Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth (KHCtE2)

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  1. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well it is true that few members keep on asking me if they're going to appear.It's true though, school is rough and stuff I was kind of knocked off the chair on my first day in grade 8, but eventually it'll heal. But I'll forgive and let it go. Here below is a members there is over 30 characters (I think), I'll try to upgrade the notebook I have to keep track of what's going on.

    Group 1: Mexony, Rexmildd, Tybic, Karla, Keath, Luke, Jorrel, Ginji and Valerie. ( Appears on 13th)
    Group 2: Danny, Lynn, Len, Dr.Nywn, Amber, Xaale, Ampex, Austin and Eden.

    Group 3: Jack, Angel, Marcus, Kirsty, Rinn, Sebax, Zoe, Jessica and Jordan.
    Group 4: Muxene, Hexia, Kevin, Omar, Kathy, Jerry. (previous )
     
  2. rexmildd15 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    nice Chapter. And Mexony stop talking about boyfriends, Or I'll tell the parents >=|(nah..) Anyways I like the chapter.It was nice that you continued the khcte Hitotsu dake je tsumannai!
     
  3. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks...and I wasn't talking about boyfriends but solve...and you tell the parents I'll tell on you...for something. Thanks for liking the chapter Rexy. (last line...I don't understand)
     
  4. Doukuro Chaser

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    Best to take your time then it'll turn out better. Cuz when people rush things they normally miss out on the little details. I should know. =/

    But all of the chapters have been good so far and are only getting better so can't wait for the new chapter. :D
     
  5. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well today is the new chapter. To tell the truth, I was lazy throughout typing this...I wasn't myself much. Anyways soon I'll be able to have more time on the comp...as soon as a I getmyself a laptop,solo. So, here's the new chapter, enjoy.

    Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth.
    Chapter 6: Release of Power






    Mexony’s eye’s glowed. Seeing a character up close. Very exciting.

    “ Holy…†Rexmildd grinned.

    “ You two need help?†Roxas asked, brushing his fingers into his dirty blonde spiky hair.


    “ Um, we kind of already defeated the heartless.†Mexony pointed out. Roxas chuckled for a short time.

    “ Not necessarily.†Roxas said, throwing his keyblade out in the air like a paper place.


    Rexmildd and Mexony turned around, seeing the beast right behind them. Luckily, Roxas threw his keyblade out, stabbing the heartless’ chest. Both female’s eyes widened.

    “ Whoops.†Mexony scratched softly on her temple. Rexmildd laughed a little, seeming it was kind of funny that them two didn’t know what was going on.

    Roxas looked over his shoulder, he felt a breeze come onto his back, but from the three was standing-

    “ You feel that?†Roxas asked, his position in still. Mexony and Rexmildd shook their head.

    “ No.†Rexmildd narrowed her eyes.
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    “ Well, certainly you have changed.†Saix said, poking his arm to the side.

    Tybic nodded with a smile.

    “ Got my own pirate ship, crew- never mind.†He lowered his head.

    “ What happened with your ‘crew’ ?†Saix asked, looking out in to the wide water ocean.

    “ They suddenly, disappeared. One moment we’re all riding the ship and then suddenly, everyone of us started to fade away in ashes of light.†Tybic said, crossing his arms, standing in front of the berserker.

    “W-Wait a minute! How’d did you fade away in ashes of light! You were here on this world…were you?†Saix cocked his head. Confusion was already brought up.

    “ Well… I thought I could go to the other worlds. Meet Jack Sparrow, become a pirate you know, follow my dreams. So I gripped on tightly to another character, fading along.†Tybic said.

    “ Do you even realize what you have done!?†Saix rubbed his nose in, furious.

    “ Yeah. I know what I’ve done. “ Tybic said.

    “ You interfered with other worlds! Human beings aren’t supposed to go to other worlds. It’s a rule, and you disobeyed that rule.†Saix pointed his index finger at Tybic.

    “ Listen, I only left for my reasons. You don’t have to…crash in. Beside’s even though the wisher wished this, that’s interfering In our world. Or planet I shall say, but- never mind. Thing’s are getting complicated.†Tybic said walking to the wheel.

    Saix shrugged and stepped down the wooden steps.

    “ This is like what Luxord said to me. Where ever we head off to sunset out keys will unleash a treasure.†Saix snickered.

    Tybic nodded.
    “ So, new weapons?†Saix asked, releasing his claymore out.

    “Yeah, new and sweet.†He said, with his hand sticking out, his weapon appeared. More shiny.

    “ How about we fight. For money. Gamble.†Saix said.

    “ Sure.†Tybic released out a freeze stick out, aiming for Saix. Saix cracked the ice in half.

    “ Just…try not to…hurt my ship.â€
    * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    Zexion looked at Karla, wondering why she knew his name.

    “ I certainly didn’t tell you and I know that this is the first time we meet.†He said.

    Karla put her left hand onto her shoulder. She blushed with a chuckle and smile.

    “ I’ve seen you in the video game, Kingdom Hearts.†Karla perked up.

    Zexion nodded, he looked up at the sky, mixed. Sat there was a tiny shine of light. Karla looked up at the direction Zexion was looking at.

