Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth (KHCtE2)

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  1. Doukuro Chaser

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    Soon as I started reading I couldn't stop. Nice :noworries:

    I love this part:

    “ Who are you!?†Ginji asked, still startled.

    “ Darkness.†The voice responded.

    “Well I can see that but who are you, for real?â€

    “ Darkness.â€

    “ I’m serious.â€

    “Darkness.â€




    :woohoo: Zexion isn't sexy Zexy for no reason xD (sorry couldn't help myself)
     
  2. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    He he, thankyou everyone for the comments, next chapter shall be Saturday. But it isn't my birthday yet though lol, thanks anyways:)
     
  3. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    Happy birthday.
    Say, Mexony, I maybe the only one who is complaining.
    It kinda was cheesy with the part when Sora appears, and helps Mexony.
    Remember! I'm an evil fannatic.
     
  4. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Yeah? in my head after reading I thought about the lines I typed were cheesy... I need to think abit more...

    Thankyou everyone for the comments but..it isn't my birthday yet... it's on the 16th *thumbs up*+




     
  5. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well, here's the new chapter for this Saturday. I'm very excited, anime day, my birthday, playing games...yesh. Finally I'm 13, an age I wanted to be since August.:)

    So, here in this chapter I was very lazy to type, so this was all done by Friday. Thanks to my editor Shades and helper, Rexmildd, thing's are going fine:) *scrollls*



    Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth
    Chapter 3: Another step





    Danny looked up. He sighed, find out myself. Well… at least I got my first clue. This all deals with Maleficant. Danny took a glance around his surroundings, nothing but the surface and walls.

    “ After fighting, I’m bored.” He sighed, putting his hand over his head.

    “ Ha… imagine going to a different world.” Danny said.

    “ Oh but you can…” said a female voice.

    Turning around was a lady in a purple cloak, in her hand held a black warp ball.

    “ If you have the ability to control the portals, then you’ll have the ability to portal anywhere. Even different worlds.” Said the female.

    Danny perked up, he stared down at the lady but then after, cocked his head to the side.

    “ Wait… before I accept your scam thingy, who’re you?” he asked.

    The female nodded, she reached for the hood, pulling it down. Revealing her face, was blonde hair, blue eyes and an innocent look. She looks like Namine…wait Is she?

    “ Your name?” Danny asked, crossing his arms.

    “ Namine.” She answered.

    “ I knew it.” He grinned.

    “ Knew what?-“
    “ Nothing!”


    Namine nodded, she then walked over to Danny. She stared in to his eyes.

    “ Do you have the ability to portal?” Namine asked, still looking in to his eyes.

    Danny shook his head, “ No, I don’t think so.” He said.

    The blonde haired female nodded, she lifted her left hand up, holding the black warp.

    “ Once I give you this, you’ll only have ten times to warp around.” Namine said clearly.

    The boy nodded, he them felt a presence going through his hand, it must’ve been the warp. Namine took a step back and nodded to Danny, letting him know that he had the ability. Danny shook his head, he took a glance at his hand and then, Namine.

    “ Wait…why are you giving me this ability?” he asked.

    “ All Earthlings are in trouble. From my presence I can feel Maleficant planning something.” Namine closed her fist.

    “ Then I’ll stop her..” Danny said, opening his hand wide.

    Namine looked up at Danny, watching him creating a portal of his own. Slipping out Danny’s hand was a purple and black color, making it’s way out.

    “Focus on you location.” Namine said, Danny nodded.

    Pride Lands.

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    “ I see” Lynn nodded, understanding Len’s story.

    “ So, we can be partners. Right?” Len asked, taking out her weapon. Lynn looked at Len and nodded with a smirk going across her face.

    “ Sure thing, but we need to find more people. Never know if heartless appears out of nowhere and then…boom! They attack you.” Lynn said, taking her weapon out in a stroke.

    “ True.” Len responded.

    Both females looked over their shoulders. Just to make sure there were no heartless sneaking up on them.

    “ Right now, I feel no presence of darkness surrounding me, so we’re safe.” Lynn said. Her weapon disappeared from her hand, and so did Lens.

    The two of them began to walk. Up ahead of them was a trail of grass and little pebbles. There is a possible chance of a heartless though. Obstacles could be up ahead too. Len thought, slowly switching her eyes to the left and right. She was making sure that it was safe, although it doesn’t feel safe. With all the heartless going around and marching allover Earth… it could be impossible to defeat them all. Then again, it could be possible. There are many people who can wield a weapon on their hand, some don’t.

    While the two female’s were walking, the sky began to turn pinkish-black. A weird combination for those two colors.

    “ Look.” Len said, pointing her index finger up in the sky. Lynn looked up, her eyes closed for a moment and then re-opened.

    “ That could be a sign of other Kingdom Hearts character’s arriving on planet Earth.” Lynn breathed.

    The two looked at each other and then back at the sky. “ Or maybe, heartless’.” Len said, taking her weapon out. Lynn gasped, she looked at Len with her eyes widened.

    “ Look out!” Lynn yelled, she jumped over to Len and pushed the side of her arm. Pushing her to the surface of grass. Len squinted her eyes and looked up.

    “ Thanks.” Len patted her shoulder. Lynn nodded, she looked up as well.

