Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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  1. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    :D Everyone messes up sometimes. I have a promise that I haven't kept a promise in 3 yars, so I'm no better. :D So I'll try my best for this new thing your going with. Sorry but 5 paragraphs isn't my thing. But I'll try.
    Kingdom Hearts Comes To Earth
    Chapter 12: Eden's part.
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    Eden was still going berserk. " Let me go! Let me go or I'll--" " Or you'll what?", Xaldin said menicly. Eden stopped going bererk. Xaldin was right, how could a mere girl do anything? She was just an eleven year old girl, how could she even try to damage him? Oh duh... Like this!, she thought. Since her legs had no chains, she kicked Xaldin hard in.... down there. Xaldin let go of Eden and fell to pain. Eden quickly got up and ran... somewhere. She stopped at some random point and looked around frantically." Where do I go?" She ran in anothor random direction and bumbed into guess who, Larxene. " Oh... my...god..." she said. She was on the verge of running away, but fear nalied her to the ground. Larxene smirked and got out her kunai things. Sh was just about to strike, when OathKeeper hit her and sh was out cold. Eden lookd for the source of the keyblade, and saw Roxas running to her. " Roxas!" "Eden!", they both said with joy. Roxas used Oblivion to brak her chains and Eden was rubbing her wrists. She really needed moisterizer.(spelling) " How did you find me?" " Truth be told, I have no clue.", Roxas said, rubbing the back of his head. Edsn giggled and hugged Roxas. "Thanks..."
     
  2. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    I want to be a nobody that is good friends with Demyx. I am not in Organization XIII and my element is nature. I command wyvern nobodies, and they can transform into other animals. My weapons are two dragoon spears. Okay :)
     
  3. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Hey everybody! You readers know what day it is today:D Friday and that means I write out the next chapter!:D Please enjoy this and do not feel offended you weren't in this chapter. I only have 1 hour, and using my hour i type the next chapter so not plenty of times, so i'll try to squeeze some characters in? ok?








    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 12: Searches for friends and enemies




    Eden was still going berserk. " Let me go! Let me go or I'll--" " Or you'll what?", Xaldin said menicly. Eden stopped going bererk. Xaldin was right, how could a mere girl do anything? She was just an eleven year old girl, how could she even try to damage him? Oh duh... Like this!, she thought. Since her legs had no chains, she kicked Xaldin hard in.... down there. Xaldin let go of Eden and fell to pain. Eden quickly got up and ran... somewhere. She stopped at some random point and looked around frantically." Where do I go?" She ran in anothor random direction and bumbed into guess who, Larxene. " Oh... my...god..." she said. She was on the verge of running away, but fear nalied her to the ground. Larxene smirked and got out her kunai things. Sh was just about to strike, when OathKeeper hit her and sh was out cold. Eden lookd for the source of the keyblade, and saw Roxas running to her. " Roxas!" "Eden!", they both said with joy. Roxas used Oblivion to brak her chains and Eden was rubbing her wrists. She really needed moisterizer.(spelling) " How did you find me?" " Truth be told, I have no clue.", Roxas said, rubbing the back of his head. Eden giggled and hugged Roxas. "Thanks..." Roxas nodded putting his arm around her, giving her a hug back.

    The released and Roxas took Eden's hand, nodding to her. For sure Eden knew what to do, release her powers until- A clash of dirt flew up in the air and a girl with black hair and green streaks came walking with vines attatched to her. "Another enemy!" Roxas said releasing his two keyblades out, to hurt. Eden held her fists up and looked at her, she was soo young! " Pardon me, if I interupted you two love dovers but...i'm afraid i'll have to take her." she said walking forth.
    Eden pointed to herself cocking her head. " Yes you." she said. " Who are you!" she said taking steps back. She looked away while walking, " My name is Rexmildd I am under orders, here to collect the princesses, I believe you are one." she said reaching her hand out. Roxas looked at Eden who had a face of confusion. "Now come! Face me well!" she yelled, her vines charged-
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    Angel let go of Zexion and wiped her tears, she then put her hand over her chest and felt no beat beating, the blood didn't pump. " Oh no..." she whispered panicking. She looked up and saw Jack sitting on the branch of a tree grinning. " ARGH!!!!!!!" she yelled, she got up and ran to the tree and climbed up really fast. Jack grinned and jumped away to another tree. " I hate you! You turned me into a Nobody you jerk!" she yelled reaching on the branch. Jack laughed like he still had a heart. Angel growled and jumped over to the tree until she was caught by Zexion whom was holding her in his hands.

