Kingdom Hearts III

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Kingdom Hearts 3- Is it a good story?

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  1. John Clay Rice Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Chap.1 Kings Letter


    "Sora, Riku!" Kairi says as she runs up with her two best friends as Sora asks
    "What's up?" Kairi caught her breath and says "look." As she has a letter "From the King?" Sora took the letter from the bottle and it says

    "Dear Sora, Kairi and Riku.
    Sorry to bother you on Vacation but there's big trouble brewin.' Pete and Maleficent are back and somehow they survived at Organization XIII's headquarters. And they have plans to destroy us all so meet me at Twlight Town where Master Yen Sid lives and bring Kairi so she'll be safe. Donald and Goofy will pick you in a Gummy Ship in a couple days.

    Sign King Mickey

    "Dang does that old hag and her idiotic cat ever give up?" asks Riku. Sora says "I don't think so but we gotta wait for the Gummi ship and it's a good thing it's summer and our parents understand while we're gone." "I can't believe they believe our story." "Me too." Kairi asks them "So I can go?" Sora says "Yeah Why Not?" Since you're turning to be a really good fighter." Then Sora sees a Gummi Ship and sees whose it is. Donald and Goofy came outside and Sora yelled "Donald, Goofy!" "Sora!" they both excliamed. "The King is at Twilight Town and wants us to get our butts there Right Now!!" Said Donald. Then Riku says "What are you waiting for let's go.


    Tell me what do think about that so far? There will be worlds such as Toy Story, POTC DMC and AWE(At World's end in a later chapter) Emperor's New Groove, Spider-Man Shrek and orginal worlds like Aladdin, Halloween Town, Radiant Garden possibly Jungle Book, Mario, Sonic and many more There may be a few worlds I mentioned might not be here. That's it for now and give me ideas on the Bald guy's name.

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    This belongs in the creativity corner, not art and graphics...
    i'll pm a mod to move it for you.
     
  3. John Clay Rice Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Can I move it there by not rewriting it? I just got here this past week.
     
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    when something is moved you dont have to rewrite it.it just gets MOVED to the proper place.
     
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    Chap.2 Yen Sid

    The Gang went into the Gummi Ship and on the way to Twilight Town and Sora sat with Kairi in the Piolet seat and Sora just stared on the floor and Kairi asks "Sora what's wrong?" "I'm just wondering what that Nobody Xigbar said at the Nobodies Stronghold 'You don't look like you're half the hero the others were' I mean were there other key bearers besides me you Riku and the King?" Kairi says "I don't know but don't worry even if there were they're still not great as you." Sora gave her a smile and says "Gee thanks. Hey We're here at Twilight Town." Then they saw 3 kids and Sora, Kairi Donald and Goofy reconized those kids. "Hayner Pence Olette." They exclaimed. "Sora Donald Goofy Kairi!" says Hayner. "You're all right. Did you show that jerk whose boss?" (meaning Axel)
    Sora saddens and said "Yes I did." Donald interuppted "Sora we gotta go the King's waiting." "Yeah see Ya guys!" "Later Sora!" Said Pence. "Be Careful." Ollete said. Then they went to Train Station and saw Old Yen Sid and Riku says "So this is Yen Sid's Tower?" "Yep!" Says Sora. Goofy then said "The King's up there!" Let's Go!!! Then all of a sudden they saw the King and Master Yen Sid and Yen Sid says "Hello Sora Donald and Goofy. So this must be Kairi and Riku." "Yep that's us!" "Good. Then let's contuiue. As the King told you those fools Pete and Maleficent are back by setting new plans to send Heartless to different worlds but there's also something more dangerous and it involves the Keyblade War." "Keyblade War?" asked Sora. "Yep and I was part of it." says The King. Tell us You're Majesty." said Donald. "Very Well." says the King. I know it proably sucks. But it'll get better or if you like it good.