    “ Talk about a-“

    “Huge Heartless…”

    Looking up a heartless was all black, with pink stripes and yellow eyes. It’s feet were shaped like a dog’s paw. From the looks of it’s paw, it haw nails, huge ones.

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    Dr.Nywn looked around, he saw nothing but empty streets, once again.

    “ Ok, what do you want?” Dr.Nywn asked, narrowing his eyes.

    “ I want your potion.” Said the voice.

    “ And why?”
    “Because.”

    “Because why? Hmm?”
    “ I need it.”

    “Well, there’s plenty of potions out there!” Dr.Nywn pointed out.

    “ True, but yours is homemade-“
    “Lab made!” Dr.Nywn corrected the voice.

    “Listen Nywn, I’m tired of your attitude, now if you just give me your potion then there won’t be a probably, alright?” the voice said, with a sigh at the end.

    “ Not in a million years! This took me a long time, just for one potion!” Dr.Nywn yelled.
    Dr.Nywn’s chin lifted up automatically. A punch in the chin. Nywn flew across and landed on the concrete again, his head bumped on the back, making a beating feeling coming from behind his head.

    “Ouch.” Nywn rubbed his head and released his weapon out.

    “ Shoot!” A ball of mini cubes came out attacking out in mid air.

    “ Now… appearance!” Dr.Nywn commanded. Sparkles fell from the sky, landing all over and floating smoothly. When the sparkles finally landed, an figure was standing on the rooftop.

    “ Like hiding I see.” Dr.Nywn massaged his temples.

    “ Bring down.” He commanded, the figure’s leg was pulled down, bringing his whole body to the concrete.

    The figure cursed out words and then looked up with a fair smile.

    “ You’re lucky.”

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    Amber glared at the heartless.

    “ I fight you guys and you return!?” Amber complained.

    “ Oh no, we simply were brought here.” He said, tightening the rope.

    Amber kicked her feet in the air, trying to break through. She struggled around, swarming in different positions.

    “ Ha! There’s no way missy!” the heartless said, walking over, in front of her. He looked at Amber, and then licked his lips.

    “ Your heart has a sweet taste.” He said, rubbing his hands.

    “ Ah, close your mouth..” Amber taunted. She brought saliva out from her mouth and spat it out, hitting the heartless’s face. The heartless growled and wiped this spit off of him. He shot a mean stare at Amber and walked out in circles.

    “ You seem like a tough cookie.” He said, under his breath.

    “ I like cookies” she perked up, smiling at the heartless.

    “And so do I!” said a male voice.

    The heartless looked up, with in a second he didn’t get a good look on the human being. It’s foot smashed- attack the heartless’ face.

    “ Woo- huh?” Amber cocked her head, as she stared at the figure in a black cloak, she can sense the aroma of it.

    “ Demyx!” Amber cheered, grinning at the team mate she saw from last time.

    Demyx it was, Demyx turned around and gave Amber a thumbs up.

    “ Long time no see..” he said , holding his Sitar.

    “ True that! I is stuck in rope!” Amber said, fiddling her fingers.

    Demyx nodded and pointed his Sitar at the ropes. His Sitar shot out a purple bubbles, landing on the rope. The rope popped, as if it was a bubble itself.

    Amber grinned and rubbed both her arms.

    “ Those things were tight!” she sighed.

    Demyx took Amber’s hand and pulled her up from the floor.

    “ Shall we?” he winked.
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    "Time?" Ampex's eyebrow raised up.

    " Yeap, I mean... they can't just arrive here in a snap." Xaale said, wiping her forehead. Ampex nodded in agreement.

    " Should we head out?" Xaale asked, looking at Ampex. The boy nodded and pointed straight ahead from them.

    " If we walk on our North, then there could be a chance of seeing something interesting." Ampex said, bring his weapon in front of his chest. Xaale nodded and then took a good look up ahead.

    " Seems like we can walk through it." Xaale shrugged, she took a step forward and so did Ampex.

    As the two walked, there was a dark presence surrounding them. It was almost like a rollercoaster, coming to a complete stop. The atmosphere now had a different...scent.

    " Do you smell that?" Ampex put his right hand over his nose, plugging it from the smell. Xaale also covered her nose.

    " Yeap, it smells like burning stinky socks." she said, waving her other hand through the smell.

    A wind then blew across, blowing the trees, grass , Ampex and Xaale. Both two were flying from the wind. It was strong and hard to block. But it did help. Help then go a little farther on their trail.

    " Lucky the wind came." Xaale grinned.

    " Yeah, but it almost feels like a heartless is going through my body, time to time." Ampex said, putting his hand over his chest.

    Xaale looked over her shoulder, right there was a black red headed heartless. " You're right. A heartless!" Xaale threw her weapon over at the heartless, to slash it in half. The red headed heartless dodged Xaale's attack and then spat out a firey ball. Heading straight for Ampex.

    " Dodge it!" Xaale yelled. Ampex nodded, the firey ball got closer. By the time it got closer, there was a force. A force filled with no movement.

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    Austin turned around and jumped back, with his eyes wide open and body still.

    " Le- ah- Leon!?" Austin was shocked.

    Across from Austin, was Leon. A man from Hollow Bation. He looked the same. Although he grew an inch of hair.

    " What're you doing here?" quizically he asked, still he was shocked.