    “There’s a tiny light in the sky.†Said Karla, her eyes squinted from the bright sun that appeared, minutes ago.


    “ I can see that and I sense the light. Could be Kingdom Hearts or something else related.†Zexion said.

    “ Come on, let’s go.†Karla said, leaving Zexion behind on the path. He followed.



    “ So, you arrived here by fade of light?†Karla cocked her head, she stared in to Zexion’s eyes.

    “ Yes, I remember reading a very interesting book; The Study of elements. Suddenly, there was a sound of an earthquake outside the building. All members were curious, even I. We walked closer for the noise, but it kept changing it’s place. After walking for fifteen minutes, Axel noticed, that our bodies were fading in white ashes.†Zexion finished.

    “ And then, you arrive here?†Karla frowned a little.

    “Yes, everyone had thought that we would remain locked in our own world. But suddenly somebody must’ve wanted to have one more thrill.â€

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    “ Freeze!†Keath called out. A strike of blue silky ice came out, burning the flame down.

    “ You’re pretty good.†The unknown man said, releasing an energy of lightning. The lightning flowed across mid air, striking Keath on the back.

    “AH!†Keath felt the electricity shocking the back. The lightning was a huge sting of cuts, the light was shining in to Keath’s eyes.

    When the element finished it’s move, Keath was released. He fell flat on the front part of his body. Keath cringed, he felt a release of pain, sending out on his body.

    “ Painful, yes?†said the unknown, chuckling.

    Keath looked up, seeing the unknown man standing in front of him. He glared.

    “ No. That’s just…a light smack.†Keath struggled to stand up, his body was shaking. The unknown walked up to Keath, placed his to fingers, middle and index on his forehead. Then he smirked and gave him a push. Keath fell down, some more pain came.


    “ You don’t look okay, need a doctor?†he laughed. Keath was disgusted by the man, he raised his hand up, his palm facing north.

    “ Circle flame.†He said. A rapid circle of flames came around the man, slowly it was closing.

    “ This’ll keep your mouth shut.†He said standing up. His hands shook, he had bruises placed on his neck for reason: the lightning seemed to be attracted to his neck. It did real damage.

    The circle of flames came to a close, trapping the man in flames.

    Keath smirked, he felt a relief come off his back. He was gone, for now that is.

    “ He was tough, yet dumb. From the look’s of it, I don’t think he’ll return until he heals.†He rubbed his sore hand.

    “ Your wrong.â€
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    Luke saw the look in his father's eyes.

    "Dad-"
    "What the heck was that!" his father was freaked out. He stared out to the spot where the heartless stood.

    " It was a heartless, dad." Luke said, looking away, digging his fingers in to his pockets. His father looked to his son. Why does he know about this!? And homecome Luke was carrying a over large knife? Questions went through his mind.

    " Where did you get all this information from. Luke, answer me." his father let out a soft sigh at the end of his words. From what he saw, things have changed.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~

    "So, heartless had appeared from last year? But I have no memory of it!" his father exclaimed, he stood up.

    " You have memories because they were taken away. People whom were not involved much have memories taken out. There was many destruction going on. You and mom were sucked in to darkness and kept in a cage until light reached out to the world once again." Luke said.

    Luke felt a breeze feeling in his eyes, his eyes werer stinging. He clenched his fists.

    " Dad, it was like the end of the world, no tomorrow. So many heartless' it's restarted again!" he pounded his fist.

    " Stay strong, Luke." his father placed his right hand firmly, on his shoulder.

    " I'm allowing you now. The only chance you'll have this time. I'm allowing you to fight, save people. After all, you were a hero before. You can be one again!" he smiled.

    Luke slowly smiled, his eyes wrinkled into bright light of happiness.

    "Thank you."
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    " And what gives you the right to tell me!" Remoll yelled at Jorrell.

    Jorrell scoffed off at the troubled enemy. " Tsk,tsk. You know nothing. I already told you that covering yourself won't help at all! But since I'm kind enough to let you in on a tip. You might want to reflect it with Blizzard. It'll help."

    Remoll removed his arms from himself. He cursed Jorrell under his lips and then struck his hand out facing the ground.

    "Air sweep." he smiled. Remoll thought he was going to make the dodge, have Jorrell miss his opponent.

    "Well,you've been warned." Jorrell put his hands over his eyes, so the light won't sting his eyes.

    The lightning came over the Remoll, shocking him straight forward.

    "N-No!" he screamed out loud. The pain, it was hurting him. Jorrell kept his eyes covered, although he could vision the whole scene.

    Remoll tried to move but couldn't, the lightning kept him still.

    "Anytime now." Jorrell mumbled, he removed his hands away from his eyes when it hit him. The bright light that Jorrell had used entered his eyes. It shocked it's way in the eyes, electrifying the cords. Jorrell has his jaw dropped. There was no sound coming from his mouth, he was frozen. His whole body was asleep.

    IwishforKingdomHeartstoCometoEarth.Youwon'tdeafeatme.Mydreamcametrue!Whendarknesscrircles,light'llcomeshockingusallwithfear.You'renothingbutanimbecileyouareusless!

    The light stopped. Jorrell fell to his knees. Sweat was dripping down from his forehead, he was panting.

