Kingdom Hearts III Chapter I

My Kingdom Hearts III story.
Hope you like it!!

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Hope you liked it!!!

 

whoa! cliffhanger! Nice job! and I didn't know Sora cussed....:D

 

lol. I'll try and get chapter II up today.
Thanks for the support!!

 

I like it so far. Keep it up.

 

No keyblade?!?!?!?? WAT!!!!?????!!! I luv it so far! YAY but y r there heartless/nobodies in the castle if there is the cornerstone of light? AND MICKEY CAN DO MAGIC!?!?!?!? HOW COOL IS THAT!!!!!!!!!!:)

 

It will all get explained...

 

whats Soul Eater?i like it
it's cool^_^

 

KXR I'll beat you And thanks:D :D :D

 

aawww man

your welcome

 

Thanks :D :D :D I appreciate your kindness.:)

 

whats Soul Eater?
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It was Riku's weapon in KHI.... in KHII he uses his keyblade The Way To Dawn

 

coool

This is cool!
But as critique, It will be cool if we have more detail! I mean, you have this awesome story in your mind, but we can't see the full detail! I mean, it's good, but What was sora feeling at that moment? Stuff like that!

Keep it up! I want to read more!

 

i like it keep it up! ^_^

 

OKay, I'm about to put chapter II up!!

 

woah that was surprisingly awesome. it sounds like something that would really happen in the next game. total keyblade shortage.

 

Guys, Chapter II is up!!