    Leon let out a chuckle and took out his sword. Resting it behind his back he took a quick scan of Austin. He's good. Leon said in his mind.

    " Let me ask you a question. What's your name and what're you doing here?" Leon pointed his index at the male.

    " Me? I'm Austin and I live here!" Austin placed his hand on his chest, leaning forward.

    " Tsk, Tsk. I mean what are you doing here? Fighting in a place like this?" Leon said, narrowing his eyes.

    " Well, I fought before. And, heartless were here- so I brushed them off to the garbage. Yeap." Austin smiled with a snicker.

    " Fighting is serious, you know that right?"
    " Ofcourse I do!"
    " No you don't."
    " Yeah- I do."
    " Fine."

    Austin looked around and found something. Something was laying on the ground.A heartless or...an object?

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    Eden looked up the branch, staring at her enemy. From the looks of it, the branch looks like it's going to snap in half and break down.

    " ..." Eden rolled her eyes and shot her weapon out.

    " Flame arrow!" she yelled out, bursting, came five arrows with little bits of flame all over.

    The heartless jumped down from the tree, sending out leafs, shaped like kunai's. Eden dodge rolled and threw out a kunai. The kunai ran over, scratching the side of the heartless.

    " Well, seems you are quite to the level." the heartless struck his hand out to the sky. The cloud changed it's color from black to white.

    " Come out...heartless!" he demanded, falling from the sky were heartless. All of them were shadow heartless'. Theres so many! How can I fight all of them? Eden thought to her self. Her mind was mixed up, now stand many heartless'. She has no help but herself .

    " Scared now, are you?" the heartless laughed out loud, bursting to tears. Eden looked up and clenched her hand, she looked straight in to the heartless' eyes.

    " I'm not weak nor scared. Many to one, I'll defeat you." Eden muttered under her breath. Her hand glowed, in to a purple color. Inside her hand was magic.

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    To be continued.


    Sorry if it was short. Next week shall be the new chapter. Please leave a comment if you'd like to.
     
  6. Doukuro Chaser

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    Really nice!

    I love how this just catchs my interste.

    Can't wait for the next chapter ^-^
     
  7. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thankyou! Glad it catches your interest. Next chapter should be expected on Saturday in the afternoon or evening.


    Well, I don't feel any different. But my age though, I feel kind of special for this good day. Thankyou, right away I'll be typing chapter 4.
     
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    WARNING-CHEESY LINE FOUND IN DEMYX SCENE.
    Nah, Im joking.
    You seem around the same age as me, Mexony. W00T 13!
     
  9. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Not to ruin the day..but... there will be no new chapter today. Tomorrow the new chapter will be up because... I'm kind of slow on the typing. I'm sorry.
     
  10. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Sorry there wasn't a chapter yesterday, I seemed to be slacking off each week. So here we are, today we have two new joiners who will appear in this chapter. *scrolls* And thanks to Shades and Rexmildd for being my helpers:D *gives both pizza*

    Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth
    Chapter 4: Heartless appears..






    Jack glared at the talking heartless. The heartless’ personality was easy enough to read. Laziness.

    “ Not yet.†Jack took two steps back from the heartless. He opened both his hands, fingers separated.

    “ Ice sticks!†he commanded.

    There came strands of ice pieces heading straight for the heartless. The heartless jumped over the ice, but the magic followed.

    “ What the-“ The heartless’ chin was knocking up by the powerful magic, ice sticks. The heartless flew across from Jack, landing painfully on his back.

    “ Damn it!†the heartless cursed, pounding his fist against the ground.

    “ It’s not my fault that you’re weak.†Jack spat out, his index finger pointing directly at him. The heartless lowered his head and breathed deeply. He let out a cold chuckle.

    “ You humans make me laugh. Darkness is better then light. And yet you humans never accept that!†he mumbled under his breath.

    Jack cocked his head at the heartless, laying on the ground, weak. “ And why are bringing this up?†Jack asked, preparing his hand for the next move he was going to make.

    “ I’m bringing this up because… because it’s my duty. Us darkness needs to overwhelm the light. We need to take over the light. All light does it flow like a river. Us darkness speeds like a raindrop.â€


    “ You’re wrong. You just want to get rid of the light. You don’t even give a damn about the light. All you dumb heartless’ and enemies just care about your stupid darkness!†Jack yelled, his tightened his teeth together.


    “ That may be true-“

    “ May be? You mean it is true!†Jack interrupted. The heartless scoffed and continued.

    “ Whatever. Us darkness wants to accomplish something. You light take it away from us! Don’t give a s-.â€

    “ Wrong. What ever you guys try to accomplish, you end up hurting innocent people. I myself… am both!â€

    Jack jumped on to the heartless, digging his hand on the heartless.

    “ Firara!†flames bursts out from Jack’s hand, sending it over the heartless.

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    The heartless roared out in pain, watching it’s own leg fading away in ashes.

    “ See? There, that explains my attack.†Angel said to the heartless, pointing her weapon directly at her enemy.

    “ You dumb imbecile! What have you done!?†the heartless yelled loudly, glancing at his fading leg.

    Angel tsk’d the heartless and sighed. She put her weapon aside, so she could save it for later.

    “ What I’ve done was simple. I slashed your leg off. Now.. ha, you may not understand but I’m trying to get rid of you.†She said, walking around in a circle.

