Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

hmmm how is Saix involved and why was my leg glowing......the plot thickens

 

.........I.........(must.....resist....impulse.....to comment......).......it's great......I'm trying really hard not to demand anything from you......so...........yeah..........I'm sorry.......-_-

 

Gees! This story rox! Is it 2 late 4 me to come in???? If not....


Name: Kirsty

Country: Spain

Other: She's a girl that is a HUGE kh fan but her fav character is Sora (oh man, he's taken! lol jk). She's always wanted a rainbow keyblade and has memorised all of Sora's combos and abilities. And the main thing: SHE HATES SCHOOL (and her art teacher :))

 

COOL! I'VE BEEN KIDNAPPED!!! ......Oh wait.... That's a bad thing...:lol:

 

You know, there is a magic in FFV and IV called "Image", it kinda sounds like this. Why haven't there been any sightings in the recent Final Fantasies?

Regarding Jack, it's like Hades said, "Ah well. Cant all be heroes." Keep up the good work.

 

Exactly man it is beteer to be a villan anyway.

 

I loved That!!!!! Expect rep and a pm

 

Whens the next chapter comin'????????????????

 

Be patient........it takes time to type those long paragraphs....

 

ZOMG! Sorry it took so long to comment, but I really didn't expect you to add me! And I got Namine! I realy thought the playing field was too cluttered already. Hmmm, are t3h peoplz going to meet up or something? I mean, Riku and Luke had enough trouble with a plane.
By the way, could Marcus control White Magic? You know, Curaja and Holy?
Also, I have an idea, what about giving the pairs Limit Breaks? Just a thought, because last time I did an RP I created some Limit Breaks.
KEEP WRITING!

 

Sure:D i'll be happy to do that and ill try to memorized when I come back on and have time to type the next chapter:D Also thankyou for commenting:)

 

This story is developing splendidly. The limit idea is genious. I can't wait to go into a session with Riku! Take your time doing it until it really matters, though. Don't let us just fight any old enemy. I mean, let the story develop a bit more, a few more friends come together.

 

I agree with Way2 the dawn.

 

Hey! Sorry if this story didn't get it's next chapter, but here it is! You've al been waiting for*smirk* welp here it is!:):D:):D
Everyone has a short part ok? lol ok:D Chapter 10 comes tomorrow :)





Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 9: Limit counts!



In Kentucky, USA, Lynn was walking on the sidewalk looking forward ahead, feeling the light breeze go through her face and blissfully through her hair. The wind was getting windier by the minute, it was all a breeze. As Lynn was walking she saw a medium sized bottle with a green glow inside. She was not sure, so walking forward to it she took in her hands and grinned at it with her eye brow raised up.

"Hm...and what's this?" She asked herself...alone. Lynn put it in her backpack, that she carried around at some times. Zipping the zipper back up, she continued on walking and headed straight for home. For sure Lynn knew that she would be home alone for 5 hours, because her parents would be out of town doing buisness.

Walking she bumped into a Huge heartless 2 times taller than her, she was frightened and satisfied. Lynn began to run, she didn't relalize it was heartless until she saw it's yellow eyes. "Heartless," she yelled. She wanted to fight but couldn't she had no weapons in her hands or nothing! She only had some bottle with glittering glowing green inside. Until a tingle reached her hand, goose bumps rising up her arms, a keyblade brightly appeared in her hand, not any normal but a different one with black and yellow on the handle and some other things that she couldn't describe.

"A k-keyblade!?" Gasping she grinned at the heartless and charged toward the huge heartlessm, " Your ashes! Your Heartless!" She hitted the heartless repeatedly whenever the heartless wasn't looking, nothing she couldn't beat it, she closed her eyes and tightened her fist together. A swarm of white circles surrounded her embraces onto her and slowly forming down it appeared to be a black beast, closely looking like a heartless.
She looked up and glared charging towards the heartless with only 1 bite the heartless moaned in pain and dissapeared into ashes, a heart floating up into the air not being stopped.