    "Take it easy...please.." he muttered. Angel nodded and walked off opening a portal. " I'll be back, just going for a dumb bad awfull stupid walk!" she said.
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    As Angel was walking she met up with a girl who was walking quietly with a cellphone in her hand, she dropped it and it crashed to the hard ground , collasping to pieces. Angel walked over to her, " hey, you." she said stopping her to a hault. She looked up and saw the cloak she was wearing. " Cosplayer?" she quietly asked, Angel shooked her head , " No, i'm from Organization XIII, if you don't belive me, it's true no lies." she said holding her hand up. She slowly nodded and looked at her in the eyes. " Wanna...fight?" she asked. Angel cocked her head and nodded, " Sure..." she released her weapons abit more much ranked. The girl released her weapons two dragoon spears, sharp and nice.

    " I realized I had powers an hour ago so I wanted to looked for someone challengng." she said running. Angel nodded and attacked her with on hit. She flew to the air and landed perfectly. " My turn!" she said throwing her dragoon spears into her arm, it cut her cloak a piece. Blood streamed down dripping. She looked up and grinned with a little chuckle. " I was just getting started, by the way before you lose my name is Angel."

    "Xaale." she simply said attacking her back with her spears.
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    Kirsty was walking down the ile bored, she had her backpack on walking to the lame old place everyday! " Ugh, school, why do I bother going?" she asked herself kicking a pebble stone. She looked up and saw a black antennae thing pop up. It flew over to her and before she knew it a keyblade appeared in her hand , attacking the heartless, it moaned and dissapeared.

    "What the-" she heard clapping from behind her and she swished around seeing a person in a black cloak. " Excellent-o!'' he clapped. She knew that voice it was the only voice she knew from Kingdom Hearts 2!

    "X-Xigbar!?" she asked walking forward to him, she looked up at the sky then back down seeing him right infront of her, he was taller then her and looked abit young. She grinned and pulled his arm dragging him, running to her school. " Uhm, little erm. kid! What are you doing!" he asked while being dragged. Kirsty nodded and smiled " Let's see what you gonna do now Art lady dumb founded teacher and school! I'll prove you right and you'll be sobbing in the dirt tell you reach the hotness!"
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    Tybic slashed against Luke, but the keyblades pressed together, no hit so far. " Arrgh! Give up you dumb little-" Tybic couldn't finish that sentence " Nu-uh! You give up! We've been fighting for quite a long time and i belive that you should-"

    A strike of lighting bolted down and shocked the four people, causing them to lose 50 HP. Riku grinned and panted, " I know that strike of lightning, he's out going strong and-jolly." Saix cocked his head and saw a blue hair spikey boy with a girl. Tybic made his weapon dissapear and so did Luke. " What the hec man, what's going on so far my day has been confused." Luke and Tybic said together.
    Sora jumped down with a girl and smiled giving Riku shakes and Saix some props, and he walked over to Tybic and Luke giving them a noogy!

    "Hey Sora!" Sora smiled and said " Hey guys sorry guys I was late this is Valerie! She found me and helped me and not im here with Riku Said, some two boys and awesome I feel so happy because I just took his awesome drink called um..."

    "Cola?" Luke asked, Sora nodded and jumped up and down.

    "HOLD IT!!!" Tybic yelled, they all looked at him. " This is confusing! Tell me your story please!!! Valeria or whatever! Ugh SOMEONE EXPLAIN!" Luke sighed and walked over to hit punching his across the face.

    Valerie nodded and Sora calmed down, " Ok it's confusing and..this is what happened."
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    Mexony was walking alone, the guy she met left her he went out...searching. ..she then caught up with her 3 friends, Muxene, Muxelle and Hexia. The three friends of her that were fans of Kingdom Hearts.


    Hours passed by they all sounded horrified and scared hearing the story from her that her sister Rexmildd left, and in the small city the place was getting emptier by the minute. People were dying, not knowing that heartlesses wereout murdering people, they never turned to Nobodies, because they never had strong hearts.



    To be continued.


    Short I know but takes atleast 2 hours to type a chapter out. I'm really sorry not all can make it, I'm feeling bad but good...
    because I typed the next chapter and i'm glad about they please comment and hoped you liked it, sorry if I made you confused this chapter, long story...*sigh* :D:D:D:D thanks for all the suppport also:D
     
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    Hahahaha! :D Xigbar being dragged to a school by a little girl.....
     
  5. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    What the heck? Now I'M confused. I'm a princess of heart? 0_o What's going on? Will my character ever meet Sora? Will Eden be captured by Rexmildd? Why am I asking these questions? Stay tuned every Friday!...lol... I'm weird...:D
     
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    lol that part was funny...but Lynn wasnt in it...np well nice job keep it up!
     
  7. Destined Working for WDW

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    tybic is confused, i'm confused, apparently my character acts me very well.
     
  8. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Hahaha, I love the fact that my character met Angel while I was on the phone! And I was so afraid you were going to write dragon spears but you didn't, so thanks.

