Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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    Thankyou everyone for the comments. The new chapter shall be up, this Friday.:)
     
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    Thankyou very much Destined!:D Well adding extra for everyone, Mothers Day is coming this Sunday, Saturday...I should be able to type up a new chapter, that is if I'm not out to places to get my mommy a special something:D
     
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    Well everybody, today's Friday! The day I type up my new chapter, well I did my cycle and today's turn is...you'll see. We are getting closer and closer to the ending! Oh yeah, I thank everyone who'
    s been reading, joining and commenting, your all awesome:D Let's read the new chapter now, shall we?:)



    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth.
    Chapter 38: Adrenaline






    Looking up, the four saw the sign store "Pizza Hut". Tybic rubbed his hands togethers with his tongue sticking out. " Pizza-" he happily sighed. Luke grinned crossing his arms, " It's about time we get something to eat!" Valerie and Kirsty both laughed at the two. They all walked in pushing open the window glass door. The inside had red walls with white stripes and over on the right side was a counter with the pizza menu over screen and the in the behind the counter there were voke machines and the kitchen, where all the pizza and others were cooked.

    "Let's order." Valerie said walking calmy but desperately over to the counter. Tybic and Luke were looking around, seeing the chairs and clean tables. But over on the corner was a burnt ash tray. " Somebody smoked here." Kirsty said pointing over to the black corner. Valerie leaned in the counter, but didn't see any people. It was deserted from behind. " There's no one?" Luke asked from behind, sniffing the aroma of pizza. Valerie turned her head and shook. " I'm not quite sure why." she answered. Tybic and Kirsty walked over to a table and both sat down, across from eachother.

    "So, where did you meet Xigbar?" Tybic asked, playing with the napkin holders. Kirsty looked at him, " I met him in Spain. He took me over to the woods...which is the Organization's hideout." Kirsty took a napkin, putting in her pocket . Over on the other side, Tybic looked around with an alert face. " What's wrong?" Kirsty asked. Tybic looked back at her and gulped. " I feel the presence of a heartless approaching straight to us." he stood up from his chair, knocking it down. Luke and Valerie turned around from the bang of the metal chair. " What happened?" Valerie asked. Tybic looked at Luke " Heartless is approaching!''


    Tybic let his keyblade appear, he held it steady. Kirsty took out her rainbow keyblade, with it's colour's flowing. Luke ran over, taking Valerie's hand to come along. Luke released his keyblade out and then stared straight to the wall. Valerie looked around and grabbed a napkin, with an amazing appearing, a nice white striped keyblade appeared. It looked like the ultima-keyblade, but only in different colours. "What now?" Luke stared. Tybic looked at the wall, " I can hear it coming-- listen! When it comes crashing through the wall, duck from the dust and rocks, and after..we fight." Tybic said. The three nodded and focusley looked at the wall. The floor began to rumble hard.

    The heartless was coming.
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    Demyx had his head covered by his hands, he looked around and saw no one but Roxas and Zexion..along with Larxene. " Where are the others?" Roxas gasped, looking around. "Up here." they answered. Zexion and the others looked up and saw all of them, hanging on the trees with straps attached to they're backs. " We're stuck and straped." Eden sighed. Lynn took out her wooden knife and flipped her body over to cut the rope. Amber remained, taking out a cookie with a crunch. Xaale began moving her feet back and forth like a swing, to make the string collaspe from it's orginal. Angel, took out her weapon looking around to make a good release.

    "We're going to get down!-" Angel sighed, " Just as soon as we solve this mess." Lynn said, cutting her rope. Demyx nodded, "Zexion?" Zexion nodded opening his lexicon and with mumbles through his lips. A bag of leafs surrounded the whole area from where they were. " Ah..safe landing." Eden grinned. Taking out her weapon she cut her rope straight down. Eden closed her eyes, from the fall, landing safely..she was on the pile of leaves. "Sweet." she winked. Angel released her self falling straight in the leaves, making the leaves fly up from her marvelous landing. Lynn put the knife back into her pocket, and then made a swing, and after...landed on the leaves. After all the girls went down, Xaale's eyes widened.


    "That Jack tricked us!" she complained. "He said we'd be sperate." Amber crunched on a cookie. Everyone else nodded. " Trying to scare us?" Roxas guessed. Zexion shooked his head, " No..perhaps for death." "Death?" everyone asked. Zexion nodded, " We were very close to dying and so was he. Therefore is was Death. But he probably wants something from us or trying to get details of something."

