Kingdom Hearts made up story

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Which should I go 2 first?

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  1. Demyxfan Moogle Assistant

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    Name: Faith
    Weapon/abilite: Has two things that look like Axel's weapons only smaler and has one bent blade and Faith is telipathic.
    Base story: Faith had once a heart like Roxas but her heart faded into darkness as she was neglected by evryone.
    Nature: Quiet, fast and clam.
    Good/bad: Bad
    Heartless/Nobody: Nobody
    Where you want to appear: after the 4 exit the tower doors.
    Bonus character: N/A
     
  2. sorarulz Traverse Town Homebody

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    Name: Maxy (my age is 13)
    Ability:can control earth and wind.
    Base Story: When I was 12, i was made a nobody
    Nature: Quiet, uncontrollable temper, and sad looking all the time.
    Good/ bad guy: A little of both.
    Where I wanna appear: VERY LAST CHAPTER, BUT BUILD UP HINTS ABOUT ME IN THE STORY.
    Ok, some extra info:
    Hair color: hot pink
    Eye Color: Purple
    Nicknames: Terra (earth) Ven (wind) Aqua (for my uncontrollable water drinking)
     
  3. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    U mean Yen Sid's tower?
     
  4. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    what happends next?
     
  5. Demyxfan Moogle Assistant

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    Yes, Yen Sid's tower
     
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    bueller....bueller....bueller...anything new coming?
     
  7. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey guyz, sry I haven't written anything in a while, u no how skewl can b *rolls eyes* Anyway, here's da next chapter.



    Chapter 9

    Yen Sid

    ''Whoa, this place is HUGE!'' Sora said, looking around the tower's main entrance in wonder. ''Well it IS a ginormous tower out in the middle of nowhere, I expect they didn't have to waste time on planning permission.'' Kirsty said, looking around as well, not really looking all that impressed. ''Hey, what's that?'' Goofy said, pointing at something on the staircase. It looked like some kind of purple smoke. ''Dunno, looks kind of like a portal.'' Donald said, starting to walk up the stairs. ''Hang on a minute Donald, wait for us.'' Sora said, going after him. Donald stuck one of his hands out to touch the smoke. His hand dissapeared as soon as he did. ''Wack?!'' He said, taking his hand out again. ''Where do you think it leads?'' Kirsty said, joining Sora and Donald on the stairs. ''One way to find out.'' Sora said, jumping into the smoke. Just before he dissapeared, he could have sworn he had heard a bomb going off behind him. On the other side, he found himself on another staircase. At the top there was a door with a star on the top of it. He thought it best to go back to the other side of the portal to see what had happened. Just as he was about to walk through though, it dissapeared. ''Great, now I'm stuck here.'' He said. He turned around and went up the stairs, heading for the door. He opened it and went into a room that looked a little like a combat arena. On each of the walls there was a big star-shaped frame was hanging, glowing every now and again. To add to Sora's misfortunes, about ten Heartless appeared and surrounded him. ''As if my day couldn't get any worse.'' Sora said, summoning the Keyblade. He slashed one in front of him and it vanished, but another Heartless, a Soldier, took it's place. ''This is impossible to do on my own.'' He said. Sora wasn't usually the type of guy to run away from a fight but he made an exception. He slahed the Soldier and headed for the next door that had a flashing arrow pointing forwards on it. He pushed it open. On the other side, he slammed it shut to keep the Heartless inside. Then he looked around to see where he was. He was on another staircase with yet ANOTHER door at the top, this time with a moon on it. Sora ran up the stairs, pushed the door open and went in a room that was almost exactly the same as the one he had just left, only this time it had moon-shapes on the walls. On the other side of the room there was a door with an arrow pointing forwards. Sora ran for it, ignoring the Heartless that appeared behind him. ''Don't you guys get it? You'll NEVER win!'' He said on the other side of the room. He pushed the door open and went into another room that was a change of scenary. Sora slammed the door shut behind him and looked around the room he had just entered. There was several star shped and moon shaped windows behind a desk that had a chair that seemed to belong to someone very tall. The walls were lined with shelves and bookcases, all of which were crammed full with books. Sora walked around the room, looking to see whether there was anyone there. The room was empty. On the the right side of the room there were big double doors. Sora went to open it. Just as he was turning the handle, a voice behind him said ''Wait a minute.'' Sora stopped dead. He slowly looked around to see where the voice had come from. Behind the desk, there was an old man that looked a bit like a magician was sat on the tall chair that was once empty. ''Um, were you here before?'' Sora said awkwardly. The man shook his head. ''You must be Yen Sid.'' Sora said, remembering what Goofy had told him. The man nodded, his tall blue hat went forward over his eyes a bit but it didn't seem to bother him. ''So, you are Sora.'' Yen Sid said. Sora nodded. ''So, have you seen the king yet?'' Again, Sora nodded, not really sure what to say. If this person was as powerful as Goofy had described him, he wanted to be careful. ''Were you not acompanied by others?'' Yen Sid said. ''Oh, man! I completely forgot! Do you know where my friends are?'' Sora said franticaly. Yen Sid nodded. ''Take a seat aminute first.'' He said. Sora looked around the room, looking for a chair to sit on. He saw Yen Sid rolled his eyes. Yen Sid waved his hand over the other side of the desk and a chair appeared. Sora walked towards it cautiously as if it was going to turn into a Heartless and attack him. ''It is quite safe.'' Yen Sid said, seeming to read his mind. Sora scratched the back of his head, embarrassed. He sat down and waited for Yen Sid's explination to start.