    "What..was that?" he asked himself. " It all came in a flash!" he gritted his teeth.

    Jorrell raised his head up, he saw Remoll. Blood stains on his cheeks and mouth.

    "Damn you. Your power is too powerful. I should've known." he began to disappear with his body shredding to the air.

    " I didn't know it was that powerful." he said to himself.
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    " I can fade away! Anytime, anywhere!" she teared up.

    Ginji looked at the palm of her left hand. Aswell she did to the right.

    "Soon my hands won't be in much use. Eventually they'll be weak and won't be in much use anymore." she had a deep thought in her mind. What was running was the sound of darkness taking over her.

    "Don't say that!" said a familiar voice. Ginji's eyes rolled over to the right. There she saw her, the red hair aqau-blue eye'd female. Kairi.

    " Kairi?" Ginji cocked her head, she wiped a dry tear off her cheek.

    " No matter where we had, light will be within us. Sure darkness can come over and rule our rights. But deep down we have a shell that holds the light." Kairi said, resting her hands in her pockets.

    " Light.." Ginji smirked. She laughed for a second.

    "You're right! I'm overreacting!" Ginji perked up.

    " Not overreacting, but thinking." Kairi giggled.

    Ginji nodded. She took Kairi's hand in hers. Her eyes glowed with shining light. " Thankyou, Kairi. I don't know why but you just bring some kind of light in everyone. Even Sora, not to say!" she snickered.

    Kairi slipped her hand away. Ginji looked down to her hand. She was holding a small bottle filled with purple liquid mixed with black ashphault.
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    The heartless' were suffering and yet, fading. Valerie's shield went away she jumped and cheered. Sora smiled and gave her a thumb's up.
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    Eden's magic released, surrounding her.

    "What the!? It wasn't supposed to go on me!" she freaked out, her eyes popped. Eden felt a soft feeling when the magic landed on her skin and clothing.

    Eden began to fade away in the light, the heartless smirked. It came at Eden.

    "AH!" Eden closed her eyes, with her hand covering her head, making a x mark.

    But there was no pain. No claws digged on her. Eden looked up, she was surrounded in the place of unknown.

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    Valerie panted after defeating some more heartless.

    " Tired?" Sora asked, healing her cuts she recieved from the claw heartless.

    "Nope, just getting started." she smiled,"Ha!" she threw her weapon out, slashing another in half. After that heartless, there were no more. Valerie smiled but stopped the celebration. She saw a female standing, confused.

    "Eden?" she cocked her head. Valerie wasn't sure if she was just seeing things or if it was the real.
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    To be continued.


    Sorry if the chapter was short. Well please comment if you'd like and I hope you liked it.
     
  6. overload Traverse Town Homebody

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    everytime i read a new chapter it's getting more interesting
     
  7. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    :glomp: Thankies for letting me meet Valerie-sama, Mexy-chan!
     
  8. Destined Working for WDW

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    Tybic interfered with the world order in Kingdom Hearts....that is an interesting arc i didn't see coming. Great job mex.
     
  9. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    great chapter mex ^^
    keep it coming , tybic was a surprise o_O
     
  10. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Hehe, thankyou everyone for the comments. I can see that there were suprised at the Tybic part. *snicker* Stay tuned for chapter 7 *thumbs up* I always want to say...I made a signature...and I'm proud of it.
     
  11. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    Dang my character talks to much to himself and gets beaten up by an ally.
    Yep, I didn't get killed, but now you beat up my character....
    Now I have to wait for the next story to say don't beat him up, AND don't kill him...
    well, you'll find a way to get my character anywhoo.
     
  12. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well today is the new chapter. Yesh. I actually started somewhere on Tuesday since I decided to get out of my lazy chair. So here it is, the new chapter. As we should know, it's group 2's turn so, if you're not in this group... then please don't fuss or complain about it, I don't want to deal with complaints. If you have an questions, feel free to pm me or add me. Which ever way works for you. *scrolls* I thank the songs I listened to *snicker* they...had me pay more attention to the chapter then some videos I'd usually watch.




    Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth
    Chapter 7: Ran----speed.



    Quickly, Danny felt some tickle feeling. He looked below, seeing his whole body disappearing one by one. Danny was surprised at the fact that it actually worked! He looked to his feet, they were gone already and yet he could still stand, not float. Looking back up, his smile he had brought up went back to a bored and curious face, meshed. Namine disappeared, but where to?

    “ Well, I’ll probably see her later.†Danny said, glancing around. His surroundings were turning in to the color blue and white.

    As he was disappearing he stopped himself and thought about what Namine said back earlier, before she disappeared.

    “All Earthlings are in trouble. From my presence I can feel Maleficent planning something.â€

    “That’s when I said I would stop Maleficent. But by looking at Namine’s face, it seemed to be that she didn’t feel well at all. Or maybe she was meant to say something else.†He said to himself.

    He continued to fade away, Danny’s hands were gone. All that was left of him was his head, he was disappearing also. He was ready. Ready to go to another world. After the minutes of taking time, he was set. A white warp whole entered, Danny fell onto the white platform. He stared up, it was blanked, but he could feel the speed running. Like he was on top of a go-train, speeding. He struggled to his feet, he can feel the platforms vibrating. But then they stopped.