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As they arriveed at another airport, passengers were sent to use the washroom from the excitement...and bladder. Riku and Luke were walking, proud they both were. "Man! That was some sweet ride Luke!" Riku said smiling over to Luke. Luke's face turned red and he laughed a litte, "well it was only for a little bit, besides I learned from driving that gummi ship in the manuel." he said.
Riku nodded and looking at the exit door.

"Do you know where we are?" he asked nudging him over on his left arm. Luke shrugged and looked up at the sign. It said " You are in New York City".
"New York city it says." Riku nodded to Luke and reached in his pocket.
"I need some potion..my Health feels low," he said pouring some on his body ith green glitter and a blossom blooming on top on his head.

"Have you ever been to New York city before L?" Riku asked putting his hand in his hair, Luke shrugged and sniffed under his arm pitt." I need a shower..." he said slowly turning away from his arm pitt.
Riku laughed and sniffed his own too! Riku laughed and patted Luke's back.
"It's ok, we both stink! Let's see if anyone has a washroom in here to clean!" Riku said walking towards the busy street. People were walking on phones walking through the side walk, Taxi's in the one road, cars honking and more.
It was a very, very busy street in New York City in the center.
Advertizement's and slogans were hung up in the New York City Center place.

Riku saw a sign saying "Salon! Manicures Relax and more!" Riku poked Luke's arm and said, " Luke look! Salon Manicures Relxas and more! That'll solve our problems!" he said.

Luke laughed and walked forward with Riku to the store!

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It was 10 in the morning, Saix and Tybic were having some kind of morning sandwich in a breakfast store. Saix kept chewing and chewing his food.
Tybic wiped his mouth with his wrist and grabbed his organge juice sipping it.
"You must be really hungry." Saix said wiping his hands with the napkin.
Tybic nodded and grinned, " I was really hungry ever since Kairi and me were fighting!" he gladly said.
Saix shoved his plate away and put his hand under his chin and looked to the window.
"Kairi?" he asked," she's still here?". Tybic shooked his head.
"She's gone, some green streaked girl kiddnapped her and slapped her somewhere and then..."

Saix put his hand forth and nodded.

" I understand well, let's go-" he made a face and tried to smile.
"Help her...it's over...we live, wi'll get our hearts back in this world" Saix said standing up tucking his chair in.
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Marcus was walking with Namine, until a heartless appeared.ABout 10 Large ones came. "Let's fight," Namine said adjusting her hands. Marcus cocked his head and nodded slowly."Suuuuureeee....." Marcus walked forward, his eyes grew wide.
Namine looked at Marcus, "Release your keblade feel like you have no fear," calmly she said, Marcus nodded and relaxed with no fear. A keyblade appeared, another different kind. Namine nodded and calmly said, " Drawing keys!"
A blue light appeared on the keyblade and it flashed quick.

"what?" Marcus asked himself. It was a limit, Namine created. Marcus charged and everything went blue hitting all heartlesses together.
"Blue breaks!" Marcus yelled, a blue came out and Namine drew which made Marcus charge again and.....ATTACK!!



To be continued.


Sorry if not everyone could make it:(:) the bright side is that I got to get to this chapter, which I should be gratefull of, I think I made some mistakes or so an yeah.... I hoped you liked it and please comment.

Oh if it helps it's like for fun when ever you have time a 1 minute trailer of my story Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth. It's just for fun and you really don't need to do it so yeap:D anyways please comment!:D

 

Yayzorz, I was in two chapters in a row! :D
By the way, what do you mean like a trailer? A written preview or something?

 

I love it! I looooove it! I was in it! I was giggling for some reason! :D good job

please keep this going! It rocks!

 

you are getting better and better all the time. Keep it up.

 

Awww thanks!:D My chapter shall be up today later on in the noon. I have school now and never i'm aloud onthe computer I have...


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Well thankyou for commenting:D

 

AW ok cant wait!

