Kingdom Hearts made up story

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Sorikai, Nov 12, 2007.

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Which should I go 2 first?

Poll closed Nov 16, 2007.
  1. Beast's castle

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  2. Land of Dragons

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  1. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thnx guyz, I'm glad u like it.
     
  2. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    You're welcome!!
     
  3. code-y1994 Moogle Assistant

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    Name: Kurix

    Weapon/ability: Keyblade. (Lurebreaker) Ability: Great agility and speed. Shadow Blasts. Power Absorption.

    Base story: An Unknown Nobody, trying to destroy organization 13. He acts like sora.

    Nature: Calm, but can get mad very easily. Seems a lot like sora.

    Good bad/bad guy: Bad/ Good

    Heartless/Nobody: Nobody

    Where u wanna appear: Quick Glances At some worlds, and meets sora at The World That Never Was

    Bonus character?: N/A

    Location of weapon: http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j30/animechick2/The_LureBreaker_Keyblade.jpg


    Appearance: Looks Kinda like Sora but he wears clothes that look like their on fire, wears pointy shoes, and has black hair.


    Gender: Male

    Picture of Character: http://a250.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/100/l_64e696717236327306ac5f093ec112a9.jpg
     
  4. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    hey that's realy cool! good job!
     
  5. dyyor Destiny Islands Resident

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    um, do you plan on crediting that keyblade?
    its called Last Judgement and it was originally made by somebody on deviantart.com
     
  6. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Looks rly kewl.
     
  7. micketymike Twilight Town Denizen

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    pretty good
     
  8. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey guyz, I'm back again Wid chap 11 (I'm on a role now! lol)





    Chapter 11

    Too many things to take in



    ''Your friends are fine, but there was an explosion in the room behind the portal, causing it to shut down. They are stuck in that room. How many were you acompanied by?'' Yen Sid said. ''Three.'' Sora said, sensing he was about to be told something bad. ''There are only two stuck in the room.'' Yen Sid said. ''What?! Who's missing?'' Sora demanded. ''I am not sure.'' ''I've got to go down there!'' Sora said, jumping up from his chair and going for the door. ''Wait! There are too many Heartless.'' Yen Sid said before Sora had turned the handle. ''I don't care, I've got to-'' ''I'll go with you.'' Yen Sid said, getting up from his chair. Sora looked him up and down. He looked a bit too old to be able to fight but... Sora nodded anyway and opened the door. He summoned the Keyblade and walked inside, waiting to be attacked at any moment. Yen Sid came up beside him. All of a sudden, about ten Soldiers appeared in front of them and didn't waste time in attacking Sora and Yen Sid. Sora swiped one out of the way just as it jumped at him. THe Soldier went flying into a wall, but didn't dissapear. As Sora went to finish it of, he saw Yen Sid wave his hand out of the corner of his eye. Just when he looked around, all of the Heartless dissapeared. ''They shall not disturb us again.'' He said. ''How did you do that?'' Sora said, sounding a little too amazed for his liking. ''You act as if you've never seen magic before.'' Yen Sid said. ''I have, just not like yours.'' Sora said, thinking about how Donald used magic in his attacks but never being able to do what Yen Sid just did. They both opened the door on the other side of the room and went down the staircase and through to the next room. In the next room, Sora waited for Heartless to show up, but to his surprise, he found he could walk all the way to the other side of the room without being disturbed. They both went through the last door and out onto the staircase where Sora had came from. ''Well, this is it,I guess.'' Sora said. Yen Sid nodded and walked down the steps, with Sora following him. Yen sid reached out with his hand and seem to feel around thin air, looking for something. ''Could you open it for me, Sora?'' Yen Sid said. ''Open what?'''Sora said, looking around for some kind of door but only seeing the endless twists and turns of endles staircases. ''The portal. Just hold out your Keyblade and-'' ''I know HOW to open it, nut where is it?'' Sora said. ''Right in front of you. It's invisible for security reasons.'' Yen Sid said. ''Oooohh. I knew that.'' Sora said. He held out his Keyblade and waited for the usual beam of light to appear out of the end of it. It shot the light at thin air and a Keyhole appeared. They both heard a clunk that seemed to come from nowhere. To Sora's amazment, the portal appeared in frot of them. ''Well, I'll leave you here, Sora. When you are ready, come back to where we met.'' Yen Sid said. ''Ok. Thanks for helping me.'' Sora said. Sora went through the portal and appeared in the entrance hall where he had left Kirsty, Donald and Goofy. ''Sora!'' Donald said, running up the steps and throwing himself on top of Sora, knocking him over. ''Glad to see you too Donald,but could you get off me please?'' Sora said, trying to get up. ''Oh, sorry.'' Donald said, picking himself up. Sora got up and the tumbled down the stairs and landed in front of Goofy. ''Hey there, Sora.You ok?'' Goofy said. ''Sort of.'' Sora muttered as he picked himself up again. He looked around to see who was missing. ''Donald, Goofy?'' ''Yeah?'' Came their replies. ''Where's Kirsty?''



    Oh gees, Sora! How could you lose ME!!!??? *wacks him round the head* lol hope u liked it!
     
  9. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    That was good.
     
  10. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey I think this person wants to join.
     
  11. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Oh yeah. lol sry, didnt notice. Welcome aboard, Kurix! Thnx 4 reminding me Luna.
     
  12. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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  13. sorarulz Traverse Town Homebody

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    <- what about me? i feel all left out and alone. *sits alone in corner*
     
  14. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    u sure u dont wanna appear sooner than the last chapter? Tis gonna b a long while. I could add u in sooner if u want
     
  15. sorarulz Traverse Town Homebody

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    Ok, if you don't mind next chapter, but I won't say my name, and I have an Organization coat on, with the hood pulled up, BUT, you can see a glimpse of my hair, and my purple eyes!!
     
  16. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Knew you'd break! Nah, jk. Don't worry, I'd b lonely 2. I'll try and add u in next chapter. If not this one, next k?
     
  17. sorarulz Traverse Town Homebody

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    :ninja: KK!

    btw, can i by any chance use this idea in my own story, pwease! I gives credits to you!!

    oh, you are Offline. K then, just gonna go make one. *clicks SUBMIT* *makes new topic* Tee Hee, Full credits to you!
     
  18. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    my I c it plz??????
     
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