kingdom hearts: revisited

oh im sorry i didn't mean to haste you...

but one thing i must say..

HAHAA i don't have to go to school for two weeks:):):) ive got some thing that i have to go to work instead of school...

 

chapter 13 online.

Chapter 13: Return

“You really overdone it Sora†Kairi said as she was bringing bandage on his arm.
“What happened†Sora said with a headache.
“Don’t you remember you where fighting heartless†Kairi said.
“I know that but I don’t know what happened after Riku gave me a hand†Sora said as he sat up straight.
“Well we took you to the gummi and now I’m healing your wounds†Kairi said.
“Where is Riku anyway?†Sora asked as he looked around.
“Don’t know and sit still Sora I can’t put the bandage on if you move†Kairi said as she tried to put the bandage good around Sora’s arm.


Meanwhile Namine was waiting on her final test.
“I wonder what kind of test it is?†she asked herself.
“Ready for the final test?†the gentle voice said.
“yeah†Namine said as she stood up.
“Have fun our on your one now†the gentle voice said.
“What do you mean?†Namine asked as she looked around
“ just survive†the gentle voice said.
As the floor started to shake parts of it fell off.
“This is not my idea of fun†Namine yelled as she jumped up.
As the big parts of the floor where falling Namine jumped to part to part trying to dodge the debris that came down.
“What kind of test is this, I will die here†Namine almost cried as she was falling.


As she was falling a memory flashed trough het mind.
“What this again?†Angels asked.
“They will find me and kill me†Namine cried.
“What can the organisation do against me?†Angels asked.
“Stop acting almighty your just a child like me†Namine said.
“Now your wrong, if I was like you I would be killed a long time ago†Angels said.
“Then what is different between you and me?†Namine asked.
“I think positive and don’t panic†Angels said.
“That all?†Namine asked.
“For what matters now yeah†Angels said.
“And what is your plan to get out this darkness?†Namine asked.
“I have no plan for that†Angels said.
“So where trapped here†Namine yelled.
“Now there is that negative thinking again†Angels said.
“Hmm†Namine said as she turned her head.
“You need to start living like that saying†Angels said.
“What saying?†Namine asked as she look at Angels.
“If bad things come up your pad crush them and continue living†Angels said.
“And that means?†Namine asked
“Don’t let bad things ruin your live†Angels said.


As Namine opened her eyes she saw that she was still falling.
“That’s right I need to live like that†Namine said as she saw a platform appear.
As it she was coming closer to the platform Namine summoned her keyblade back in her hand and rammed it into a part of the floor and stood on it.
As she was close in of by the platform she jumped and unsummoned her keyblade.
“Made it†Namine said as she landed on the platform.
Namine looked around her and saw nothing.
“Again everything is covered in darkness†Namine said as she summoned her keyblade.
“Namine†someone yelled.
“How’s there?†Namine asked.
“Me†someone said as it walked to her.
“Riku?†Namine asked.
“That’s right†Riku said as he charged at her.
As Namine block Riku’s attack with her keyblade she saw that it was Riku’s replica attacking her.
“What are you doing where?†Namine asked.
“This is my final order†Riku said.
“What is your final order?†Namine asked.
“What do you think, I came here to kill you†Riku said as he tried to knock Namine of her feet.
“Your not real†Namine said suddenly.
“Shut up†Riku said as he jumped up and tried hitting from above.
Namine rolled under him and attack from the back.
“Seems you changed†Riku said.
Riku stopped moving and waited for Namine’s attack.
Namine charged at Riku but instate of attacking she jumped back and Riku attack.
“Wrong choose but not attacking me†Riku yelled.
Riku Ran away from Namine turned and started building up speed to hit her.
As he was 2 feet away Namine put her keyblade on the ground and stand upside down on it as Riku had no time to aim on something els than the keyblade he hit the keyblade at full speed sending it flying but because Namine was hanging on the keyblade it turned 360 hitting Riku with his own strength.
“Who do you like that?†Namine asked.
“There is no way you could beat me†Riku said as he got up his feet using his blade.
Namine looked at Riku and put her keyblade in front of her.
“This is the end for you†Riku said as he charged at Namine.
As Riku tried to hit Namine she turned and attack causing both weapons to fly in the air.
Riku jumped up to grab his and Namine’s weapon.
As he grabbed his and almost got Namine’s weapon it disappeared.
“What going on†Riku said.
“Looking for this?†Namine asked as she hit Riku back on the platform.
As Riku fell on the platform his blade fell of it.
“Where is it?†Riku asked as he looked around him.
“If your looking for your blade it fell of the platform†Namine said as she put her keyblade in front of her with both hand holding on tight.
“Then I will kill you with darkness†Riku said.
As he pointed a finger to Namine the darkness spread over the entire platform.
“I give you a flying lesson before I kill you†Riku said.
As Namine jumped into the air darkness exploded underneath her cause her to flew up as she recovered from the blow she grabbed the opportunity to end the fight by throwing her keyblade in Riku.
“That is what you get for messing with me†Namine yelled.
“To end up losing to a girl†Riku said with a weak voice.
As Riku dropped on the floor the keyblade shined with a bright light destroying Riku’s body and the darkness.
As everything was over she looked at the sky that turned light blue.
“Can I go back now?†Namine asked.
As she looked in front of her a light appeared.
The next thing she knows she was in Kairi’s room.


Meanwhile Angels and Patrick where at the small one’s office.
“What is it you wanted, I’m busy†the small one said.
“The escort went as the plan†Patrick said.
“No one died?†the small one asked.
“Only heartless†Patrick said.
“Good, now you here for a new job, right?†the small one said.
“Yeah†Patrick said as he nodded.
“We got nothing right now so retreat to the rest†the small one said.
“I understand†Patrick said as he walked out the office.
“why are you still hiding yourself king Mickey?†Angels asked.
“I will revile myself when the time strikes†Mickey said.
“That can take some time†Angels said.
“Don’t worry about that, worry about them†Mickey said as he pointed to the gummi.
“hmm.. sad†Angels said suddenly.
“What do you mean?†Mickey asked.
“Sora and Kairi and Roxas and Namine they are in love and you know what that means†Angels said.
“Strong hearts†Mickey said with a long face.
“Yeah, so heartless will come at them†Angels said.
“still you need to protect hem†Mickey said.
“I know†Angels said.
“Get going now Riku is coming†Mickey said.
“Always the hurry†Angels said as he disappeared.


Back at the gummi Kairi was ready with the bandage.
“finally done†Sora said as he lay done.
“he, I did al the work†Kairi said.
“I know†Sora said.
“You teasing me, aren’t you?†Kairi asked.
“Yeah†Sora said.
“you’re complete hopeless now†Kairi said as she started to tickle Sora.
“Am I interrupting something?†Namine asked as she walk in the bedroom.
“Namine?†Kairi asked.
“That’s me†Namine said as she was hugged by Kairi.
“Your back†Roxas said as he appeared.
“Yeah and I’m not leaving you anymore†Namine said as she run to Roxas and hugged him.
“Don’t worry I won’t let you†Roxas said as he held Namine tight against him.
“What happened anyw€ Sora asked.
“Well I have to show you†Namine said.
“What do you mean?†Roxas asked.
“This†Namine said as she summoned her memory scraper.
“A keyblade†Sora, Kairi and Roxas said together.
“Surprised?†Namine asked.
“Well yeah, you where almost hit by a heartless and you faded away†Kairi said.
“Sorry for letting you worry so much†Namine said.
“Don’t worry about that†Kairi said.
“Can you tell what happened?†Roxas said.
“Sure†Namine said as she started to tell the whole story.

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