    Demyx took out his Sitar. " Anyways..let's head out and find some food or something." Lynn shook her head. " No Demyx, we can't eat. If we do, who knows what'll come on us." Eden agreed and so did the others. " Eat on our way?" Demyx asked with a smile. Lynn nodded handing him a piece of bread. " Ya'know, we're so close to the end." Roxas said. Everyone cocked their heads looking at Roxas. " End?"

    "Yeah...I can feel it."
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    Jack laughed, lunging a splash of water on his face. " Well that was wonderful!" he splashed more water.
    "Jack, you should think alittle harder. What do you want?" asked the voice. " The wisher, I mean he or she wished for it and started all this cursed mess! I mean, why did we have to suffer this all? I mean it was fun but it's important to think about before saying it."


    Jack grabbed his shirt, putting it back on and then turning around with a hershey kiss in his hand. " I got a new plan, and I thought about it." he grinned. "Oh?" Jack nodded, " Poison chocolate, like I did to that girl, giving her a sweet kiss--but that's a different story, I'll fool that group and make them die." Jack lingered. The person nodded and but his hand on Jack's shoulder filling black ashes onto him. "Well.."

    "Well?" Jack scoffed. " You'll need more power than you expect."

    Jack nodded and looked to his fist, he can feel the pumping on his heart rising faster. " More power means more fun." he clutched his fists. The person gave an evil smile and portaled away, leaving Jack all by himself.

    Jack looked over to the trees and opened a blue portal. " Let's try this again." he grinned. Jack walked slowly over to the portal, with a saying goodbye to himself and the nature.. Walking right in it was pitch black, but there was a sense of people nearby. "AH!" he grinned. " There they are." he scurffed through the bags of chocolate, bouncing them in his hands.
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    As Keath and Mexony walked they saw dusk swivling around some innocence. " Think you got another wish." Keath nudge. Mexony nodded bringing out her weapon and so did Keath. " Let's-" "Fight." Keath finished. The two ran over but Mexony stopped just leaving Keath fighting the dusk himself. Keath jammed the dusks to water and ashes. He kept on grinning everytime he did a score. It felt like playing Kingdom Hearts the PS2 game but this was real. He was in the game!

    Mexony then took out her cellphone and pressed the camera button making a photo stop. " Evidence that Kingdom Hearts exist." she mumbled, saving it into her file. Keath then did a dodge roll, slanging the dusk to pieces and one another. Mexony then walked forward and pounded the ground with her fist hanger, making it rumble and sand (her element) rise up. " Sand, forth!" she ordered. The sand went around making a sand tornadoe for the dusks, along with Keath.

    The sand wrapped around. Sand kept flying all over the places, Keath covered his eyes and reached into his pocket's reaching for some goggles, he forgot to leave. Putting them on, it was clear to what was now happening, he kicked the dusks on the ground and then gave a great stabbing. "Score!" he cheered. Mexony was outside just watching with her eyes, seeing how incredible Keath was fighting. After ward Mexony stuck her hand out, sucking in the sand with her left hand. The dusk were sucked in to but melted.


    Keath breathed heavily and looked at Mexony. " That was fun."
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    Len then slashed her keyblade against the chain, making a release. Len looked around panting and scared. " Ok...what the heck was that!?" she questioned. Sticking out she saw a heartless that was big, she saw it with it's mouth wide. " Your heart taste like sweets." the heartless' deep voice said. Len gasped, " You can t-t-talk!?" she struggled. The heartless nodded and stomped over to Len, with big steps, making the ground rumble.

    " Now, let me have your heart sweety." the heartless smiled. Len through her keyblade to the heartless, attacking it's side. The heartless roared in pain and then puffed straight at Len. Len grinned and stuck her hand out with her keyblade re-appearing. " Now, shall we dance?" she asked. The heartless' mouth opened sending out a blast of blizzaga. Len jumped over and cast out the magic. " Thundaga!" she demanded. With the thunder coming down, shocking the heartless big time. Len ran over to the wall, doing something- she climbed the wall on her feet running up. Afterwards she jumped backwards pointing her keyblade straight at the heartless.


    "Firaga!" she yelled. The blast of fire came out, knocking the heartless down on it's back.


    To be continued.

    Well that was fun typing, my hands are cold so I struggled my whole way on the fifth paragrapgh. Sorry if there are spelling mistakes or bad grammar. I hope you liked reading this chapter. Please comment if you'd like. Thankyou everyone for the supports:D

     
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    you have a very creative mind there my friend ^_^
    i mean a heartless that can talk it never came up to me or even thought about it :rockdover:

    great chapter there :)
     
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    Thankyou Len.


    The story is coming to an end, fear not there will be another. Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth. Everyone, when the story is over (this one) I shall private message you for information of your character and other details. New chapter will come this Friday, Monday which is today...I'm making some plans, I have no school.
     