    And I am friends with Demyx in this, right? You can PM the answer if you don't want to ruin to the readers if I am friends with Demyx.
     
  9. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    So Chapter 13's coming up right? Well if you wanna be in Chapter 13 well tell me now, or I pick randomly...:)



    I can fit all but I put them short scenes:D And I'm also trying to make a slideshow of Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth trailer slideshow if you want to you can make a 20 seconds trailer of my story...thats if youn want:D Friday is next chapter and sure if you dont think you can join of course you can!!!:D
     
  10. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    I want to be in Chapter 13.
     
  11. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Here we are everyone! It's a new chapter and you know what that means!!!:D Woot! Well here I am so i'll type and try to fit everyone in here!!!:)






    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 13: One day has ended






    The day has ended and it was such a twist shall the night come and the lights shine above. Today has ended and the night will be dark will the heroes and enemies stop, let them rest? No one is quite sure...
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    "Give up?" Angel asked with a grin apon her face. Xaale shook her head and put her hand on her hip. " Well, we've been fighting for hours..." she trailed off. The sun was setting and it was going down. Angel sighed and made her weapon dissapeared and so did Xaale. " I give up, my hand has cramps and my legs are sore and numb!" she said. Angel nodded and rubbed her fingers together, " I'm beat, well how bout a truce?" she said sticking her hands out.


    Xaale stretched her hand out and took her hand shaking it. " So um...you really from the Organization?" Xaale asked. Angel nodded and put her hand over her stomach her face went a little hungry-ness. " I'm hungry." Xaale smiled and took some money out of her pockets. " How bout some lunch-woah." she saw a big shining light up in the dark sky. Something big and shiny, it showed it was Kingdom-
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    Xigbar was still being dragged, Kirsty was alittle mad, school was over already, night was coming she was still dragging Xigbar. "Man! She wouldn't let you aloud in there! Why didn't ya say something eh, porque!?" she whined. Xigbar rasied his eyebrow, " Well what was I supposed to do, she spoke in some kind of language!" Kirsty sighed " Porque, porque!!!" she looked up with her eyes closed. Xigbar cocked his head he snatched himself away and looked Kirsty who was now on her knees looking down.

    " I'm sorry, um.. Xiggy! Guess what!" she said standing up changing her mood, " I saw this heartless- I should've told you earlier but well kinda to think about it lets go eat some tortilla eh?" she walked jolly until Xigbar grabbed her wrist. " No, before we do that, I hadn't had some fun in this day boring day! So um let's-" he licked his lips and realesed out his snipers. " Fight."

    Kirsty nodded and released out her weapon, she had no idea why.
    Xigbar dodged and went behind but before that the light shoned and Xigbar stopped with his eyes bright as the light.
    " Well you know kiddy-erm yeah. Dude...It's Kingdom-"
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    Sora, Riku and Saix were eating like pigs, Valerie, Tybic and Luke looked like they didn't know them. A women passed by with her two kids, One went on to Saix and tugged his cloak. " hey mwister why woo wearing thwat?" he asked. Saix looked over with a mouthfull. " I wobbent gwo kobid" he said with food in his mouth The boy's eyes were getting watery and he ran away to his mother.

    Tybic took Saix's hand. " Calm down guy. You just scared a little boy off with tears." Saix swallowed and shrugged taking a sip then after saying, " Well sorry!Now let me continue on." Sora and Riku smiled taking big bites on their burgers.
    "OK we're going now to a hotel to sleep!" Valerie said standing up tking Sora's greasy hands. Luke grabbed Riku's arm and pulled him off the chair.
    "That was sooo delicious!" Sora jumped he had tears of joy he stuck his hand out to the table. Walking out to the exit Riku and Saix and Sora yelled joyfully " I'll never forget you!"

    They exited and Riku began licking his fingers. Luke narrowedhis eyes and started walking they saw the news on the centre of Newyork city and saw a man talking with something huge.

    "This is amazing!Scientist are researching this and look now Better then the moon another thing appeared!!!" the man said.

    Valerie and Tybic looked up while Luke was already looked up.
    "It's, K-Kingdom H-"
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    Mexony and Muxene were looking up at the nightsky at their school on the tall hill. " I miss Rexmildd, why'd she join forces with Maleficant" Muxene asked rubbing her nose with a tissue. Mexony shrugged and grabbed a cup of nesea opening the can and taking sips. " Water fall?" Muxene asked. Mexony handed over the can of nestea.

