Kingdom Hearts made up story

Name:Joxss

Weapon/ability: sky (can make storms)

Base story: part of organization a evil girl that likes to make jokes

Nature:evil

Good bad/bad guy:bad guy

Heartless/Nobodie: nobody

Where u wanna appear: one of the begining chapters

Bonus character?:N/A

I'll post the first chapter right now.

Here's the first chapter but it's more like a prologue cuz it's when Roxas finds Sora.

 

so.... sora is cute are we still freinds???

 

Name: Dexen
Weapon/ability: She controls water, but uses alchemy, so she has gloves that she uses for alchemy
Base story: She's a nobody who is kind and gentle. She has been watching Sora for some time now, waiting to talk to him. She fights on the side of light, always fighting those who fight along the darkness.
Nature: Warm hearted, Light
Good bad/bad guy: Good
Heartless/Nobody: Nobody
Where u wanna appear: Pride Lands
Appearence: She has blond hair and brown eyes. She wears and Orgy XIII coat, but it's white. In the Pride Lands, she has blond fur, and has a water droplet mark on her back.

We are ^-^

 

so what do u want to do????

 

Heck, I don't know.

 

I'm baaaaaack!!! lol, sry bout the delay, I've been away on holiday with no ways of getting 2 a decsent computer, then when I came home I had a cold and man my Xmas has rly been a downer (well, apart from all the Kh stuff that I got he, he...) ANYWAY, here's da next chapter:



Chapter 12

Saving a furious friend





''Are you absolutely, deffinitley 100% positive that you guys have NO idea where she went?'' Sora said, frantically pacing the room. ''We're positive. It's kinda hard to see through a blinding flash of light you know!'' Donald said. ''Sora, relax, she can't be THAT far away.'' Goofy said. ''Indeed, that is actually the case.'' They all heard someone say. ''Yen Sid? Is that you?'' Sora said, recognizing the old magician's voice. There was a puff of blue smoke and then Yen Sid appeared. ''Master Yen Sid! It's an honer.'' Donald said, he and Goofy bowing. ''There's no time for that! Do YOU know where Kirsty is?'' Sora said. Yen Sid pointed at the two double doors that lead outside. ''C'mon guys! Thanks a lot!'' Sora said, not waiting for anyone else and going for the doors. He pushed the double doors and ran out into the garden area, looking around frantically for his lost companian. ''So, at last he appears. ''The Keyblade Master'' '' Sora heard someone say. ''Where are you? Show yourself!'' He yelled. A portal of darkness opened in front of him and a person that was dressed from head to foot by a black cloak stepped out from it, the portal closing behind him/her. ''Who are you!?'' Sora said, instincs telling him to summon the Keyblade. ''Careful, we wouldn't want someone to get hurt now would we.'' The person said, laughing and dragging a very furious and frustrated Kirsty through another portal of darkness and into the garden. ''Kirsty!'' Sora said. ''SORA! I'M GONNA KILL YOU, YA HEAR ME? IF YOU DON'T GET ME OUT OF THIS NOW!'' She screamed at him, hitting the arm that was holding her in frustration. ''Comin''' Sora said, charging with his Keyblade at the cloaked person. ''Now, now. Someone doesn't have a temper control.'' The cloaked person said, summoning a weapon that looked like some kind of spiky wheel and blocking Sora's attack. ''You look like a smart boy, so I'll make a deal with you. I'll hand her over, if you tell me where I might find a little someone that I think you just might remember.'' He/she said, knocking the Keyblade out of Sora's hands. ''Who?'' Sora asked, giving in. ''Naminé ring any bells?'' Kirsty suddenly stopped hitting the person's arm and stared at Sora, shaking her head. ''Nope, doesn't ring a bell. Who is she?'' Sora said, noticing what Kirsty was trying to say. ''Hmmmm.... Did you know that you were a terrible liar?'' The cloaked person said. ''FOR GOD SAKES, YOU BIG JERK! HE SAID HE DOESN'T KNOW HER, NOW LET ME GO!'' Kirsty screamed, continuing to hit the cloaked person's arm, harder than before. ''Tch, fine. You'll get away with not telling me this time, but next time I won't be so easily fooled. See you later, Sora.'' The cloaked person said, letting go of Kirsty and vanashing into another portal of darkness. ''You ok?'' Sora said, rushing over to her. ''SORA! WHAT POSESSED YOU TO GO THROUGH THAT PORTAL AND LEAVE US ALL BEHIND?! NOW LOOK WHAT'S HAPPENED! THE ONLY PERSON THAT CAN ACTUALLY BE OF SOME HELP TO US IS NOW RUNNING FOR HER LIFE! I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY, KEY-BOY, 'CAUSE ONCE AGAIN, YOU'VE MESSED THINGS UP!'' Kirsty screamed at him. ''S-sorry. I didn't know the portal was gonna cause an explosion. We can always go and find Naminé and give her a hand.'' Sora reassured her. Kirsty blinked at him. ''YOU'VE STILL NOT GOT IT THROUGH THAT THICK SKULL OF YOURS, HAVE YOU? THEY'RE NOT AFTER NAMINÉ, THEY'RE AFTER KAIRI!'' Kirsty screamed. ''Whoa, whoa, whoa. Hang on a minute, rewind. Did you just say Kairi?'' Sora said, hands up. ''YES, I SAID KAIRI. GET IT NOW?!''



