Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

wtf is wrong with that dude? is he mentally unstable, or what? =P

 

Well it's Sunday, and I think I said I'd type a new chapter. Well here it is! Please don't feel sad if your not in this chapter:(. As I said it goes by cycle, from where I'm sitting ( I'm sitting on an office chair) Probably, In August is my birthday, I begged my parents for a laptop because...yeah. So I will type more chapter, and have more times here. A little secret to share...there will be Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth 3! Just a little hint..there was no wish for that one:) Anyways...let's read!





Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 32: Wooo:)




Valerie, Luke and Tybic nodded. All waving to Kirsty, the "new" girl. Xigbar looked at them and gave a tiny grin. " Names Xigbar." Xigbar introduced himself. " We know." Luke said. Xigbar cocked his head. " Um..how?" he scratched his head looking at all of them confusingly. " Well you see, Kingdom Hearts came and all the characters fell here randomly like me met..um... Riku, Saix and Sora." Tybic said, counting on his fingers. Xigbar nodded, " Oh.. so.. you mind if you help me and my girl here?" Xigbar said, nudging Valerie.

They all nodded, " Sure, what is it?" Valerie asked. A pound came behind, Daisuke breathed heavily and took his weapon out. Xigbar pointed to Daisuke "Defeat him." he said. The three nodded and released out their weapons. With a little luck, Luke's weapon re-appeared. "That's great Luke! Your keyblade is back!" Tybic grinned. Valerie smiled, and looked at the mysterious person. " Come'on guys, teamwork!" Valerie ran forward to Daisuke. Daisuke smiled, and stuck his hand out. " Shake ground." he spitted out. The earth's ground shook, like an Earthquake. "What in the name!?" Tybic looked around, he tripped over and fell on his chin. Luke tried to hold but couldn't, he also fell. Daisuke laughed at the two boys. " Wow you looked in a shaky!" he teased. Tybic glared at Daisuke and threw his keyblade as a boomerrang, right passed Daisuke.

"You missed." Daisuke snickered. Tybic raised his eye brow with a grin. " Oh really?" Tybic pointed behind him. Daisuke turned around and wham! The keyblade banged Daisuke right in the face, making the top of his forehead bleed. "Imbecile..." he quietly said. Luke did a flip up and jumped high, throwing the keyblade straight to Daisuke. Daisuke dodged but he then tripped over by Luke's kick. Making him lose control of his own leg. "Damnit!" he coughed. Kirsty and Valeries back's touched, they both jumped and made wheel barrel kick with both of their legs. " Take that Daisuke!" Kirsty yelled. "Yeah!" Valerie agreed. Xigbar took his pistols out and shot one pistol straight to his ankle.
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Jack just looked at them, he through his clones straight forward, heading with magic in their hands reading to attack. Angel and Eden ran to the left, making a spin attack with their weapons. Throwing it, it attacked four clones of Jack, making them attack. Amber and Angel took the cookies in hold and threw them straight to one's mouth. three spitted them out, and faded away. " Boo-yah!" Amber cheered. There were four left of Jack. Who was the real one? Xaale and Lynn ran forth and jumped, they kicked one each,and left were two. One of them had to be real.

Larxene walked forth, "Jack...ya'changed since I saw you last... too bad I have to electrify you!" Larxene yelled. She released out a bolt of lightning with her kunai's. Jack laughed. "Reflect!" he called out.With a sheild popping out, it reflected hitting Larxene straight back with a much bigger attack. Zexion took out his lexicon and said something through his lips, which couldn't fastly be read. Fire balls surrounded the whole background. It wouldn't hit anyone else but Jack. Jack laughed, and said something under his lips also. With a bucket of wave waters attacking him back and the fire charging back to him. "Gah!" Zexion whined, flyign to the stump of a random tree. Roxas took his keyblades out. " Quit it Jack!" Roxas said, he threw his oathkeeper, to Jack. Roxas ran around to go right behind Jack to hit him in the back. Jack laughed, he grabbed the keyblade in his hand and turned around, slashing Roxas against the leg, in a quick speed!

