his parents what had happend as best he could.then he went outside planning to go and see kairi.he went to her house and namine opend the door.she let them in.kairi was sitting talking with her parents.she looked up at him and smiled and said "how do you feel?" "tired"he said roxas stood with namine."lets go to the island." sora nodded. they went over to the island. and sora said "so now we have a brother and sister" "sorta" kairi laughed. when they went home.sora`s mum had made the guest room into room for roxas."you need somewhere to sleep roxas." roxas smiled at her."thanks mrs-" but she cut him off "its mum now roxas.your my son too." she said as she hugged him.he smiled and hugged her back.sora smiled happy that roxas finaly had a heart and was whole.over at kairi`s house it was the same for namine. kingdom hearts keyblade war chap5-death of a friend it was three days after roxas and namine became whole.and sora and kairi were a couple now. roxas was getting used to calling soras mum his mum too.he went alone to sora`s room.sora was stil asleep so he shook him awake.when he woke up he said "wow sora kairi was right you really are a lazy bum!" then roxas started laughing.sora jumped up and grabbed roxas who was in his pjs and said "oh yeah?" they started fighting like brothers do.namine and kairi were going to get sora and roxas.kairi knocked on the door and sora and roxas`s dad answerd "oh hi girls you here for the boys?" they nodded."they`re up in sora`s room.i dont know what they are doing though.making awful racket. we only told roxas to-" he was cut off by a big bang then they herd sora yelling "OW ROXAS! THAT ONE HURT! WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR?!" then they herd roxas yelling "YOU SHOULDNT HAVE DONE THAT THEN SHOULD YOU?" they herd another bang and roxas yelled"HEY THAT JUST MISSED MY HEAD!" "TOO BAD IT COULDNT KNOCK SOME SENCE INTO YOUR THICK SKULL!"sora yelled. then he yelled "HEY PUT THAT DOWN ROXAS!NO DONT THROW THAT! I`VE HAD THT SINCE I WAS FIVE!" "OH SHUT UP!" roxas yelled "do you want to go up and see them?" the girls nodded and they went up stairs.they herd another knock and then they saw riku coming up the stairs they said hi and togther they went up to sora`s room.when they got to the door they all stopped and looked at sora and roxas.sora had not put and cloths on so he was still had his boxers on and roxas had his pjs on.sora had roxas in a head lock with one arm and was punching him with the other.roxas had his foot in soras face and was bitting sora`s arm that held his head. "are we interuppting?" riku asked the boys they looked up and gave a crie of shock when they saw that riku was with the girls. "yaaaa!" sora cried "ah riku will you close the door?!" "why sora? going to put away your dollies?" asked roxas then he jumped up from the floor and ran out the room. riku, kairi and namine jumped out of the way as sora came sprinting out too."ROXAS! IM GONNA GET YOU!" roxas ran in his room and sora tosed a book at him and it missed "yeah whatever oh keyblade master!" roxas laughed but he didnt see sora throw another book at him.it smacked him in the face. "ow !SORA!THAT HURT!" sora laughed.roxas had just grabbed sora by the shoulder with one hand and was going to punch him with the other when their dad came up and said "boys what did i tell you?" they both mumble "sorry dad" and looked at the floor "girls.riku why dont you come down stairs so the boys can get ready?" they all nodded and went down stairs.sora and roxas`s mum was in the living room "oh hello girls.riku." they said hello.and then she said "so kairi.you and sora are finaly going out huh?" kairi looked at her feeling her face go red. "and you must be namine." namine nodded."well its nice to meet you."she said "and your going out with roxas arent you?" namine nodded again. once the boys where ready sora wanted breakfast."is that all you think about ?"asked roxas "sora tossed a pice tf toast at him.then they left and sat on the beach.and talked for hours.then at 8 oclock it suddenly got darker and the winds picked up. they all stood up.and a door-way to darkness opend up. they all summond their kayblades even kairi and namine.a man stepped out he had his hood up so they couldnt see his face."ah princess kairi and her nobody princess namine.so good to see you again." sora stepped in front of kairi and roxas stepped in front of namine."hand over the girsl and no one gets hurt." said the man when the girls didnt go he said "fine.lets do it the hard way." suddenly there was heartless all over the island.the girls were pulled into the darkness and they went under they cried"SORA! ROXAS! RIKU!" "NO!" all three boys cried "thank boys.i`ll be going now.oh and you wont ever see the girls again." sora yelled with anger. he started attacking the heartless.roxas was helping him.riku was fighting the strange man and then the girls started helping with the heartless.then the man stabbed riku in the chest right where his heart was.sora saw riku fall and he houted "NO! RIKU!" roxas,kairi and namine turned and saw riku laying on the sand in a pool of blood. sora cut threw the rest of the heartless but before he got to the man he said "i will come back for them" sora swung his keyblade at him but he dissaperd. "sora!" said kairi he turned and saw she was crying roxas held namine in his arms while they both cried.sora ran to riku`s side.his breathing was sallow "hold on riku! just hold on!" sora said tears running down his face. "i cant hold on anymore sora....im sorry." "riku! no your gonna make