kingdom hearts: revisited

this is my first story so I hope you like it.

Background: it’s 3 months sinds sora, kairi and riku got back and started continuing there ‘normal’ lives. Sora and riku started challenging wakka and tidus. Kairi ‘s hanging out with selphie and if the 3 are together they would learn kairi how to use the keyblade.

Chapter 1: Blitzball

Sora started his day as any other day: stand up, almost breaks his neck to get into the shower, comes out the shower put on some clothes, eats, goes outside but goes back in side and brush his tooth.
After he brushed his tooth he went to the store to buy a newspaper.
“Hmm” Sora said as he read the newspaper: there is not must going on these days.
The only thing that is interesting is a dog with 101 puppy’s, but no new movies, no new books and noting else to do then training, I better go to Riku maybe he knows some thing else to do.
On his way to Riku Sora saw Kairi.
“Hi Kairi” Sora said with a smile on his face.
“Morning sleepy head” Kairi said with a smile: look like you haven’t sleep.
“Not at all its to warm, so I can’t sleep” Sora said.
“I will let you in a secret” Kairi said: you want to know what it is?
“Yeah” Sora said: come on Kairi tell me.
“It’s a fan” Kairi said: they keep you cool if you turn them on.
“Hahaha Kairi” Sora said sarcastic: but you have a point, but I have to go to Riku, see ya Kairi.
“Bye sleepy head” Kairi said as she walked to Selphie.
‘Gimme a break will ya’ sora said to Kairi as he runs to Riku’s house.


As soon as he saw Riku’s house he stopped running, he walked to the front door and pushed the bell.
He waited a few sec but nobody opened the door.
“Strange Riku is always home or with me” he said as he started to think: oh, yeah that’s right Riku is by his grandma for her birthday.
As Sora walked home he saw Wakka and Tidus playing blitzball.
Strange I newer tried to play blitzball thought Sora and so he walked to Wakka and Tidus.
“Hi” Sora said and instantly he heard Wakka and Tidus said hi back.
“Wakka” Sora asked: can you teach me how to play blitzball?
As soon that Wakka heard it he said “yes I can” and his eyes sparked like a 1000 stars.
Sora learned to play blitzball and saw that there are some moves he could use for fighting heartless.
“Man I never thought that I could hold my breath for so long” Sora said: this could be use full some time.
“That was nothing” Wakka said: to be a real blitzballplayer you need to hold you breath for 1 hour.
“Man that’s long I only made 10 minutes” Sora said: how long can your two hold your breath?
“We can hold it for 35 minutes” Wakka said: but you did great you just go you first training and you hold your breath for 10 minutes, most hold it for 2 minutes, so you did great, but it’s getting late we better go.
“Oke, see ya later and you to Tidus” Sora said.
“Ya, see ya and don’t mind Tidus he lost his voice” Wakka said: don’t forget to practise your breathing.
“Oke, I won’t” Sora said as he walk home: oh, now I know why I’m so hungry it’s 8 o’clock.


As soon as Sora got home he made something to eat.
“Maybe I should go training in the sea after I finished my meal” thought Sora.
As Sora eat his meal his mom came down and told him to clean his room.
“But mom” Sora started: I have to practice my breathing.
“Your breathing” Sora’s mom recalled: what are you talking about.
“It’s for blitzball mom” Sora tried to explain.
“Blitzball???” Sora’s mom asked confused: I don’t care if the world exploded just clean up your room, I mean I can’t see the floor so clean up your room.
“Yes mom” Sora said as he walked up the stare to his room .
As Sora walked into his room he said: man, is this my room how can I sleep in this, mom’s right you can’t see the floor.
As Sora cleaned his room he saw a box.
“Hmm…” Sora said while his looking to the box: I know the box but I can’t remember what’s in it?
Sora opened the box and saw that al his keychains where in the box.
“Yes, I didn’t lost them” Sora said while he looked at everyone: hmm.. it’s probably a good idea to put them on the wall.
When Sora was finished with the keychains, he looked up to the wall and all the memories of his adventure filled up his head.
As he looked on the ground he saw something.
He picked it up and said: a gummi, how did this came here, all the gummi block we got went to Donald and Goofy, hmm… strange.
Sora looked at the clock and said: 12 o’clock, man now I can’t train any more.
I better go to bed so I can train early.


The next morning started as any other but instead going to Riku, Sora when’d to Wakka.
“Morning wakka” Sora said.
“Oi Sora” Wakka started: do ya heard the news?
“New?” Sora asked: there is news, about what Wakka?
“About a meteor” Wakka said: it crashed in to the sea near the island.
“A meteor” Sora said: that is cool, so when do we go?
“As soon as Tidus comes, ya” Wakka said: it will be a test for your breathing and a adventure.
“Hey” Tidus said with a strange voice.
“Got the stuff?” Wakka asked.
“Yeah” Tidus said as he dropped the stuff.
“Good we can go now” Wakka said.
“Wait” Sora said: what for stuff is it?
“I will have to kill you if I tell you” Wakka said: just kidding it’s Blitzball training stuff this here are weights use for swim training, a air bottle for breath training and some other things for exploring underwater.

“So can we go now?” Tidus asked.
“Ya lets go, to the boot’s” Wakka said: we will use the boot’s to go to the island then we make the final preparations and then we go looking for the meteor and do some exploring and blitz training, got it.
At the same time Tidus and Sora said: got it.
On that the three when’d to there boot’s and headed to the island.
On the way to the island Sora ask: hey, Wakka do you think we can get to the meteor, I mean aren’t there all kind of people there?
“Got a point there” Wakka said: but did you forgot that it’s vacation, every one goes away on vacation even the news reporters that’s why there is so little news.
“Oke” Sora said: look, where almost at the island.
“Good” Wakka said: when were on the beach check your stuff so we can go.
“Oke” Tidus said.


please comment it and if you find spelling errors plz tell so I can fix it
and special thanks to ObsessedWithSora for helping

 

You've done very very well for somebody who's family doesn't speak english xD
there were quite a few spelling errors, but over time they'll straighten out and you will become a fluent writer.

I laughed when Sora's mum said that she wouldnt care if the world exploded, she just wanted a clean room.

Keep it up, buddy. :D

 

thanks and if you wait a few minutes you can read chapter 2

Chapter 2: the meteor

“Oke, we are on the beach” Wakka said: check your stuff.
“Wakka, your got all the stuff” Sora said.
“Ah, you right” Wakka said with a nervous smile on his face: here.
As he throw Sora stuff to sora he said: you need to keep the air bottle by you all the time don’t want you to drown.
“I will be fine” Sora said: looks like I got every thing.
“Good” Wakka said as he looked to Tidus: do you got every thing.
“Yeah” Tidus said: but why do we need a food?
“We are going down into the sea” Wakka said: you will need energy for this, so you need to eat.
“Can we go” Sora said: I want to see the meteor.
“Don’t be in such a hurry” Wakka said: we need to wait for the sun to hit the water for the island or you can’t see a thing.
And you said a minute a go “when were on the beach check your stuff so we can go, don’t ya” Sora said a bit angry.
“Ya, I said that but I thought that was 9 O’clock and it is a Quarter for 9 so wait” Wakka said.
“How big do you think it is” Tidus ask to change the subject.
“Big in of for you my friend” Wakka said as he looked to the water.
“Looks pretty cold the water I mean” Sora said.
“It’s cold Sora” Wakka said: but don’t worry as we find the meteor you will forget that.
The three boys looked over the sea and saw how the sea when’d from dark blue to light blue.
“It looks like it’s time to explore” Wakka said with a smile on his face.
“Here we go” sora said as the boys started to run into the sea.
“Wait’ Wakka yelled.
The two other boy looked at wakka and ask what wrong.
“We forget to say the prayer’ Wakka said as he scratch his head.
“What prayer?” Sora ask: what are your talking about Wakka.
“The blitz prayer that we shown you” Wakka said.
“Let me think” Sora said: oh, yeah you should do the prayer for a blitzball game or swimming in the sea.
“That’s right” Tidus said.
The three boys did the prayer and started to diving for the meteor.


Sora looked underwater for the first time and saw all sorts of fish, coral beds as far as his eyes could see and five dolphins playing around some fish.
He looked for the meteor but his eyes could only see the fishes and beautiful coloured coral.
This is beautiful he thought are some fish swim around him.
“Wait a minute” he thought to himself: where are Wakka and Tidus?
Sora swam back to the surface and looked around him.
“Nice Sora’ he heard Wakka say: that were 17 minutes underwater and it looked like you can last longer.
“Thanks” Sora said: but where is Tidus?
“Oh, his still underwater” Wakka started: we started looking for strains fish movements and it looks like we hit gold, but I’m not sure if it is the meteor we look for, I think it is a old shipwreck but maybe I’m wrong.
“So what are we waiting for” Sora said: let’s get diving.
“You read my mind Sora” Wakka said with a smile.
Sora and Wakka dived back down.
As Tidus saw Sora and Wakka coming he seined something.
The first word was big or round, but as Tidus seined the rest it was: there is a big rock that blocks a hole in the ship about 16,4 feet from them.
Wakka seined to go to the rock.
The three looked at the rock and saw that they can’t move it, at that point Wakka looked in his stuff and pulled something out his bag.
Tidus pulled Sora along to a save distant.
Wakka throw it and swum away.
As the ball hit the rock it exploded and the three boys where pushed into a rock.


As soon as the explosion was over Wakka and Tidus took Sora to the surface.
“Sora, you oke?” Wakka asked concerned.
“Yeah” Sora said carefully as he felled pain through his body: Wakka what was that?
“A mini bomb” Wakka said: there for emergencies.
“That was one shockwave” Sora said.
“Shockwaves are must stronger in the water” Tidus said: we should have warned you, sorry Sora.
“Don’t worry” Sora said: I’m still a live and in one piece.
“Tell me if you ready to go to the ship” Wakka said as he looked at the sky.
Sora took his time to stretch some muscles.
“Oke” Sora said: I’m ready to explore the ship.
“Good” Tidus said as he saw something: eh, I thing I see something.
“Me to and it’s a boot” Wakka said: time to dive.
The three boys quickly got underwater and into the ship.
From the ship they saw that two persons jump into the water and dove to the ship.
“Not now” Wakka thought as he seined to Sora and Tidus to get there weapons.
The three were ready to attack the two persons when they saw it was Kairi and Selphie how were swimming to them.
Wakka seined to put down there weapons and swum out side the ship to the girls he seined the girls to go the surface.
“You” Selphie started as she pointed to Wakka: I know enough, I will tell you on the boot Kairi, come on.
Kairi said a Quick hi to sora and went with Selphie.
“What was that about?” Tidus asked with strange face: did I mist something.
“She’s still angry about the blitz accident” Wakka said: I hit her with a blitzball that’s all.
“One good thing about this” Sora said: they didn’t see the ship.
“That’s right” Tidus said: and now for the real exploring.


The three searched the ship but couldn’t find something.
“Noting here” Sora thought as he saw something red, he looked out the window and saw a trail and… he couldn’t belief his eyes a gummiship.
He Quickly put some sand on the window so Wakka and Tidus won’t see it.
“Tonight I’m going back to see the gummi” he thought to himself.
As sora turn Wakka stood behind him and seined that Tidus found something and that he need to come.
As Sora and Wakka swum to Tidus, Sora needed air so as quick as he could he used he air bottle.
Wakka clapped his hand and seined that he had lest 22 minutes with out breathing.
Sora shaked his head and swum to Tidus and helped him with a chest.
“Looks good” Sora thought: I wonder what’s inside.
Wakka seined to get back to the beach.
The three boy’s took the chest from the ship to the beach.


that was chapter 2 hope you like it

 

Good.
I don't understand why Sora would hide the Gummi Ship from Tidus and Wakka though...