    Was he at his destination? Suddenly, the white platform disappeared. Danny noticed, he saw dirt meshed together with a few pebbles. Finally, the scenery was changing. It formed to a dirt world, with mountains and cliffs. Ahead were trees hanging out. Danny smiled.

    “Pride Lands!†he excitedly jumped in the air. As he landed he fell on to his back. “Man..†he whined, as he tried to stand he flipped over to his feet. He noticed something different.

    “Don’t tell me…†he looked down. PAWS!? Danny stared at them, he had fur placed on him. Danny looked around there was no one but himself. He was satisfied that this transformation actually happened.

    “Sweet.†He put a smirk on his face.

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    “ Not to mention, long nails to.†Len said.

    “Claws probably.†Lynn mouthed.

    Both females, kept staring at the heartless until it made it’s move. The heartless jumped and disappeared.

    “Where did it go?†Len looked around, trying to track down the heartless. Lynn did the same.

    A big paw landed on the ground, shaking. It turned to Lynn and Len. It growled right at the two, his teeth were showing. You could see his anger and hate running through his veins. That is if he had one. He raised his paw up, Lynn steadied herself, in her position. Len used all her magic, creating long lasting shields for Lynn and herself.

    “ Alright, anytime it’ll attack.†Lynn focused on the heartless, she didn’t blink but focus. Len spun her weapon to be prepared. Ready.

    The heartless closed it’s mouth, it stared at Lynn and Len. He growled and made an angry voice. Throwing his paw out it headed straight for the females. Lynn jumped over and through her weapon out, stabbing it’s paw and then used a globe of fire. Burning off bits of it’s fur. Len shielded her self, she felt a bump on the shield. The heartless had attacked her but it didn’t hurt. When Len realized, it was Lynn that attacked the heartless before it did it’s business.

    “ Whoa.†Lynn wiped the early sweat off her forehead. She nodded to Len, it was her turn.

    Len back flipped to the air, she stood on air. Her feet were placed on the air she stood on. It was named the invisible platform. She spun her weapon in circles, until it looked like a helicopter’s top. She released it. It went running out, smacking the heartless behind it’s head. She cheered. The heartless didn’t.

    “ Painful yet powerful!†smiled.
    The heartless groaned, it’s body fell over to the side. But quickly it stood up.

    “ Boy, that thing doesn’t get tired huh?†Lynn said.

    “ True that.†Len said, panting.

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    Dr.Nywn stood in front of the figure.

    “Luck no. Skills? Yes.†He smirked.

    The figure, looked of at Nywn. He glared, the look on his face was the look of someone who just got expelled from school. Dr.Nywn felt his pockets, feeling his potion. No leak so far. But what would’ve happen if it did leak or break. Which ever way. Slowly he looked to his palm of his left hand. He felt a presence of an upcoming event. A big event.

    “ Why stand? You would’ve had a chance to finish me off!†the figure stood up, wiping the small minerals off his clothing.

    “ I have more in store.†Dr.Nywn said, he raised his fist, clenched it and pounded the figure on the face. His knuckles did most the damage.

    The figure’s face flipped to the left, from the punch. Fist fight. Nywn had thought. The figure put his hand over his cheek he was angry. His eyes were tight, his mouth didn’t move but gave a small pout.

    “ Now did that hurt?†Dr.Nywn teased, taking a few steps back. The figure shook his head, he chuckled for a moment.

    “ No that didn’t. You hit like a girl.†He insulted. Dr.Nywn didn’t dare to move. He wanted for the “knocked†guy to make a move.

    “ What’s the matter! Offended-“ The figure was interrupted with another punch in the face. But instead, Nywn punched his nose. There was a soft low crack when he had punched the guy. Blood was beginning to stream down the figure’s nose. It’s color was crimson, it streamed down to the end of the chin. It dripped on his shoes and concrete, staining it quickly.

    “ You have a bad mouth. I ought to crash your head of walls of stone.†Dr.Nywn threatened.

    “ Heh, you got some good words your saying there, my friend.†He grinned, trying to communicate with Nywn.

    “Yeah right. They’re just some examples.†Dr.Nywn said.

    “Oh? Well to bad!†he yelled, he jumped on to Nywn and pulled out a sharp weapon he had hidden for quite a long time.

    It was sharp and pointy. It had a black short five centimeter handle and the rest was silver and pointy, like a tip of a birthday hat. It’s looks had reflected any light. It was a knife. Long and sharp. Nywn’s eyes widened. He had his eyes focused on the sharp object. It was yet an illegal weapon to be used in any place. That was unless if it was for a good reason. This wasn’t a reason. This was chance of an murder, crime or death.

    “ Give me your potion!†he shouted at Dr.Nywn’s face. And that was he wanted, maybe because of what Nywn had put in the potion. Special ingredients.
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    Amber nodded to Demyx. She leaped up, standing on her two feet. She released her weapon out.

    “ Alright, you’ll pay for what you’ve done!†Demyx shouted over, stringing his Sitar. He plucked the lines with his fingers, giving a rock and roll tune. G notes, F notes appeared out smacking the heartless off.

    The heartless landed on his back. The pain released out on him, giving him an echo inside.

