Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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  1. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well today was a good day, I had a subsitute and after that me and my sisters and mom went to some parking lot nearby an aiport and watched Airplanes take off... great sounds. Anyways today is a new chapter and also we're getting closer near the end. But, before that I could ask you privately for some help on KHCtE2 because..well because I get kinda tired doing alot, and keeping track on what I was doing, hehe. Well, let's read shall we?





    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 40: It ends now






    After fighting for quite a while, Marluxia and Rexmildd were grinning at eachothers faces." You are very talented with your fighting." Marluxia finally said, giving a quick wink. Rexmildd nodded and thanked him by mouthed way. Marluxia then looked around and felt something very odd. " My body... it feels like." Marluxia paused and stared out dazed. Rexmildd looked at him in a strange way, seeing that he looked abit scared. Not that he could be but... he was a nobody. " Feels like what?" Rexmildd asked, circling her finger round. Marluxia then looked at his hand and saw little pieces going away. Like a robotic technology as if it was just a pixel video game.

    "Like I'm fading." Marluxia finished. Rexmildd's eyes widened and looked at his whole body and saw pieces flowing up to the air. Rexmildd then shooked her head and rubbed her eyes to make sure it wasn't true. Looking clearer it was true, Marluxia was really fading! Looking down at herself she saw pieces of her fading away. " No!" Rexmildd whined, putting her hand over her forehead in panic. " This c-can't be!'' Rexmildd worridly said, struggling through her words coming from her lips. Marluxia nodded and released out his scythe. "W-What are you doing?" Rexmildd gulped. " I don't know. I'm lost." he dazed. Rexmildd nodded and then saw a light blinding light going around them.

    "What's going on here!?" she asked, blocking her eyes from the blinding light. The light shone very brightly, the two didn't know why. Perhaps.. they're journey was finished but... it couldn't be.
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    Rinn fell to the ground, she grasped for air. Her breathing was becoming a problem. Muxene fell down also, but tripping over a piece of a hard coil rock. Rinn pounded her fist to the ground and cursed. " I don't think, this forest will ever be the end!" she admitted. Muxene looked down at her and glared, " Giving up already?" she asked, crossing her arms from the ground. Rinn sat up and took out her weapon, examing it. " Kingdom Hearts." she said, staring at her weapon, feeling the tingling through it. " Jump!" Rinn said, with quick words, she stood up and high jumped quickly. Muxene rolled and then jumped over to the vines and held tight. Knives came running through, just passing them from below.


    "That was close." she panted. Rinn nodded and then jumped back down. Landing perfectly she looked up and saw the world cracking in half. Muxene landed softly and walked over, feeling the ground move. " Geo." she mumbled. " What?" Rinn asked, cocking her head at Muxene. " Earth. It's cracking!" Muxene pointed out, falling over, kicking her feet. Going backwards, she saw the Ground splitting in half, like an Earth quake in Central America and such more countries out there. Asia, Europe South America. Rinn then jumped over on the other side. Rinn and Muxene were across eachother.


    The ground began to fall, Rinn fell and quickly grabbed the edge of the ground dirt. She looked up and felt abit panicky because below her was a dark hole, it was was close to ending her life.
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    Sebax began to run putting on the bade and others. Looking around, he saw those kinda of golf carts. Running over, he leaped in and started the engine. Without thinking he kicked his foot to the right pedal and with the loud screech, the cart began to run fast with it's engine running quickly. " Yeah!" he cheered himself, throwing his left arm like a cowboy. Turning over he felt the ground growing. It was like a big wave in Hawaii. Throwing the ground up, the cart went flying in the air. Sebax flew over the cart, having his foot caught on the bar. " Ah!" He cried. As it held. the cart landed. Sabax banged his head on the concrete.

    A stream of blood streamed from the back of his head. Scratches ended up on his face. " What the hell was that?" he moaned. Feeling the back of his head, bringing his hand back he saw a dark marg colour. It was his blood. Sebax dropped his hand and looked up to the sky. It seemed to be blurring up. That wasn't a good sign. Sebax then reached through his pockets, in search for mini potions. They were only 5 centimetres, good enough to heal 10 HP. Sebax smiled , as he pulled out the potion. " Great." he frowned. A tiny bit was left, he looked at his pocket and saw a wet stain. " It cracked." he cringed.