 

as they found it they would go to other worlds and there still heartless out there so they would be attacked and Sora need to save them with the keyblade and that will blow his cover.
that and it would make my story a little harder to write.

 

Chapter 3: the gummiship

“Hmm… strange†Sora said.
“What the matter Sora?†Wakka asked.
“This chest isn’t heavy at all†Sora started: I think that’s empty.
“Could be†Tidus said: but the lock is still closed.
“Lets get that chest on the beach so we can open it†Wakka said impassioned.
The three boys put the chest on the beach and tried to open it.
“It won’t open†Tidus said: we need the key for this.
“Let me try†sora said.
“Belief me Sora†Wakka started: if Tidus can’t open it nobody can, I mean he open the school save and that thing is impossible to open with out the key.
“Did you find something in there†Sora asked.
“Yeah, phone hell and all sort of things†Tidus said.
“Phone hell what do you mean†Sora asked as the scratched his head: and what were you doing there anyway?
“I needed my MP3 player back†Tidus said calm: and with phone hell I mean that there where to many phones and they all rot away.
“Oke†sora said: but let me try to open the chest.
“Oke†Tidus said: try and open it.
“Easy as pie†sora thought but as he wanted to summon the keyblade.
But as he realized that he can’t be case Wakka and Tidus would know that he was the a keyblademaster he quickly grabbed his wooden sword and hit the lock with all he got.
Sora heard a sound that the lock opened.
“So that will do it†he said.
Sora opened the chest and Wakka and Tidus watched.
“It it's a… I don’t know what it is†Tidus said with a disappointed face.
“Looks like two big piece of rubber†Wakka said with a disappointed voice.
“That are a pair of navigate gummies†Sora thought: with this I can go to other worlds.
“Lets go home†Wakka said: I don’t feel like diving any more maybe tomorrow.
“Yeah†Tidus said: you can have those two dings Sora.
“Oke†Sora said: I’m going to dive some more, oke?
“Oke, but be sure that you come breath often†Wakka said: were going home and we don’t what to rescue you.
“Oke†Sora said with a smile.
“Now I can dive for the gummiship†he thought as he put the pair of navigate gummies in his bag.


Sora swum over to the gummiship.
“Oke, I need to be here†he thought: I hope it still works so I can go to other worlds, what am I saying, I’m going to other worlds with Kari and Riku.
Sora dived to the gummi and saw that the cockpit still working.
“Wait†Sora thought: I’m forgetting something.
Sora searched his mind over gummiship’s and know what’s wrong.
“I need to destroy the antenna on the ship or ells the heartless will find me†he thought.
Sora swum to the antenna and hit the antenna with his keyblade.
“So that’s down now I need to look for a door†Sora thought.
He saw a door but it was blocked and locked.
“I will use the keyblade for this†he thought: those mini bomb from Wakka are to dangerous.
Sora hit the rock with a quick attack and used the keyblade to open the door.
“Damn it I still underwater†Sora thought as the door opened.
“The water will destroy the cockpit and the ship will be useless†he thought but what he thought was wrong, the water didn’t went into the ship.
The ship had a sort shield that hold the water out.
As Sora when’d into the ship he thought: I need to be more careful with the ship.
As Sora looked though the ship A heartless appeared.
It was a heartless solder.
Sora quickly defeat it before it could do any damage.
“So this is a heartless ship†Sora said: I never saw one from the inside.
“I will check the controls†he thought: it looks like the controls I normally use, but the shield misses and it have limited ammo.
“So that why heartless do kamikaze attacks, they ‘re out of ammo†he said.
The only thing that I muss do is get the gummi of the bottom of the sea and into the air.
“But how will I do that†he thought: maybe with the gummi self… oh yeah the gummi is pointing down, so if I do that it will crash on the bottom of the sea.
“I need to find a other way†Sora said: maybe with Magnega.
“That should work Sora†somebody said.
“How’s there?†sora asked a he stands in attack position with the keyblade in his hand.
“Me†someone said as he started to appear.
“Roxas?†Sora asked as he watched how Roxas appeared: where were you all the time, you disappear 2 months ago with Namine.
“We didn’t disappear we went on vacation deep in your body†Namine said.
“Wow, wait a sec†Sora said a bit angry: you two went on vacation in my body?
“That’s right†Roxas said: with all your fantasy it was the perfect place.
“But we need to go to Kairi†Namine said: come on Roxas.
“Oke Namine†Roxas said with a voice that sounded like he didn’t got a free will: got luck Sora, I hope it works.
And on that Roxas and Namine when’d to Kairi.
Oke, now the ship Sora said.
He swum on top of the ship and used magnega.
He saw that the ship started to move so he made a chain of magnega’s that lifted the ship out of the water.
He quickly jumped in the ship and flow to the island.


I better park it on the other side of the island.
“Only I, Kairi and Riku com there†Sora thought.
Sora parked the ship on the other side of the island and used the camouflage mode that was on the ship.
“No wonder some heartless ship disappear†Sora said: they got a camouflage mode on the ship.
“Anyway I need to tell Kairi and Riku†Sora thought.
“We can go to other worlds now†Sora said as he run to his boot.
“I can see all of my friends again†Sora thought as he jumped in his boot.
“But first I need to find Kairi and Riku and telhem my idea†Sora thought.
“We will go on a trip to see all the worlds and see all of old my friends†Sora yelled.
He quickly realist what he yelled and look around him to see if any one heard him.
“But first to the main land and look for Kairi and Riku†he thought.


so chapter 3 is online up to chapter 4 but in the mean time read this or listen to this:
:rockband: its Linkin Park

 

oh i didn't know that.
sorry Rinoa
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Chapter 4: going

As Sora when’d to the main land, two unknown people appeared on the big tree on the island.
“So you know what to do?” the small one asked.
“yeah” the big one said.
“One thing” the small one said: if they see you they will attack because you look like someone of The Organization.
“Oke” the big one said: but if they attack I will hit the them hard.
“Now get to work, Angels” the small one said.
“Yes” Angels said.
With that said Angels disappeared in a white light and al what’s left was some white feathers and the other summoned a keyblade and opened a door and when’d trough it.


In the meanwhile Sora run over the main land in search of Kairi and Riku.
As Sora run he looked every where and when he turned at a corner he bumped into Kairi.
“Au, Sora look out where you run” Kairi said as she laid on the ground: why did you run any way?
“Sorry, Kairi” Sora said and it took three whole sec to understand that he found Kairi: I was looking for you.
You found me Kairi said a little angry: so what’s the problem??
“How fast can you pack you stuff” Sora said as he was interrupted by Kairi.
“You bumped into me for that” she yelled.
“If you let me talk” Sora started: we, you, I and Riku are going on a world trip.
Kairi hit Sora on his head.
“I like the idea but we don’t have a gummiship” she said.
“I have” he said as he rubbed his head: it is after the island and it was the meteor that crashed into the sea it was a heartless ship, we can go to other worlds now Kairi.
“What are you waiting for get your stuff, I will tell Riku” Kairi said happy.
“Oke, Thanks for telling Riku Kairi” Sora said as he when’d to his house to grabbed his stuff.
“Sora, phone for you” his mom said as he walked though the door.
“Oke mom” he said as he got the phone in his hands.
“Oke, sleepy head when do we go?” Kairi asked a little teasing.
“Be at 8 o’clock after the island” Sora said.
“Oke, see ya sleepy head” Kairi said: I will tell Riku.
“Oke, bye Kairi “ Sora said.
“Are you three sleeping on the island again?” Sora mom asked.
“Yeah” Sora said.
“Be sure that you bring enough clothes and underwear” she said.
Sora slammed his head into the wall for the shame: why do mom’s always care about underwear.
“Don’t know I don’t have a mom” Roxas said: by the way what is underwear?
Sora opened his eyes completely and said: now I’m a shame for my mom and my not knowing what’s underwear nobody.
“I better go and sleep now” Roxas said as he when’d in Sora’s body.
“I hope that he wash all of his clothes” sora said disappointed.
And now for my stuff.
A hour later Sora was finally ready with packing.
“Where is Roxas” Namine asked
“Hi Namine” he is inside me shaming for not knowing what underwear is Sora said.
“Underwear, what is that?” Namine asked.
“Not you to” Sora said as he let himself fall on his bed.
“I’m gonna go see Roxas now” She said nervously: bye Sora.
“Yippy, now I got two nobody’s inside me how don’t know what underwear is” he said: somehow I fill dirty now.
“Sora diner is ready” Sora mom yelled upstairs.
“Oke, mom just a minute” Sora said.
“What do you eat Sora” Roxas said: I hope some meat.
“Oke” Sora said: I’m gonna eat now and if you two do anything you will be on diner for tomorrow, got it.
“You better eat Roxas then or ells you have noting to eat” Namine joked.
“Namine” Sora and Roxas yelled.
“Sorry” Namine said as she and Roxas when’d into Sora’s body.
Sora eat his meal and watched some tv before he went to the island.


Sora stepped into his boot and when’d to the island.
As he was half way he saw that Kairi came back from the island.
“Can’t take it in one time” he said.
“No and I can’t find my nobody” Kairi said: do you know where she is?
“In side me with Roxas” Sora said.
“Namine come and help me” Kairi said.
“No way” Namine said: this raining.
“So, I need your help” Kairi said to her nobody.
“Water and my white dress don’t mix good” Namine said.
“What do you mean Namine” Kairi said think about her stuff getting wet.
“I mean a shine though dress” Namine said.
Sora felt like his blushed and Quickly look to the island.
“I’m gonna put all the stuff in the gummi” Sora said as it rained harder.
“Oke can you put mine to” Kairi asked.
“Oke” Sora said and he went to the island.
He put all the stuff in the gummi and went back for Kairi’s stuff.
He and Kairi quickly got in the gummi and waited for Riku.


As they waited they heard a bang.
“What was that” Kairi said.
“I will check it” Sora said.
As Sora when’d outside the pretended that he was grabbed by someone.
“Help Kairi” he yelled as he was ready to give Riku a seine to grab Kairi.
Kairi ran outside and Riku grabbed her.
Instead of screaming she summoned the keyblade and attack Riku.
As soon as Riku was hit on the head Sora yelled: stop Kairi it’s Riku.
Sora and Kairi pulled Riku on board and got his stuff.
As soon as they where back they check Riku and saw that he woke up.
“how are you doing” he said with a nerves smile.
“Good and bad at the same time” Riku said: I’m proud on Kairi for using the keyblade and mad for hitting me with it.
“Sora you fly and I will take care of Riku” Kairi said: and promise me that you two ‘re newer gonna do that again or I will hit you two with my keyblade.
“Yes Kairi” the two boys said as they sounded like they where in the army.
“And we are away” Sora said as they flow away from Destiny Islands.
“Up to the next world” the three keyblademasters said.
“What is the next world?” Riku asked.
“You will see as we get there” Sora said.


that was chapter 4 hope that you will like it and hope that somebody will join the readers of the story.
the only readers now are ObsessedWithSora and guests :dead:

 

Don't worry soon everyone will see the amazingness of this story xD
lol Kairi threatening Sora and Riku was good
and yes mums always seem to ask about underwear...

 

yeah I know.
i have a post in Writer's Workshop and it a handy advertise.
i saw you post a advertisement there to.
it's good to know some people still care about new writes.