    “ Well you’re doing a good job-“

    “ Yes I am, and a good job at attacking you!†Angel swiped her weapon out, throwing it to the heartless. The heartless didn’t move but stared at his own leg. He’s distracted… that’s good. I can you ultimate lightning against him. He’ll shock like pen.

    Angel’s weapon reached it’s enemy, whamming it on the head. The heartless rolled on the ground from the strong attack. Angel’s precious weapon returned in her hand. Now, closing her eyes shut. Her weapon started to spin round and round in her hand. Her weapon caused a light effect to spark out. It’s ready!

    “ Ultimate Lightning!†she whispered, her eyes opened. Angel’s weapon brightened up, with a huge lightning popping out.

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    Bolting straight away came the lightning shocking the heartless as if it was in a camp fire. Marcus stood there , watching the heartless, electrified.

    “ You’re lucky.†Marcus lowered his head.

    “ You guys can come back to life easily, well us ha… we can’t. We only have one chance of living.†He finished.

    The heartless put his arms over himself, trying to protect itself from the lightning. It was like a static remaining on your finger. Marcus pointed his keyblade at the heartless. My next move, will be my last for this endless battle. The keyblade began to glow with red and blue. Forming in to the color purple.

    “ Surround!†he demanded, bit’s of sweat streamed down Marcus’ forehead. He was wasting a lot of energy. Soon his strength was going to burst.

    A pack of purple gooey stuff came out of Marcus’ keyblade. Slowly it raised itself up in to mid air. Marcus smirked, so far so good.

    “ Drop.†He said, focusing on the heartless. See you. The purple gooey stuff dropped down, landing on the heartless.

    The heartless was forced to lay down on the ground from the purple gooey. Slowly it was spreading itself allover the heartless. With that, the heartless started to fade in black ashes. Marcus made his keyblade disappear from his hand, his fingers were frozen, bits of white sparkles came out from Marcus’ keyblade. With it’s last bit of body, the heartless quickly disappeared, leaving the ground dented and dark.

    Marcus cringed, he slowly put his hand on his back. “ Ouch…†he can feel the pain on his back.

    “ Damn heartless smacked me hard.†He bit his lips, trying not to scream out the pain that was on his back. Half of Marcus’ back was bruised up in red and blue, leaving a huge lump on his back.

    “ I should start moving… can’t stay here forever.†Marcus said, taking his time. One foot at a time. Marcus didn’t want to feel any pain anymore. Well, at least for now.

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    Kirsty looked around. All she saw were the people, worried and curious about the human laying pale. Quickly she turned around and went back. Shoving the people out of the way.

    “ Excuse me!†Kirsty kept repeating. Trying to get the folks to move out the way.

    Finally, reaching the end of the crowd, Kirsty ran over to a corner to hide from the crowd and other people surrounding her. She placed her left hand firmly on the edge of a building, turning her whole body behind the wall. As if she was playing ring around the rosy with other teenagers.

    “ Appear.†She whispered, coming out quickly came a bright colorful light.

    Her keyblade popped out in to Kirsty’s hand, with the color of the rainbow flowing on the keyblade.

    “ Okay, I know that there’s a heartless lurking around here. But I can’t let anybody see me with this keyblade and if possible, the heartless.†Kirsty nodded to herself.

    Kirsty poked her head out the edge of the building. All she saw was the crowd, babbling off. Okay, now is my chance to make a move- huh? She cocked her head, her hand was tingling, and so was her keyblade.

    “ The heartless is somewhere here!†Kirsty gasped. More and more her hand and keyblade were tingling. The heartless must be getting closer!â€

    “ Bingo!†said a dark voice. Kirsty looked over her shoulder, she saw a huge blue heartless, with ten yellow creamy eyes on each arm.

    “ It was you! You’re the one who took that innocent person’s heart!†Kirsty yelled out to the heartless.

    “ Ha! That ‘innocent’ person you’re talking about surrendered his heart to me.†The heartless smirked. Kirsty went her fighting position.

    “ Liar, you went inside him and took all his light away and his heart!†Kirsty said, her hand was shaking.

    “ What’s the matter!? Why is your hand shaking- crash!†the heartless struck his arm out to the side.

    Kirsty’s body lifted off the ground, quickly her body went flying straight for the brick wall.

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    “ I don’t care what you heartless say, I want all you heartless out of this world!†Rinn said, turning around slashing some more heartless in halves.

    More heartless appeared, it was almost like an army. Rinn dropped to the ground and panted. She placed her hand over her chest, where her heart was located.

    “ I won’t let you guys take me heart. You have no right to take it away from me.†Rinn stared deeply at the heartless.

    “ Oh really?†said a voice. Rinn’s eyes widened, she was startled. The unknown heartless breath steamed on Rinn’s neck. Rinn slammed her weapon on the ground, making her whole body move a different location.

    The heartless followed, he grabbed Rinn by the hair, pulling her down to the ground. Rinn gritted her teeth trying to relieve the pain. The heartless but her front body flat on the ground. The heartless then placed his hand on Rinn’s back.

    “ No worries human. You won’t remember a thing.†He calmly said. Rinn struggled but other heartless strapped her down, forcing their hands to tighten. Rinn kept struggling, she wasn’t sure if her life was over yet. But it couldn’t end like this.

