Kingdom hearts: Destiny Adventures

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  1. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    this takes place directly after kingdom hearts 2. it'll tell stories of when sora, riku, and kairi visit other worlds. i will also be adding original worlds. here's chapter one.

    CHAPTER 1​
    As Sora, Riku, and Kairi read the letter, they didn’t know what to expect. Riku decided to read it out loud.

    Dear Sora, Riku, and Kairi.
    Thank you for all of your help in saving the world. I wish that I could repay in anyway. So I decided to do this. First, I have bought you guys a house on Destiny Island. It’s complete with everything you need to live. Also, I have sent you a gummi ship so you can visit your friends in other worlds. I also wish to grant you guys’ one wish. So when you are ready, come and visit us at Disney Castle. I’m really proud of you guys. Oh, and Sora. Donald and Goofy say “hiâ€. Come as soon as possible.

    King Mickey mouse​
    P.S. you can now call me Mickey.

    “Wow! One wish.†Kairi said amazed.

    “So what are we waiting for?†Sora said happily.

    “Next stop, Disney Castle!†Yelled Riku.

    The gang packed up and saw their new gummi ship. It was furbished with cool stuff like a DVD player, and a navigation device. They took their positions and were on their way.

    WHILE THEY’RE ON THEIR WAY, LET’S CHEAK ON THE GANG AT TWILIGHT TOWN.​

    please rate and commet. also pm me any ideas.
     
  2. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    This is real good! I want to ge that gummi ship...:p
     
  3. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    yeah. it's nice. working on chapter 2. almost done.
     
  4. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    you wanna be a gummi ship... well im kairi - if its a rpg
     
  5. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    no, it's not an rpg, sorry.

    here's chapter 2

    CHAPTER 2

    Back in Twilight town, the king felt bad, so he game Roxas and Namine real hearts. The gang was so happy to have their old friend back. Roxas spent most of his time with his girlfriend. Pence was feeling weird though. The thing is, he had feelings for Olette. He didn’t know what to say to her. He took a deep breath, and opened his mouth. Nothing came out though. Olette wondered what was wrong. He blushed from being so nervous. He started to run off.

    Hayner however was out on the town. He saw this new girl. She looked so beautiful. She had brown hair with blue eyes. He decided to be a gentleman for once and introduce himself.

    “Hello. You must be new here. My name is Hayner.” He told her.

    “Hello.” She said blushing, “My name is Carla”

    “Need me to show you around.”

    “Thank you.” She said, grabbing his hand.

    Pence was hiding in the usual spot. It wasn’t a good place to hide though, because Olette found him. He was sitting on the couch that he and she usually sit on. She sat down right next to him.

    “Hey,” Olette started “What happened. Why’d you freeze up?”

    “We’ll, I wanted to tell you something.” Pence said nervously.

    “What is it?” She asked. “Please tell me.”

    “We’ll” Pence started, “I was thinking. Roxas and Namine are both together, and well, that seems nice. Having someone in your life like that, someone to care about you like that.”

    Olette didn’t know what to say. She was speechless. She didn’t know what to say. She was wondering if she had the same feelings for him too. She only had one thing to do. She leaned in and kissed him on the cheek. “Don’t say anymore.” She said, “I feel the same way.” She decided to give it a chance. She was ready to get in a relation ship with him. They knew each other for a long time. She knew dating was the next step. She knew in her heart that it felt right.

    NOW LET’S CHEAK BACK WITH OUR KEYBLADERS!!!

    sorry, but i just simply love that pairing.
     
  6. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    AWWW! thats nice too! :D and I like it too due to the love parings. XP I'm a sucker for Romance :p
     
  7. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    me too. something in the game just made me think that.

    here's chapter 3

    CHAPTER 3


    As they landed, Kairi couldn’t believe how big it is. She was excited to see the king and had nothing to do with saving the world. Sora was also exited. He could see his friends Donald and Goofy. As they walked into the castle, they were greeted by Chip and Dale. They told them to follow them into the chamber. They ran as fast as they could.