 

its getting better keep up with the good work and i am sure your story will be better by progress

 

sorry for the late update

thanks yamimg

Chapter 5: Hollow Bastion/Radiant Garden

“question: do we have food?†Riku asked.
“Only fast cook rice†Sora said.
“Don’t know†Kairi said: I will look trough our stuff.
“This bag looks like a freezer†Kairi said: but it’s a normal bag with clothes.
“And how’s bag was it†Sora asked.
“Mine†Kairi said: and there is no other food than your fast cook rice.
“Good thing that the next world is only one hour flying†Sora said.
And so 58 minutes long the three keyblademasters talked about every thing.
“Are we there yet†Riku asked for the 99 time.
“If you said that one more time†Sora said angry: I will let Kairi hit you.
“Oh, now I’m scared†Riku said on a sarcastic way: I’m not afraid of Kairi.
“Oh, you aren’t afraid of me†Kairi said.
“your so dead Riku†Sora said quietly.
“Not a chance†he said.
Kairi hit Riku as hard as she could and sent Riku flying from the cockpit to the end.
“Are you afraid yet?†Kairi asked as she walked to Riku.
“Sora help†Riku yelled: she turned into a devil.
“What did you say, Riku†Kairi said angry.
“Knock it off you two†Sora said: we’re landing.
“But he insulted me†Kairi said.
“We’re landing†Sora said: after we land you can throw him out the ship.
“Don’t give her ideas†Riku said.


And on that Sora landed the gummi and Riku was throw out the ship by Kairi.
“So that was Riku†Kairi said.
As she walked to her stuff they heard a scream and a big bang.
Sora and Kairi walked to the scream and saw Tifa.
“Hoi Tifa what was all the screaming about†Sora asked.
‘Hi Sora†Tifa said: will… something came at me at high speed so I hit it and smashed it into that rock there.
“And what was it†Kairi asked.
“A boy†Tifa said.
“Riku†Sora and Kairi said.
“Do you let him live?†Sora asked.
“Yeah, but I think he need to see Aeris†Tifa said: is he one of your friends?
“Yeah†Sora said.
“Then lets go†Tifa said.
They pulled Riku out the rocks and headed to Merlin's house.


“Why are you here?†Tifa asked.
“We’re on a little vacation†Sora started: we’re going to all the worlds that I visited.
“Now that’s sound like a great idea†Tifa said.
“So how are the things going here†Sora said: and before I forget this is Kairi and the boy that you hit is Riku.
“Hi I’m Tifa†Tifa said: Kairi were did you bought that clothes they are beautiful.
“I made it myself†Kairi said a little shy.
“The thing in town are going great except there two little problems†Tifa said: a heartless problem but that is under control and some things in black coats fighting with every one.
“black coats†Sora said.
“You called†a voice said.
With that said flames came up from the ground sending Sora and Tifa one way and Kairi and Riku a other way.
“What are you and what do you planning†Sora said as he summoned his keyblade.
“I’m a nightmare a beast from nightmare and darkness the name is Ken†Ken said: weren’t planning nothing we only fight and eat when we please.
“You’re going down, Ken†Tifa said: as she run towards the nightmare.
“What are you gonna do†Ken said like Tifa was noting: are you gonna hit me I’m so scared.
“You should be†Tifa said as she hit Ken sending him flying into a rock.
As Ken recovered from Tifa’s hit he scanned the battlefield and saw that sora was running to him but he didn’t see Tifa “where is she†he said.
“to slow†Tifa yelled as she kick him towards Sora.
“Here I go†Sora said as he throw his keyblade into Ken sending him flying to Tifa.
“You’re dead meat†she said as she hit him into the ground.
Sora summoned oblivion and jump into the air and slain Ken with oblivion.
“Now that’s a combo†Tifa said.
“I’m not done yet†Ken said.
“You are†someone said on that moment two keyblades flow through the air slaining through Ken and where going towards Kairi.
In a flash of light a man in a black coat stand for Kairi summoned the keyblades back into his hands and disappeared and the only thing what was left were some white feathers and a burning Ken.


“Who was that?†Kairi asked.
“Looked like a other nightmare†Tifa said.
“No that can’t be it†Sora said: it doesn’t make sends he kills Ken and saves Kairi.
“Can somebody get that rock of my foot?†Riku yelled.
“White feathers†Kairi said.
“what?†Sora asked: if that was from that man he can’t be a nightmare they are made from nightmares and darkness.
“Help me with this rock†Riku yelled.
“I don’t know it any more†Tifa said: take some feathers and we will ask Cid to analyse them.
“Help me please†Riku yelled an on that Sora broke the rock with oblivion: thank you.
Riku got up and fell down from the pain.
“You are hopeless†Kairi said quickly supported Riku.
“Didn’t you notices something, Sora†Riku said with pain: he was using two keyblades.
“If that’s true he must be in Ansem’s computer†Tifa said: many keyblade users are in the computer.
“Lets go†Sora said.
“I’m not going anywhere†Kairi yelled.
Tifa and Sora looked at Kairi and asked why not.
“Riku is way to heavy†Kairi said when she almost fall from Riku’s weight.
“I will carry him†Tifa said lifting Riku over her shoulders.
“Well then lets go†Kairi said.
On that they run towards Merlin's house.


Half way they run into some heartless.
“Keep going†Kairi said.
“Way to go girl†Tifa said running with Sora to Merlin's house.
Kairi summoned her keyblade: Keyblade of Hearts: a pink keyblade with a heart shaped handle and a heart on the top to hit and a heart as keychain.
“Ten heartless can’t be a problem†Kairi said to herself.
As she started to run to the heartless a heartless soldier let her trip but she quickly rolled over slaining the heartless.
“That wasn’t to hard†she said.
“Behind you, Kairi†Namine said.
Kairi quickly jumped up and yelled: THUNDER.
“Magic lessens come in handy now†she said as she parrying the attacks form multiple heartless.
“I think it time for my special move†Kairi said: what do you think?.
“Let them feel the power of hearts†Namine said.
“Here we go, Namine†Kairi said.
Kairi raised her keyblade in front of her and a light appear in around her.
Two ghost that look like Sora and Riku protected her from incoming attacks.
“Heart of the world give me your strength to destroy all the heartless†Kairi said.
At that moment a beam of light destroyed the clouds and something that’s looks like Kingdom Hearts appeared and shoot colored beams of light at the heartless and charging Kairi’s power.
Kairi had got energy and the heartless were gone.
Kairi started running with the two ghost that protected her from damage.


As Kairi was near the wall of the town the two ghost disappeared.
“You know I don’t know this town†Kairi said: so what do we do?.
“I know I will get Roxas†Namine said: he saw the way that Sora took so he could bring us there.
“Good thinking†Kairi said: go get him I get the creeps from this place here.
A few minutes later and Kairi was at Merlin's house.
“So this is it?†Kairi asked.
“Yeah this is Merlin's house†Roxas said.
“Oke, looks small†Kairi said as she walked in.
“Intruder†Yuffie said.
Tifa quickly stopped Yuffie and said: she is a friend from Sora.
“Oh, in that case, welcome to Radiant Garden†Yuffie said.
“aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaauw†Riku yelled as Aeris examined his foot.
“What was that†Kairi asked.
“Oh, that’s just Aeris torturing you friend†Yuffie said.
“That’s curing†Aeris said calm.
“Looks like we’re going no were†Sora said shaking his head.
“Go look in the town if your not doing anything†Cid said.
“Probably the best thing to do†Sora said: I will give Kairi a little tour andAeris cure Riku.
And on that Sora took Kairi and gave her a tour around town but they stopped at a bookstore.
“Hmm this is a new store here†Sora said.
“Let go and look around then†Kairi said.
“The same books that you can buy at home†Sora said.
“Look a release list†Kairi said.
release list:
The addiction----ObsessedWithSora----tomorrow
Saving Kairi----Kairi_girl_92----next month
The Misadventures in The Castle That Never Was----Roxas24Sora----2 months
Wedding----DF----next year
Switched----DF----next year
Untitled----Kairi2011----next year
“Sound like good books†Sora said: anyway lets go back to Merlin's house.


sorry for the late update but i made it extra long:sweat:.

 

they sell it on Radiant Garden but don't mind that.

thanks and that's not a good sign uber-busy.
school is doing easy first week so i got some time to work on my fan fic.

come and get it the new chapter is here

Chapter 6: the identity

As Sora an Kairi returned they saw that Riku can move again.
‘You will never let me alone here’ Riku said.
‘What’s wrong then’ Kairi asked.
‘Tifa gave me a massage’ Riku said.
‘Auw that must have hurt’ Sora said.
‘You have no idea’ Riku said.
‘Anyway, Cid can you come to our gummiship’ Sora asked.
‘No problem’ Cid said: I hope you didn’t broke it to bad.
‘You will see when we get there’ Sora said.
On that Sora, Kairi, Riku, Cid and Tifa went back to the gummi.
‘Well drop dead and light the sign to destroy the city’ Cid said: were did you get this heartless ship.
‘That’s a long story, anyway can we trade this here for a normal gummi’ Sora asked.
‘Of course you can no problem’ Cid said: the only problem is you can’t go without a pair of navigate gummies.
‘That’s no problem I got a pair’ Sora said with a smile on his face.
‘What are you a keyblade master or a magician’ Cid said: as he walk around the heartless ship.
‘Just lucky’ Sora said.
‘Lets go to town then’ Cid said: you will get a new ship and I will install the pair of navigate gummies and analyse this ship.
‘Sounds like we got to wait’ Sora said.
‘We got something to do’ Namine said.
‘Like what’ Roxas said.
‘Find out how the man in black was that destroyed Ken and saved Kairi’ Namine said.
‘Then lets go to Ansem’s computer’ Sora said.
‘That’s where all the Nightmares are’ Cid said: that’s a dead wish.


Somewhere on a hill two man appear.
‘This looks like trouble’ the small one said.
‘Not for me’ Angels said: I’m only worried about those nobody’s.
‘why’ the small one asked.
‘I got my reason’ Angels said: I better get going or they get trouble.
‘Go quickly but you better tell the story’ the small one said.


On there way to Ansem’s computer they fighted a lot of little nightmares.
They are little black ghost that are easy to defeat.
The three keyblade masters where doing simple attacks like single blows or air combo’s and a little magic now and then.
Tifa was more like taking one and throw it into a group.
As they were almost at the top they heard that the nightmares where fighting someone.
‘Lets take a look’ Sora said.
‘And what do you see, Sora’ Kairi asked carefully.
I see to many nightmares and Cloud and Leon and the guy that saved Kairi.
‘What, what is he doing’ Kairi asked.
‘Parring Cloud and Leon attacks and destroying nightmares’ Sora said.
‘Let go and help Cloud and Leon’ Tifa said.
On that they stormed into battle.
Riku shooting some dark auras, Tifa smashing the lights out of the nightmares and Sora and Kairi destroying the rest.
‘Look your reinforcement has arrived’ Cloud said to Leon.
‘Looks like they forget you’ Leon teasing Cloud .
‘I don’t need reinforcement’ Cloud said as they stand back to back.
‘Tell me why am I here then’ Leon asked.
‘You are here to see a real warrior fighting and for the leftovers’ cloud said.
‘Oh, so 50% is the leftover’ Leon asked.
‘Make that 45% I just killed one’ Cloud said.
‘lets go then looks like he got all the fun’ Leon said pointing towards Angels.
‘He’s mine’ cloud and Leon said charging to there target.
Angels Quickly turned and pared there attack and smashed them into Sora and the others.
‘What here all ready’ Angels said: I need to finish this quick.
In the middle of the battlefield he summoned a keyhole and open it.
‘Release the power of light on darkness’ Angels said as he opened the keyhole.
He quickly shoot a boll of light to Sora and the others and knock them from the battlefield.
The light engulfed the whole battlefield leafing only Angels.
He looked at them and walked to a cliff and was about to jump of.
‘Angels, Angels is that you’ Namine said.
‘Angels’ Roxas said looking to Namine: are you sure.
Namine only nodded.
Roxas quickly appeared and started running to Angels.
He jump and disappeared only leaving a apple behind.