 

Here it is...you've all been waiting for the next chapter for a week...Friday is today I write...the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!:D I hope you enjoy it and I don't have much time so if I make mistakes please forgive me and yes i'm doing this quickly memorizing what happenes to each character, please to not feel bad you weren't in this chapter...:( I already feel bad about that! So here it is! Scroll down and read!:D




Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 10: Plans, plans, plans!




Marcus and Namine were panting catching for their own breaths. The huge limit wasted half their energy. Marcus looked over his shoulder seeing Namine catching for breath. "We make a good team, Namine." Marcus grinned at her giving a two thumbs up. Namine giggled and smiled at Marcus standing up properly. "Thankyou, Marcus. Your right. We do make a good team." she said walking ahead forward, Marcus followed.

Marcus and Namine were walking together, prepared for what will come next. Namine had weird thoughts going through her head. Like... how did she get here, and more. Marcus had amazing thoughts through him..but one remaining with no answer. He appeared to be able to weild a keyblade but how on Earth did Namine get here. He looked over to Namine and saw her holding up a green glass with glitters.

"Here, hi-potion it'll cure half you damage." she said handing it over to Marcus.
Marcus looked at it glowing glittery. He opened the jar tap and sprayed it on him, sprinkles of hi-potion went on him withn a blossom blooming for cure. Marcus felt much more powerful and good. Namine poured her self some elixir and grinned.
So the two continued on walking forth for their next challenge for sure their plan was ready to...attack.
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Tybic smiled and patted Saix's back for some sort of reason. "Thanks, Saix." Saix nodded and walked out with Tybic.
"Where to?" he asked while walking with the twice his small size, Tybic. "We can open a corridor of darkness...can we?" he asked.
Saix nodded and put forth his hand out and there he released open a corridor.
"Let's go." Tybic nodded and walked right in the dark corridor.

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Walking right out they entered a new place, North America, New York City.
"Been here before?" he asked Tybic looking at him with his yellow-ish eyes. Tybic shooked his head and saw people walking then suddenly...he saw...Riku!?

"R-r-" Before Tybic could finish his sentence Saix cutted in.
"Riku, weilder..." he said walking forward. Tybic remembered that he said he'd helped Kairi find Riku and Sora. No way he can't let that say down! Tybic gave a smile and quickly ran to Riku with an excited face.
"Rikuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!" Tybic yelled rushing over to the "Riku" and uknown guy. Saix saw Tybic rush fast by him, he seemed to be in speed.

Riku turned around and he was pushed to the ground with arms around him by the weight of thr boy he knocked over Riku with a quick speed.
"What the!?" Riku had no idea what was happening. Luke looked up to the person and...Saix!? Luke looked serious and he quickly released his keyblade.
"Who're you!" he said walking forward with the keyblade sticking out.

Tybic looked up and saw the boy sticking his keyblade to them. "Oh, a weilder eh? Well so am I!" he yelled released out his keyblade. The keyblades met eachother and they shoned through the sun light. Riku stood up and wiped his pants from the dust particles and looking up. He saw. Saix. Riku glared and released his Way to Dawn keyblade. Saix looked at Riku feeling offended by the keyblade, releasing his Claymore. It was go time!

Tybic and Luke charged eachother, they're keyblade smashed together on the edge they kept attacking eachother but no hit. Tybic was struggling but then yelled out, "FIRE!" and a raps of fire relased from his keyblade and burned Luke's wrist making in burn in the inside. Luke whined for a moment and charged back yelled "THUNDER!" A shock of thunder srtiked down and hit Tybic's back causing him to fall down.

"You...you!" he yelles standing on his feet attacking back. Luke glared at him and did a back flip to dodge the keyblade attack.
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Lynn wiped her mouth and laughed a little...she actually attacked the heartless's!
"Wow.." she whispered her keyblade dissapeared from her hand. She crunched her hand together and looked up flipping her back hair, like nothing ever happened. She then heard a huge shock, the sound of her mother from far.
"Mom!?" she yelled, she began to run, but automatically she did a hight jump leap. "Wha!?" she said, she continued to high jump leap to her house, which was really easy!