    “ Your turn.†Demyx said. He took Amber’s hand and swung her across from him. She grabbed on to the shelf as she was swung. Her hands grabbed on tightly on the shelf. She didn’t want to let go.

    “ You dumb humans!†the heartless bursts out in anger. He turned his head to Amber. I’ll just go after her. The heartless thought to himself.

    Amber’s eyes met the heartless’. Her eyes were glued in to his eyes. There was some kind of power she felt, and the presence was like a boiled feeling. Something was burning in there.

    Demyx held his Sitar steadily, he didn’t want to move. The heartless would’ve thought of charging for Demyx instead of Amber. Who knows what the heartless was thinking. But thinking would have to contain brain or veins...heart probably.

    “ Go ahead. Come at me.†Amber said, she lifted her chin up. She wasn’t afraid of the heartless. Throughout her journey last year, she fought with plenty of heartless and there were no problems. They were all dealt with.

    “ It sounds like you want to get this over with.†The heartless slowly began to walk towards Amber. Amber flinched for a second and then kept her cool.

    “ Getting over with this would sound much better. After all, it’s boring to watch the match to keep going-“

    “Yet it’s exciting.†He hissed.

    “ True. But this match has been far long and it’s time for it to come to an end!†Amber jumped to the heartless. Her feet kicked at it’s face. The heartless struggled to capture her but eventually he caught her foot. He pulled Amber’s foot close to him, yanking her down. Amber’s eyes widened, she felt the heartless squeezing her foot tight. Soon, there would be a bruise for sure.

    Demyx stopped watching and made his move.

    “Double clash!†he demanded. Two big liquid waves raised itself from the ground. One wave was across another. Demyx whispered something to himself and then after strummed his strings hard. The waves came at each other, colliding. The liquid-y water splashed all over.


    Amber fell to the ground, not wet but protected.

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    Ampex was getting ready to jump out of the way. Until he felt a rush of a force run through his blood. A gust of cold wind blew through Ampex’s eyes. He was frozen inside his body.

    " Dodge it! Ampex?" Xaale cocked her head, she felt a worried feeling inside of her.

    I-I can't move! But why? Could it be that magic that those dumb enemies used? My body is cold and numb...mostly cold. I need to move! If I don't I'm done for! Ampex had thoughts running through his mind. Mostly the negatives.

    Xaale shook her head, she began to sprint for Ampex. " Try to move damn it!" Xaale shouted to Ampex. Ampex was beginning to try, he felt a big force pulling his down while he tried to go up. Xaale jumped out, she had her two hands in front of her. As she reached Ampex, her hands touched the side of his arms. Ampex felt her hand touch his arm. Right away, Ampex fell over as Xaale pushed him out of the way.

    The fire quickly passed them by, disappearing. Ampex looked at Xaale. He saw her on her knees, with dirt marks on her clothing.

    " Are you okay!?" Ampex crawled over to Xaale. Xaale looked up.

    " Yeah, but..why weren't you moving?" Xaale asked.

    " There was some kind of force holding me down, I couldn't move, lift a finger...anything!" he exclaimed. Xaale nodded, she turned around. She glared at the enemy.

    The heartless hopped to the side. He raised his head at them, giving them a nasty face. Ampex lifted his index finger up.

    " Deep freeze!" he commanded. A string of ice came out, heading for the red headed heartless. Xaale used her two hands and placed the on the ground.

    " E.Q" she whispered sofly.

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    Austin took a few steps forward he looked at the object or heartless. Leon put his hands in his pockets, meaning that he was allowing Austin to check it out.

    " So." Leon began.

    Austin perked up and looked over his shoulder. His eyes were focused on Leon. " So what?"

    " What's the thing?" Leon said, his eyes were closed. It almost looked like he was asleep or just chilling out. Either way, he was listening.

    " Oh! I haven't check out." Austin answered. He crept over. His facial expression changed. His eyes were glowing with spirt. He was smiling.

    Leon open one of his eye lids.

    " So?"


    Austin turned around and used his hand, in a come forward motion. He was signalling Leon to come stand over where he was. Leon brushed his hands and walked over to Austin. His eyes widened, he had small grin on his face

    " Oh. Now that's luck." Leon said.

    Austin felt a rush of hapiness inside of him.

    " It's alot also!" he looked over to Leon.


    " So, you going to take it?"

    " Take it? Why?"

    " What do you humans say down here about finding something?"

    " Oh well it's finder's-" he was interrupted by Leon.


    " Finder's keepers loser's something something." Leon said.

    " Uh...yeah."

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    To be continued.


    Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed the chapter. Please comment if you'd like. Next Saturday is group 3's turn. =-)
     
  13. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Nice chapter ;D

    It's better then the last (not saying the last was bad) but this one seemed to have more to it.

    Very nice :D​
     
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    It'd like to go to Tilight town first and meet the gang if you don't mind!
     
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    Thats a good idea. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
     
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    Lol, thankyou for the comment, Xaale. Glad you liked it.



    Yesh. Yesh you are =]



    Sure I'll make a note on that *thumbs up* I don't mind you going to Twilight, it'll be interesting for characters to go to other worlds.



    Glad you liked it, Mail Jeevas. Next chapter shall be posted up on Saturday.
     