‘It’s really was Angels’ Roxas said looking to the apple.
‘What are you two talking about and how do you know him’ Sora asked annoyed.
‘We know him from the realm of darkness’ Roxas started: he is a keyblade master and was a part of a group that destroy heartless. They believed that they could stop the heartless come to all the worlds by killing them in the realm of darkness. All the other keyblade master where killed by heartless and only he survived and he keep killing heartless. Drove by rage and his belief he kept killing heartless eating only apples that he could find at a tree. He meet the organisation about a year and a half ago. Me and Axel where scouting the area and saw him.
He knocked me and Axel in a sec. but let us live. When we wake up he gave us a apple and started killing heartless again. Never saw him again.
‘And what about you, Namine’ Kairi asked.
‘Me’ Namine said: lets see… I was running away from the organisation but was attack by heartless. He came and destroyed then and said: better look out they are every where. He took me with him told his story and I mine. The organisation was already searching for me but he protected me he could take them one on one but 6 at a time was to many for him. I was taken from him and they let them for the heartless. At a certain point the heartless ware gone at the castle so a new member when’d to look but never returned. The organisation destroyed the gate to the real world and he was trapped in side the realm of darkness. I’m glade he came out and still lives.
‘Wow that’s one story’ Sora said: but why would he help and go.
‘probably a shame that he couldn’t protect Namine’ Riku said.
‘ Maybe only he knows’ Kairi said.
‘Do you know how he looks’ Sora said.
‘Now that’s hard I only remember your hair only black’ Namine said.
‘And the keyblades that’s he used:
Angelblade: the keyblades handle looks like 4 wings and the blade it self is a wing with a
wing on the top and the keychain is a feather.
Natureblade: the handle looks like roots and the blade is a tree with on top a some leafs and as keychain a leaf.
‘And that he only eats apples’ Namine ad.
‘Noting else what you remember’ Kairi asked.
‘Lets try Ansem’s computer’ Riku said: it’s not like we got something to lose.
‘This way’ Sora said already at the castle entry.


After a minute walking they where by Ansem’s computer.
‘Let’s see’ Sora said.
‘Sora is that you’ a voice said.
‘Tron’ Sora asked.
‘That’s me’ Tron said: what can I do for you.
‘We’re looking for someone’ Sora said: can you look in Ansem’s data for keyblade masters and Angels.
‘You asked, I search’ Tron said: this may that a minute.
‘Tell us when you found something’ Sora said.
A minute long they wait.
‘done’ Tron said.
‘and’ Sora said.
‘Got some poems and experiments about angels’ Tron said: but if it is a name it’s in the Keyblade masters list and sorry noting more.
‘Don’t worry’ Sora said: can we see that list.
‘Here you are’ Tron said as he shows the list on the screen.
‘No first name only last’ Sora started: place: Radiant Garden and no photo or other things.
‘That’s strange’ Kairi said.
‘Wait’ Sora said: top secret mission for the king: invade heartless terrain and destroy them. This mission is from great import and must be silenced. The keyblade masters for this mission where chosen for there skills but I personally think they are sent to a dead trap. One particular keyblade master is young and very skilled I think the king made a mistake by sending this boy. But the king said: they go, they kill and they will come back as hero’s of the world. Tomorrow they will go to the heartless I will go and watch but I scared that the king will open a gate for the heartless to invade this world. It’s 2 weeks now and the keyblade masters haven’t come back we can’t defend our self’s and the heartless keep coming. This is the end of this for those how read this don’t let this happen again.


‘wow, that’s a big discovery’ Riku said.
‘How’s this king’ Kairi asked: it can’t be king Mickey.
‘How is there’ Tifa said as she quickly turned: come back here.
‘Wait’ Sora said but Tifa was already run after somebody.
‘Lets go’ Riku said.
‘I got a bad feeling about this’ Kairi said: down lower you guard.
‘Don’t worry we know what we’re doing’ Riku said.
After a while the man stopped running at the place where Sora fought a thousand heartless.
‘Who are you’ Tifa said.
‘I’ the man said: I’m ...
‘wait’ Kairi yelled as the man turned.
‘I’m you dead’ Xemnas said and attack everyone with two blades that looked like the Angelblade and Natureblade that Angels used.
Kairi was the only one that could dodge Xemnas attack.
‘There is no way you could wield a keyblade’ Sora said as the three keyblade masters summoned there keyblades.
‘These things’ Xemnas said: these metal things look like keyblades but to my regret they are a trick to fool you and combined with my strength they are powerful wapons, now get ready to die.
‘You wished’ Sora said as he charged into battle.


that's chapter 5 done.
i'm picking up speed again. XD
I only hope that I got more readers, but can't have anything.

 

thanks and i will but i don't tell when.
you know i love it when school is out early now i can work on my story and don't have to worry about my homework. :D

anyway here is chapter 7:


Chapter 7: mysteries

‘Cloud are you oke’ Leon asked as he stand up.
‘What the hell happened’ Cloud asked.
‘Lets see…’ Leon said: we were knocked down, everybody is gone and you snore in your sleep.
‘What did you say’ Cloud yelled: and where do you think your going.
‘I said you snore in your sleep’ Leon said: and never say that again you sounded like somebody’s wife.
‘Oke now I now that I’m gonna kill you some day’ Cloud said.
‘Have fun with that, I’m going back to town’ Leon said.
‘Wait have you seen my sword’ Cloud asked as he looked for his sword.
‘Your sword is upgraded to Excalibur’ Leon said: in that rock to the left of you.
‘What the’ Cloud said as he look to the rock: holy ****.
‘Don’t worry you still got all your hair’ Leon said as he walked a way.
Cloud could only stand and watch at his sword that was in a rock.


‘ah, that really hurt’ Sora said as he get up from Xemnas attack: try from the rear.
‘No use’ Riku said as Xemnas dodged Riku’s attack.
‘Here you go’ Tifa said as she throw a big rock to Xemnas.
‘Is that all’ Xemnas said laughing as he jump back.
‘Not yet’ Kairi said as jump from the rock and hit Xemnas back and hit him back to Tifa.
‘Wanna throw over’ Tifa said as she hit Xemnas back to Kairi.
‘You got it’ Kairi said as she hit Xemnas back to Tifa.
After some hits from Kairi and Tifa Xemnas escaped the attack.
‘Fools you are going’ Xemnas said but he couldn’t say the last word because Riku hit him in the back to Sora.
‘Here you go Sora’ Riku said as Sora hit Xemnas into the air.
‘for you Kairi’ Sora said as Kairi hit Xemnas to Tifa.
‘have fun’ Kairi said as Tifa hit Xemnas to Sora.
‘What comes down must come up’ Tifa said as Sora hit Xemnas into the air.
‘Riku’ Sora said.
‘Got it’ Riku said as he hit Xemnas down back to earth.
‘Now that’s team work’ Sora said.
‘you can’t kill me again’ Xemnas said a he raise his hand and a meteor hit Sora and the rest.
‘Pretending you are me and saying that you killed me’ a man said.
‘What you are alive’ Xemnas said: this time I will kill you for good.
‘Funny, I came to kill you’ the man said as he showed his face.
‘You are going down’ Xemnas said: how does it feel.
‘So one of your sabres hit me’ the man said.
‘You are dead’ Xemnas said as he grabbed his second sabre.
‘you only made worse for yourself’ the man sais as he summoned a keyblade thought Xemnas.
‘I will get you for this, Angels’ Xemnas said.
'bye' Angels said as he disappeared.


In the mean while at the other end of the meteor.
‘That pain in my leg is killing me’ Kairi said: what was that heal spell again.
‘CURE’ Sora said as he heal him and Riku.
‘Thank you’ Kairi said: CURE.
‘wait here’ Sora said: I will go and finish Xemnas an then we can go to town.
‘if your not here in one minute’ Riku said: I will come and get you.
‘fine, here I go’ Sora said as he chanced into valor form.
As soon as Sora got on the meteor he went for Xemnas.
‘You are going down’ Sora said putting as his speed in a forward combo.
He could only hear Xemnas suffering.
‘I’m not done yet’ Sora said as he knocked Xemnas in the air and preformed a air combo.
‘I will get you for this’ Xemnas said as he started to fate.
‘Take this’ Sora said as he hit Xemnas into the meteor.
‘I hope you hit him hard’ Kairi said as Sora returned to the group and normal.
‘yeah, why’ Sora asked.
‘don’t asked’ Riku said: by the way Kairi is walking after us.
‘Oke, but I don’t get it’ Sora said.
‘Don’t worry Kairi you can make it at my place’ Tifa said.
‘Thanks’ Kairi said: you have a house here.
‘yeah’ Tifa said: where else would I sleep.
‘I still don’t get how Xemnas came back’ Sora said.
‘How knows’ Riku said: lets get back to town, I’m hungry.


As they where at the wall of the town Yuffie arrived in ninja style.
‘Go no further’ Yuffie said.
‘Hi Yuffie’ Sora said: what’s wrong.
Yuffie fell in true aime style and said: how did you know it me.
‘you’re the only ninja here’ Sora said: can we go thought we are hungry.
‘No you aren’t going to town’ Yuffie said: we’re going to BBQ on that hill there.
No way I’m going to that hill, I going to town’ Kairi said.
Don’t worry, Sora, Tifa and … Riku was it are going to the hill’ Yuffie said: I need you help in town and you can change your outfit there.
‘Lets go then’ Tifa said as she run to the hill.
‘Do we have to’ Sora and Riku said together.
‘Don’t let me make you go up that hill’ Yuffie said as she grabbed her ninja stars: let’s go Kairi.


After some minutes Sora and Riku where almost at the top of the hill.
‘I’m moving but the top isn’t coming closer’ Sora said.
‘this hill is growing into a mountain’ Riku said sarcastic.
‘Looks like it’ Sora said as he look behind him.
‘Come on you two’ Kairi said: I’m already on the top.
‘Riku’ Sora said.
‘got it’ Riku said.
‘Race for the top’ The boys said and started to run to the top of the hill.
2 more minutes past and Sora and Riku where on the top.


‘What…for…hill…is…this…anyway’ Sora said when he was searching for air.
‘A hill that plays tricks with your mind’ Yuffie said.
‘What…do…you…mean’ Riku asked as he was recovering from the running.
‘She means that the hill looks like it grow a you clime on it’ Leon said: if you close your eyes you are must faster on top, because the hill can play tricks anymore.
‘can we eat now’ Cloud asked.
‘nope’ Yuffie said: the meat isn’t ready.
‘looks like we got to wait’ Merlin said: so Sora what brings you here.
Sora told everything what there plan was, about the gummiship and about Xemnas.
‘strange’ Merlin said: he came back you said.
‘I know I sounds strange but we really fought him’ Sora said.
‘I don’t know lets come back on that tomorrow’ Merlin said.
‘Oke’ Sora said: Merlin do you know a Angels.
‘Sounds familiar’ Merlin said: but I don’t know if I should speak about him.
‘Why not’ Kairi asked as she got her meat from Yuffie.
‘Sora you are Next’ Yuffie said.
‘His name was put into a map of the king’ Leon said.
‘How do you mean and how’s this king’ Sora said as Yuffie put his meat on his plate: thanks Yuffie.
‘The things in the map are persons and thing how where put to silence anyone how would dare to say anything about it where thrown for the king’ Leon said: and about the king his dead but he was a titan.
‘We got a picture of his’ Leon said.
‘Can we see it’ Sora said.
Leon looked at Merlin and shook his hat.
‘why are you so interested in him’ Cloud asked as he eat his meat.
‘He saved us two times’ Sora said.
‘That can’t be him’ Leon said.
‘He is dead killed in the dark realm’ Cloud said.
‘THAT’S ENOUGH’ Merlin said angry: HE ISN’T DEAD AND I DON’T WANNA HEAR ANYMORE ABOUT ANGELS.
Everybody instantly was quite and started to eat.
‘Leon your meat is ready’ Yuffie careful.
After they where ready with eating Leon asked Sora to do some sparing.