    That's all for today folks! MAYBE I'll post another one 2morrow. I'm not sure wether I got the moon and star decorations in the right order but... Ah well, hope u liked it anyway!
     
  8. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey can i help you out?
     
  9. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    You're, uh... Alex, right? (I have like a 30 sec memorie so dont mind me lol :))What do u mean by help me out exactly?
     
  10. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Help you with your story. If its okay with you.
     
  11. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Well I guess so. What do you want to do?
     
  12. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Name: Anna
    Weapon/abilitie (if u don't want either just put N/A next to it) ninja stars and bow and arrows
    Base story: she is looking for her little brother how wonderd into a portal that led him to Holow bastion
    Nature: loves wight magic
    Good bad/bad guy: good
    Heartless/Nobodie (only if ur a bad guy)
    Where u wanna appear: holow bastion
    Bonus character?: Erin (her little brother

    apearonce(her and Erin):
    http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/....jpg&searchTerm=anime little boy&pageOffset=4

    http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/....jpg&searchTerm=anime brown girl&pageOffset=3
     
  13. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    With the people who joined.
     
  14. Destined Working for WDW

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    maybe you could organize a who's who so far
     
  15. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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  16. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    sure, that sounds good. Could u do dat? Lol, I just realized, Luna, u and I are in the same location :)
     
  17. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Okay i'll do that and also there are many people who joined. So be careful.
     
  18. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hey guyz. I'm back again with another chapter. Sry about the delay, I'm a rly busy person. What with the band ai- Wait a sec, i can't say anything about that yet! :) lol 4get I ever said anything



    Chapter 10
    Meanwhile....



    Meanwhile, Alex eas running down the corridor of a newly built Gummi Ship station somwhere between Twilight Town and Hollow Bastion. she was chasing a tiny hooded figure, who had apparently asked to see her. She had chased him all the way here. ''Wait up! You there!'' She called after him. The hooded figure turned round. ''Who are you?'' The hooded figure said, not looking at Alex. ''I'm Alex. Somebody told me you wanted to see me.'' The tiny figure thought for a moment. ''Oh yes. I must ask you something. Do you know who Riku is?'' He whispered, looking around to make sure nobody was listening. Alex shook her head. ''He's sora's friend. Do you know Sora?'' ''Yeah, I know Sora. He and his friends showed up at my town.'' ''Well, I'd like you to find Sora and stick with him for a while. We need to find him.'' ''Why is it so important?'' ''Because, they both have something very important to do. And they have to do it together.'' ''Who are you, anyway?'' ''I'm King Mickey. Nice to meet you. Now, I'd better catch my Gummi Ship before it goes without me. You get on the next Gummi Ship to Hollow Bastion.'' The king said, pointing to a nearby Gummi Ship. ''Ok. Will I see you there?'' Alex said. ''No, I'm going to look somewhere else. When you get to Hollow Bastion, Look for a group called The Hollow Bastion Restoration Comitee. You can hang out there for a while. Just say you're looking for Sora. They're bound to show up there sooner or later.'' The king said. After that, the king turned and ran to another Gummi Ship. Alex waved him off and then went to catch her Gummi Ship to Hollow Bastion.

    After the horribbly bumpy ride, Alex jumped off the Gummi ship while it was still in mid air and landed neatly in a bustling square that was lined with different kinds of shops. She ran up the steps and down another set off steps to a back alley. She almost jumped out of her skin when some kind of hollogram appeared in front of her, beeped and then dissapeared again. ''Who's there?'' She said, summoning her two Keyblades. ''Just about to ask you the same question.'' Said a voice uboave her. Alex looked up and saw a girl standing on top of a high platform, dressed like some kind of ninja. ''I'm Alex. You wouldn't be able to tell me where I could find the Hollow Bastion restoration comitee, would you?'' Alex said. ''Wel, I DO happen to be a member so, if I couldn't tell you, I'd probably have to quit. I'm Yuffie by the way.'' Yuffie said, jumping off the platform and landing in front of Alex. ''Follow me.'' She said, leading Alex down the alley way and into some kind of square that was filled with houses. Yuffie went inside one of them and beckoned Alex to follow. ''This is it?'' alex said. ''Yep. This is our base!'' Yuffie said. Alex walked in the house. It was kind of messy, what with books lying on the floor all over the place, bed unmade... Stuff you might see in a messy kid's bedroom. In front of her, a man was sat at a computer that seemed highly out of place in a house like this. ''So, did you come to sign up?'' Yuffie asked her. ''No, I'm looking for someone.'' Alex said. ''Who might that be?'' Said a voice that came from behind the opened door. The door closed to reveil the man that was standing behind it. ''Alex, this is Leon.'' Yuffie said. ''Nice to meet you. You wouldn't happen to know where Sora is, would you?'' Alex said. ''As a matter of fact, we know him, but we haven't seen him for over a year now. You can hang out here if you'd like to wait and see if he shows up if you want. But I wouldn't get your hopes up. He's a busyy guy.'' Leon said. ''Thanks. I really appreciate it.'' Alex said.



    Sry it's so short but like I said, I'm a busy person. Hope you liked it anyway.
     
  19. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Petty cool. You are vert good at this.
     
  20. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    I like it!!