    Feeling the world go bright and light. He felt like his body was flying, like when he played Kingdom Hearts and lost to a battle. Seeing Sora flowing dead. Sebax then closed his eyes and saw a quick flash of fighting and other people, he didn't know. But after that he saw a ten second picture of Kingdom Hearts close up, burning red. It looked like it was going to explode!
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    Ginji, gritted her teeth and looked at Axel. She brought her keyblade forward, pointing it at Axel. " What for?" she asked, glaring. Axel sighed and brought his chakrams, spinning them in between his fingers. " Kingdom Hearts." Axel pointed to her keyblade. " Know anything about this?" he asked, with a fire pointing. Ginji looked to her keyblade and then looked back up, with a shrug appearing. " I remember fighting heartless' and dusks and also meeting you." she said looking at Axel, straight with her eyes. Her eyes looked pinkish red. She must've had any sleep at all. Probably she was trying to avoid the danger, keeping to come at her.

    " Did you ask for this?" Axel threatened. Ginji, took her left foot back and her arms stready, with her keyblade. Gripping her hand on the keyblade, keeping it very steady. " What makes you think that!?" Ginji yelled over to Axel. He laughed and looked up to the dark clouds and then back at her. " There are rumors that somebody wished this." Axel blabbed, using his right hand. Ginji shooked her head. " Well it's not me." she answered.

    "Then, why the keyblade?" Axel asked, rolling his chakrams around.

    Ginji looked at her keyblade, " It just came to my hands." she said. Hearing a loud boom.
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    To be continued.



    Sorry if there are mistakes like grammar and spelling. I seemed to be rushing, my time was running out. Anyways I hoped you liked this chapter, sorry it was short. See you on Sunday, I'll be typing a new chapter on Sunday. Beginning with group 2. Anyways please comment if you'd like:)
     
  2. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    great chapter ^_^
    but there's something wrong with axel :3
    he didn't seem like axel you should add something like (got it memorized)
    i just love the way he says it don't you ?


     
  3. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Hehe, your right. I should've put that in, I guess I forgot Axel's personality but his weapon.
     
  4. rexmildd15 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    very very VERY gooch,haven't been on kh vids for a long time nor reading storys but this chapter is awesome,i think im gonna type another story other than that,im excited for the last chapter D= and sadly...
    i didn't actually want khcte to end,but..by all means.Anyways(dumb me xP) back to the subject,so...which sunday were you talking about sis ..this one or the next?and is Marluxia actually gonna die or is the glowing lights thingy gonna take both of us somewhere???these are the questions im wondering.You story enspired me Noemy,it gave me the...umm,hmm....ill just say it gave me the cookies.and poor Ginji, getting acused on what she didn't do.(shame on you Noemy xD jokes) by Axel.sorry for the long comment =|


    obveously by your sis: Rexmildd ;3
    keep up with the good work
     
  5. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    O_o i thought you wrote the story with her*confused*
     
  6. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well, she isn't for now. But until KHCtE 2 she'll be writing it with me:) Seems like Rexmildd is giving herself a break *gives icecream*
     
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    Yay! Love the new chappies! I just cuaght up!
     
  8. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Yay, that's great Sasuumi:D *high five*
     
  9. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    oh
    so when is the story going to finish exactly like in 2 3 4 chapters

    i'm really sad that it's going to end but happy that there will be khcte2

    *goes to get her some ice cream *
     
  10. Sumi suicidé

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    I've copy and pasting your story to create several different stories. I've finished Zoe and I'm working on Mexony & Rexmildd
     
  11. cloud_kairi333 Moogle Assistant

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    oh,It was a great chapter *__*
     
  12. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks:D:D



    Woo, that's great:D *gives extra pencil*
     
  13. Ampex Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Oh no!! I'm going to comiit suicide (in the story)!! :C
     
  14. rexmildd15 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    guess you already famous huh,well i like this chapter.its cool
     
  15. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well hello everybody. Today here we have a new chapter. Which to me is a fresh start! But, I love it when you guys like this story, makes me all giggly (it's true) Every comment makes me smile, enough of that. Let's begin to read:) I have the hiccups for some reason so, anyways lets scroll.



    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 41: Dust




    Tybic rolled over to the under table. As for Valerie and Kirsty they both ran forth away from the window, they both knew when glass shatters it can go somewhere to your body giving you a waste of blood. Luke covered his ears and closed his eyes, kneeing down as if he was surrendering. "It's coming..." Valerie whispered in a shaky voice. Tybic nodded and looked at the rest with thoughts going through his mind. It's very confusing not knowing what's going on. I'm still lost. But... I know everyone's here for a certain reason. To save the world or even...ruin it. But, I know these guys aren't bad. I can see it in their eyes, their all innocent. Tybic shooked his head then closed his eyes, waiting for the glass to explode to billions or more.