‘Why does Merlin do so strange as we talk about Angels’ Sora asked as he blocked Leon’s attacks.
‘That is because Merlin learned Angels magic and Angels always helped him’ Leon said as he tried to hit Sora.
‘And about that picture’ Sora asked as het saw a hole in Leon’s attack.
‘you got me’ Leon said as Sora hit his arm: the picture is in one of Merlin’s books.
‘never mind that then, but do you know how he looks’ Sora said letting his guard down.
‘yup’ Leon said as he hit Sora: he got black hair and green eyes.
‘Anything else’ Sora said.
‘Not that I know’ Leon said as he put his blade in the ground: the only thing I can remember is that he was a keyblade master.
‘You come with me’ Yuffie said as she come out a puff of smoke.
‘What’s going on’ Sora said as Yuffie grabbed his hand and they leaves in puff of smoke.
‘Got him’ Yuffie said as she dragged Sora along.
‘Good job Yuffie, here is your ninja DVD back’ Cid said as he thrown her DVD back to Yuffie.
‘What is this all about Cid’ Sora asked.
‘Your new gummiship’ Cid said.
‘Now that’s good news’ Sora said.
‘Look there’ Cid said as he opened a curtain reviling the ship where Sora used to travel with Donald and goofy.
‘That’s the ship that Donald and Goofy had’ Sora said.
‘It only looks like that one’ Cid said: This one is stronger, faster, haves more room and has heartless technology.
‘Like what’ Sora said.
‘Energy rockets, camouflage mode and scanners that scan for camouflaged heartless ships’ Cid said: you got 2 guns instead of one, your 50% faster, 75% better steering and you got a 4 rooms: 3 bedrooms and one for your stuff.
‘That’s great’ Kairi said.
‘That ship is incredible’ Riku said.

that was chapter 6 hope you liked it.
plz comment.

 

hm... hard to say i havent started yet.
i hope end this week but with school i never know so i hope end this week begin next week.

you never know with me and i think i when'd a little overboard with the ship but i like it and a badass ship is always handy.



anyway here is chapter 8

Chapter 8: Disney Castle

‘Sora’ Leon said: you can admire your ship later.
‘What’s wrong Leon’ Sora said.
‘Merlin wants to talk to you’ Leon said.
‘Wait here’ Sora said to Riku and Kairi.
‘No problem’ Riku said: we are going to load the ship.
‘Oh, are we’ Kairi said.
‘Come on’ Riku said: Oke, Kairi will you help me to load the ship.
‘I will help you because you asked that nice’ Kairi said as she started helping Riku.


In the mean while Sora was running to Merlin.
‘This is probably about Xemnas’ Sora said.
‘Where are the heartless’ Cloud asked to Sora as he ran by.
‘Hi and what do you mean’ Sora said.
‘And your are supposed to be a keyblade master’ Cloud said as he shook his head: I mean what’s with all the hurry.
‘Oh that’ Sora said: I need to go to Merlin.
‘Ah but Merlin isn’t home’ Cloud said: he is on the wall.
‘Thanks cloud’ Sora said as he started running to the wall.


As Sora was running up the stair from the wall he was tackled.
‘No running on the stair’ The little fairy said.
‘Good job Paine’ Rikku said sarcastic: you hurt him.
‘I only hurt him’ Paine said: Your plan probably kill him.
‘Heee that hurt you know’ Sora said as he got back up his feet.
‘No running on the stairs’ Yuna said: you can hurt yourself.
‘And that tackle didn’t hurt me’ Sora said.
‘Her idea’ Rikku yelled as she raised Sora’s arm as pointed to Paine.
‘No more running the stairs’ Yuna said: we are gonna talk about this.
‘No I didn’t do anything wrong’ Rikku said: Sora save me if Yuna starts talking she get bossy.
‘You can go now’ Yuna said to Sora.
‘Help’ Rikku said as she was dragged along and disappeared.
‘Oke that’s was strange’ Sora said as he walked up the stair.
‘Ah Sora there are you’ Merlin said as he walked to Sora.
‘This about Xemnas’ Sora said.
‘Yeah’ Merlin said: it’s complicated and it looks like more member can come back.
‘Can you try to explain it’ Sora said.
‘Lets see’ Merlin said: Xemnas had a strong will so you have only destroyed his body and scattered his soul. He’s soul searched for a body and took weak nobody’s body. So his soul had a body but is still scattered so it when’d searching for the rest. When it was complete Xemnas took controle of the nobody. He train and took other nobody’s energy to change back to his self, but this process is taking a long time about a month and can last to forever.
‘And it sounds like every thing can go wrong’ Sora said.
‘that’s why we can assume he doesn’t came back’ Merlin said.
‘So other member can come back to’ Sora said.
‘Maybe but this could be a site affect from kingdom hearts’ Merlin said: so maybe he could only get back ones.
‘Hmmm’ Sora said as he thought: anyway thanks Merlin.
‘No problem’ Merlin said as he started walking to his home.
Beter tell this to Kairi and Riku.


As Sora ran to Kairi and Riku two men appeared on the wall.
‘They saw you’ the small one said.
‘To little time and to must nightmares’ Angels said.
‘you got lucky that Xemnas appeared’ the small one said.
‘don’t know if I call that luck’ Angels said: anyway what should I do.
‘Hmm hard to say’ the small one said as he thought.
‘Those kids can fight why must I protect them’ Angels said.
‘Don’t say that’ the small one said: I got something for you see that castle there.
‘That castle is falling apart’ Angels said.
‘Never mind that there are heartless there destroy them’ the small one said.
‘Destroying heartless my favourite’ Angels said as he jump on the side of the wall.
‘What are you doing’ the small one said.
‘They don’t call me Angels with out a reason’ Angels said: besides gliding is faster then running.
‘What’ the small one said as he saw Angels jumping of the wall.
‘bye’ Angels said as his wings appeared and he glided to the heartless.
‘I must be sleeping is saw Angels with wings’ the small one said as he rubbed his eyes and disappeared.


In the mean while Sora tried to explain about Xemnas.
‘And that was what Merlin said’ Sora said.
‘It’s better than nothing’ Riku said.
‘I hope that he’s gone for good’ Kairi said: when are we leafing anyway.
‘After we eat’ Sora said.
‘And where are we going’ Riku asked.
‘Somewhere else’ Rikku said as she flew by: got to go.
‘Come back here’ Paine yelled as she flew after Rikku.
‘Don’t mind us’ Yuna said as she flew after Rikku and Paine.
‘At least it’s not boring here’ Kairi said with a smile.
‘Anyway we are going to the Disney Castle’ Sora said.
‘Why are we going to the Disney Castle’ Kairi asked.
‘To see some friends and I need Donald for something’ Sora said.
‘Lets eat then’ Riku said.
‘Pizza delivery’ Yuffie yelled as she appeared for Sora.
‘What the…’ Sora said as he jump back.
‘Just a little present from me’ Yuffie said as she gave the pizza to Sora: bye.
‘Thanks Yuffie’ Sora said as Yuffie disappeared in a puff of smoke.
‘Now that’s fast food’ Riku said.
‘Lame joke’ Kairi said as she eat her part of the pizza.


After eating there pizza the three walked to Merlin’s house to say goodbye to everyone.
‘Have fun’ Yuffie said.
‘come and visit us again’ Aeris said.
‘Don’t destroy our ship’ Cid said.
‘Don’t started crying’ Cloud said.
‘don’t forget to practice with you keyblade’ Leon said.
‘Teach Kairi and Riku some magic’ Merlin said.
‘Come on get going’ Tifa said: friends are waiting.
‘Bye guys’ The three said as they jump into there ship.


Meanwhile on a roof.
‘Time to go to a other world’ Angels said.
‘I better get going’ the small one said.
‘No time to visit Merlin’ Angels said smiling.
‘Come on you got a job to do’ the small one said.
‘Open a door so we can go’ Angels said.
The small one opened a door and walked through it.
‘I will visit you later Merlin’ Angels said as he walk through the door.


Mean while in the gummi.
‘All ready to go’ Sora said.
‘We got everything’ Kairi said.
‘Every thing is ready for take of’ Riku said.
‘Let’s go’ Sora said.
On that the gummi lifted of the ground a flew a way with high speed.
‘That’s something to get use to’ Sora said.
‘Good thing these seats are one with the floor’ Kairi said.
‘That’s one take off’ Riku said.
‘I’m gonna sleep’ Kairi said: wake me up when we get to the next world.
‘Oke Kairi sleep well’ Sora said.


After almost two hours of flying Sora waked Kairi up.
‘Kairi wake up’ Sora said: were almost there.
‘uhhh’ Kairi said as she wake up as she tried to sit in her bed her head hit something: auw that hurt.
‘I know’ Sora said: you got a hard head Kairi.
‘Where you trying to kiss me a wake or something like that’ Kairi said a little annoyed.
‘Nope I tried to wake you’ Sora said.
‘Look I see a world’ Namine said.
Sora and Kairi quickly got back into there seat.
‘So this is Disney Castle’ Kairi asked.
‘Yeah prepare to land’ Sora said.
‘Ready to land’ Riku said.
‘Here we go’ Sora said as he landed the ship.


As they walk out of the gummi Chip and dale appeared.
‘give your identity’ Chip said.
‘And your reason to visit the Disney Castle’ Dale edit.
‘Hi guys’ Sora said.
‘Sora’ Chip and Dale said.
‘That’s me’ Sora said.
‘Never mind what we said’ Chip said.
‘You are coming for the king right’ Dale asked.
‘Not exactly’ Sora said: but we can go and see him.
‘come with me’ Chip said.
‘I will go and get Donald and Goofy’ Dale said.
‘Sounds good’ Sora said.
‘Riku are your happy to see the king’ Kairi asked.
‘Yeah’ Riku said.
‘Lets get going then’ Sora said.
‘Follow me’ Chip said as he started running.



that's was chapter 8 hope you liked it.

 

Chapter 9: Dark castle

‘What’s with all the workers here’ Sora asked as there run trough the castle.
‘We are under construction’ Chip said.
‘I can see that’ Kairi said.
‘What are you building’ Riku asked.
‘No building restorating’ Chip said.
‘The Disney Castle is in bad shape’ Chip said: especially the room with the cornerstone.
‘What a mess’ Kairi said as she saw a collapsed wall.
‘We don’t know what’s going on but castle is falling apart as we speak’ Chip said.
‘You can say that’ Sora said: the last time I was here everything was normal.
‘It’s isn’t holding’ A worker yelled.
‘Run for your live’ A other worker yelled.
Everybody ran away as a part of the ceiling was coming down.


