Kingdom Hearts : Reversion // Chapter 2

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What do you think of Chapter 2 of my story ?

  1. IT ROCKS !!

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  2. Cool

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  3. I don't know.

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  4. I don't like it that much.

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  1. Love Kingdom Keeper

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    Sora fell through the portal's brite abyss , 12 years into the past he shall go.

    Sora then fell out the end of the portal and landed in a hot and sunny waste land.

    Sora fell on top of his head and got up and said , " OUCH !! That smarts !!! "

    He looks around seeing the waste land.

    Sora jumps up and says , " Where am I ? Riku !! Are you here ? "

    No one answered.

    Sora says , " Well this is strange . I can't just fall in the middle of a desert for no reason . "

    Sora then runs over to a dry , scrawny , black tree and climbs to the top to get better look.

    Sora sees a a bunch of back dots by a rock formation in the distanace.

    Sora then thinks to himself , " Maybe its people !! I should go to them to ask for directions . "

    Sora then runs towards the figures in the distance shouting , " Hey !! You guys !! Do you know where I am ?! "
    Sora then runs into one of the figures and falls back wards.

    Sora then gets up and says , " Sorry for ... WHAT THE ... ?! "
    The figures looked like people but they were solid rock.

    Sora screams out , " OMG !! THEY'VE BEEN TURNED TO STONE !!!! "

    He runs around in circles screaming.

    When suddenly a person walked over to him .

    The person wore a white cloak and it's hood was up , so Sora could not see it's face.

    Sora says , " HEY YOU !! Do you know were I am ?! "

    The person shakes it's head and does not say a word.

    Sora then says , "Then whats this place called ? "

    The person points at the horizon.

    Sora says , " What ? What do you mean ? "

    The person points at the horizon again , still silent.

    Sora then says , " I can't understand what you are saying !!!! "

    The person in the white cloak then turns and disappears in a windstorm of sand.

    Sora runs after the person yelling , " WAIT !! WHO ARE YOU ?! "

    When Sora crosses to the otherside of the windstorm the person is gone.


    Post a reply and tell me what you think of this Story .I shall release chapter 3 tomorrow.;)
     
  2. Invader Jack Twilight Town Denizen

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    Huh. IDK, it's really short and I don't get what's going on...:confused: I mean, not to be harsh or anything, but I don't know...
     
  3. Love Kingdom Keeper

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    Did You Read Chapter 1 , Yet ?
     
  4. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    i think its ok.
     
  5. Love Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanx , Jap !! :D
     
  6. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    but i did think it was a little short.
     
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