    Chapt. 3 Keyblade War
    King Mickey sat on a chair and told them the story. "Well were do I begin? A long time ago I knew some 3 fellows two's are boys named Ven and Terra. Terra reminds me of Riku and Ven reminds me of you Sora. Anyway there was a threat that there was an old man who I can't remember what's his name and he was a bigger threat than Xehanort's Heartless and Xemnas combined and Ven Aqua and Terra got some Keyblades and was trying to stop the Old Man from creating Kingdom Hearts. He then cloned himself and then was attacking Ven then Aqua tried to use magic to protect Ven then the old man grabbed Ven's Knight suit and froze him then the Old Man created Kingdom Hearts and bring darkness to all worlds. Luckily I stopped him and banished him to antother dimension far from Pete but it's been so long that I can't remember. But I have this feeling that he's returned and trying to destroy the Keybearers that means me you Sora Riku and Kairi. So We're gonna split up to see if we stop not only Pete and Maleficent but that old man so Sora you Donald and Goofy and Kairi go together and find a way to go the Sands of time." Goofy then asked "Gawersh You're Majesty what's the "Sands of Time?" "That's where the Keyblade War got started." "What 'bout you and Riku?" "We're gonna try to find a way by going to Maleficent's castle and asks if she know anything." Yen Sid then added on something by saying "Good Luck Sora Donald Goofy and Kairi. Everyone is counting on you!" "Okay so you guys ready to go?" "Yes Sora Lets get going!" says Kairi. "Alright first stop Holl- Er Radiant Garden."

    Author's Note Whaddya think so far? do you like it? And if you don't it will get better I promise.
     
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    Chapt. 4 Radiant Garden

    It was a peaceful day at the Radiant Garden as Sora Donald , Goofy and Kairi looked at the Villain's Vale and Kairi asked "I thought this was Hollow Bastion." Sora then said "Oh yeah everyone forgot about the town's true name and ever since we helped Tron defeat the MCP and now they remember. "Oh so where's Leon and the gang?" Donald said "Proably in Merlin's house and I wonder how's Cloud?" Sora gasped "Cloud? I wonder if he defeated Sepiroth?" "I hope so the his darkness dissappear." said Goofy. "Let's find out." Sora added as they knock the door to Merlin's house and opened Yuffie and Screamed "Sora! Donald! Goofy! Kairi?" Kairi nodded. "Oh well nice to see you again. Come on in." Then they saw Leon Cid, Yuffie amd Aerith so Sora asks Is Cloud back?" asked Sora. "No he still hasn't defeated Sepioroth." Aerith said sadly."Oh well what's going on?" Leon then said "Radiant Garden is being invaded by Heartless again." "Again?" Screamed Donald. "Yeah so you dudes will help us?" Asked Cid. "Yeah and you know about a bald guy who controls darkness and part of the Keyblade War?" Leon gasped "It must be Vadius the seeker of darkness he was part of the reason that Ansem er Xehanort is possesed by darkness." "He's the reason for Xehanort?" Sora asked. Leon nodded "We don't know but what we do know is that he created Kingdom Hearts and possessed it with darkness and created Heartless so he's the Reason the Heartless came. "So if he's destroyed for good then so's the Heartless?" Cid said "I think so but he's so strong that he could destroy any Keybearer." "Yeah I am." A voice added and than a bald man came out of nowhere and laughed evilly. "Vadius!" hissed Sora. "That's Right Sora." Said Vadius with a deep voice. "How do know his name?" asked Donald with an angry voice. "You fool I've been studying about you ever since I Got out of my prison but once you're out of the way Kingdom Hearts and the Worlds will be mine but first once I find a way to defeat you for now be well!" Vadius laughed evilly then he dissappeared. "Oh no we gotta get going because other worlds are calling." Sora said. Leon then added "Be careful guys Vadius is tough and won't be destroyed easily. "Thanks
    Leon. See ya soon. As the Radiant Garden people waved goodbye as the gang traveled to a new world.



    Which world shall I go first? And like I said it will be better.
     