    Deeply, a black warp forced on Rinn’s back, The heartless slowly went inside Rinn’s body digging in to find her heart. Pure heart. The heartless dug in Rinn’s body, darkness was now spreading.

    Am I dead? No, I’m not.

    “ Well not yet.†Chuckled the unknown heartless.

    “ Get the hell out of body! I don’t need your darkness spreading all over me- ah!†Rinn screamed a pain was released on to her legs. Slowly making it’s way down to her feet.

    “ Ha, I guess you can feel the darkness curling up inside of you. Soon you’ll transform in to a heartless… or just die.â€

    “ I’m not going to die.â€

    “ Well, there is a chance. I could just burst your heart.â€

    “NO!â€

    The heartless jumped, with a frightful face. Rinn kicked her legs out sending the heartless off her. Slowly she stood up and looked at the heartless.

    “ Taking my heart is a crime, you… you-re just another heartless poorly searching for a heartless. Which you fail at!†Rinn said, bringing her weapon up.

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    The keyblade was like a golden color, it's chain had a head. A head of someone with big ears.

    " M-Mickey?" Sebax slowly blinked.

    Turning around, it was mickey. Mickey looked over his shoulder, staring at Sebax, taken out.

    " Here." Mickey said, he brought his left hand up, with a green sparkle popping out. It was potion. The green sparkles spirnkled allover Sebax, curing him.

    " T-Thanks!" Sebax perked up. The potion that he was given was elixir. Mickey nodded and turned to him.

    " Fight, we need to get rid of our opponent!" Mickey said. Sebax nodded, he pulled his weapon forward, directly it was pointing at their opponent.

    " Say Mickey... did you come to this world all by yourself?" Sebax asked, as he focused on his opponent.

    " No. Something happened, all the worlds population were disappearing."

    " What about the worlds?" Sebax asked.
    " They remained seated." Mickey answered.

    " Oh come on! Are you two dim-wits finished chatting!?" the heartless asked impatiently.

    Sebax looked at the heartless, he glared. Mickey stared at the heartless as if he had something hidden inside of him. The heartless growled, his hand curled up. With the heartless' yellow eyes, they turned in to red.

    " I want you to attack the heartless while I distract him!" Mickey whispered, beginning to run off to the side.

    Sebax nodded, he raised his keyblade up.
    " Disappear." he whispered softly. Sebax's body disappeared in white ashes. He was now invisible.

    " Hey!" Mickey called out to the heartless, sticking his tongue out. The heartless turned around to Mickey, disgusted by the immature behaviour.

    Now's my chance! Though Sebax. Sebax high jumped in to the air, above the heartless.

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    The female heartless groaned and looked at Zoe, cheering.

    " Don't you cheer yet sister, you still have to defeat me." said the heartless.

    Zoe changed her mood, she pointed her gun at the heartless. " Oh, but I know I will defeat you." Zoe said, pulled the trigger to a click. The heartless cocked her head.

    " You can't I'm invincible." she said, standing up on her feet.

    " No you're not. You're a heartless, you guys fade away in ashes. It'll be your loss..." Zoe whispered. Quickly she pulled the trigger back, with a bulllet sending itself out freely.

    " AH!" the female jumped in to the air. Again it were those bullet that followed the enemy.

    Zoe jumped in the air, again she pulled the bullet shooting the female heartless. Rappidly Zoe switched her gun, in to a transformation of a red one. It was a huge gun, red though. Bazooka could work well. Zoe placed her eye in the whole, to focus on her enemy. There she was, the female heartless, fleeing from the bullets. Zoe's index finger was placed on the trigger, any second she about to shoot.

    " Shoot." Zoe grinned, she pulled the trigger of the bazooka. The huge bullet came out, shooting the female heartless on the back.

    "No!" the female heartless kicked her feet in the air.

    " Too bad." Zoe said, making her weapon disappear. Smoke was flowing up in the air, from the shot.

    The female heartless was fading in to ashes.

    " You may have won-"
    " Won? I did already, just now." Zoe corrected.
    " Ugh, what ever." the female bit her lips. With the last piece of the heartless, she faded away.
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    As Jessica ran, she met a few more heartless. With the urge of taking her heart away. Jessica changed in to her fighting position, with her oblivion ready.

    " It's...nice to meet you guys again." Jessica narrowed her eyes.

    The heartless' jumped in the mid air, above Jessica they pointed their fingers at Jessica with a spark of red light coming out. Jessica looked up. She gasped, quickly, Jessica dodge rolled to the side. The heartless' landed firmly on the ground, from their size they almost looked like shadows but only three arms.

    " Magneta!" Jessica yelled out, with a white ball appearing. It surrounded the heartless, brining them together in a ball.

    Jessica chuckled for a short timing, she got them right she wanted them. If I burst them with lightning, they'll disappear but if more appear I should ignore them. After all my body's getting weak, my strenght is running out. I may not be able to defend. Jessica gulped, her eyes were lowering each minute. She was tired.

    "Lightning!" Jessica took her keyblade up in the air. The cloud formed into a ball, with a white light appearing. A yellow-ish white streak struck down, attacking the heartless. Because of the Magneta, the lightning was able to strike. Metal and Electricity= no. Jessica smiled. The heartless bursted in to a huge gush of ashes.