    “Your majesty!” Chip said, “Our guests have arrived.”

    As they entered, they saw a mouse sitting on his thrown. He was wearing his crown and holding his Keyblade.

    “Hello sir.” The three said.

    “Hello my friends.” Said the mouse king. “I’d like you two to meet my wife, Minnie.”

    Minnie was shy to meet them. She came out from behind the chair. She saw the tall white hair boy and pink hair girl. She knew she was safe. She of course remembered Sora. She ran to the three heroes.

    “Hello.” She said, “You must be Riku, and Kairi. I am so glad to meet you. I’d like to personally thank you for bringing Mickey back to me.”

    “No problem.” Kairi said.

    “Now, I wish to give you your wishes. So what will they be.”

    Riku stepped forward. “I would like a misgauge chair for me in the gummi ship.”

    “Wish granted.” The mouse king said, “What would you like Kairi?”

    “I would like a Kitty please sir.” She asked the mouse king.

    “Granted.” The mouse king said.

    A second later, a small pink cat ran into the thrown chamber. It ran to Kairi’s legs. She picked it up and smiled. “You’re next Sora.”

    “I already have my wish your majesty”

    “Oh.” The king looked confused. “And what is that Sora?”

    “To be with my love, Kairi.” He walked over to her.

    She blushed “Oh, Sora. You say the sweetest things.”

    As they were about to kiss, Donald and Goofy ran in and tackled him. He was mad at them, but then again, he saw his friends again. He decided to laugh along with him. Kairi offered to help him up. They decided to go and check out things in the worlds. Their first stop, Twilight Town.

    CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 4
     
  8. Dawn King's Apprentice

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    This is cool but there needs to be a few spelling corrections.
    Wrong: Sora was also exited. He could see his friends Donald and Goofy.
    Right: Sora was also excited. He could see his friends Donald and Goofy.
    That is just one example of many errors I see.
     
  9. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    it's not like it's going to be published or anything (if it was, that would be so cool).
     
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    I always put my writing in fanfic for fun and for people to look at.
     
  11. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    me too. now enjoy chapter 4

    CHAPTER 4

    Pence and Olette were sitting in the usual spot talking when they heard a weird sound. They ran outside and saw a weird ship. Olette was scared and didn’t know what to do. Hayner and Carla came from the sandlot to see what’s up. They also saw the big ship. When the door came down, they didn’t know what to expect. Then they saw a little of pink hair. Finally they saw Kairi and new it was their friends from Destiny Island. Olette ran over to hug Kairi. They were glad that she was alright.

    “Hey guys.” Sora said coming down from the ship.

    “Hey Sora.” Hayner said, walking over. “This is a new girl. Her name is Carla.”

    “Hello.” Carla said shyly. Hayner forgot to tell about him and his adventures when they were talking.

    “Hello Carla. That’s Riku, and that’s Kairi.” Said Sora introducing his friends. “So what’s been happening?”

    Kairi noticed that Olette and Pence were holding hands. She smiled at them and tapped Sora on the shoulder to show him. They spent an entire afternoon catching up on lost times. They also told some of their past adventures. Carla was now not scared, but felt safe that she had very strong friends.

    They decided to spend the night in Twilight Town. When they woke up the next day, they were well rested.

    “So, what do you want to do today?” Asked Riku, while drinking his coffee.

    “Let’s go see the worlds!” Kairi said, almost spilling her Orange Juice, “I never got to see them.”

    “Okay.” Sora said smiling while eating his cereal.

    The gang finished their breakfast and entered their ship. They talked about going to many places. Finally they decided to go see the Pride Lands. They took off into the wide space and go see their friends Simba, Nala, and their new baby.
     
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    ooohh! yay! Friends meet finally....*gets all excited for next chapter*
     
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    Simba: Sora, Riku, Kairi, this is my young daughter, Kiara. XD Man, if you're going to do something like that, make sure you don't get mix up with the names!
     
  14. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    i know thier daughther's name already. i'm a fan of the series. i also know about kovu.
     