Sorry it's kinda short but to b honest, It's 6a.m here and I'm still not quite awake yet, so if it sucked, I do apologize. Oh, and the person in the black cloak is a character that joined, not one of the Org. 13.

 

My Character

Name: Eliot

Weapon: Zantetsuken Sword and Silver Dagger. Ability: Can use fire, generates unknown power from the moon.

Base story: Lost his memory and now just wonders round aimlessly, helping those in need. The only thing he remembers was protecting someone else

Nature: Confused, quite caring, calm

Good bad/bad guy: Good

Heartless/Nobodie (only if ur a bad guy)

Where u wanna appear: Anywhere

 

Welcome aboard!

 

Glad to help

 

I almost forgot I posted here. When is Dexen gonna show?

 

Pride lands, where u wanted 2. Or do u wanna appear sooner?

 

Oops, I forgot. I guess I could appear in The Olympus Coliseum instead.

 

Well, tis entirely up 2 u. I rly don't mind if u change ur mind :)

 

Arigato. I appreciate you for adding my nobody to your story.

 

What about Ty? Is he still stuck underneath some electronics console somewhere trying to piece together a network connection? Just curious

 

EEP! I LOOK SO COOL!! sry, no name or anything, good work!

 

Name: Hyô

Weapon/ability: Senbon (needles), has telekinises and power over ice

Base story: childhood rival of Leon, his family was killed by Sephiroth

Nature: cold (literally), quiet

Good bad/bad guy: good

Where u wanna appear: Hallow Bastion

 

Just a cameo appearence

Name: Sebax
Bad Guy or Good Guy, you decied, but mostly at this point, Bad.
A Near Human Nobody in a Black Jaket Cloak.
Weapon: Never uses one but it is in fact, a sort of blade shaped like a musical note (A hint perhaps to what he is in my own Fan-fiction?)

All I want is a few cameo appearences, like in one of Sora's dreams. But most assuredly on a balcony after Xigbars defeated, if he's defeated in this version. You could just write, "Sora squints his eyes to see a far off dark cloaked figure, standing off a balcony, then he's alerted by Kairi's voice." Or something like that. It doesn't really matter if you do this or not, it will just tie two good Fan-Fictions together a bit. And build up a little bit of readers for both of us.

 

NEXT PART!! I wanna see more! AFTER I ALMOST KILLED YOU! MWHAHAH!!!!... o, sry, lol, lost my cool, BUT THE COOL IS BACK! :D MORE!!! you too Destinied, put the next chapter on YOUR facficition!

 

Where is the next part? I want to read more.