    " Oh man.." Jessica yawned, her arms fell they were weak. Jessica's oblivion dropped to the ground, disappearing.
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    " I cannot forgive the heartless for taking my parents away last year.'' said a male voice. He jumped over the river, using a boost.

    He slashed three heartless' with his keyblade. But this keyblade wasn't the same to the rest. Comparing, it's shape and looked was far from apart. His keyblade was made of water-shaped. On his keyblade were animals that lived in the ocean.

    " Bursting!" he commanded. A splash of water bursted out, causing the heartless' to fade and get wet. He controlled water.

    The male's name was Jordan. He's a fifteen year old teenager. Joran had brown spikey hair, dark- blue eyes and a blue t-shirt, matching his jeans.

    " Alright, it's time to take you heartless' out!" Jordan said, with a frown going through his face. He back flipped to the the heartless, with a globe of water appearing on his hand. He threw it on to the heartless.

    " Spike!" Jordan commanded. The globe of water, changed it's form into a spikey beach ball. The heartless' fell over, fading away in ashes.

    Jordan wiped his forehead, using the element water, he washed his face just to cool himself down. He sighed happily. There were no more heartless', just himself out in the woods. He sat down on the dirt and grass. His keyblade disappear in a liquid form. Jordan stared out to the river that he had jumped over a few minutes ago. It then brought an image to his head. An image of the ocean.

    " You guys were always by my side. But instead of my side you guys are on the top." he sighed. All over it had brought the memories of the loss of his parents.

    " If only I could bring you two back to life. Thing's would go back to normal."
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    Down in California there was was flame. A flame of destruction.

    " Blizzard, double!" Kitty commanded, a ball of ice came, out burning out the flames. Kitty grinned and jumped for joy.

    Kitty was female, a thirteen year-old teenager. Kitty had short brown hair with red streaks across, her hair was formed in to a pony-tail. She was kind of short, Kitty had a blue eyes. Kitty for jean capris and a red tank-top . What seemed to had stuck out the attention was that she had ears. Cat ears, poking out from her head.

    " Bang!" said a deep voice. Kitty turned around, she leaped over to the building, landing on it's roof.

    " Hey...I could get the hang of this!" she smiled, examining herself. The heartless huffed and stared up at the roof, where Kitty was located.

    " Better be careful, I don't want to make you fall." he teased. Kitty cocked her head, then smirked.

    " Are you going to take me to a shelter, or call the fire men?" she laughed to herself. The heartless sighed, he stomped on the ground.

    As Kitty laughed, she stopped. Right there the stomp that the heartless had made was like an earth quake.


    To be continued.



    Yeap, took me three hours to type this but it was fun:) Sorry it was short, please leave a comment if you'd like.
     
  11. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    THAT WAS AWESOME xD , i didn't that you started this sequel till yesterday ^^,all your chapter's were truly amazing xD ,teaming up people is the best way to make a story interesting,plus there's more action in this one ,well done mexony ^^


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  12. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks sora is cute! And by putting you in the same group as your oneesama Valerie? By oneesama, what do you mean? ( Sorry if it sounded rude...)


    I'm setting groups, on Wednesday I'll begin typing group four's chapter.


    Thanks Danny. Omar is going to appear in the coming up chapter.

    Ehe, by looking in my notebook, there is a total of 34 characters.
     
  13. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Oneesama is a respectful way to sy "Big Sister" in japanese. We're not related, but we're close enough to think of ourselves as sisters. And besides, She's older then me. And don't worry, I'm not offended, you wanted to know, and I told you :)
     
  14. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Okay XD are you posting a goodbye thread? You'll see me there >=D

    No I am not a stalker


    So anyway, can't wait for the next chapter Mex. I'm going to be at my mom's if the date is still for when it is, and I might not get to read it till a few days later XD my mom doesn't want me on her computer anymore after she got a virus when I was there. Damn coincidences.

    So anyway, take your time.​
     
  15. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thankyou, CreatorOftheUncreatd. :)



    Em...not to break stuff apart but there will be no chapter today, but Sunday there will. Sorry for postponing it. As for chapter six it won't appear for next week, since school's approaching, I need to focus for just one week and adjust. Sorry for the news I given out...*feels guilty*
     
  16. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Yeah a new chapter up today!!
     
  17. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I'm back with the new chapter. Sorry for postponing the chapter to Sunday, I was lazy and tired of some complaints. So yeah, my apologies. Anyways, here is the new chapter and 1,000 views already. Thanks for viewing the thread KHRtE.

    Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth
    Chapter 5: Far HB.



    Muxene landed on the ground, dirtying her shoes.

    “ Just got these today…†Muxene mumbled under her breath, she looked up ahead of her trail. Just plains pine tree’s and bushes.

    “ Oh well.†She grinned, holding her books in her hand she walked along the trail.


    As Muxene walked, the trail turned darker for some reason. Perhaps it was the heartless slowly approaching or maybe it just turned like that.

    “ No Muxene, it’s not really like that…†Hexia narrowed her eyes, looking at another direction. Muxene shrugged and then came to a complete stop.

    “ It’s not really like that?†she asked, Hexia nodded.

    “ I mean, it is a big deal for your shoes! Soon they’ll be ripped apart and who knows! Maybe we might walk over twigs and branches and you could get a splinter!†Hexia freaked out.

