Kingdom Hearts : Reversion // Chapter 1

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How do like Chapter 1 of my Story ?( Read first )

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  2. Excellent !!!!

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  1. Love Kingdom Keeper

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    The day was hot and sunny , as a calm breeze blew between the palm trees.
    Three friends lie on the beach enjoying their first day of summer vacation.

    Sora smells the air and says , " I love summer vacation ."

    Riku turns his head and says , " Yeah, me too. "

    Kairi sits up and says , " Hey do you guys know were Selphie and the
    others went ? "

    Riku grabs a rock and throws it into the crystal clear water of
    the ocean and says , " They are having a tree party . "

    Kairi then says ," Really can we go join them ? "

    Sora looking annoyed sat up and said , " No way !!! "

    Kairi says , " Why not ? "

    Riku & Sora shout out , " Too dorky !!! "

    Kairi says , " You guys are so predictable !! "

    Sora then jumps ups and says , " OMG !!! I'M GOING TO BE LATE FOR
    DINNER !!!! "

    Sora runs down the beach and turns and says , " See you guys
    tomorrow !! "

    Kairi then gets up and says , " I'm hungry too , see ya Riku !!! "

    Riku says , " Yeah what ever !! "

    Sora , Riku , and Kairi get in their boats and row back to the main
    Island in Destiny Islands.

    Later at dawn ...

    Sora ran outside and was ready to go meet his buddies over at
    the Island.

    Sora got in his boat rowing slowly , as he rowed a calm breeze
    blew and it was quite warm.

    It was still quite dark out and the stars and the moon shone
    britely in the dark sky.
    Sora's boat hit the dock and Sora got out and ran over to the
    spot where Sora and his friends were to meet.

    Sora shouted out , " So guys what do you want to do ? I was
    thinking of doing some ..... Huh ? "

    Sora sees Kairi sitting on a rock looking out across the sea.
    He then runs over her and puts his hand on Kairi's shoulder and
    says , " Kairi , are you okay ? "
    He then stumbles to the ground looking startled.

    Riku walks over and says , " I know , its like time just froze all
    the sudden . "

    Riku says , " The clouds aren't moving anymore , the water is
    silent and still as rock , and there is no air current , What
    happened before I arrived on the Island ? "

    The suddenly there was a huge boom like a firework and a
    huge multi-colored light shone britely.
    A huge neon-colored clock appeared infront of Sora and Riku.

    Riku walks over to it and says , " Why is a giant clock here ?
    Wait !! What if this is the reason why time stopped ? "

    Riku touches it and says , " Maybe if I move the clock's hands
    It might start time back up again. "

    He then moves the big hand over to the 7 on the clock and a
    there was a flash of light and a portal opened up.
    It began to suck Riku inside.
    Sora ran over and tried to pull Riku out , but it was no
    use , Riku flew inside and the portal shut it's self.

    Then the clock's big hand began to turn backwards at a
    fast pace.
    The big hand then landed on the number 12 , and Sora
    is pulled into a portal himself
    .

    I shall give out chapter 2 soon , and please post a
    reply and tell me what you think of my work .:)
     
  2. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    keep typing! i like it! ;D
     
  3. Love Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanx .:)

    I will make chapter 2 tomorrow or even later today .:)
     
  4. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    This story idea is sweetness! Please continue! :D
     
  5. Love Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanx for the reply.:) * Does a short bow. *
     
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