Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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  1. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    This is too awsome!
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    She would love a keyblade, or Donald's magic staff.
    Major Roxas and Sora fan. She has a vivid imagination and made up her own nobody. She would love to have a keyblade and fight with Sora and/or, Roxas. She would do anything to keep Kairi away from Sora. She would aslo help her friends no matter what the cost. She's so obbssed, that she sleeps with her kh, kh:com, kh2, and fanfics that have to do with kh, everynight! Her nobody is named Dexen and her keylade she made up is called Golden Hope, inspired by the Bald Eagle.
    EDIT: She knows about Valerie from the internet at... well, duh! KH-VIDS! They get along great. Sometimes, she hears the backround music for Traverse town. She lives with her mother and sister.Her dad lives in California. She's got square-ish glasses, brown pantes, a short sleeved orange shirt, and a badge sweater. She also has slightly tan skin, brown eyes, and brown-black hair.
     
  2. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks all for commenting:D
    I will start on Sunday which is tomorrow or maybe Monday because I have some work to do and chores....T_T well thanks for commenting:D i'll add you right in the story Monday of This Sunday:D
     
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    NUUUUUU! I can't wait! :D
     
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    awesome writing, who knew Kairi and my Tybic would team up haha. Keep it going
     
  5. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    jaxck? how about caxjk? anyway yeah.
     
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  7. Way_2_The_Dawn Traverse Town Homebody

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    If I may speak:

    I think too many people are trying to rip off of my keyblade idea. We need some summoners too, people!
     
  8. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    yeah and by the way what is jack's nobody's weapon? i'll leave that up to you to decide. i do not care. (no keyblade.)
     
  9. Way_2_The_Dawn Traverse Town Homebody

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    Jack is a user of Magic, remember? He should have a rod.
     
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    ......or just himself and magic......i think it'd be better....point to something and burns....:D
     
  11. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    My apologies everyone, it seems that this week is very very busy for me I never get the time to type the story in! I feel really awful for having you guys to have to wait for the next chapter:(.

    Sometime this week i will be sure to have the next chapter up! Pinky swear!
     
  12. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    No worries. Even though I'm anxious to see how the chapter will turn out... I can wait.
     
  13. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Look! I think I had the time to do it...in short 40 minutes i think or less! Well please comment and enjoy this chapter that I have been trying to memorize each request:)




    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 5- And it all begins...chaos.





    Just before Zexion could come forth to Angel with his weapon... Angel put her hand out as a hault.
    Zexion cocked his head and stopped looking to her face for an answer.
    "Say it." he said simply staring to her eyes.
    Angel sighed and looked to him in the eyes.
    "I-I'm sorry." she said lowering her head. There was a small chuckle from Zexion, his weapon dissapeared.
    "Your lucky. I could've accepted the apology but you see me mission was to take in humans, take their hearts and force them to join the Organization." he said walking forward.
    Angel looked away and bit her lips,blood streamed down and fell to the cold concrete road.

    "Fine. If that's what you want, then shall it be." she quietly said, Zexion nodded and opened a portal.
    "Walk forth and surrender...follow m-" Angel looked at Zexion and frowned a little. " But will we...hang? Like as friends...like i be your assistant? Please?" she begged quietly. From 10 steps away from her she could hear Zexion sigh, " Well i'm not sure..and it would be useful to have an assistant, we'll just have to wait for the superior's answer." he said walking towards the portal.
    Angel followed, to join the Organization , but behind her thoughts she wondered.
    What will happen it she leaves? Could her mom worry and send out polices to places? Answers will come, sooner or later. They walked in the portal, and the portal disspeared, leading them in the path of darkness.
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    Tybic was catching his breath for air and so was kairi, both were catching to breath. Kairi looked over her shoulder, saying " your a good fighter." she said.
    Tybic laughed a little he had his hands on his kness alittle crouched down.
    " So are you but close up your diffinatley good!" Tybic responded.
    Kairi laughed a little, and stopped with a pause looking to Tybic with a little blush.
    "Your...blushing?" he said in a confused look, asking Kairi.
    Kairi giggled," I blush when boys make me laugh, don't know how they do it!" she complained giggling at the same time.

    Tybic nodded and walked forward, " Kairi your here to search for...Sora and..Riku?" he asked, Kairi nodded with a grin upon her face.
    "Can I..you know..help?" Tybic asked looking down to his feet. Kairi said yes, with that Tybic smiled and thought that looking for Sora and Riku, would make him..in some way excellent to fighting, and might even challenge Sora to a battle.
    But those were thoughts, they may not happen, he might just get a thankyou and that's all.

    "Kairi let's find them! So you three reunite! I'm sure this may be the 3rd time!" Tybic laughed, Kairi nodded with a glare.
    "Anyways let's go!" Tybic raised his hand and walked, with his hands in his shorts pockets.
    Kairi nodded without a word and followed Tybic the way.