    The roar became louder, but it seemed that there was nothing going on at that moment. The roar of the heartless was loud but, it seemed as if it won't bother but burst in instead of standing. " Why isn't the heartless coming after us?" Kirsty asked, looking to her rainbow keyblade. Valerie looked at her and looked back up to the windows, the curtains were closed, but she felt a swormy thing going through her hands. Do I need to fight or-no. I don't need to. My hand may be shaking but it can't be a sign that I have to stand and take charge! Valerie though, biting to her lips. Luke stood up and began walking forward. It felt very slow, as if the gravity was pulling him down to surface. He slowly fell to the ground landing on his knees. " Luke!" Tybic yelled out. Valerie and Kirsty gasped, it looked like as if it just saw something shocking. " You alright mate?" Tybic called out, over to Luke. Luke slowly put his hands on the ground and rose from the ground.

    What's wrong with me? I feel as if I just drained my powers and body and just...lost it all. But, I can't lose anything, I know something is wrong in this picture. The heartless may be loudly roaring, it seems as if it won't dare to attack any one of us. But I won't just sit there, I'll slowly approach the curtains and shine it wide, Luke nodded to himself, after his words have spoken in his head. As he walked closer, the gravity was getting much more pressure than after. There was no roar, the closer you got near, the mute it fore. Luke looked around, it seemed that everyone from behind froze, but he could feel a wave going on his back through his spine to his mind.

    Kirsty looked at Luke, seeing him. It looked like somebody was strangling him. He's standing but nothing has hit him, he looks like he's fighting something through his heart. Why am I here? Why are things going wrong? Nothings working for any reason, seeing Luke struggling, Valerie shocked and Tybic just sitting, it all seems as if their all an illusion to my head and it's all just a dream. But it couldn't be a dream, this is real. After seeing Xigbar, and the others and also fighting-defending! This is no more than a dream but reality! Kirsty grinned.

    Luke got closer and then felt the curtains, he rappidly pulled them with all strength. The curtains ripped wide open and bam. A shone of light came beaming through and thrilled the four, making them all being pulled in. Tybic glanced around and saw no one but himself going in the light, flying. Kirsty looked around and saw nothing but the light shining right onto her. Valerie, was being pulled against, the wind pushing her to the wide light. Luke let go, and felt a violent rush through his heart.
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    Everyone just stared at Roxas. What was he talking about? Why did he say that he can feel it? So many questions rushed through everybody's head. Amber looked around and examined her hand, it felt light. " Um..Amber? You doing okay?" Demyx leaned over to her. Amber looked up and nodded. " I feel light." she whispered softly. Demyx nodded but was not quite sure what she actually meant. Lynn stood up solemnly and saw that the world has change. " I can feel our ending too." Lynn agreed. " What are you talking about?" Larxene asked, looking at her kunai's. " I meant think about it. After a long journey, it feels like your finished and it's..end." Lynn answered. Xaale nodded, and chewed on a piece of crust from the bread.


    A choke began to happen. Xaale held over her neck and began coughing. Amber rushed over looked at her. Demyx summoned out his sitar, making water circling her and then splashing in side her mouth to her throat. Xaale coughed once more and then dropped. " I don't know what-agh- happened but.. I felt my heart stop for five seconds." she said, gluing her eyes up in air. Angel looked around and afterwards saw a gigantic heartless over. " Heartless!" Angel yelled, summoning her weapon out. Everyone looked up, but saw nothing, but the sky. " Heartless? I don't see any." Lynn said, scratching her head. Angel shooked her head and pointed straight. " Don't you see it?" Angel worridly said. She ran over and kicked it and then was kicked back from the heartless' foot. She fell over. " You okay?" Larxene was concerned. Eden looked around and then saw a white portal.

    " Hey..I see. A white portal." she pointed out. Everyone stopped and looked up ahead. " I see it." Roxas said, standing up and began slowly walking towards it. Everyone stood up and also began walking towards it. " This feels weird." Xaale said, scratching her left arm. Lynn looked toward the portal and felt a force picking her up, she was then pulled in, the breeze felt nice. The pine smell wasn't there but there was a feeling. " Somethings dead." Eden said. Angel nodded and closed her eyes keeping her eyes wide open to the white portal. Amber looked to herself and then the others. There was something from what Roxas said. He's right.

    It is the end.
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    Jack then fell, coming out the portal automatically. Jack looked up and felt that his powers that were given to him were draining him away. " Holy.." he whispered. Looking up he saw a big flashback, seeing where he was. The park, it's where it all started to him. " I became evil." he looked at his hands, examing them.

    " I totured people and made them lose their lives!" he cringed and then opened.