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    I'm sorry to let in the rain but there will be no new chapter this Saturday. Reason: I'm off to see a graduation so...all day I won't be on the comp typing. Sorry for giving out the bad news. But I'll be sure to post the new chapter on Sunday in the afternoon. Sorry.
     
  18. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Note: Well today for sure, will be the new chapter. After being lazy I promise to not to repeat and I'll try. Kind of hard coming up with ideas, if you have any ideas for your character to go somewhere or something to happen, let me know. Please. So anyways, today's the new chapter with group 3. This Saturday will be group's 4 turn and then we restart. So...*scrolls* Also, it's not news but I'm currently working on the plot of my new KH FanFic- SoS. Meaning, Son of Sora. So yesh. My apologies for mistakes in this chapter. I was rushing from the time I had.


    Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth
    Chapter 8: An injury won’t stop.




    The heartless firmly placed his hand on the ground, pushing himself up with a force. He flew in the air, dodging Jack’s magic attack.

    “ Ha!†The heartless’ eyes glowed. A yellow laser eye came out, shooting for Jack.

    “ Reflect!†he pulled over an invisible shield. It reflected the laser light, shooting right back at the heartless’ eyes.

    The heartless put his hands over his eyes. Sounds like it was burning him inside.

    “ Three, two…†Jack stared at the heartless.

    “One.â€

    The heartless was beginning to fade away. Jack had knew the timing of when a heartless would fade away. Either way, he’d feel it coming. Jack took a few steps forward, finding a golden small chain on the ground. It was a six centimeter golden chain. On it, there was something written on it but it was hard to read. Half the words were scratched up blurred. Jack bended down, using his right hand to pick up the golden chain. The chair laid in his palm in the center.

    “ Must belong to some one.†Jack said out loud. He closed his hand with the chain inside. Quickly, he hid it in his side pockets.

    Jack looked around to check if anyone was looking. Anyone could be hiding, starving for the chain. Wanting to have their hands on it. There’s a 50 % chance of somebody wanting to steal it. Keep it for themselves. The male began to walk. Step by step his feet would make a foot print for every one.

    “ Wait a second.†Jack quickly looked over his shoulder. He saw no one but his footprints. Suddenly he was on sand. But why?

    “ You caught on.†Said a voice.

    Jack turned around. Standing a few centimeters away from him was a dirty blonde short spiked male. He had three piercings on his eyebrow, another was in between the nostrils.

    “ I’ll explain once we introduce.†He grinned.

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    The lightning came out from her weapon, in a form of twigs and branches. The heartless looked up at her with his eyes popped out. He couldn’t believe what he was seeing.

    Angel smirked, she felt a feeling of victory inside of herself.

    The lightning came running for the heartless, quickly it wrapped itself around the heartless giving it a death shock. The heartless was screaming in pain, very painful.

    Angel’s legs began to wobble. Her face changed. The heartless began to fade away, while that he watched Angel fall to her knees. He chuckled. “ Damn.†She muttered. Her knees were now on ground, her whole body was shaking. For a reason it has to do with her surroundings.

    “ There’s a positive thing.†The heartless spoke. Angel’s eyes met the heartless’ she tilted her head to the side.

    “ What’s the positive?†she coughed after her words.

    “ You defeated me. But what’s positive for me… is that you wasted half your HP. That’s good for me because.†He stopped and looked around and then back at Angel. Hissing, “ More will come.â€

    Angel cringed for a moment and felt the numbness in her fingers.

    “ So many heartless, they kill most of you humans. Only few in the world have the ability to use powers like you. But sadly, your weak. Which means, your life is shortened.†He said and then, disappeared in ashes.
    Angel shook her head, Heartless makes sense but… seriously! There can’t be more in store.

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    “Ow!†Marcus squeezed his arm. Although there was pain on his back, there had to be something to grip on. Marcus bit his lips once more.

    “ Darn heartless. His back attack thing really affected me.†He silently said. Marcus took one step at a time to get to his destination. Step by step he felt the need to stop. But he kept going. As he walked, suddenly there was a faint voice in the atmosphere. Marcus cocked his head and stopped his walk. He took a glance around.

    “ I swear I heard something-.â€

    “ Well you did.†Said a voice.

    Marcus swung himself around and found another heartless. Man… Marcus sighed and released his weapon out. The heartless laughed and took a few steps back.

    “ Surprised? Well, just because you defeated one that doesn’t mean there won’t be any more. A new version that Maleficent has installed was the speaking. “ the heartless smiled.

    “ And it all comes from you humans.â€

    Marcus gasped, his eyes widened from the word “ humansâ€. He stared at the heartless with deep eye. He feared that this heartless would have more information about Maleficent. Ah yes, Maleficent. The woman who almost took over Marcus’ entire body.

    “ Don’t go asking questions boy.†The heartless chuckled.
    “ Why?†he lifted an eyebrow.
    “ Some may be wrong some may be right. But as heartless’, it’s our job to lie.â€
    “ What does Maleficent want?†he asked, taking steps closer to the heartless. The heartless shrugged it’s shoulders.
    “ Who knows, love, victory… it could be anything.â€

    Marcus pointed his index finger out summoning the magic, “ Firara!â€
    A flame of fire came out from his index finger, running straight for the heartless. The heartless reflected the attack and quickly put on some kind of potion. Probably Ether. Marcus sacrificed his right arm, having the fire burn on it. He closed his eyes, squeezing from the painful reflect.