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    In USA, NC it was a nice day, for anything..even fighting like practice.
    Valerie was in her room, she had her own computer, own bed, own everything! That she owned ofcourse. She was lying on her bed, her legs were swinging back and forth, desperatly she was trying to finish her homework that was due tomorrow. It was the only thing that hurts, homework, the waste of a precious afternoon.

    Valerie sighed and looked out the window, seeing children play, walk and ride.
    "Why do I have homework and they don't? It's not fair much...to much homework wastes my day!" she said to herself. Looking down to her papers, scattered all over her bed and computer she took a random piece of paper.
    A picture of Sora she drew. She had many more drawings of him, but some were on the walls and some were somewhere in her room. Abit messy from the homework. She smiled and giggled to herself, with a small bush on her cheeks.
    "Sora...if only you were real!"

    She put the paper down and sat up on her bed, she decided she do her homework later on in the day before dinner. She jumped off and put her coat and mits on, it was a nice day, though windy.
    She walked down the stairs, she crept through the halls, until her mother popped out of nowhere. Her mother was suprised, she rasied her eyebrow and put her hand on her hip, waiting for an explanation, " and where do you think your going hmm?" she asked. Valerie looked down for an excuse, she looked up and took a deep breath.

    "Mom I just wanna take a walk for an hour or 2 and walk across the park maybe swing by and when I come back i'll do homework! I promise! Please mom? It's not fair to get air when your sheltered in a house with papers surrounded you with questions just waiting for an answer." she said, lowering her head.
    Her mom put her hand on her shoulder.
    "Ok, only one hour and you come straight home if you don't your grounded for a month which means no internet or any other things importantly you use!" she said in a calm voice, but the last 3 words abit deep.

    Valerie smiled and hugged her mom, before she knew it she had her shoes on.
    "Ok. Bye!" she said waving while exiting, having her hand on the door knob.
    Her mom waved.

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    As valerie walked past by the park she thought she could swing for a litte, until she noticed a spikey brown hair teenager laying there on the sand, looking like he was knocked out cold. Valerie gasped and ran to the uknown person who was laying there cold.

    As she arrived she leaned down and flipped her hair behind and moved his shoulder gently. " Are you ok?" she asked curiously.
    The teenager moaned and looked up to her face, " She then saw her favourite character from Kingdom Hearts 2!"

    "Sora!" she yelped, she lifted him up and she looked at him with a smile. All Sora did was look at her confused.
    ''How'd you know my name?"
    "Come!I'll explain on the swings!" she said excitedly.
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    In USa, NJ, it was a school day, another boring day once again.

    In the classroom there were 20 students sitting at their individual seats and desk. She was paying attention, abit bored, but this year she had to get a perfect mark! " What is the answer Eden?" asked the teacher looking straight to her face. Eden looked around the room, faces staring at her.
    "Um..-" The bell rang, before she knew it school was over, she sighed in relief happily no to answer.
    There was no homework, which was really good, although she had to do an artifact on some projedt which was due in 2 weeks so she had time.

    She walked straight home, thinking what she would do, all of a sudden she felt a hand on her shoulder.
    '' Nami-ne?" said a boy voice.
    Eden looked over her shoulder and saw Roxas, in a visible form, abit fady-ness.
    "Roxas? Oh and i'm not Namine, i'm Eden." she responded with a little smile.
    Roxas gasped and looked around, " Uh, how'd you know my name?" Roxas asked.
    Eden smilled and took his hand and pulled him near her by her ear she reached to his ear with alittle mutter.
    "I'll tell you later, here I can't explain! It'd be..kinda awkward." she said. Roxas nodded and followed.
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    As they entered Eden and Roxas went to the backyard, "Okay I know your name by-"

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    To be continued.


    Sorry if it was short and all of you couldn't be in it at all time:( I had a really rough day, staying after to get help..which I get hjelp every Monday and Thursday, which starts next week. anyways hoped you enjoyed the story, next chapter will come out soon or later days..i don't really know, please comment:D
     
  14. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    *claps* Wow! That was really good! I was surprised of the Roxas+Eden combo. I was kinda funny that Roxas mistook me for Namine. I'm surprised how this turned out. Take your time on the next chapter!
     
  15. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Yea! New part new part! antway i know how you feel. i can only get on at school, which is where i am now! and i am moving so i might get on more.

    yeha but other people use magic without rods. anyway i ( person writing this ) prefers scythes but it is up to the writer.
     
  16. Way_2_The_Dawn Traverse Town Homebody

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    True, True.
     
  17. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Yes so true but is so fustrating waiting for a new part
     
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    EEK! YAYZ!......ah well.......not the way I sort of hoped but that's all right.....honestly.....I get the feeling you should post this in the Role-Playing Arena....
     
  19. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    I kinda agree with Firekeyblade about the role- playing area but then we would have to type a lot more and i want someone else to do this (no offense but i can only type at school.)
     
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    *shrug* I can't type long paragraphs.......only when necessary....