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    Chapt. 5 Agrabah

    The gang enter Agrabah to see their good friend Aladdin and Jasmine. Then On their way was some guards and said "Who are you?" "Um I'm Sora. This is Donald and Goofy and Kairi we came to see Aladdin." "Hah they're in a wedding." Wedding? You mean Aladdin and Jasmine are getting married." The Guard said "Yes but if you don't have an invitation you're not going." "Oh yes they are." Said a voice it was.... "Genie?" "Sora Donald Goofy welcome back to Agrabah and whose this lovely young lady?" Kairi blushed and said "I'm Kairi." "Nice to meet you now you guys want to go see Al? They all nodded. They all went to see Aladdin and then Genie yelled "Hey kid You're not gonna be late for you're wedding are you?" "Hold on Genie." "Aladdin!!" Sora yelled. "Sora! Donald! Goofy!" "Hey Aladdin congrats on getting married." says Goofy. "Thanks Goofy." He then notices Kairi and asks Sora "Who's this Sora? You're girlfriend?" Sora blushed and said "That's Kairi and she's not my girlfriend." Then everybody laughed except for Sora and Kairi and then Sora what Aladdin's hand and asks "Hey Al, what's that? "Oh this belonged to my father." "You're father... is he coming?" "No he died a long time ago." Sora gave him a sad look and said "I'm sorry about that." "That's okay I never knew him and if I did I'd be ready for this. I mean I don't know about families. Guys what I'm no good at it." Kairi then said "I'm sure that you will be. You're a good friend to Sora. And you'll be a great husband and dad." Aladdin said "Thanks Kairi." Genie then exclaimed "Now come on it's you're wedding day Al and Sora and friends How about Wedding clothes." Then Genie snapped his fingers and gave Aladdin a Turbin and some fine looking robes. He gave Sora the same and Donald had a tux and so did Goofy. Then Sora looked at Kairi and gasped at her. She had a beautiful dress. Then Genie yelled "Come On It's you're wedding day.



    I will do next later. But for now tell me what you think and this is based from Aladdin and King of Theives.
     
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    Chapt. 6 Agrabah part 2

    Author's note This is the second of 4 or 5 parts of Agrabah.


    Meanwhile far from the palace a man with a hood and a cape and a hand for a symbol was looking with 39 other men. Then a another man came with bronze knuckles and asks the other man "May I give the signal Cassime?" Cassime smiled "Yes Salluk Pretty Soon the Oracle will be mine." Meanwhile at the wedding Sora became Aladdin's best man for helping him and Jasmine together. Kairi then came to Jasmine's room to get to know her and she became maid of honor. Then the wedding started and Jasmine went up to the isle and then the Sultan came brings her to Aladdin and Says "I knew this day would come and..." "Oh Father I love you." Then Aladdin and Jasmine was getting ready to kiss. Then Salluk used his knuckles to punch the elephant's butt. Then their was a vibration. "Uh-Oh I thought the earth wasn't supposed to move until the honeymoon's other. Then he sees Elephant and yells "Stampede!" Then Sora Donald Goofy and Kairi wield their weapons to stop the stampede then they were confronted by some men. Then the guards were getting ready to wield their weapons then. Sora used his Keyblade to attack one Ninja guy. Donald was using his mage to attack with magic. Then Salluk used his brass knuckles to attack the guards and their clothes came off. "They fight like demons." says the fat guard. "Worse then demons these are the 40 theives!" "Really? I only counted 39." says Genie. Then Aladdin sees Cassime. with a weird object and attacks him. "Can I see you're invitation?" "Stay out of my way boy and you won't get killed!" Then they were fighting with the object and then were stopped by an elephant. Then Cassime escaped without the object along the 40 theives escaped and Cassime whispered "I'll see you agian boy."


    That's it for right now. I'll write some more later Until then God bless.
     
