Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

OMG I loved it! Making me want more cause i want to find out what happens to me...however no Demmy.......Keep up the good work! :D

 

nice story progression!!! so me and Luke being pitted against each other, can't wait to see how this pans out

 

ZOMG THREE CHAPTERS IN A ROW *spazzes out*
This is really kool. But seriously, the seperated characters are killing some of the tension. Maybe the Org use a massive summoning spell to pull in all the peoples, or mebbe Riku uses some of his DARK PORTALZ OF D00M.

 

I wonder what Xemnas is going to do to me...*shivers* I don't even want to know... And yet I do!

 

I know it leaves you hanging! I eally cant wait till the next chapter! Why friday? It is ok really

like that part

 

yeah Jack is ticked at Xemnas. Goodie goodie. But we still don't know his weapon ( the onlyone without one[ He is that good]) anyways, awsome.

 

Thanks everyone for commenting:D Friday is coming and you know what that means...new chapter!!!:D

 

*appluad button* Yay!

 

Sorry I took so long to post. All sounds good so far.

 

I read the whole thing, and it is awesome!
Are you still accepting new characters?


Name: Amber
California, USA
I want to join Organization XIII and meet Demyx..
I have flags and telekenisis, if that's ok with you.

 

..........so......how am I involved with Jack again?........we met or something?

 

Here it is! Today is Friday! Loving that day! And today is my anime that *wink* you know...Naruto,Avatar,Gundam Seed Destiny, Death Note, Bleach and Eureka Seven ...yep....Anyways I'll try to make this the longest chapter...;) Enjoy! And scroll down! By the way some thing are confusing.





Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 11: More than seven princesses!





Rexmildd was walking down dragging Kairi in chains. She didn't care, she was taken away and her older sister wouldn't even help her. This pathetic, my first mission failed and now I have a new mission , get the seven princesses, well this one is the last. I remember from Kingdom Hearts she did something with them...I forgot though, but she shall share that or I shall implore her.

As she was walking continously dragging Kairi in chains, Kairi awoke waking up with bruises and cuts. "What?" she whispered, Kairi saw her self in chains being dragged across the hard cement road. She felt the hot steam from being dragged on the hard cement. She tried to remeber what had happened before this occured. "Awake, princess Kairi?" Rexmildd asked giving a grin. Kairi looked up and glared at Rexmildd, she was walking fast. "What happened!?" Kairi yelled at Rexmildd. She stopped and turned around her eyes were turning black, " Well, You were with that pathetic boy and I knocked him out with a poison and then I knocked you out taking you away, and before I know now, your here listning to my story." she said in a placid voice.

Kairi looked forward and looked up at her," Can I atleast walk while your holding my chains, your dragging me hard-" She was stopped and then carried by the little Rexmildd! " I knew you'd ask, your not walking, but I am going to carry you there all the way." she whispered. Kairi wondered how did she turned to be like that. "Do you know who started this?" she quietly asked, afraid to get a beating.
Rexmildd sighed and in a melancholy voice she said " My sister, Noemy. But I call her Mexony, she wished that Kingdom Hearts came to Earth and it did and now your in this mess and people are dieing by minute!" a tear slipped down on her red cheeks. Kairi wondered who this Mexony was.

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Down in California USA, was an empty road. She was walking slowly on the side walk, nothing new in this wolrd, but same old,same old. She then walked forward and saw a boy a a black cloak. He was walking with a girl, the same hieght. She was wondering that maybe they were getting ready to go to a cosplay. She then saw them pointing directly at her...It felt ominous. (means unfavable, threatening);). She saw them teleport in a fast way.

"No way! They- they just teleported to-" feeling a hand on her shoulder she saw them behind her. A girl stepped up and waved with a grin, to be polite." My name is Angel and this is Jack." she said pointing to him. She gave a sly grinn and waved back, " my name is Amber." she said. Jack grinned, and took her wrist and pulled her right to his face, closely there face were close, not touching. Jack looked down and sighed, " Sorry but sleep." he said. Amber cocked her head '' What are you talking abou-AHHHHH!!!" she screamed, a lightning shocked went on her back to her heart and Jack snapped his fingers. A Heartless appeared and it was looking at Amber whom was looking like gaunt. She layed there while the heartless jumped on her grabbing the heart. Jack didn't look undaunted but with a grin on his face he was enjoying it.

Angel gasped and looked a Jack like he was a crazy guy. She punched Jack across the face and yelled at him. " Jack! That wasn't suppposed to happen!!! Xemnas's order was to BRING the person in not just turn her intoa nobody right there!!! You crazy or somethin-'' Jack interuppeted in with a yell back " I don't care! Whether or not I would've turned her into a nobody back there! Same thing! I don't care what Xemnas says! He's NOT MY dad!!!" He yelled furiously. Angel's eyes grew a little watery, wasting her voice in high pitch, her throat was hurting.
Jack closed his eyes and snapped again getting another heartless out.