    "I don't get it-what the crow!" Mexony yelled. She saw a big thing up in the sky better than the moon, but it's seen! Muxene dropped the cna with her jaw open and a big light. " Look! It's Kingdom-"
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    Lynn awoke on the cold cement floor with someone standing by her.
    " Where..am I?" She felt a hand touching her cheek. " With me on my lap me having some fries with my "girl" friends" Eden looked over and pushed Lynn away. " My turn." she said putting her head on her lap. Lynn growled and took some fries stuffing them in her mouth. Amber was stuffing a cookie in her mouth a jar of cookie. " Thanks Demyx for letting your superior take us ^.^" Amber said with a cookie in her mouth.

    Eden and Lynn looked over and grinned, " Can we have a cooki-" AMber took the jar with her vute crying eyes. " No....my cookies.." she said, then she handed one to Demyx putting it in his mouth. Demyx smiled giving a thumbs up for cookie. " These are dwicious." Demyx said with the cookie in his mouth. Amber leaned over and gave a small kiss on his cheek. Amber squeeled and fell on the leaves with a happy sigh. Eden got jelous bit. She kissed Demyx on the other cheek. Lynn got jelous and kissed Demyx on the nose.

    Roxas had a shocked face and pulled Eden. " Girls..too much "love" for Demyx." he said we a queezy look. Demyx grinned and kissed the girls on their forehead. All giggled and stop seeing.." It's Kingdom- He-"
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    Jack was lying down on the branch with Xemnas having some chips. " Jack, would you like to be second commandment?" he asked with a grinn. Jack looked over and shrugged looked away. " I thought Saix was your second commandment." Xemnas shooked his head. " I'm thinking off kicking him off, for some reason I think this should be a new change-o"

    Jack looked up and saw it, big lights in his eyes. " Kingdom Hear-"
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    Marcus and Namine were holding hands, they were happy. Namine was dressed as a boy in boy clothes while Marcus was being a professor.
    " Hahaha!." Namine took her book out and drew a new picture with Marcus as a star and Namine as Bird.

    Then it changed. Namine and Marcus were laughing hard. It was all funny to them. " I'm having fun Namine!" he laughed. Namine nodded and walked over to the blanket where there was food. " I'm starving wanna go eat?" she asked nudging him softly. Marcus nodded and put his arm around her skipping the whole way. They laughed so hard alot. Namine sat down and took a drink sipping. Marcus took his drink and looked up seeing that big light! He dropped it and gasped taking napkins. " I'm sorry it's that I just saw it! Kingdom Hear-"
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    Rexmildd was sighing with tears running down her face she looked up and saw it. SHe was trapped and wanted to go home in her moms and dads arms, She wanted to hug her family and be with them. Why is she forcing an alliance with Maleficant and dumb Pete! Rexmildd thought and looked up seeing that dude in the armor suit.
    She rubbed her tears off and said " Chris?" Chris looked over and saw her eyes. Which was all watery.

    "Mildred what happene-" Rexmildd shooked her head and looked at him.

    " It's Rexmildd- Oh..Kingdom Hear-"
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    To be continued.



    I think I added everyone in! If I didn't tell me and i'll make it up to you! Well everyone had a short part because I wanted to add em all in. I hope I got everyone! Hoped you enjoy this chapter:D And if i'm lucky and you. Maybe i'll slide another chapter in tomorrow:) Well please comment and hoped you liked this chater and if you noticed something.

    Someone hasn't finished there last sentence.*wink*

    :D:D:D:D: Please comment:D
     
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    " Girls..too much "love" for Demyx."

    ^^ No such thing as too much love for Demyx XD

    I knew I was gonna get cookies eventually XDDD
     
  13. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Yeap because I saw you avis and sigs and I realized most of em were cookiesxD so I decided to add that in:D
     
  14. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Stopping the battle after hours and then all of a sudden stating that I am hungry? That's origional.
     
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    No I think I was hungry..........
     
  16. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    what kind of potato chips were Jack and Xemnas eating?

    anyway whydon't ou type the stroy in microsoft word during the week, then paste it on here.
     
  17. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ....oh..my god... why didn't I think of that!!! You my friend are so smart! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D thanks a billion catrillion million billion in finite beyond!:D:D I'l do that then everyone will be able to share a part:D Thankyou:D

    Little hint the next will get little romance for some scenes and alittle more action then *cough* eating.*put on typing hands* thank tdgw for giving the hinty tip I owe you!:D So just now tomorrow i'll write the next chapter and i'llbet by Friday this chapter will be long.:D Now chapters come any random day Friday SAturday or Sunday or Monday Tuesday not Wednesday or Thursday . :D
     
  18. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    You are welcome Mex.
    Awsome action and romance, just like Make-out Paradise.
     
  19. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Yeah. When do you expect the next chapter will be, Mexony?
     
  20. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Mmmm...probably Tueday or Monday tomorrow. Thanks to the idea of darknessgrows:) So yeap...:D