  9. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    Chapt. 7 Agrabah part 3

    The Wedding was ruined then the Sultan cried "Oh no the wedding and my palace is ruined." The Genie popped out and said "No problem Father of the Bride I'll fix everything in a jiff!" "Thank you Genie I'm very sorry Jasmine. Daughter." Jasmine was gone with Aladdin. "What were they after the gifts?" asked Jasmine. "I don't know but this is what the King of Thieves wanted." "But why would the King of Thieves want this stuff?" Asked Iago in an annoying voice. "You're question is mine to answer!" The Oracle revealed to a hologram of a woman. "The King of Thieves wanted to ask me about the Ultmante Treasure." "Did someone say Treasure?" Asked Iago. "Where is it?" "You have asked a question. Iago groaned. Jasmine then added "Aladdin and me wants to know what our future is." "I know what my future is, you but my past is a drag. My Mom died when I was a kid and I never knew my father." "Then I can help you answer you're question about you're past." said the woman. "I don't think you help me my past isn't one question it's a thousand. " Ah but you want to know about the werabouts of you're father." "My father?" Than it shows a picture of Aladdin's father. "My father's alive then where is he?" The Woman pointed follow the trail of the 40 thieves your father is trapped over there. Aladdin then turned to Sora and asked "Sora my father's alive can you guys help me find him?" "Sure Aladdin. What are friends for?" said Sora.
     
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    Chapt. 8 Agrabah part 4

    Sora Donald Goofy, Aladdin, Abu and Iago flew on the Magic Carpet to pursue the 40 thieves and then they see they can't go through the river. "Well we got them outnumbered." says Aladdin. "They are 40 theives and we got you the monkey Sora Donald and Goofy and me. Wait don't count me." sqawked Iago. Then the King of Theives raised his hand and said "Open Sesame!" then the river split open and then The theives was getting ready to their headquarters. Then the Carpet flew right behind them unoticed. then when they got up from carpet, Sora was amazed by the looks of it. Then they were walking and they saw Aladdin's father and Salluk. Salluk was screaming "We could not the find the Hand Cassim!" "Cassime my father?" asked Aladdin. "I know it's out their Salluk we just need more time." says Cassime. Then he dropped the dagger and Cassime picked it up."Ah you have no time. Cassmie." Then Aladdin jumped on Salluk and he yelled "Run, I'm Aladdin you're my father!" Cassime gasped. Then Salluk got up and tried to kill Aladdin "I don't about you're father boy you and he will join you're mother and Ancestors." "Let him go the boy is my son. I gave this to my wife and newborn son before she passed away and Aladdin you have grown up. Then Sora came and Said "We're his friends I'm Sora." "And I'm Donald." "I'm Goofy." Then Salluk said they're tresspassers kill them!" Yelled Salluk. "Wait show us some mercy please." said Sora. "Yes Cassime Mercy would be so like you. Then Cassime was thinking an idea and said "Kill them." Then Salluk aimed but was stopped by Salluk. "Wait Nah. "What is it man?" "The boy and his friends could face the challenge." They all agreed. Then they went to a battle arena to face Salluk. Sora pulled the Keyblade and Cassime gasped when he saw it and thought "that must be his son. He looks like him too. Then Salluk attacked then Donald used Bliizzard and Goofy used Tornado and knocksmash. Sora was bashing him with the Keyblade and they fought near a cliff when Aladdin and Salluk fought then they were trying to get up and then Salluk tried to grab Aladdin's hand but slipped and then Sora helped Aladdin. Then they saw Cassime and said "You killed Salluk and must join the 40 thieves."


    Author's Note. Well what do you think? Aladdin's dad knew Sora's dad. My next chapter might be about Riku and Mickey.
     
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    Chapt. 9 Agrabah pat 5

    Author's Note: This chapter will start with Kairi and Jasmine then Aladdin's dad tells him about he and Sora's dad.