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    Cool story. I likethe way you present it very2 much. A great idea indeed. Totally. ^^ If only there's a rate for this, I'd go 5/5 for ya.
     
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    Lol, thankyou:)
     
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    Well everybody, I'm reaching very close to the end. Seeing that this is a good story, I'm still continuing. Well hearing that things are going well let's read, shall we?





    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 39: Look carefully







    "Falling for stuff is my kind of entertainment!" he laughed, Austin couldn't help but just laugh along. " So, why are you here?" Austin stoppped. " To restore peace, Kingdom Hearts shouldn't be here- and neither do you." he pointed out. Austin looked away with his tongue sticking out, not letting the boy see he was making faces at him from shadow. " Keep doing that and your toast." the boy said fixing his hair on front, which was covering half his eye from moving too much. Austin looked at him and saw a tatoo on his back.

    " But, you shouldn't be here either." Austin retorted. The boy turned around and glared, " I explained why I was here! But YOU didn't!" he complained. Austin scoffed, " Like I need to tell what I'm doing every moment!" he flapped his fingers. The boy then pulled him over throwing him over to the cement, making a crack on the spine. " That hurts Austin!?" he laughed. Austin rubbed his back with his fingers and slowly stood up, " Play me." he glared up ahead. " I should've mentioned earlier, my name is Han, well not really but just call me that!' Han kicked up ahead.

    Austin dodged and released out his weapon to fight in return, it was stat.
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    Ampex pulled onto the ground and tried to let Xemnas off him. " Theres no way!" Xemnas said from behind. Ampex glanced over seeing Xemnas's sarcastic frown. " We're both going to die, together." he pulled his ankle making Ampex twisting his ankle. " AH!" Ampex whined, looking down he could see that the bandages he covered over began to spread. " This is what happens when you betray!" Xemnas pulled harder. Ampex tried to take off his organization shoes to get out of the mess.

    "Why did you guys come anyways!" he yelled. Xemnas stared at him, " Let's see, Ampex. We began disappearing in white sparkles our body parts were leaving us by seconds, next thing you know, we're on the ground spreaded in this, world!" he pulled harder. Ampex grabbed his weapon that was laying away five feet from him. " Come' on." he sweated, reaching his hand he can see a potion under the ground, hidden. " There was a potion?" Ampex whispered to himself. Ampex's fingers touched the potion, rolling it to his free hand. " What are you doing AMPEX!?" with the word Ampex, Xemnas pulled him harder, beginning to drag him down. The potion slipped making it roll farther from him. " No!" Ampex reached his hand out. Ampex then turning over to Xemnas, kicking him in the face.

    Xemnas' hands letted go, afterwards, Ampex limped over grabbing his weapon. He limped back over to Xemnas and looked to his eyes. " Farewell, Xemnas." Ampex raised his weapon.
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    As Zoe walked she felt a breeze behind her back. Was that a sense of Bianca? Zoe looked around and saw the centre streets up ahead. " Wonderful." she grinned. Walking over she saw big lights flashing and cars speeding by fast. The aroma spreading in the air, the smell of garbage and wonderful, delightful, food. Zoe's eyes blacked out for a moment showing a suffering picture of her sister. Zoe's eyes re-opened, and she looked around worried. Instead of heading for the city, Zoe began to run the opposite heading for the deep dark woods.

    As Zoe ran her breathing gone faster and her blood pressure from pumping kept racing forward and backwards. Stopping to catch her breath she panted looking up holding the photo of Bianca. " I will find you." she whispered, putting it into her butt pocket. Looking up she saw Corina again. Zoe strucked her gun out pointing it to her head. " What do you want!?" she yelled to get an answer. Corina looked at her with sweat and scratches. " A message...what did it say!" Corina yelled. Zoe cocked her eyebrows. " THE MESSAGE FROM MY CELL!" Corina yelled, to jog up Zoe's memory. " There was only one." Zoe responded. " What was it!? Was it from Fried?" Corina glowed. Zoe looked away, '' I'm not sure." Zoe answered. Corina walked forward and put her hands on Zoe's shoudlers.