    “ For a boy, you got some talent.†Marcus looked up and glared at the heartless. Talent? Who said I had talent?
    “ Just because you can talk, doesn’t mean you can shut your mouth for once like the other wimpy heartless’! “ he taunted.
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    Kirsty felt a thump on the back of her head. The brick wall was hard, she felt a crack on one of her bones. The heartless smirked, watching Kirsty get injured. Her hands flew up in the air, as her whole back crashed on the wall. Her eyes were closed, the pain was rushing in her body. Slowly she fell down to the surface. Her right cheek landed right on the concrete, as the rest of her body did as well.

    The heartless walked over her and stepped on her back, he move his foot left and right like a snow angel. He laughed at Kirsty. She was laying there, not responding. The heartless had thought he had defeated a member of Kingdom Hearts. Now was his chance to take her heart away and seal her into the darkness.

    Kirsty! Don’t fear that heartless! He’s nothing but a monster, trying to take your heart away! All the feelings you had, it’ll all be gone! Wake up, the match isn’t over yet! Don’t give up hope! If you listen to your heart and focus- it’ll be alright! Light stand with you and always will. Remember your mom and the rest of your family! They love you and so do you! Don’t let the heartless take it away!

    Kirsty’s eyes opened. She felt the blood running down her cheek. She felt the pain on her back, the heartless’ foot stomping on her repeatedly. She poked out her pinky and spoke in her mind. Blizzara.

    A cold ice, snow-y form of a globe appeared out and knocked the heartless’ chin. The heartless flew up and crashed his bottom on the surface, few steps away from Kirsty.

    “ Now…is my………… chance to……attack.†Her words were soft and quiet. Every time she tried to speak, her throat would dry up, she had no saliva in her. The more she spoke, her lips would stretch in a pain and her jaw would hurt. Kirsty tried to move but couldn’t. Her whole body was injured, mostly the back of her head. She can feel the blood streaming down, giving out a ticklish feeling. But the ticklish feeling was a feeling of pain. A sign of pain. Again, Kirsty’s eyes were beginning to close. Damn it.
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    The heartless glared at Rinn. Rinn was all steady, her weapon in hand. She high jumped In the air and then, threw her weapon right at the heartless’ head. “ Magnet!†she commanded, quickly she moved to the other side.

    “Reflect!†she pulled her arms over herself and then came a shield coming over her. She watched the heartless’ receive it’s beatings. She grinned, it got what it deserved. As she watched she saw the heartless’ body fading in ashes. What a great move.


    Sebax jumped forward and slashed the heartless. Quickly the heartless wasn’t dumb, he noticed Sebax’s attack. He struck his hand out, facing Sebax.

    “ Teleport~†he whispered. Mickey’s eyes widened, his body was quickly disappearing. Mickey had a worried face put on him. He looked at Sebax and nodded. Sebax examined his body as well, he was also fading away. What ever that heartless did had an experience before in the past. Heartless’ can be reborn in different sizes. Truthfully, this heartless could have died at least three times.


    The heartless was now gone, Rinn grinned and pulled up the sleeve of her pants. She saw nothing but a black vein. She gritted her teeth together.

    “ This is serious-ah!†Rinn fell down to the ground. Her eyes closed, she felt a weight on her body. Opening her eyes she saw a male, lying there like he just figured out a confusing question.

    “ Excuse me.†Rinn said, trying to breath. Sebax looked down, he gasped and quickly got off of Rinn.

    He scratched the back of his head and laughed a little.

    “Whoops, sorry! Didn’t see you there you see I was in the middle of fighting and this heartless went all rawr rawr at me. After, he used some kind of magic on me so I faded away with King Mickey-.â€

    “ King Mickey? Where did you see him.†Rinn grabbed the collar of Sebax’s top clothing. He pinched her off and sighed.

    “ Yeah and what sucks is that…1) I lost the mouse. 2) I lost a pretty damn battle!†he went in a bit of berserk.

    Rinn shrugged, “ Well, what ever heartless does is a surprise.â€
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    Zoe smiled, she had gotten her victory. She slowly turned her hands from left to right to get the release of pain, after holding on to her weapons for the fight.

    " Oh jeez. Now what?" Zoe sighed. She was bored already, no more heartless to be fought. But the last few battles, she had herself fired up. All pumped up, ready to beat up any heartless.

    Zoe slowly walked forward, hoping for more heartless to come. It was challenging and fun to defeat the heartless. She released her gun out and glanced around.

    " Maybe, if they sense me they'll-" Zoe turned around and pulled the trigger right away. The bullet was released and flew hitting the branch of the tree. It flunged and fell to the ground. She smirked. I know there's a heartless, I can sense it. And what ever I just hit was camoflauging.

    " You imbecile!" shouted a dark deep voice. Zoe examined the branch she shot at and saw a bit of an odd color. Purple.

    " Well, your hiding stinks and... I can sense a presence of a heartless." she said, pulling the trigger once more, with the bullet coming out and shooting the heartless on one body part. Zoe teleported around, her feet on the top of the branch.