"Dance water Dance!" Demyx called out. He had bruised from some magic, but he knew he'd be all right. Throwing the water, he made a water wave. Making a huge wave.
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Mexony sighed in relief. " Thank god.." she whispered. Keath walked over to her and looked at her. " Who in world are you?" he asked. Mexony grinned, " A girl..the Fist hanger." she coldly said. Keath nodded and released his cloud sword. " Wanna go?" Keath grinned. Mexony grinned. " Sure..let's see your strength!" Mexony charged and threw her fist to his head, attacking him far. Keath struggled, but stood up. " Your good." he scoffed. Mexony looked away and did a roll making spikes come out her fist hanger. Keath dodge, and smashed his cloud sword against the concrete.

The ground shook. Mexony fell, with a little cut she rised back up and ran forth with her fist ready. Keath ran forth also. It was like a Roxas and Sora fight in The World That Never Was scene! Mexony and Keath jumped with there weapons ready, they smashed into eachother.


To be continued.

Hoped ya liked it, sorry for mistakes, please comment!

Also to reminders, if you want to know when a new chapter is coming up, please Private Message or contact me on my msn to know what's going on in my dailsy Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth plans.
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:woohoo:

Demmy and me were in this chapter!

Awesome~​

 

Indeed they were, glad your cheering or happy or..not quite sure, anyways, thanks:)

 

xD

Nice chapter though​

 

Maybe once this story is done you could edit all the chapters into the first page.
Sure, it would make the first page a bit long, but at least it would be easier for you and others to review the story and others to read it for the first time.
Just a suggestion :)~​

 

Sure I'll try that:)

 

Hey everyone! Today is Friday! And you know what that means!


Can't wait, I'm excited to see what happens.

 

Thanks everyone for the comments, if you need any information or requests for something, please Private Message me or add me on my msn, which is in my profile or where ever you see it:) I might be bad at grammar in this chapter, my eyes are getting watery to the screen or whenever I turn back. So I may need some glasses, though my family don't think so, but that's only for bright screens. Anyways enough of my ramble let's read!:D





Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 33: Trust





Austin was falling straight to the hard concrete, he was heading straight for a cracking bone. Austin looked around while he fell, but there was something wrong. Everything seemed to get slower, as Austin fell the motion was slow. Not fast, something was wrong in this picture. Gotta find something to hang to, he thought. When Austin looked around he found another ladder hanging, it was short, but Austin figured it would be right to hang on to it. Austin reached his hand out forward and with his free hand it clutched on the metal bar, the slow motion stopped and it continued lively. "What the?" Austin cocked his head looking around, everything was back to normal, he was holding to the metal bar.

Looking up, Austin saw a person leaning over with the cellphone, shaking it slowly. " How's it down there?" he laughed. Austin glared, he examined him and looked at his face, it seemed to have a burnt nose. "I don't know, how's the air up there!" he torched. The guy glared and took a cape, covering his nose. "Shut-up!" he yelled. "Why?" he laughed. The guy looked around and stomped, he then after jumped down, on top of Austin's face, making Austin let go of the bar, heading straight for the concrete floor. The two both landed, hard. No one was hurt, just a few bruises. "What's your problem?" Austin glared. The boy looked at him. He stuck his hand out, " I'm in a group called Frisbee, I'm sent to find a guy and talk to him about the world, Earth." he coldly said. "What about the Earth?" Austin said looking around, thinking there was someone spying on them.

"Kingdom Hearts." he pointed to the dark navy blue sky.
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Xemnas looked around, with an appearance, his sabers shined out. " Show your self!" he glared. Ampex gulped and looked around for some close trees, to escape. "Ha! There's a spot!" Ampex grinned, he crawled over on the loose branch. The branch began to crack, Ampex's weight for the light branch seemed to heavy down. " Uh-oh. This isn't good." he whispered. The branch splitted, with a piece of wood going right through Ampex's side on his stomach. "Ow!" he whined. Falling down, he landed straight on the dirty ground. Xemnas looked at Ampex, with a mean stare.