    Meanwhile at the Palace in Jasmine's room Kairi and Jasmine were waiting for the guys to come home with Aladdin's dad. Jasmie then asked Kairi "So are you and Sora a couple yet?" Kairi then blushed "No. But I know he likes me. Maybe even loves me but he's too shy. to tell me. " "Then you must tell him. You don't have too right now. But tell him after you save the worlds if you want to." says Jasmine. "All Right I will. Thanks Jasmine" says Kairi. Meanwhile at the 40 thieves stronghold. Cassime brought Aladdin Sora Donald and Goofy to his secret place. "The reason I didn't come back because you and your mother, because I wanted to find some gold to give us a good life." "But we never wanted gold. We wanted you Dad." "Yeah my dad was their for me before he died." Said Sora sadly. "What was your father's name?" asked Cassime"Ven." "You look like him." everyone gasped. "So you knew Sora's father?" asked Donald. "Yes I did. He was so adventurous and kind and funny. He also helped me and your mother when he came to this world." Sora was shocked Why didn't King Mickey say that? Then Cassime said "Anyway I was looking for this. The Hand of Midas. "It's a myth." said Aladdin. "It's not a myth, son. Look at that Pirate ship, it's made of gold." "Look Dad please come to my wedding it would mean so much to me. It'll mean that much to Jasmine." said Aladdin. Then Goofy said "Cassime I'm a father too and I know what's it like to lose your loved one. But you still have your son like I have Max. "Goofy has a son?" he asked Donald. "Yeah but he's in college where there's no Heartless." Then Goofy said "I would be their for my son when he says "I do." And then Cassime cried and said "All Right I'll come to your wedding. Son." Than Aladdin said "Thanks Dad. I love you." "I love you too Son." Then Aladdin said to Sora and the gang. "Thanks guys."

    Authors Note I know this chapter sucks but it'll get better only two more chapters and we're outta Agrabah. So goodbye for now.
     
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    Chapter 10 Agrabah part 6

    The next day the gang along with Cassime went on to Agrabah. Then the Palace was fixed. "Man the Genie sure fixed the Palace in time." said Donald. "You have a genie? Did you use your 3 wishes?" asked Cassime. "Oh boy don't even go there." said Iago. Then the Genie popped up and exclaimed "Al! Sora! You're back and whose this." "Genie meet my dad." "Nice to meet you. Al's dad. Now I just want ask you something." "What?" "Chicken or sea-bast or a Big Mac."(I love McDonalds) 3 hours later they hung out. Then Sora was sitting next to Kairi and was about to tell her how he feels about her but then the guards have Aladdin's father arrested. "What's the meaning of this?"Asked the Sultan. "We caught this guy trying to steal this." He was holding the Oracle. Everyone gasped. "Very well then take him away." Later that night Aladdin was groaning "I can't believe it. My father hasn't changed one bit." "I know Aladdin but there's proably darkness in his heart." "Right Genie I need my fathers clothes. "Sure Al but why the criminal look?" "Because tonight he's going to make the biggest escape in his life. Outta mine." Meanwhile Salluk somehow survived the fall killing a shark. "So got beaten by a punked kid and two idiots eh?" said a voice. Then Salluk saw who it was. "My name is Pete and I can help you destroy this punked kid. "Hmmm I like you. Pete the name's Sulluk." Meanwhile at the Dungeon Cassime was looking for a way outta the cell. When the door opened and it was Aladdin. "I'm gonna get you outta here." Cassime smiled, Then Aladdin disguised as the King of Thieves was seen by the guards.
    "The King of Thieves has escaped." Then they were chasing Aladdin and then he fell and his mask fell off. "Well well if it isn't the prince of theives." Then he got hit by the head by Cassime. "Come on let's get outta here." Then Aladdin saw the palace. "I'm going back." said Aladdin. "But Aladdin you can't you proably go to jail. "I'm sorry but I won't backed down on Jasmine and become a Heartless." Iago said "But Al you won't become a Heartless because Jafar's dead." "Maybe but Heartless come out of nowhere. First you take this back." Aladdin threw his dagger. And his father was shocked and angry. "Aladdin you have dishonored me." Then Cassime and Iago with the Oracle when back to the 40 theives hideout yelling "I'm home." Then the 40 theives has gotten out with torches and Salluk along with Pete. "Welcome back. " said Salluk.
     