    Nothing bad was happening. Jack looked and his eyes changed to changing slideshow pictures of his past from when he was first born. " Mom..Dad." he softly said. Looking up there were more slideshow pictures. Everything was going weird. Why is this happening now- why not later!? Jack then opened his legs from pants and saw that big scar he recieved from the most deadliest fighting. "You will be one of us." he said, repeating the words from an Organization XIII member. Jack then opened and looked around. It looked like a large stadium. It was dusty and dirty. Rocks were hanging in the ceiling. Probably it drops everytime, from fighting.

    "Glad your here." said a womenly voice.
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    " Fun? That's good.'' Mexony responded, giving thumbs up. " Now I know what's happening." she said. Keath cocked his head and looked to her seeing the breeze blowing through both their head hair's. " I know that... when I first wished for Kingdom hearts. It felt like it wouldn't happen. I waited days and ages for this to happen and finally it comes." she frowned.

    "But at the wrong time." she finished.

    Keath looked to her and saw her mushing away. Her body was gone soon was left of her head. Her head faded, with mouthed words. Now...Keath was all alone. Abandoned. He looked around and saw dusks sworming around him. " Why are THEY here!?" Keath slashing his sword on one dusks and then the other.Tears brushed out his eyes, the fighting up defendence, no. independance. Keath saw one more dusks, it looked more different than the others. He slashed it also and then vines came onto him, covering his whole body. " Is it my end!?" he struggled, trying to break free. Looking to his watch, time was melting.

    Time was veing killed.
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    The heartless rosed back up and grabbed Len by the neck. " Listen girl, I don't know who the hell you are but quit fighting me and let me kill you." he grinned. Len shooked her head and then began kicking through the air. Her throat was being clogged up, she felt the fire going up on her whole body. Was she fading? Len threw her keyblade, breaking free in air. She stumbled on the ground and found her pace. She stood up and began to run. The heartless roared and after yelled out

    " Repeat!" he yellled.

    Len glanced back and turned her head facing, she was trying to reach the corner of the alley but couldn't, it felt as if she was running in the same space. The heartless laughed and stomped over looking at Len just running in the same place. " No!" Len coughed. The heartless grabbed her again and breathed in her scent. " You taste like sugar." the heartless smiled. He looked into her eyes. Len saw the shocking in her eyes, seeing a big stadium from behind seeing nothing but blood gushing out. " NO!" Len began struglging through. She kicked her feet like she was being pulled into rehab.

    " I LOVE sugar." the heartless opened his mouth.
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    There was black space going through, Marcus put his hands on the black rock. Opening his eyes he saw nothing but a huge stadium, it was rocked ceiled and the ground was dusty as ever. " I got to get out of here before Maleficant comes and chased me again!" Marcus complained, grabbing the dust to pull forth. As he pulled he saw nothing but a tight rope squeezing on his legs. It hurts to reach, but the more he reached it felt as if his legs were ripped off in the gummy.

    Marcus, took out a piece of potion. All was left was 0.7. He took a quick sip feeling his leg being a bit shaky. That was the magic of potion. Getting out the magic potion he took a sip and felt the energy of being able to use magic on anything. " Slash." Marcus struggled, pointing to the rope. A yellow beamed the rope cutting it off. Marcus' leg was free! Looking around he saw Maleficant, standing fifty feet from him. Her staff being held up looking gracefully and cheered at Marcus.

    "Damnit." Marcus whined, seeing that old lady's face once more.

    To be continued.

    I hoped you liked it:D It was a good chapter to write for me. Sorry if there are grammar or any spelling mistakes. I thought my hour turn would be finished. I'm not sure if it's long but yes, it is I think:D Well see you on the beginning of Zexion Month, shall I type chapter 42 on Sunday:D Please comment if you'd like, hoped you liked this chapter:)
     
  16. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    I must have missed something! D:

    Lol you know how I was grounded? (By the wa it's good to see you all again) I just read this and found out I was dying....or something. I'm going to go back and read all of the ones I missed. Good chapter, as always~
     
  17. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    :huh: i;m confused am i dying or was that just a flash

    great chapter you left me speechless :speechless-smiley-0 as always ^_^

    welcome back ^_^ it's good to see you again
     
  18. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well, there is a hint in the very end of each scene, but no you are not dying Len:). Also, thankyou very much:D
     
  19. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Oooo! i get it! End of Earth!
     
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    Whatever hapened to me, anyway? Which reminds me, I was grounded to? O.O I forgot to say sumtin bout that! :P If you don't mind, Mex, I would at least like to interact with a character besides Xemnas/punching bag.