it!" sora said "my best friend cant die on me!" kairi held rikus hand her head was bowed and she was crying. roxas was still holding namine. "see ya.guys." said riku with his last breath.he closed his eyes and his head rolled limply to the side. "riku! riku! open your eyes! riku!" said sora " sora....he`s gone" said roxas tears streaming down his face namine put her face on his chest and cried.kairi gave a small gasp and sobbed sora went over and hugged her.while they both cried. kingdom hearts keyblade war chap6-riku`s burrial it was three days after riku`s death and sora was up in his room sitting on his bed staring at a picture of him,kairi,roxas,namine and riku. a tear slide down his face.his mum came in "sora what do you want for dinner?" she asked "nothing mum im not hungry." he said sora continued to look at the picture his mum followed his gaze "sora....i know he was your best friend.but you cant stop eating because he`s not here anymore."his mum said he didnt answer her but his tears came flowing out his eyes quicker. "oh sora." she said as he broke down and cried.he put his head on his knees and rapped his arms around his legs and cried into his kness. "sora...." said his mother completly lot for words.she left him alone and as she passed roxas she said "see if you can cheer him up." "i dont if i can mum.i-i miss him too." and then roxas started crying he went into sora`s room who looked up when he herd roxas sniff."why? why did it have to be him? why couldnt have been me?" sora asked "sora....dont say that.....it wasnt your fault......" said roxas.sora stood up and said im going for a walk." "ok im going to get namine do you want me to get kairi?" roxas asked tears still running down his face.sora shrugged and walked out of the house.he went to the other island where riku was killed.everywhere he looked he saw riku.smiling and laughing. he couldnt take it anymore.and he still had the funneral to go to tomorrow. "sora?" said a voice that he knew was kairi. "sora...." she said softly when se saw he was crying. she hugged him and whisperd "i miss him too." he hugged her back "its all my fault."kairi said sora looked at her and saw that she was crying "kairi....its not." "sora it is! if i wasnt so helpless he would still be here!" she said hitting the ground with her fist casing her tears to hit the ground faster. "its no ones fault but his killer" sora anger suddenly filling him."everywhere i look he`s there..." said kairi "same with me" sora whisperd he looked at the poapu tree and riku was standing there smiling at him and kairi he said "heh dont be sorry for me sora.im happy where i am." then sora blinked and he was gone. "riku...."he whisperd a tear slide down his cheek again.he and kairi sat at the tree the whole day.when it got dark.they all went home.sora saw a bump in the sand where riku died.he went over to it roxas followed. "sora what is it?" he asked sora shook his head and dug in the sand.the bump had been rikus keyblade.he picked it up and took it home with him.when he and roxas got home they went straight to their rooms.once or twice they would to each others rooms. the next sora woke and started getting ready for riku`s burrial. he went down stairs and his dad joked "oh your up first! wheres roxas he`s being a lazy bum today!" he started laughing but stopped when he saw the sadness in sora`s eyes.but sora shrugged and sat on the couch and he started to stare into space.he didnt notice roxas sitting next to him for half an hour. him and roxas said they`d meet their parents at the church and they went to get the girls.they were already crying as they opend the door and they flung themselfs into the boys arms.then they went to the church.they all sat together.when they went up to see the body sora called riku`s keyblade and he put it next to riku."until next time.buddy" he said tears rolled off his cheek then kairi took his hand and he sat down again.then everyone went outside to watch the cofin be burried.whe it was brought out kairi let out a chocked sob then burried her face in sora``s chest. sora looked at roxas and namine.roxas was cuddeling namine and crying.namine was watching the cofin crying.then he looked at riku`s parents.riku`s mother howled with anguish and riku`s father just stood there tears running off his face.sora`s mother went to comfort riku`s.as the cofin was coverd with the last pice of dirt sora tears quickend and they fell into kairi`s hair.sora couldnt handel the wake so her left with roxas ,kairi and namine.he went straight to his room again.this time the other three were with him. kingdom hearts keyblade war chap7-the king comes it was a week after riku`s burrial and sora ,kairi ,roxas and namine were still upset. they were sitting on the beach .then they felt a gust of wind from above and then they looked at the sky and sora gasped and stood up."sora what is it?" kairi asked roxas looked at the sky and said "it looks like a.....rocket" "do you whos it is sora?" asked namine sora nodded. "its a gummie ship!" said kairi as it landed sora ran over to see who was inside it.the door opend.one minute sora was standing then next he was lying on the ground with a really big duck on him. kairi came running over with roxas and namine behind her. "donald!" she said happily then a large dog like thing jumped down on sora too."goofy!" she said then last of came a mouse."king mickey!" she gasped "hello."said the king donald and goofy got off sora who got up and stood beside kairi.sora took her hand. "i see sora.kairi.roxas and namine but wheres riku?" asked