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Arriving at her house she saw her mom and dad fading together...into ashes air.
Tears went in her eyelids, she tried not to cry but couldn't control it. She saw them look up and smiled to her daughter. "It's ok, Lynn...may we rest in peace, while you live in peace." Lynn shooked her head and put her hand through her mom's stomach, it went through like she was a water getting poked through and out. She gasped and touched her fathers face, her hand went through, both were disspearing.

It was the good day but worse day that ever happened to her. Her parents dieing on the cold surface, fading to ashes. But Lynn looked up and heard a stomp from the attic, she ingnored her parents and walked up the stairs slowly.
Her nervous sysytem was vibrating, her heart was thumping, pumping the blood through her. Goose bumps rised up from her arms. Butterflies scattered in her stomach.

Lynn reached the top and she turned around, slowly. Making sure no one was watching her or getting ready to attack her. She walked to her parents room and saw the heartless sworming in and then looking back over it;s shoulder it grinned and laughed alittle and looked straight to Lynn whom was standing at the door.

The heartless hissed, " Lynn, don't ask how I know your name! I must grab your heart and set you free, with your parent's of that is. What will be your choice?" Lynn shooked her head, and stepped to the window in her parents room." No, I'd rather live then get my heart reached in being taken out for no reason!" she retorted. The heartless growled."You've made a wrong choice...Lynn!" He growled loud like a beast and wapped his tail making a big wind blow Lynn at outside, smashin the window she fell out and landed on her back hurtfully. Her head was hurting and back was hurting also, she was bleeding from the upper left leg. She looked up and the heartless jumped right to her and-
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Jack was holding Eden under his arms, walking in the woods. Jack had a serious face going on and he was walking quite fast, Eden was trying to kick her way out but couldn't, before, when Jack went to the last portal leaving Roxas alone. He injected a needle into Eden's legs for her legs to be weak by the minute. But the only cure was pour Mega-elixir on the legs. Eden was looking away from Jack's face. "Why are you taking me!" she yelled, Jack ignored her and kept on walking, fast he went by the second.

He then bumped into the Superior whom was having his hands behind his back.
"Where's Roxas? And why'd you bring this imbecile girl to me!" He demanded in a low voice. "I demand for an explanation!"
Jack sighed and dropped Eden to the dirt ground leaqving her in the leaves and mud. Jack bowed to Xemas and looked away from him. "I didn't want to do that job so I knew Roxas had nothing because I didn't i had no tingling but for her, she had a sense of power in her heart and she was having a huge power source somewhere, I can feel it."

Xemnas nodded and looked at Eden was trying to stand up. "We have another member. She's joined the org-"
"Why!" Jack exclaimed. Xemnas glared at him and stepped to the side appearing the face of a girl. Jack looked at her eyes, it didn't look like she was braze, yet nervous..mostly the same. Angel bowed to Jack and said, "It's an honor to meet you..finally-" narrowing her eyes. Jack bowed back and took Eden into his arm's again. "I must leave, and cure her back, leaving her in shackles."

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Valerie walked in and saw Sora with an unhappy face." What's wrong?" she asked sitting beside Sora. Sora sighed and said, "Well I was browsing your room seeing pictures of me, Riku Kairi and Donald and Goofy and other people." Valerie nodded and patted Sora's back and passed him some food.
"Eat, you'll feel better. Oh Sora...who're looking for?"

Sora gulped his food inside and nodded, "Kairi and Riku, I have to reunite with them! I've been seperated from them again!" he said banging his fist on his knee.
"Please don't-" before Valerie finished about 20 dusks surrounded them, appearing out of nowhere. Sora saw them and released his keyblades. He looked over his shoulder and passed Valerie a bag that was shaking.


To be continued


Hoped you liked it, took my whole time typing this!:D Please comment and hoped u liked it!