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    Chapt. 11 Agrabah part 7

    Author's Note: This is last chapter.... in Agrabah.

    Iago and Cassime was tied up in a boat while Pete and Salluk was asking the oracle where the Oracle where the ultmante treasure was. She pointed to follow her. Meanwhile Iago got a chance to get out and said to Cassime "I'll get help." Then he was flying to the palace. There at the Palace. The Sultan said "Aladdin you have done a terrible thing by letting your but since you had the guts to come back. You're free to go." "But your majesty he let go a prisoner." Said the guard. "Look he may did that. But he did it cause he loves his father. Plus we got a wedding to accomphlish." Then the gang saw Iago catching his breath, Sora asks "Iago? Where's Aladdin's dad." "Salluk the guy Al beat. He's alive and he's got Cassime along that big fat guy that tried to free Jafar." "It's Pete!" Sora gasped. "You don't mean the Heartless are back?" said Jasmine. "Yeah. Show us the way."said Aladdin Then Sora turned to Kairi "Kairi you better stay here." "Oh no you are not letting me behind this time. Got it Key boy?" Sora nodded being afraid not to mess with Kairi. Then Sora Donald Goofy Kairi, Aladdin and Jasmine flew on Carpet to rescue Cassime. Then they saw a boat following it. Aladdin gasped when he saw the Giant Turtle. "The Vanshing Isle is on the Giant Turtle. I have a plan." Then Sora Donald and Goofy was in the way of the 40 thieves with Cassime. Then Kairi used her Keyblade and butt-kicked over 20 men. When the other men saw it they ran. Then Aladdin attacked Cassime with two hands then he untied Cassime. "You came back." "I could'nt let them kill you. Now let's get that treasure of yours." "Wait for us, Aladdin." said Sora as he, Donald and Goofy followed Aladdin and Cassime. Meanwhile Salluk and Pete was following them while summoning Heartless. Then They saw the statue of the Oracle and was amazed. They climbed near it then Aladdin Sora Donald and Goofy jumped on it and Aladdin picked it up. "Careful son don't touch the hand only the handle then threw it to Cassime and laughed "I finally found the Hand of Midas. Then he Let the hand touch the ground and turned it into gold. Then Salluk came and attacked Aladdin with Pete. Then Salluk says "Give us the Hand or you're son and his friends die. Then Sora said "Never cause we're gonna finish you." Then it was mighty battle as Salliuk with the Heartless attacked with dark powers and then Sora and Aladdin used their limit attack then Salluk got off the Heartless and then Cassime yelled "You want the Hand of Midas Salluk. Take it," He Threw it then Salluk caughted it with his hand on the hand. "The Hand of Midas is mine, And also the life of those brats. They all stared. "What are you staring at?" Asked Salluk. His body was turning gold as he screams until frozen. then he fell into the water. Then Aladdin and the gang heard a rumbling and Donald yelled "Lets get outta here. Pete escaped with a dark portal. Then The gang got out in time and then Aladdin said "After all these years you found your treasured. Cassime smiled and said "No son you're my treasure. The Hand of Midas is nothing. You are." Then he threw the hand on the 40 theives boat while turning gold but sinking. Then Aladdin said "Let's go we have unfininshed business to attend to. Later at the wedding Aladdin and Jasime said they're I dos and then kissed as they are now offoiciallly married. Then Sora thought "Will Kairi and I ever get married?" Then Aladdin came to them and said "Sora Donald Goofy, Kairi thank you for everything." "Thanks Aladdin. We better get going in order to save the world. "All right Sora. You and Kairi play nice." Joked Aladdin. Sora blushed and said "Hey shut up Al." Then they hugged Aladdin and Jasmine and went over to the next world.
     