"Ampex... what are you doing?" he kindly asked. Ampex, laughed alittle. " Welll you see superior...I was just trying to find a view for Kingdom-" Xemnas threw his sabers right beside Ampex's arm. " Say no more! Kingdom Hearts is never mines! Everyone's leaving and abandoning me. Do they not care about getting a heart!?" Xemnas yelled. Ampex looked at him. " Um...is this a trick question?" he asked, trying to make a joke. "Imbecile! Ampex, your a weakling... you think this is all funny!? Your a Nobody for petesakes!" Xemnas charged. The word "Weak" affected Ampex, he was not weak. He was a strong Nobody. Although he lost his heart, that doesn't mean he was weak! "You'll pay for that Xemnas!" Ampex yelled. Releasing out his weapon he defended the attack, reflecting on Xemnas. Xemnas flew to the tree hitting his back.


" Let's fight Xemnas. You'll be regret what you just said." coldly he said, walking slowly over, dragging his weapon on the ground.
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"Have you seen my sister." Zoe finished. Sticking out another photo of Bianca and herself in the playground, they seemed really happy. Corina examined the girl in the photo. "The one on the left?" she questioned. Zoe nodded. " Um..yeah I saw her. It seemed that some person was dragging her away, with some Nike shoes." Corina coughed. Zoe's eyes widened, "D-Drag?" she quietly asked. " Not like drag bad thing. She was being pulled away by the hand, it seemed like that sister of yours was struggling her way out of her hands." she laughed.

"Quit laughing!" Zoe yelled at her. Corina stopped and glared right into her eyes. " Or what?" she deeped in. Zoe scoffed, " Or you'll be s-" Zoe's heartbeat seemed to have stopped. The beat of her heart was pounding very slowly." Whats-" Zoe eyes were closing. " I did an effect to your heart, you see. I can go in one's body. That thing I told you about your sister...she's dead." Corina coldly said. A tear slipped from Zoe's eyes. " Liar!" she yelled. Corina looked at her, " Wow your strong-hearted...strong hearted to be a Nobody!" Corina laughed. Zoe, kicked Corina out of her. "Ah!" she flew off. Zoe's heartbeat went back to normal, her eyes widened. Looking straight at Corina.

"Who the hell are you!?" Zoe took her pistol out and pointed it to her forward. Corina just coughed and coughed. "Answer me!" she yelled at the teen studdering. Corina coughed some more. " Yeah that's right Corina. That's what you get for smoking a cigarrette." she snickered. "Well you shouldn't be holding a gun." she fainted.
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"4 hours!?" Jorrell coughed out. The guy laughed, " I'm just joshing with you! What I sprayed on you was bug spray, to keep the bugs away from you. I'm taking you somewhere." he said looked at Jorrell. "Taking me somewhere- I don't even know yo-" The guy took Jorrell's arm dragging him. " Just listen to me." he sighed. "Hey...quit dragging me! Your scraping me skin off!" Jorrell whined. The guy opening his car door in the back seat, and threw Jorrell in there, laying on the car couch. " Hey..." he sighed.

Closing the door shut, the guy walked around and opening the car door in front. Sitting in the driver's side, he locked the door and started the engine. " We're gonna have a little talk, Jorrell." he said. Pressing the pedal, a cry screech ran and off went the car in the limit eighty. "How'd you k-" the car got faster. " Listen...you have to stop fighting heartless." he said. Jorrell looked at him in a twist. " What do you mean stop fighting heartless!? I'm kicking a-"

" Jorrell, Kingdom Hearts will sooner or later die from many hearts..." he said. " How will it DIE!? I mean it's KINGDOM hearts! You get me?" Jorrell grafitied the couch. " Kingdom Hearts is not used to our world, Earth. It's a fantasy world. It doesn't exsist. Also, by researching, the wisher didn't really thought about it." he said. " Wisher?" Jorrell cocked his head.
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Jessica did a flip jumping on the car. The car stopped, a man rifled out and stared at Jessica. " What the hell are you doing kid!? You could get hurt!" he lectured. Jessica's eyes widened, she pushed the man away and jumped in the car closing the door. " Sorry, but I need to use your car!" she said. . Kicking the pedal to fast, the car went in straight speed. " WOah!" she gasped. Looking at the car, she found diet pills. " OTC's... that guy is filthy, atleast he can jog around the neigh- stop it! Don't think about that! Mom's in danger!" she looked straight ahead. Her house was coming up. Just five mroe seconds..or now.