‘I think I know your problem’ Sora said as he summoned his keyblade.
Kairi and Riku Summoned there keyblade to.
‘Heartless’ Riku said as he look in front of him.
‘And nobody’s’ Kairi said as she turned.
‘Kairi Riku go for the heartless’ Sora said: I and Roxas will go for the Nobody’s.
‘Got it’ Kairi said.


Kairi and Riku stormed into battle as Sora and Roxas waited for the nobody’s to attack first.
Kairi first used thunder to knock the heartless of there feet, Riku fires some dark auras to keep the heartless of them and then they started cutting trough the heartless.
‘Look like you got used to our keyblade’ Riku said as he unleashed a air combo on some heartless.
‘yeah’ Kairi said as she did some simple ground combo’s.
‘Looks like we got them’ Riku said.
‘only one to go’ Kairi said as she jump to the heartless.
‘Way to go’ Riku said as Kairi sliced the heartless into two.
‘That’s were the heartless’ Kairi said.


In the mean while Sora and Roxas started fighting.
‘50 50’ Sora said.
‘No way’ Roxas said as he destroyed some nobody’s.
‘Then lets do it your way’ Sora said as he summoned Ultima and Fenrir: ready.
‘Wait a sec’ Roxas said as he summoned Oathkeeper and Oblivion: now I’m ready.
‘Lets go then’ Sora said as the two boys stormed to the nobody’s.
The two boys where destroying the nobody’s fast.
‘That is the last one’ Sora said.
‘He’s mine’ Roxas said as he run to the nobody.
‘To slow’ Kairi said as she destroyed the last nobody.
‘Ah man’ Roxas said.
‘Kairi is faster then you’ Sora said laughing.
‘Maybe but you lose to your nobody’ Roxas said.
‘I will make you take those word back’ Sora said as he when’d into his fighting stand.
‘Round 2’ Roxas said.
‘Yeah’ Sora said.
‘No time to fight we got to see the king’ Chip said.
‘Do we have to’ Sora said.
‘Yeah we have to’ Riku said.
‘Stay focused’ Roxas said as he hit Sora’s head with his hand.
‘Auw’ Sora said: that hurt.
‘Crybaby’ Roxas said.
‘Take that’ Sora said as he hit Roxas.
‘Your going down’ Roxas said.
‘Do I have to drag you along’ Kairi said to Sora.
‘Come on Roxas leave it alone’ Namine said to Roxas.
‘They look like two mothers right now’ Riku said quiet.
‘What did you say’ Kairi and Namine said to Riku.
‘Never mind’ Riku said quickly.


‘What’s all the noise about’ King Mickey said.
‘Nothing’ Roxas said as he got back on his feet.
‘King Mickey, King Mickey there’s trouble at the garden’ Chip said as he run to the king.
‘Lets go then’ King Mickey said as he started running.
‘Wait for me’ Sora said as he started running.
‘I’m not done with you’ Roxas said he when’d after Sora.
‘I’m leaving this to you Kairi’ Namine said as she disappeared.
‘Come on Riku’ Kairi said as she started running.
‘I’m coming’ Riku said.


Mean while in the garden.
‘Take that’ Angels said as he hit a heartless.
‘What happened’ Donald said as he begun to wake up.
‘And I only hit him five minutes ago’ Angels said: well time to go.
‘How’s there’ Donald said as he stood up.
‘What’s that black thing’ Goofy said.
‘A heartless’ Donald said.
‘Sora will take care of them’ Goofy said as he was falling asleep.
‘Sora isn’t here’ Donald said.
At that moment the heartless was destroyed by Sora.
‘That’s a point for me’ Sora said.
‘Take this’ Roxas said as he jumped and tried to hit Sora with Oblivion.
‘No way’ Sora said as he guard him self with Oathkeeper.
‘Go Riku’ Kairi said as Riku tackled Sora and Roxas.
‘Sora’ Donald said: I must be sleeping.
‘Hi Donald, Goofy’ Sora said as he tried to keep Roxas from him.
‘Hi Sora’ Goofy said as he was half a sleep.
‘Sora what are you doing her’ Donald said.
‘To see some friends and I need your help’ Sora said.
‘You will lose’ Roxas said as he hit Sora.
‘Those two don’t stop even if the world exploded’ Riku said.
‘Then you don’t know me’ Kairi said.
‘Sora do I have to remember you of something’ Kairi said.
‘No’ Sora said.
‘Sora can you come here for a sec’ Roxas said.
‘What’s wrong’ Sora said as he walk away with Roxas.
‘you forgot didn’t you’ Roxas said.
‘I think so’ Sora said.
‘Tomorrow is our double date with Namine and Kairi’ Roxas said.
‘Damn it how can I forget something like that’ Sora said.
‘Don’t know’ Roxas said.
‘you and Namine do the decoration and me and Kairi will cook diner’ Roxas said.
‘That’s because Namine and you can’t cook’ Roxas said.
‘Namine can’t cook, that’s strange’ Sora said.
‘Never mind that she gets angry when I said it’ Roxas said.
‘And me and Namine are doing decoration’ Sora said.
‘Yeah we are eating in room 4’ Roxas said.
‘Got it’ Sora said.


’Heads up’ someone said.
Sora and Roxas jumped back instantly.
‘Xigbar where is he’ Roxas said.
‘Leave that a side Roxas we got bigger problems’ Sora said.
‘Damn heartless’ Roxas said as he and Sora summoned there keyblades.
‘There’ Sora said as he pointed to Xigbar.
‘Got good eyes Roxas’ Xigbar said.
‘For the last time I’m Sora’ Sora said.
‘As if’ Xigbar said as he started shooting.
Sora and Roxas prepared for the attack but saw that Xigbar only shoot heartless.
‘a little present from me’ Xigbar said.
‘Present’ Sora said.
‘yeah just a pre’ Xigbar tried to say but was hit from the roof by a neo shadow.
‘That must have hurt’ Sora said.
‘I can’t believe what I saw’ Roxas said.
‘Guys more heartless’ Kairi said.
‘Leave them to me’ Namine said.
‘You sure’ Kairi said.
‘yeah’ Namine said.
‘Get them girl’ Kairi said.
Namine run to the heartless.
‘mind if I drew a portrait’ Namine said.
On that four walls appeared around the heartless and Namine was lifted into the air.
‘Let’s see what shout I do first' Namine said: lets start with some magic.
She started drawing some heartless that where hit by thunder and on that thunder hit some heartless, she draw fire and ice and that hit the heartless.
‘Now some friends’ Namine said as she started drawing Sora, Kairi, Roxas and Riku.
Copies of Sora, Kairi, Roxas and Riku started killing the heartless.
‘And now the final’ Namine said as she started drawing the heartless.
‘It doesn’t look like them’ Namine said as she started erasing the drawing the heartless started exploding.
‘That’s one strange attack’ Roxas said.
‘She powerful’ Riku said.
As the heartless where gone Namine started gliding down.
‘And who was I’ Namine said to Roxas.
‘You where great I never know you could fight like that’ Roxas said.
‘Where is the king’ Kairi asked.
‘He when’d to check on everybody’ Riku said.
‘Oke’ Kairi said.
‘Lets go back’ Sora said.
‘Killing heartless in the castle’ Roxas said.
‘Lets go’ Riku said.
On that the five started running though the castle.



that was chapter 9 hope you liked it, cost me a lot of time to write but the last part was very easy to write i don't know why anyway how cares its here.

 

thanks iFishy.

yamimg: i hope that will anser this: what is wrong with Sora and Roxas fighting together? :huh:

guardians: sorry no eating yet.

Rinoa: i used the quotation marks instead of apostrophe this time.

anyway heres the new chapter


Chapter 10: cleaning the castle

“Where are Donald and Goofy” Sora asked as they where running thought the castle.
“They when’d with the king to check the castle” Riku said.
“Heartless ahead” Namine said.
“Riku” Sora said.
“Got it” Riku said.
Sora and Riku stormed forward and killed some heartless and send the rest airborne.
Kairi jumped up and did some air combo’s on the heartless and knock the rest down.
“My turn” Roxas said as he jumped from wall to wall killing the heartless that where falling.
“Hope you liked it” Namine said as she draw thunder that hit the heartless.
“That was easy” Riku said.
“Nice team combo” Roxas said.
“Anyway we need the clean the castle of the heartless” Sora said.
“What are we waiting for then” Kairi asked.
“Heartless?” Namine asked.
“Lets go” Sora said.


In the mean while Mickey, Donald and Goofy tried to find out what was happening.
“We need to find out where they coming from” Mickey said.
“How are we doing that, king” Donald said.
“What is the perfect place for darkness” Mickey said.
“The basement” Goofy said.
“Good thinking Goofy” Mickey said.
“I don’t know your majesty” Donald said.
“Why not” Mickey said.
“It’s really big there and we use many rooms there” Donald said.
“Still it’s are only lead” Mickey said.
“We should look in the storage room” Goofy said.
“Why there” Mickey said.
“It’s dark and scary there” Donald said.
“Then lets go there first” Mickey said: lets go.


In the mean while outside the castle.
“Them those neo shadows” Xigbar said: but first lets go out this form.
Xigbar started losing form as the dark parts disappeared and light reviled how he really was.
“That’s better” Angels said: now getting inside the castle.
Angels quickly flow up and landed up the roof.
“Where is that door” Angels said as he walked on the roof.


Mean while Sora and the rest where resting from the heartless.
“There are just to many heartless” Kairi said.
“We need a new plan” Namine said.
“Only one thing to do” Riku said.
“Take out the boss” Sora said.
“And where is that boss” Roxas said.
“We don’t know that so best thing to do is split up and search” Riku said.
“Everybody on his one and Kairi and Namine you are a team” Sora said.
“Why that” Kairi asked.
“We’re talking about a boss they are really strong” Roxas started.
“If you run into it someone of you can call us for help” Sora said.
“This is for your on good” Riku said.
“Oke” Kairi said: but you better make this up on our date.
“Everyone ready to go” sora said as he summoned his keyblade.
“Think so” Roxas said as he summons Oblivion.
“looks like our breaks over” Riku said as he summons Way to the Dawn.
“Lets go Namine” Kairi said as she summons Keyblade of Hearts.
“That’s mean” Namine said.
“What’s wrong Namine” Sora said.
“You summoned a keyblade and I got nothing” Namine said.
“She got a point there” Riku said
“Here” Roxas said as he handed Namine his Oathkeeper: hope you can wield it.
“Thank you Roxas” Namine said.
“Everyone armed” Sora asked.
“Lets go” Roxas yelled.
On that the five started running different directions.


Mean while on the roof.
“No door” Angels said: what now?
Angels quickly jumped back as a heartless started appearing.
“Your not a ordinary heartless” Angels said as he look at the heartless.
The heartless responded by growing into something bigger.
“Darkside” Angels yelled as he saw Darkside take shape.
Darkside took a step to Angels.
“I see that you still remember me” Angels said.
Darkside took a other step to Angels.
“I see that you still have that mark I gave you” Angels said as he pointed to Darkside
Darkside stopped walking and looked at Angels.
“You shouldn’t have attacked me and asked Kingdom Hearts for help” Angels said.
Darkside started making a fist from his hand.
“This time I will finish you” Angels said as he summoned his keyblades.
Darkside started attacking by Angels jumped up and throw one of his keyblades to Darkside.
Darkside used his fist to hit Angels, but Angels block his Attack.
Angels knock Darksides fist out of his way and jumped to Darksides head, but was hit by Darksides other fist.
Angels quickly recovered from the attack and summoned his keyblades back and started storming to Darkside.
Darkside started making dark orbs that started homing on to Angels.
Angels dodged the dark orbs and started attacking Darksides legs.
Darkside lost his balance and fell on his back giving Angels sometime to do damage.
Darkside quickly stood up and hit Angels sending him flying.
Angels fell hard, but got up in his feet and started running to Darkside.
Darkside started summoning heartless that attacked Angels , but Angels throw one keyblade in front of him and used the other keyblade to kill the remaining heartless.
Angels quickly summoned back his keyblade to block a hit from Darkside.
Darkside saw that his attack failed and tried to kick Angels, but Angels quickly dodged his attack and planted one of his keyblades in Darksides foot and jumped up and attacked Darksides head knocking Darkside 10 feet away.
Darkside started hitting everything what was in his way.
Angels keep his cool and throws one of his keyblades in Darksides arms.
Darkside started screaming and Angels took advantage of this and jumped up and put his keyblade though Darksides head and turned it a quarter and pulled it back.
Darkside fell on the roof and started fading away.
Angels on summoned his keyblades and sat on the roof watching the sun going down.
“It was fun to see you again” Angels said as the last part of Darkside faded away.