    Muxene laughed at Hexia, all talkative. Hexia glared at her dear friend and then laughed along. It was kind of funny, over reacting and thinking up ahead.

    “ Laughing much?†asked a deep robotic voice.

    Hexia and Muxene looked up. They saw a heartless, 5 foot tall and twenty inches long. Both females began to sweat from forehead to feet. The heartless had yellow bulgy eyes and metal arms . It’s chest has a heart mark with an X blocking it.

    “ Oh great, after fighting this many heartless back there…â€

    “ We have to fight one more. The big boss.†Muxene sarcastically said. Hexia released her weapon out. She stared at the heartless, it looked pretty powerful.

    “ I have to let you know. You two females don’t know nothing about Kingdom Hearts-“

    “ We’ve played the game.†Hexia said, tapping her index finger on her noggin.

    “ A game? Well, still… you two know nothing about Kingdom Hearts. I could tell you, but then that would give the surprise away.†He laughed.

    Hexia ran over to the heartless using the magic fire on to the enemy. Muxene followed, she ran behind, jumped in the air, spinning.

    “ Slam!†Muxene yelled out. Her body was still spinning but coming down. She was like a nail, drilled in to the wall. The heartless looked up, he felt some pain but then afterwards, he grabbed Muxene’s leg, throwing her in the air.

    “ Muxene-“

    “ Quiet child. Your friend won’t be harmed anymore. Heck there will be no harm.â€

    “ What do you mean!?†Hexia took a looked at her best friend laying on the ground, eyes closed.

    “ I mean that she’s dead.†He grinned.


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    A fifteen year old male, walked down the alley in the streets, lost and furious. He wore a black and red DC hoodie, ripped Hollister jeans and Etnies shoes. His hair was the shape as Riku’s except, black color. Down in California, is was beginning to get dark, perhaps it was going to rain.

    “ My feet are sore..†Kevin sighed. Kevin was his name. He came from another world, there in Earth. He came to seek for Maleficent. His world is gone, all his friends, hometown. It’s all gone. A year ago, when it all began… Kevin was sucked right in to the dark realm. He remained there for a year, he now returns but ends up on planet Earth.

    As Kevin walked a group of heartless’ appeared out from the ground. He gasped, quickly releasing his Keyblade: Acrossing two. Kevin jumped over the group, turning around he struck his keyblade out bringing the magic of darkness out. It warped out, shunning out some heartless.

    “ Hmm.. not bad..†Kevin said to himself. Kevin looked around, seeing more heartless appear. He double dodge the two heartless’ charging for him. Afterwards, threw his keyblade like a boomerang, making the two disappear.

    From the looks of it, there seemed to be no more but the Boss. The Boss was 8 feet tall, it’s body was colored green allover. Kevin looked at the heartless, he knew what his next move was going to be. Slowly he walked. Approaching the heartless slowly. The boss sniffed the air, it was sense of some sort of light wrapping around the boy.

    “ Double merge.†He clenched his fist. Four replica’s of Kevin appeared. One went to the back of the heartless, the second headed to the air, Kevin and the last replica stood together, forming a green ball.

    “ Charge!†he demanded, the one from the air came down, snapping the heartless’ head, the other came from behind knocking the heartless down. The last replica released out a strong green force fall. Landing on the heartless it exploded on to him. Right away is faded away. A weak boss is just a shadow.

    Kevin turned around, he heard a rattle from the roofs of the buildings. Kevin high jumped to the roof, finding a bum mooning him.

    “ Ha, Maleficent will be delighted to hear that I , Pete has planted all HB!†Pete laughed.

    “ Did you say… Maleficent?†Kevin walked closer to the dog.

    Pete stopped, his ears perked up, hearing the sound of a male’s voice coming from behind. He turned around and looked at Kevin.

    “ Yeah I said Maleficent now but out!†Pete said, brushing his hand in the air. Kevin shook his head, he walked up to Pete, smacking the back of his head.

    “ Where is she? And what’s HB?†Kevin asked.

    Pete grumbled and stood in front of the curious teen.

    “ Maleficent is out in Hollow Bation and HB stand for Heartless Bomb.†Pete answered quickly.

    “ And… HB does…what?†Kevin asked, smirking.

    “ It explodes after it’s set. Then they burst with millions of heartless flying out to Earth. It’s a perfect thing to do instead of summoning!†Pete grinned, rubbing his hand together. Quickly, Pete snapped his two fingers together, summoning seven shadows.

    Kevin steadied himself, he stood still. Waiting for a heartless to approach. Pete summoned some more heartless’, with that he took one heartless giving it something hidden. Kevin threw his keyblade out to the heartless, attacking them in a group, fading. Pete chuckled and gave a wave to Kevin, leaving him behind all by himself now.

    The teenager looked around, he bit his lips. Pete was gone and he didn’t received enough answers.


    ~~ ~~~ ~~~~

    “ Fool! You gave him out answers! But, anyways… since you’ve already blabbed half did you place it on him?â€

    “ Oh yes ma’m! A commanded a heartless to do the job for me.â€

    “ Truly, that was smart of you, but not smart enough.â€

    “Hmphâ€

    “ If he says a word about anything, hell receive the shocking of death… warning number one.â€


    An electric wave came up from the wrist band, shocking Kevin as if he was a metal pole standing in the rain. Kevin’s eyes widened as he felt the pain surrounding his body.