    " That's right, you don't even know him." she teared. Zoe looked at her. " Listen, we went on bad bear feet, but I'll be able to help you to get to the blue moon only-" Zoe stopped. Corina looked at her waiting for her finishing. " If you help me find Bianca." she flipped the picture appearing. Corina nodded looking at her. Zoe had a tingling feeling, she felt that it was good joining with somebody. There was a confidence that Bianca could be where she is.
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    The car came to a sudden stop. Fried stopped the engine and Jorrell looked out the window. " We're taking a break." Fried said, getting out the car. Jorrell, opening the car door and walked out, seeing Fried leaning against a cement pillar light. " Where are we?" Jorrell asked, scratching his eyes. Fried looked at Jorrell and then after took out a cigarre from his pocket. " Are you even going to answer!" Jorrell asked, with his eyes glaring at him. Taking out a lighter, he lighted the tiny flame onto the end of the cigarre. PUlling it oyut his mouth, he let out a big plot of smokepollution out. " We're at an empty parking lot, it's for highway drivers. Also, I'm here to test you." he grabbing Jorrell by the hand and pulled him up to him.

    Jorrell's eyes widened, kicking him in the chin with a swipe. " What the hell man!" Jorrell puffed. Fried grinned, " That was test one. Don't let your opponent grab you nor' hit you." Fried said. Jorrell swiped the hand prints off himself, from the grabbs. Jorrell looked up and released out his weapon. Fried nodded and threw tin cans that he kept from behind the pole. He began throwing them at Jorrell. Jorrell hitted the can back, and then another appeared heading straight for him " It's like badminton. The birdie never stops attacking unless one loses it's balance." Fried said.

    He nodded and attacked the other can. " The birdie can't fall on your side, it has to fall on the other, get my drift?" Fried explained. Jorrell nodded. " What are you?" Jorrelll asked. Fried threw another can, " I'm...Fried." he answered crushing the cigarrette.
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    The heartless roared after the attack, exploding to a huge heart. It began to float up into the air. "The heart." Jessica whispered. Her mother stared at her daughter looking at the heart with dirt all over her body, marks on her ans sweat. " Jessica-" "Mom." she cutted off. " Earth is in danger, and... I have to save it." Jessica said. Her mother looked at her glowing eyes to the heart. She bit her lips in thinking. " Well, I know it's in danger." she responded. Jessica swished her hair behind and looked to her mother, instead of the heart. " I don't want you to get hurt Jessica. You mean the world to me, if I lose you..then the world will go." she teared. " But, I'm letting you save the world, after seeing you fight in confidence, I'm letting you go." she said.

    Jessica's eyes widened and her smile grew. She after then nodded and ran to her mothers arms, giving her a huge hug of happiness and sadness. " Thankyou, mom. I'll miss you." Jessica said stuffing herself. Her mother nodded and then letted go reaching to something in her pocket. " Well sweety. It's to early to give you a present, but because you imporoved so much. I'm giving you this." Her mother took Jessica's hands and put something cold in them. Her mother then looked at her giving a smile. Jessica looked at a saw a necklace dangling with her name on it, and holding in was a miny camera. Those were rare.

    Jessica looked up and mouthed "thankyou." Jessica then waved and turned around beginning to walk off to save the Earth and others. Jessica took one last look at her mom and smiled. " She understood what's going on." Jessica smiled.
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    Dr.Nywn saw NewYork, all the flashing screens blinking and all the people talking. But NewYork was burnt and damaged. It seems that the heartless did this. There was some blood stains of hardtops and signs. Dr.Nywn took out his rum and looked at it. He threw it to the ground, making it smash. Seeing a smoke of green rising up. With the scent it gave a vomit smell. " It worked." he grinned. Reaching the glass he cutted him self on purpose.

    "With the blood of mines, I'm invincible to get hurt." he reported. Looking around he saw heartless' appearing around him " It's the scent." he clutched. The heartless looked harmless. the slowly walked over to Dr.Nywn sniffing him. It was like an animal sniffing the new scent never before, sniffing the person to wonder where they've been. One of the heartless' died right away. Dr.Nywn grinned and looked around, soon the heartless' turned to ash from that vomit smell. Not because of the smell but it's smell holds a strong power. Dr. Nywn then fell to the ground, coughing out blood. It was his growth going up from smashing it right in fron tof him. It was toxicated.

    Looking around he saw four people fighting up ahead, a monster. " Perhaps I can help." he grinned.

    To be continued.



    Sorry if it was short, sorry if I made and mistakes on my typing, I was trying to save some time because it take me an hour to type a chapter. Please comment if you'd like, I hoped you liked this chapter. Monday is Victoria day here, so I may be able to type up a new chapter. By June, this story should end:) Well, well' wait:D
     
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  18. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    it's really enjoyable to read
    great keep up :cheers:
     
  19. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Lol, thanks Len. Well everybody, this story is getting close to the end, but before I end it, I'll be pm'ing you for a photo or picture of your character. Because, I'm making credits at the end, a slideshow one so yeap:)
     
  20. len Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ooh a sildeshow and credits O_o

    I'm looking up for it and for the chapter today ^_^