    "Reveal!" she commanded. The branch changed, showing a heartless hanging up side down with bloody teeth. She gasped. The heartless snickered and quickly grabbed Zoe by the collar. She was hanging down, the top clothing pulled up, covering her neck. She felt a choke feeling.

    " Suprised? And yes, I did kill some humans but my way. It's a way to get hearts and their souls."

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    As Jessica saw her oblivion disappear she noticed herself fading away. She then remembered, in her dream. The day before Kingdom Hearts came, she heard a voice in her dream. Although her dream was not related to Kingdom Hearts, still she heard a voice. The voice was:When you find yourself fading, that means you earned the energy to teleport to a farther distance. Jessica grinned, her eyes shortened, she felt a joy inside of her.

    " What ever that voice said, I think I got the chance!" Jessica happily said. She closed her eyes and inhaled and exhaled. She shook her hands and stomped on her feet. The excitement feeling inside her like a roller coaster ride or a presentation that was going to be marked on your report card.

    " I wish to teleport to...Twilight Town." Jessica firmly said. Quickly the color of her fadense was turning to a pinkish color with a touch of orange. The background was relating to fade color's. As she faded, it was up to her neck, her whole body was gone. You could only see a faint of her body but it looked like she was half invisible.

    Touching the top of her head, the background changed. Jessica opened her eyes and noticed she was in an orange portal. It was almost like the weird portal to head to The World That Never Was. Jessica was abit unsure if she should move or not. But upahead she could see building sworming like waves. She took a deep breath and walked to the portal. Her hands went first, she could feel a breeze out there. Soon, she walked right through with her whole body.

    Arriving, she felt a nice warm breeze blowing. She gazed around. Officialy, she was in Twilight Town.
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    " I mean, thing's would be normal. Like kids hanging with parents. Having a warm dinner..." Jordan put his head down on his knees. He curled up in a sitting ball and breathed in and out. He didn't feel the need to bring tears.

    " You guys...you'll see. I'll bring you back to life. All heartless' will be gone and then-"

    " You'll be a happy family?" said a male voice.

    Jordan jumped and looked infront of him. Standing was a man in a black cloak. His black shoes on the ground. He looked up and examined the shrouded man. "Who're you?" Jordan cocked his head. The black cloak man put his hands on the side of his hood and lifted it, pulling it back down. Jordan's eyes widened, he recognize the guy anywhere!

    " Xigbar!?" Jordan was shocked and kind of happy. He hasn't been close to a real character yet. But it was all good. Jordan poked Xigbar on the cheeks and hips. Xigbar slapped his hand off and fixed his eye patch.

    " Lil' dude you got some doubt going down. But now, after seeing the Xig-man-" Jordan stopped poking and raised and eye brow at him. " Lil' dude? You've got to be kidding me." he laughed. Xigbar's cheeks turned red. Perhaps what he had said was too early. The eye patched man closed his left hand and brought it up to his mouth. " Ahem." Jordan stopped and looked at Xigbar.

    " Anyways, from seeing you earlier... you had a lot of doubt on you. But now, you seem to be happy."

    Jordan bit his lips and narrowed his eyes. No longer looking at Xigbar.

    " From looking at you in the beginning I thought you could help me along my way. And plus, I haven't been that close to an awesome member!" Jordan said.

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    Kitty lost her balance she fell over on her knees. The hard concrete...ouch. Kitty cursed silenty and rubbed her knees. The heartless laughed and stomped repeated causing Kitty to jump up and down and then, fall over. He looked at the look of Kitty and pointed at her.

    " Who's laughing now! Hmmm?" he teased. Kitty looked up, she sat down and pointed her weapon on the heartless and muttterd two words under her breath. A cold stick came out and shocked the heartles. The heartless stopped in motion, his mouth open. A box of ice surrounding him, he was frozen. Kitty leaped over to the heartless and ran around the box of ice. The heartless move his eyes from left to right. He was wondering what Kitty was going to do next.

    "Feel my presence? That presence is a heart beat, from me! But soon, it'll be gone- what am I saying!? It won't be gone. You know why? Heh, I'll tell you why. It's because you'll fade before I do!" Kitty jumped in the air, her fist facing the concrete. As she landed, her fist pounded the ground, vibrating. The ice that was surrounding the heartless grown some spikes. It went right through the heartless' body. The heartless had some black ashes circling around him.

    " Heat." she said. The ice began to melt. Kitty closed her eyes and counted. " Une, Due, Tres!" she opened her hands and saw nothing but liquid on the ground. Kitty smiled and bent down and swiped her finger across the liquid. She took a sniff and coughed.

    " What ever that heartless was made out of is nasty!" she stucked her tongue out, disgusted.

    To be continued.



    Well that's the new chapter. Sorry for the late update. Hope you enjoyed it. Please comment if you'd like.







     
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    Awsome, Mex. That was really cool!
     
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    Not to bring this thread back up, but I'm just letting every member know (that likes the story) that there will be no chapter on Saturday. Currently, I'm kind of busy with some personal things I'm working out. So yesh, I'm sorry for raining it down. So the new chapter will be on Sunday.