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    A wave of musical notes pounded through the air, hitting the heartless’ with the off tune. The heartless’ fell to the ground, flat. As more musical notes, they began to disappear in the darkness. Although more heartless’ appeared still coming at the male.

    “ Take this!†he said, whamming his fingers on to his weapon, notes printed themselves out in to mid air, popping in the off tune line. All heartless disappeared, now it was silent and lonely.

    The teenage male wiped bits of sweat drops off his forehead, he smiled.

    " I'm finally finished." he happily sighed.

    Looking around he saw nothing but the darkness, disappearing. The first thing to notice the teenager, was hsis acoustic guitar. There in his hands, firmly holding it still and properly. His name was Omar. Omar has red hair and blue eyes. Omar has a white open blouse, matching his short, they were brown. He wore a bandana on his forehead. Behind that bandana was a scar and it was permanent.

    " I'm here to fight the heartless and shine them off with light. After all, I did defeat five bosses all on my own!" he lightened up, with his eyes glowly.


    " How about me?" said a dark voice. Omar turned around, standing five steps away from him was a man in a purple cape with dark green hair.

    " Who're you?" he asked, raising one side of his eye brow.

    " I'm 67. Created by Maleficent." he said. By the looks of him, he seemed to have no emotion running through his fake blood.

    " 67? That's a number." Omar pointed out, staring down at 67.

    " I know. And it's not my choice to choose my name, it's my master. Now-" 67 raised his arm, appearing came a metal three branched band, wrapping around his whole left arm.


    He jumped in to the air, a dark warp came around the background, changing the background to a dark place. It was all covered in purple and black.

    Omar couldn't see a thing, he looked around trying to get a view. He released his keyblade, charming melodies and acoustic. When suddenly, a warm air came up Omar's neck.

    " I'm here to eliminate you, Omar." he whispered.

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    " Ah!" the heartless screamed out in pain.

    Kathy walked up to the heartless, striking her oathkeeper to the side hitting the heartless.

    " You're not human!" the heartless yelled out.

    Kathy smirked and put her hand on her hip.

    " And what makes you think that I'm not human, huh?" Kathy asked, loading her hand for an up coming attack.

    " Why are you fighting me huh? Humans don't fight but fret and regret. What your doing to risking your life- you don't understand much feelings do you? I bet you never felt anything, with that stupid attitude-"

    Kathy, smacked the heartless across the face. Her eyes were filled with liquid, she held her breath for a moment. Both stared at eachother.

    " You don't understand my pain. I lost my mom! No one will understand. When you lose someone, a part of you breaks up. Your heart tries to keep you together, but you're just ripping yourself apart!" Kathy yelled with a struggled voice.

    The heartless looked away and then put his hand to the ground.

    "Rumble." he commanded.

    The ground shook like an earthquake. Kathy fell on to her bum, still the ground rumbled.

    " We used to have feelings, but darkness took over us-"

    "You had a chance. A chance to fight." Kathy said, throwing her oathkeeper on the heartless' back.
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    His name was Jerry, but most called him 'J'. It was much like a nickname. He had black spikey hair, blue eyes. The clothings he wore was a black t-shirt, grey army pants and black shoes.

    Down in NewYork's main, there was Jerry with his weapon.His Katana's. Swiftly, he slashed all the heartless' that his weapon met with.

    " Take that darkness." he said, burning one heartless in to failing ashes.

    Most heartless disappeared. All that was left was the boss. It was somewhere lurking around the buildings or streets.

    " Come on out. So I can fight you and win this damn battle." Jerry said, looking over his shoulder.

    " Heh, you're pretty brave to say that stuff." said the heartless appearing from the one of the buildings.

    " Pretty brave. I am. Now let's fight." Jerry said, calmly standing. He steadied his weapon, moving in to his position to attack the heartless.

    " If I win, you'll fade and never come back. And if I lose-"
    "You join us." the heartless grinned.
    " Yeah, your way." he grinned also.

    Jerry jumped to the other side. Quickly he ran over to the heartless beating his back with one hit. The heartless whined abit but stopped. He looked over at Jerry. The heartless scanned his body, glowing in his hand was a fire ball.

    " Use that to early and there's a possible chance of you dieing. Fire doesn't affect me." the heartless said.

    " tsk, tsk... I don't really mind that. I'm doing my own way of work." he said, throwing the fire ball on to one of the buildings in the main.
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    To be continued.


    Sorry it was short. And then again sorry for postponing. To break out the news, there will not be a new chapter next week, because school's approaching so yeah. Please comment if you'd like. Thankyou for reading:)
     
  18. Doukuro Chaser

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    I love how you make it funny while being serious at the same time.

    Nice work as always!~
     
  19. overload Traverse Town Homebody

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    wow that's pretty good ( i mean the story)

    can't wait till the next part
     
  20. Destined Working for WDW

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    Ven: stop hassling Mexony. if she decides that your character will appear in a chapter or is mentioned, she'll do it. I think it is unfair of you to demand to be included in every chapter while there are loads of us who have been patiently waiting a few chapters to hear of the grand adventures of our characters.

    Chill.