Jessica stop the car, she forgot something. Her seatbelt. Jessica flung out the car, smashing through the glass. Blood streamed to her forhead and it seemed that she hurt the back of her head badly. " Ai..." she whined. Looking up her eyes winced. " I'll be right there mom..." she whispered. Looking she saw her mom run out the house, running and screaming from the deadly heartless. Turning her head she noticed her daughter on the ground, with blood filling around. " Jessica!" she yelled. She dropped to the ground hearing an eek. Jessica looked up and saw her mom on the ground. " Mom!"
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To be continued.


Well that's it! For now that is..tomorrow on Saturday in the afternoon, shall be another chapter. We are getting closer to the ending of Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth. Please comment if you'd like, hope you liked this chapter!:D

KHCtE Note: There will be a certain production I made a school today. It's called Trife Productions. It has a triangle in centre with a background, having the words Trife labeled in the center of the Triangle.

 

Nice chapter! Haha Ampex, that's what you get for fighting with your Superior. *Tut Tut Tut! Shame on you*

Corina, smoking is bad for you! *Also induces nagging in Corina.*

 

Xemnas looked around, with an appearance, his sabers shined out. " Show your self!" he glared. Ampex gulped and looked around for some close trees, to escape. "Ha! There's a spot!" Ampex grinned, he crawled over on the loose branch. The branch began to crack, Ampex's weight for the light branch seemed to heavy down. " Uh-oh. This isn't good." he whispered. The branch splitted, with a piece of wood going right through Ampex's side on his stomach. "Ow!" he whined. Falling down, he landed straight on the dirty ground. Xemnas looked at Ampex, with a mean stare.

"Ampex... what are you doing?" he kindly asked. Ampex, laughed alittle. " Welll you see superior...I was just trying to find a view for Kingdom-" Xemnas threw his sabers right beside Ampex's arm. " Say no more! Kingdom Hearts is never mines! Everyone's leaving and abandoning me. Do they not care about getting a heart!?" Xemnas yelled. Ampex looked at him. " Um...is this a trick question?" he asked, trying to make a joke. "Imbecile! Ampex, your a weakling... you think this is all funny!? Your a Nobody for petesakes!" Xemnas charged. The word "Weak" affected Ampex, he was not weak. He was a strong Nobody. Although he lost his heart, that doesn't mean he was weak! "You'll pay for that Xemnas!" Ampex yelled. Releasing out his weapon he defended the attack, reflecting on Xemnas. Xemnas flew to the tree hitting his back.


" Let's fight Xemnas. You'll be regret what you just said." coldly he said, walking slowly over, dragging his weapon on the ground.
qoute of Mexony

Sounds like Ima gettin the death penelty. And If you didn't know, Spellbinders are a blueish electric keyblade thing in COM. And people realy do call me weak, and I get pissed at them for it *gasps* OH noes, Mexony is psychic! Anyways, good job.

 

Well today is Saturday and for the supports I got from all you viewers, I'm happy:) I may need to get some glasses for the screens. Anyways, enjoy this chapter. Typing all this is exciting and also weird for me, not usual I have ever done this, writing and typing at the age of 12. Hehe...let's read shall we?

KHCtE2 Note: When the beginning comes, prolouge shall have all chapters repeated, (Not sure if thats even possible in here hehe?) To make a refresh of what happened. When you want a new world, just request it, if you want a weapon added just pm me or add me on my email. Anything you want to know, don't be shy, ask:) Before the new story comes up:) Also, I still except members to join.



Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 34: Morning rise.