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    woot! Go Kovu!!! :D
     
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    I know, I'm trying to point out don't get mixed up with
    Kairi
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    Kiara.
    Since Kovu looks like slightly older than her, are you gonna have Zira run away with Kovu in her mouth or somethin' like that?
     
  17. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    i'm not hosting alot of lk2 in this first part of the pride lands. this is just a fun story, and hopefully no fighting. don't worry i'll add kovu into the next time they visit the prde lands.
     
  18. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    yay! Kovu's my fave- especially when he was still a cub
     
  19. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    i kinda look like kovu in a way.
    finally i finished chapter 5. it's longet though.

    CHAPTER 5

    They gang landed in the Oasis where they first found Simba in that world. When Kairi and Riku looked at themselves in their Lion form, they didn’t know what to expect. Sora decided to show them how to walk on their own four feet. When they finished, Timon and Pumba came from the Jungle. They were carrying handfuls of bugs and grubs of sort. They were the white and pink lions and started to panic. Then the saw Sora in the backround, and the calmed down a little bit.

    “Hey Sora.” Pumba said walking to him.

    “Hey Pumba.” Soar said smiling, “These are my friends Riku and Kairi. What exactly are you doing?”

    “We’re collecting our lunch and dinner.” Timon said while getting on top of Riku’s head. “We eat all kinds of grubs. Simba, while growing up, loved the stuff, so we decided to get some and bring some to him.”

    “Ew!” Kairi said smirking. “Why would you eat bugs?”

    “They’re delicious and nutritious.” Timon said getting off Riku’s head. “Here, try it.” He shoved his hand into her mouth.

    As Kairi was chewing, she first felt it gross. Then it had a little of a sweet feeling. “mmmmm. This is good.”

    “Come on guys try it.” Pumba asked Sora and Riku.

    “Yeah, you guys should try it.” Kairi said getting another mouthful.

    The two boys decided to give it a try. They both took one grub each. At first they made faces, and then they felt the same sweet feeling Kairi had. They remembered to save a little for Simba. They decided to walk to Pride rock.

    “So, what’s been happening here?” Asked Riku while walking.

    “Simba and Nala gave birth to a new baby girl, Kiara.” Timon said while on Pumba’s back.

    “Yeah. And today is her birthday party.” Said Pumba walking threw the Gorge. “Simba’s going to be surprised to see you.”

    They entered Pride Rock and saw lions crowded around a small female cub. Simba was looking down and then looked up. He smiled to see his friends. After what looked like a ritual, Simba came over. They introduced themselves to each other. Then Zazu came by and told the mighty king something in his ear.

    “What’s wrong Simba” Asked Sora

    “Our entertainment” Simba began saying “Has cancelled on us at the last minute. What are we going to do?”

    “I think I might have a plan Simba.” Timon said while looking at the three lions. They didn’t like the glare in his eyes. He took them out for about an hour, and then brought them back in. They went onto some kind of stage.

    “Ready guys?” Sora whispered.

    “Yeah.” They both said.

    They started dancing, while Pumba and Timon were making some noise. They saw the joy of laughter of Kiara’s face. Then Sora came out. He decides to break out of the choreography and do something new.

    “I’m gonna be a mighty king. So enemies beware!” Sora started. He glared at Riku to continue.

    “Well, I’ve never seen a king of beast with quite so pointy hair.” Riku started to also sing. They both looked at Kairi.

    “He’s gonna be the main event.” Kairi started “Like no king was before.”

    They continued the song. Kiara was entertained for the entire show. At the end the king and the cub came to congratulate them.

    “Thanks for helping with my party.” Kiara said.

    “Yeah, thanks.” Said Simba.

    “No problem.” Said Sora.

    “Anytime.” Riku told them.

    “Daddy, I want to explore for a while. Is it okay?” Kiara asked.

    Simba nodded, and the little cub ran off. They exchanged thank yous and the gang decides to leave. After some talking, they decided to see Agrabah next. They went off to see their next big adventure.
     
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    Homonym errors!

    I looooooove that song! I used to always pretend to be Simba and roaring down an imaginary Zazu.
     
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