Mean while Mickey, Donald and Goofy couldn’t find a thing.
“We looked everywhere but only find heartless” Donald said.
“There are a lot less heartless now Donald” Goofy said.
“That’s right there are less heartless now” Mickey said.
“So what now” Donald asked.
“Fight the heartless that are on our pad and go to the Corner stone” Mickey said.
“good idea” Goofy said.
“Let’s go” Mickey said.
On that the three started running to the Corner stone.


Mean while Sora, Roxas and Riku where fighting heartless and Kairi and Namine where talking and fighting the heartless that bothered them.
“What are you thinking about” Namine asked Kairi.
“Well about are date tomorrow” Kairi said.
“What do you mean” Namine asked.
“Well Sora and Roxas aren’t the example of romance” Kairi said.
“So you want a romantic diner” Namine said.
“Yeah, but how” Kairi said.
“Well cook something romantic” Namine said.
“Like what” Kairi asked.
“Spaghetti” Namine said as she looked at Kairi.
“I think that’s the best thing”
“I will take care of the room” Namine said.
“I will leave that to you” Kairi said.
“Kairi?” Namine asked.
“Yeah what wrong” Kairi asked.
“What is that light” Namine asked.
“I have no idea” Kairi said.
“Run for it” Namine said.
“Yeah” Kairi said as the girls started running from the light.
As the girls where running they where engulfed by the light.


“Where I’m I? ” Kairi asked.
“I can’t see a thing” Sora said.
“I’m I dead?” Roxas asked.
“What was that” Namine asked.
“I hope that I’m not blind” Riku said.
“Don’t worry this effect is only temporarily” Mickey said.
“King?” Sora asked.
“Yeah that’s me” Mickey said.
“Namine?” Roxas asked.
“I’m here” Namine said.
“I’m starting to see something” Roxas said.
“That’s good news” Mickey said.
“Your not Namine” Roxas said as he looked at Riku.
“What was that light” Sora asked as he looked for the king.
“The Corner stone” Mickey said.
“What’s that?” Kairi asked.
“I have no idea” Riku said.
“I will show it to you after your eyes have healed” Mickey said.

hope you like it and comment plz.
Rinoa and iFishy thanks for started reading my story.
have fun.

 

You've come a long way, friend <3

I remember when you were hesitant about posting your first chapter :3 But its come along really well! =D

Keep up this awesome story! Just mind your punctuation a little and use more spaces x3

 

update and art.

update and some art.
i finished 2 pic of Angels keyblades and kairi's keyblade.
hope you like it.

Natureblade

Angelblade

Keyblade of Hearts


i know i can't draw :xp:
but it was fun to do.

well had a lot of trouble with this update.
Sorry for the long waiting but it got distracted and had a lot of thing to do.
so here it is chapter 11.


Chapter 11: double date

“Can everybody see again?” Sora asked.
“Yeah, but my eyes hurt a bit” Riku said.
“I’m fine” Namine said.
“I think so” Roxas said.
“yeah” Kairi said.
“This way then” Mickey said.
“Namine’s dress doesn’t looks as white as it used to be” Kairi joked as they walked down the stairs.
Everyone started laughing.
“That’s the Corner stone?” Riku asked.
“Yeah this is the Corner stone it protects the castle” Mickey said.
“From what?” Namine said.
“Darkness” Donald said as he walked down the stairs.
“And how does it work?” Roxas asked.
“Well is a heartless is in the castle we open this room” Mickey said.
“The Corner stone will use light to destroy the heartless” Donald said.
“I think I got it” Kairi said.
“Anyway it’s time to eat” Mickey said.
“Follow me to the diner room” Donald said.
Everyone started following Donald to the diner room.


Meanwhile Angels was walking though the castle.
“Need food” Angels said as he walk though a hall.
“Maybe there’s some food after this door” Angels said as he walk to the door.
He opened the door.
“No food after his door maybe the next door” Angels said as he closed the door.
He opened door number 2.
“No food here” Angels said as he saw only Spaghetti.
He opened door number 3.
“Need food no cookies” Angels said as he walked out of the cookie room.
He opened door number 4.
“Smells like there is food here” Angels said.
He look though the room and ignored the giant table with food and walked to a corner with apples.
“Now that what I’m talking about” Angels said as he put six apples in his pocket and took two in his hand.
Angels transported back to the roof and looked as the sun when’d down and started eating his apples.


Meanwhile Sora and the others started eating.
“Not that hungry aren’t you?” Mickey asked Kairi.
“Huh no really” Kairi said with a small smile on here face.
Sora started telling his story to king with Riku and Roxas.
“What wrong with you Kairi” Namine asked concerned.
“I can’t stop thinking about tomorrow” Kairi said.
“are you that nerves about it?” Namine said.
“you can put it that way” Kairi said with a concerned face.
“Why are you nerves about it?” Namine asked.
“Well I…I don’t know who to say it” Kairi said as she look down.
“Every time you dated sora something happened right” Namine said as she looked at Kairi.
“Yeah” Kairi said: a broken foot, almost drowning and the big fight.
“the first and third I heard but about the drowning I never heard” Namine said.
“I don’t wanna talk about that” Kairi said with a sad face.
“Cheer up, me and Roxas are there this time” Namine said as she hugged Kairi.
Kairi looked up to sora.
“I’m nerves and he’s enjoying himself” Kairi said as she looked back to Namine.
“Lets join them” Namine said.
“It will calm my nerves I think” Kairi said.
“It will be fun” Namine said as she pulled Kairi along.
Kairi and Namine joined Sora and the others and had a great time.
“Time to sleep” Mickey said.
“yeah” Riku said as he slowly got up.
“I like to offer you a room but they are damaged” Mickey said.
“Don’t worry about it” Sora said.
“We have bedrooms on the gummi” Kairi said.
“Well goodnight then” Mickey said.
“Night” Sora said as he leaves the room.
“Sleep well” Kairi said as she and Namine walk after Sora.
“Goodnight” Roxas said as he disappeared.
“Goodnight” Riku said as he walked away.
“It look beautiful” Namine said as she look out the window.
“What are you talking about Namine?” Kairi said.
“The garden” Namine said.
Kairi walked to the window.
“It’s mysterious” Kairi said.
“I’m gonna take a look there” Namine said.
“Don’t make it to late, I’m going to my bed” Kairi said.
“Don’t worry” Namine said with a smile.


Namine walked away to the garden as she entered it she saw drops from the leafs shine like stars and plants covered in mysterious black.
“this garden is beautiful at night” Namine said as she smiled.
She walked though the garden and looked up.
“The moon is so clear today” Namine said as she looked at the moon.
She looked around her.
“I feel so happy I could dance” Namine said as started a little dance.
“Rain” a gentle voice said.
Instead of being scared she stop dancing.
“Huh?” Namine said as she looked around.
She put her hand up to feel the rain.
“Used as I have fun” Namine said as she start disappearing.
“Is that you Namine?” Kairi asked sleepy.
“Yeah” Namine said as she fused back with Kairi.


Mean while Angels was half asleep on the roof.
“Angels?” the small one asked.
“Yeah” Angels said sleepy.
“Why are you outside it’s raining” the small one said.
“I have no idea” Angels said as he rubbed in his eyes.
“Come inside we need to talk” the small one said.
They disappeared from the roof and appeared in a room from the castle.
“So what do you wanna talk about” Angels said as he walk though the room.
“Your next job” the small one said.
“That is?” Angels asked.
“Protect them as good as you can” the small one said.
“In other word babysit them where ever they go” Angels said.
“Call it what you want” the small one said.
“I thought someone else was gonna do the Actual babysitting” Angels said as he sat down.
“He got kill by some heartless” the small one said.
“We’re losing keyblade masters fast that way” Angels said.
“So do you take care of it” the small one said.
“Sure” Angels said as he took a apple out his pocket and start eating it.
“Good and you can sleep here today” the small one said.


The next day when’d slow for Sora.
Namine was drawing the garden, Kairi and Minnie where give water to the plants and Riku was talking to the king.
“What to do?” Sora asked himself.
“You had a question for Donald don’t you remember” Roxas said.
“That’s right” Sora said as he jumped back on his feet.
Sora started running though the castle looking for Donald.
“he, no running” Donald yelled at Sora.
“There you’re, I need your help” Sora said.
“With what?” Donald asked.
“Well we’re going to see all the world and need to transform in Atlantica and Pride Land” Sora said.
“And that can only be done with my magic” Donald said as he thought.
“Do you know a solution Donald?” Sora asked.
“Well I could make a orb that can transform you” Donald said.
“That would be great” Sora said.
“Well there is a downside” Donald said.
“And that is?” Sora asked.
“You can only use it 8 hours and then it needs 1 hour to recharge” Donald said.
“I don’t care about that” Sora said.
“I will have it ready by tomorrow” Donald said as he looked at Sora.
“Thanks Donald” Sora said as he walked away.


Back at the garden Kairi was looking for Sora.
“Where is he?” Kairi asked.
“You mean Sora” Namine said.
“Yeah, have you seen him?” Kairi asked Namine.
“He want to the castle” Namine said.
“Thanks” Kairi said as she looked at the packed in her hands.
“There he is” Namine said as she pointed to Sora.
“Sora can you come here for a sec?” Kairi asked.
“Sure” Sora said as he walked to Kairi.
“Here” Kairi said as she gave Sora the packed.
“What’s this” Sora said.
“It’s your smoking, you have to wear it tonight” Kairi said as she walked back to the gummi.
“You and Roxas in a smoking, I have to take make a drawing of that” Namine said as she smiled.
“Did Kairi bought this for me” Sora said.
“yeah and one for me to” Roxas said.
“She know that I can’t stand this” Sora said.
“Well she did said she would make you wear one” Roxas said.
“That’s true” Sora said as he looked at the packed.
Sora walked to his room and put his smoking in the closet.


As he walked out his room Namine called him.
“Sora decoration time” Namine said.
“I’m coming” Sora said as he walked along with Namine.
As they walked in the room they looked around.
“First get this stuff out and then we clean the room” Namine said.
“Got it” Sora said as he pick up a bag.
After the cleaning they started to darken the room.
“So this curtain hangs” Sora said as he looked at the curtain.
“This one to” Namine said.
“What now?” Sora asked.
“Hang up those paintings” Namine said as she pointed to a corner.
Meanwhile in the kitchen Kairi and Roxas where starting on the spaghetti.
“I will start on the meatballs and you can start on the sauce” Kairi said.
“Got it” Roxas said as he start preparing the sauce.
Ten minutes later Sora and Namine where done with the decoration.
“We’re done” Namine said.
“What now?” Sora said.
“Put your smoking on I’m gonna check on Kairi and Roxas” Namine said.