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    Sora's dream

    Meanwhile Sora went to sleep while Donald was driving the Gummi Ship. While Sora is sleeping he's dreaming about something. About Radiant Garden and there he sees Ansem the Wise, a woman with red hair and blue eyes. She looked familiar. Then he sees a little girl playing with them. "Honey I am so glad I took this day off just to be with you and our daughter Kairi." Sora gasp "Ansem the Wise is Kairi's dad?" "Yes I know Ansem." Then the door opened and it was Xehanort. He asked Ansem if he can open the door to Kingdom Hearts. Ansem said "No Xehanort. For the millionith time you can't." Xehanort looked mad and said "Very well I have no choice but to open my heart to darkness!!!!!" Then he transformed into his Heartless form. "Xehanort what's this Nonsense?" Xehanort smirked "I am not Xehanort. I am Ansem." Ansem got angry and said "I am Ansem you fool." "Not anymore." He laughed evilly and smacked Ansem while his wife was holding Kairi. Then he smacked Kairi's mom killing her. "Rose!!!!" yelled Ansem. Then Xehanort opened a dark portal and said "I shall banish you to the realm of Darkness." Then he pushed Ansem into the dark portal until it was gone. "Daddy!" Yelled Kairi. Then he put his hand on Kairi then she fainted. "Hmmm.... This is the Princess of heart. She must know who the Key bearer is. I will send her there. Then when the Key bearer is old enough. I will send Heartless down there. I don't know who he is, but I do know he lives in Destiny Islands.


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    Then Sora got up and was panting. Kairi was worried and asked "Sora what's wrong?" He looked at her and decided not to tell her his dream. Meanwhile Donald was flying when all of a sudden the Gummi started to break. "Uh-Oh The Controls won't work the engine's out we're gonna crash!!!!!!" They all screamed as they landed in grass and as soon as they got out they saw a sign that said "Welcome to Richmond Kentucky" when all of a sudden they see a teenage boy who's same age as Sora. "Oh my gosh are you guys all right?" He asked. Sora looked at him and said "Yeah." "What happenend?" He get ready to say then he saw a Heartless. then he attacked it. Then he said "I'm Sora." Donald said "I'm Donald." Goofy chuckled and said "Aykuck I'm Goofy." Then Kairi said "My name is Kairi." But for some reason Kairi felt like she seen him before. "My name is David." "What is this place David?" "You are in my hometown, Richmond Kentucky. I just got back from school. It's the last day for me." "Really? Ours ended a week ago and on good timing." Said Kairi. "Whaddya mean good timing?" Asked David. "Well..." Sora said just as soon as Donald said "The Gummi ship is fixed." "So you guys are leaving?" David asked without questioning what is it or why. "Yeah." Then all of a sudden Sora sees a huge black as David's world looks like was being taken over by the Heartless." Sora said "Uh-Oh then he whispered to Donald "We better take David with us." Donald protested "But Sora we would be Meddling unless he's a Keybearer. Then all of a sudden something strange happend to David as he now wields the Keyblade. "A Keyblade? I Thought it was a myth." "No it's real and we better get out of here if you wanna learn more." "But what about my parents?" Sora looked at him and said "They'll be fine once we save this world now come on I'll explain when we get in." They all got in the Gummi ship as they got a call from King Mickey and told him to come back to Radiant Garden.
     
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    Hi, I'm new here. I think you're doing good and I can just imagine the new adventure. Keep it up. But I'm not so sure about the idea having Shrek in, I mean Sora and the others already met the disney version of Pinocchio in KH1 and meeting the Dreamworks version will be like going to a different dimension instead of different worlds in the same dimension.
     
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    Other than what I said earlier, keep up the good work

    P.S. I'm a big fan of most Disney Films and got some videos and some dvds of those films
     
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    Hi, just to let you know, I got The Jungle Book on Dvd a couple of weeks ago. Mabye it'll give you some ideas