the king.namine looked out into the sea.roxas looked at the sky.kairi looked at sora and sora looked at the sand.they all had just got over the pain of losing riku.now they had to tell the king,donald and goofy.sora took a deep breath.feeling his throught became chocked by the lump that formed everytime he thought or spoke about riku. the others looked at him" well you see your majisty.we-we where sitting here on this beach about a week and a half ago.when this guy showed up and tried to take kairi and namine.he had alot of heartless with him.me and roxas were fighting the heartless with the girls help.and riku-riku was fighting the man.when r-riku got...got stabbed. in the chest where his heart was." sora said tears ran down his and his three friends faces as he spoke of what happend.great sadness filled the kings eyes."riku.....he died minutes after being stabbed...." said sora. there was a loud sob.and sora turned to face kairi wo was crying really hard.he pulled her close to him and hugged her.roxas did the same for namine."sora.....i`m so sorry if that upset you. and i`m sorry to call upon you in your time of greeving but theres trouble.lots of heartless have been appering in all worlds.and i think that the man you saw is the one behind it all." "i`ll go with you.but i wont leave kairi again.and roxas is coming and im sure he wont leave namine." sora said "its ok sora they can all come."said goofy. sora turned and smiled at kairi.it was his first smile since riku died.they all got on the gummie ship and donald said to sora and roxas "finaly got it together with the girls i see!". "donald!" the boys cried. kingdom hearts keyblade war chap8: the dream the gummie ship took off and they started flying threw space.sora was still thinking about riku he recalled him once saying to sora "dont ever go on an adventure with out me sora!" after this riku had began to laugh and sora said to him "it`s a promise!".tears ran down his face "sorry riku....i broke my promise..."he said quietly.roxas saw that sora was crying and he asked "you okay?" kairi and namine looked around."oh sora!" kairi said and she got up and went over to him.she hugged him and said "sora everything is gonig to be ok.riku would have wanted you to help the king.he wouldnt want to see you like this." "riku would have wanted to help out to! we made a promise and i broke it! i broke it kairi!" sora said the pain was clear in his voice "sora...."she said lost for words. he turned away from her and looked out the window.kairi turned his head back to her and she kissed him. "sora. dont feel bad anymore all we can do for riku is help the king and avenge his death..." kairi said sora stopped crying and nodded his head.the king was driving the ship said "you all should get some sleep....its late.there are some beds back there.going to bed is not a request." they got up and went threw a door into a room that had four beds.when they all got into bed they talked for awhile trying to cheer sora up.sora eventually fell asleep before the others.his fream was not pleaent.he was standing in the middle of a cross roads.thousands of keyblade surrounded him.three people came walking into the center were he was standing they picked p their keyblades and turned and saw a bald man walking towards them a evil smile on his face.the tallest of the three ran forward and started fighting the man who made a copy of himslef and made it into a heartless.the heartless started attacking the other two.one fell from a cliff.the persons helmet smashed and sora saw that it was a blue hair and blue eyed girl.another one ran over to her to see if she was ok.she turned and cast sheild on their friend but it didnt help for lots of keyblades hit of the shield and there was aloud bang.sora started to run to them.he was going to help them.the one that was with the girl ran up to help their friend sora ran behind the girl and put a hand on her shoulder.she looked at him and she new he was here to help.in the distance he could see roxas,kairi and namine all looking around confused they saw sora and started to run towards.the person who was fighting the man got hit with a blast of ice and the girls other friend jamp in the air but the man dissapperd then reapperd.holding the girls friend by the helmet.it started to crack.sora saw a young man eyes behind the helmet.then he was hit with a blast of ice freezing his whole body then he was hit again.the man dropped him off the cliff.as he was about to hit the ground the girl caught him sora ran over to see if he was okay.he saw that he looked like roxas.he ran up to help their other friend.as sora swung his keyblade at the man he turned and stabbed sora in the stomach.the last of the friends pulled off his helmet his turned gold.sora suddenly reconised the man.he was the one who had killed riku! sora glared at the man.but the man just put his blade futher into sora`s body.sora yelled in pain.the he fell to the ground.the man picked him up and threw him off the cliff.as he fell he herd namine scream.kairi yell in pankic and roxas call his name."sora! sora! sora! SORA!" sora was brought back to the gummie ship. "sora!" he herd roxas say "are you okay?" sora suddenly felt a great pain erput threw his stomach and he looked down there was blood on the sheets and a pole of some kind was sticking out of him.kairi and namine screamed and roxas said "woa! hold on sora this is gonna hurt!" roxas grabbed the pole and pulled it out "AAAAHHH" sora yelled in pain beofre losing conciusness.
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