Sora walked to his room and almost after he entered his room Roxas came in.
“Ten minutes for we eat” Roxas said as he walked to the closet.
“I really don’t like this” Sora said as he put on his smoking.
“I can’t get this pants on” Roxas said as the tried to get the black pant over his own pants.
“It’s hard to put it over my normal clothes but I did it” Sora said.
“Got it” Roxas said as he fell on the floor.
“Got your pant on” Sora said as he tried get his tie right.
“Yeah” Roxas said as he rubbed his head.
Seven minutes later the boys leaved the room with a untied tie.


“You still can’t tie a tie, can you” Kairi said as she walked to Sora.
“No and why aren’t you changed?” Sora asked Kairi.
“Are diner almost burned” Kairi said as she tied Sora’s tie.
“Kairi, can you tie my tie to?” Roxas asked.
“Sure” Kairi said as she tied Roxas tie.
“Kairi, you can change now” Namine said as she walked out of the room.
“Holy…” Roxas said as he looked at Namine’s pearl white dress.
“I’m glad you like my dress Roxas” Namine said with a smile.
“You’re a angel in that dress” Roxas said without thinking.
Namine could only blush after hearing that.
“You three can go to the diner room I will came after I’m ready” Kairi said.
“Should I light the candles?” Namine asked.
“Yeah” Kairi said as she walked in to her room.


3 minutes later.
“You’re wondering how Kairi looks like in a dress?” Roxas asked Sora.
“Yeah” Sora said as he felt his heart pond faster.
Sora felt that he was gonna die as Kairi walked in the room in a light pink dress with white accents.
“You like it?” Kairi said as she looked at Sora.
“Your beautiful” Sora said as he was looking for his words.
Kairi sat down on her chair.
“Well we can eat now” Namine said.
“Hope you like it” Roxas said.


Meanwhile Sora and Roxas had there date Angels was watching them.
“Just a other disaster waits” Angels said as he looked from the castle.
“You need to protect them from that” the small one said.
“Don’t you need to be by the boy” Angels said.
“Just checking on you” the small one said.
“I’m fine” Angels said.
“Good now do you job” the small one said.
“Yeah” Angels said as he jumped of the castle and flew to the gummi.


He walked to the side of the diner room and listed.
“This is the best spaghetti ever ” Sora said.
“Looks like you don’t know who you eat it Roxas” Namine said.
“They are eating, now where are those heartless?” Angels asked himself.
Angels scanned the area and saw a heartless appear.
He quickly run to it and destroyed it in one hit with his keyblade that he just summoned.
“Where is the rest?” Angels asked himself as he looked around him.
He jumped back and saw that the heartless were coming in big groups.
“Here we go” Angels said as he started running to the heartless.


25 minutes later Angels was struggling to get the heartless from the gummi.
“Can’t take a hint, can you?” Angels asked the heartless.
Suddenly he heard the sound of broken glass.
He quickly turned and saw that a heartless went inside the gummi.


Meanwhile in the diner room Sora, Roxas and Kairi summoned there keyblades and attacked the heartless.
Namine screamed as a heartless jumped to here.
Suddenly everything went in slow motion and Kairi, Sora and Roxas stated to fade away.
Namine was now alone with the heartless that was coming for her.
Namine tried to run but nothing happened, now the room started to fade away.
She looked as the heartless was inches away but suddenly it to fade leaving her in a dark place all alone.


i know i didn't put in the real date that's because i didn't know what to write.
sorry, about that i really feel bad for that.

i hope you still like the chapter.

 

thanks Rinoa.
i'm glad you liked it.


anyway here is chapter 12.


Chapter 12: memory scraper

Roxas knocked that heartless away from Namine.
“Namine” Roxas yelled as he was holding of the heartless.
Roxas looked over his shoulder as he didn’t got a answer and saw that Namine was lying on the ground.
“She’s unconscious I hope” Kairi said as she blocked a attack.
“That is a bad timing” Sora said as he was fighting 5 heartless at ones.
As Sora, Kairi and Roxas where fighting Namine’s body faded back into Kairi.
“Is she oke?” Roxas asked as he fight with a strong heartless.
“Can’t contact her” Kairi said trying to dodge some attacks.
“We need to go back to the castle” Sora said.
“Got it” Kairi said as she started running to the castle.
“These three and then we head to the castle” Roxas said.


Meanwhile Angels had his own problems.
“That was my arm” Angels said as he destroyed the heartless.
Angels jumped back to dodge some attacks and looked at his arm.
“great now I’m bleeding” Angels said as he tried to destroy the heartless.
Angels flew up a few feet to stay away from the heartless that where attacking like crazy.
“I need to finish this now, but how?” Angels asked to himself.
“Need help?” Someone asked.
Angels looked down and saw someone jumping into a group of heartless.
“Patrick what are you doing here?” Angels asked Patrick.
“Came for a new job” Patrick said as he summoned his keyblade.
“He, should we show them are wind combo” Angels said.
“Are thing that bad?” Patrick asked.
“Yeah” Angels said.
“Oke, here we go” Patrick said.
Angels flew though the battlefield shooting light orbs to knock heartless in the sky as Patrick grabbed his keyblade by the keychain and started whirling it above his head and casting random magic.
As Angels was done knocking heartless into the sky he throw his keyblades above Patrick creating a hurricane that suck heartless into it.
Angels and Patrick summoned there keyblades back in there hand and jumped into the hurricane as they where in the hurricane they almost transported to heartless to heartless killing them.
When they where down killing the heartless they throw there keyblades into the ground causing the hurricane the explode killing the remaining heartless.
“Now I’m dizzy” Patrick said as he came back on the ground.
“Me to” Angels said as he used his keyblades as support.
“What now?” Patrick asked.
“you wanted a new job so follow me” Angels said as he opened a portal and walk into it.
“Good” Patrick said as walked in to the portal.


Meanwhile Namine found herself in darkness.
“What is this place?” Namine asked herself as she looked around her.
As she looked around her she saw only darkness.
“Where am I?” Namine yelled as she look into the sky.
As see looked up a small light appeared and the darkness turned to dark blue.
“What is happening with me?” Namine asked herself as she looked around her.
She saw a bright white pigeon in frond of her.
“What are you doing her?” Namine asked the pigeon as she walk to it.
As she was 2 feet away from the pigeon it looked at her.
As she took another step forward she was blinded by alight and hundreds of pigeons took of to the small light in the sky.
“What was that?” Namine asked as she was still blinded by the light.
“So much to learn and yet so little time” a gentle voice said.
“Who’s there” Namine said as she eyes recovered.
“Don’t be afraid take your time” the gentle voice said.
“Take my time for what” Namine asked as she looked around her.
She saw that her surrounding didn’t changed only that she was standing on a platoon whit’s had a picture on it from the Disney castle.
“take your time to master your weapon” the gentle voice said.
“What do you mean by you weapon” Namine asked: I don’t use a weapon.
Suddenly a keyblade hovered in mid-air in front of Namine.
“Can you tell me its name?” the gentle voice said.
As she looked at the keyblade the keychain was the first thing that draw her attention because it look like the memory’s skyscraper, the second thing where the coloured pointy ends on the tip and the third thing was the white line in the centre of the blade.
“Memory scraper” Namine said as she looked at the blade.
“Good, now try and summon it” the gentle voice said.
As Namine put her hand in front of her she said the name of the keyblade in her head and the Memory scraper appeared in her hand.
“It work” Namine said as she almost fell by the weight of the keyblade.
“good work” the gentle voice said.


A stair of floating steps appeared next to Namine.
“a little speed test” the gentle voice said.
“So I need to run as fast as I can to the top?” Namine asked.
“That’s right, but your keyblade needs to be in your hand all the time and the steps will disappear after sometime so better be quick” the gentle voice said.
“And what will happen if I fall of” Namine said as she looked at the steps.
“You’ll get hurt” the gentle voice said.
“That’s something I don’t like” Namine said.
“Time to run” the gentle voice said.
Namine started running up the stairs.
“It’s easy so far” Namine thought as she was almost halve way up.
Suddenly the step where she was standing on disappeared, but she grabbed the next step just in time and pulled herself up.
“Now I jinxed it” Namine thought as she stood up and started running again.
As she was almost on the top when the step where she just jumped from exploded causing her to fall hard on the new platoon.
“That hurt” Namine said as she stood up and started looking around: Where is my keyblade?
In place of looking for it she summoned it back in her hand.


“Good now the next thing is a choose”
Three portals opened, the first was a street with stores and people, the second a mysteries place with white and black and the third was a jungle.
“Choose with you heart” the gentle voice said.
“I choose the second portal” Namine said with confidence.
“good now fight” the gentle voice said.
“What do you mean?” Namine asked.
“Behind you” the gentle voice said.
Namine turned and block the attack from the heartless.
“Not very nice of you to send heartless to me” Namine said.
Suddenly a memory from Kairi doing a ground combo flashed trough her mind.
“So this is how this keyblade work” Namine thought as she preformed the ground combo.
“very good now try this one” the gentle voice said.
A other memory flashed through her mind, this time from Angels knocking a heartless in the air and throwing his keyblade after it to destroy the heartless.
Namine run to the heartless and knocked it into the air, she turned 360 to give her keyblade some speed and throw it into the heartless.
“I’m surprised that I hit it” Namine said with as smile as she summoned her keyblade back into her hand.
“Time for you to rest” the gentle voice said.
“What do you mean by that?” Namine asked.
“you have 10 minutes rest before the final test” the gentle voice said.
“Oke” Namine said as she sat down and looked at her keyblade.


Meanwhile Sora, Kairi and Roxas where at the castle.
“Come on get in here” Riku yelled as he saw Sora and Kairi coming.
“we’re coming” Sora yelled back to Riku.
“Couldn’t hold them any longer” Roxas said as he faded back into Sora.
“Run Kairi” Sora said as he stopped and waited on the heartless.
“What are you gonna do?” Riku yelled.
“I keep them away from you and you use the Corner stone” Sora yelled back.
“Sounds like a plan” Riku said as he closed the door with Kairi.


“Here I go” Sora said as he run to the heartless.
As a few heartless jump up the attack Sora slided under them.
“Thunder” he yelled and attacked the heartless.
As the heartless started to target Sora he had almost no time left to attack.
“there are just to many” Sora said as he jumped up.
As there where just to many heartless Sora changed into Wisdom form and started attacking from a distance.
“Well it works” Sora thought.
As he was shooting heartless a heartless appeared after him and knock him out of Wisdom form.
“That hurt” Sora said as he tried to get back up his feet.
As Sora almost got up his feet as heartless attacked him wild and knock him in the wall.
“Get up” Roxas said as he stood in front of Sora holding of the heartless.
“There are to many for us” Sora said as he stood up and summoned his keyblade back in his hand.
“Not anymore” Roxas said as he faded back in Sora.
“What do you mean?” Sora asked Roxas as he blocked the heartless attack.
“The light is coming” Roxas said.
“Finally” Sora said as he was overrun by the light.


As Sora sat down on the ground Kairi and Riku ran to him.
“Everything alright” Riku said as he pulled Sora up his feet.
“Sora your hurt” Kairi said as she look at him.
“No that bad, just a tired” Sora said.
“Any word from Namine?” Roxas asked.
“Not a thing” Kairi said.
“Lets go and heal your wounds” Kairi said.
Riku started pulled Sora along to the Gummi.

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One thing you should do to this is that don't put said whole the time put something else too its a little disturbing when you read it and theres roxas said sora said angels said and so on and so on... but otherwise its a réally great story:):):)