"Sayonara , Angel!" he glareed, he ran to Angel hugging her giving a hard electric shock through her back to her heart. She screamed in pain and fell to the ground.
"I knew you were still a somebody, but to be in the organization you must have NO heart!" he said. Angel's heart was getting grabbed.
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Later on, Amber found her self on a pile of leaves, red, yellow and organge and some crusty brown ones, she found her self laying there. Two other girls were laying there knocked out also. One was in chains, the other masked with tape on the mouth and Amber, with nothing.

She rubbed her eyes and found herself in a black cloack herself also. She heard small steps coming from behind her, she remained laying down waitng and calming down. "You Awake?" said a jolly high voice, yet curious. It was Demyx.
"D-Demyx..Demmy?" Amber asked sitting up, not facing him. Demyx cocked his head, " Hey! how'd you know my name!" Demyx asked walking to her. SHe turned aroudn and hugged Demyx's leg, like she was imploring him for something.
Demyx nealed down and hugged her also, not knowing what was up, but yeshers.... Eden awoke finding her self in chains she was laying on leaves, she saw Demyx hugging some girl and another girl masked with tape on the mouth and legs and hands.

"Demyx!" she called, Demyx looked up and saw her looking abit nervous. "Where am I !" she yelled, out of control. Leaves being crunched Xaldin came running he grabbed Eden by the arm. "Hey! Stop it!" he said. She was going berserk..just like someone in the Organization. Angel woke up from the babbling. she felt like some kind of ebony hit her on the black real hard. She then saw Zexion walking forward to her, but it was all a blurr.

" Are you okay?" Zexion asked nealing down to her. Angel's eyes were watery and she noticed she couldn't talk. Tape was on her -_-|'|.
Zexion nodded and slowly with water her removed the tape easily. Angel went right into Zexion's arms and cried. Felt like a nightmare, wanting it to end.


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Lynn was in someones hands, carrying her. She looked up and saw the face of Demyx!? He blocked the heartless surrounded in a ball of water, wow what a new attack! "Don't worry I gotcha!" Demyx happiyl said. Lynn nodded and smiled thinking ' woah this is so cool! In Demyx's arms how awesome is that!?"

Demyx opened a portal and ran right in, with Lynn in his arms. While in the corridor He put Lynn down and stuck his hand out. Lynn took his hand and shaked it. "Name's Lynn." she happily said. Demyx grinned and nodded.
"Names-" " Demyx, I know!:D" Demyx nodded slowly and sighed happily giving a little laugh. "Uh..yeah." Lynn nodded and Demyx took his hands on Lynn's neck," I am sorry but I have to!" he said in a weeping sound. He pressed hard on her neck, chocking her! Lynn saw Demyx hurt from chocking some girl.

Lynn grabbed Demyx's hands and pulled them away from her neck, releasing a bruise. " Don't! Please Demyx!'' she yelled rasping for air.




To be contiuned.
Sorry if not everyone could make it but....i'll make it up to you, i'll make the next chapter tomorrow because I ran out of time and I only get an hour and my parents only let me go on once, yes i leave my account on, because i'm lazy and I realized someone from way before wanted to join but somehow I couldn't see it.


By the character name Kristy from Spain? I just found that today. Sorry Sorikai for not adding you sooner:( and the rest sorry if you weren't in this chapter I promise the maybe I might write to extra chapter on Saturday and Sunday:)

Please comment if you'd like.

 

man my character is awsome. two kills!!:)

 

*_* Am I a princess of heart? And why Xaldin? O_o Kinda odd...

 

.........geez......Jack's such a......what's the word.....I think it started with...oh yeah! double crosser.

 

Thanks everyone, it seems that my promise and say i made yesterday, I can't do it because I have to go somewhere and im getting ready, for some stuff and some homework to d do tomorrow?:(:)

Please forgive me, I'm kinda in rushes these days, (stupid homework)

Please forgive me:( Next chapter up tomorrow pinky swear promise in my underwear.

 

ooo nice! I love it so keep it up!.....being chocked by Demmy...so sad...well still liked it! :D cant wait for the next chapter!

 

Yay! Today's a new chapter! And I guess I do go berserk sometimes :D

 

Sad Story...I guess my promises are breaking..which breaks hearts...as my sisters said everytime i promise I always end up breaking it!!!Argh!!!:( Man I feel really bad because when I promise i try to keep it but it slips!


So to say something the next chapter...all of you write.. just chapter 12. Just tell what'll happen next to your character and just yours...


Like...


Example: Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 12: Sister versus sister.



Finding my sister Rexmildd she appeared to be looking sad but powerful also, her eyes were different, I remember she tried to attack me along with my new buddy! I can't believe it! Well I see her now I shall go to her and speak from face too face...




Something like that, but ti should be 5 paragraphs if you wanna write something that'll happen next to your chapter, then later in the days i'll write chapter 13 and go along with what you have from your own chapter 12 of you in kh....that good???



Im really sorry, I hate me a promise breaker.....forgive me if you want but write your chapter 12 and i'll go along with it and then write chapter 13 and go along with what you have......:(:):(:):(

 

i'll sit Tybic out this chapter, i'd rather have him go along with what you originally had planned for him then me adding to the confusion, so Tybic shall wait patiently for chapter 13....as long as he isn't destroyed by Luke...