Maleficant just studdered and looked at Marcus. " Such power you have... you should die and be a Nobody like Rexmildd!" she pounded her fist in defeat. " No. Don't judge or control Maleficant. Your just like pie." Marcus whispered. Walking over, he leaned to Maleficant and glared at her. " I squashed pie." he chuckled. Maleficant knew he looked like evil. " How about a deal." Maleficant slowly stood up, as she stood still she looked at Marcus and laughed. " We trade." she said. Marcus looked at her confusingly. " What are you talking about Maleficant?" he put his arm around to his pockets.

Both two were standing just looking in to each others eyes. Slowly came the sun. Already was the sun, it was morning. The sun rised at 7:42. Night was over morning was now in control. Marcus covered his eyes from the bright-ness. " Look at you. Imbecile you and the sun don't connect. Now...death control!" Maleficant stuck her hand out, throwing a sprinkle all over to Marcus. " Just enjoy yourself for one more day." she laughed. Fading away in disappearance, Marcus looked at his hands. It looked liked it was burnt by the stove. "What in the name did Maleficant...AH!" Marcus glanced around and pounded his fist to the nearest tree. " I need Namine." he panted.
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That guy is crazy... Rinn thought. Muxene just looked at him, walking down the dock on the beach. With a gleam of sun. Gravexin's mood stopped, he turned to Rinn pulling out a sharp small knife. " You should apologize." he glared. Muxene stood up, with the will grabbing a book of weapon of hers. She slowly walked over and called Gravexin out. " Hey! Gravexin! Look!" she shouted. Gravexin turned around and with a big thump, a book knocked his forehead knocking him out.

Rinn just stared, amazed. Muxene snapped her fingers to get Rinn's attention. " Let's go!" Muxene began to run to the trees to escape. Rinn followed with a water surf board she road on it, to go over the mountain.
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Rinn coughed and so did Muxene. The place was bizarre. The more you got further the sick you get! " Prepare yourself Rinn. Gravexin said there would be a deadly match, before you came here." Muxene puffed. Rinn nodded and released her weapons out. From behind was a roar. Muxene turned around and saw a moving bull with horns with a sign of dusks. " Attack!" Rinn charged, and stabbed her weapon through it, with scratches only caused. Running forth, Muxene caught the eyes of monkey heartless hanging with gas bombs in there hands. " Watch out!" she yelled to warn.
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Sebax breathed in and out. Under a tree there he was. He couldn't believe he actually got away from Xaldin. Took forever yet... it was worth it. Breathing heavily, Sebax looked around, for a potion. He ran out already. The way Xaldin attack was very deadly then the game in Kingdom Hearts 2. " I will..make it." Sebax said to himself. Looking up, the shine of the sun was brightening everything. Over made a shadow for the tree.

The wind began to blow. The breeze air felt so nice, it was relaxing. Though it was painfull. Whenever the wind blew hard, Sebax's scratches gave a sting. Looking around Sebax grabbed something in his pocket. It had some bandages, though it was ripped. It should work. Pulling up the sleeves laid a huge scratch from Xaldin's lances. Wrapping it around with a badage, it began to sting more. "I feel like...blob." he laughed to himself. Up in the air he saw a fade of Kingdom Hearts. "Kingdom Hearts...why are you here?" he asked. With an ask, the clouds turned to a face of the wisher. " Who is that?" he whispered. With words spready it was all jumbled up.

"Don't get it." he scratched his head. With sweat running down, the temperature was getting heavy and hot. " I need to find a better tree." he said.


To be continued.



I hoped you liked it. It was trouble trying to type this, because there are so many characters I find not being in the chapters for the past three or four weeks. I feel awful about that. If you haven't seen yourself from the past 5 chapters please report me. Anyways forgive me for that and yes..tomorrow shall be a new chapter. I'm making schedules and reports slowly in my life to this story. This story is going to end sooner in May or this Month. Please comment.:)

 

Whoah, Marcus squashes pie? o_O Very interesting analogy there. Maleficent reminds me of 8-bit theatre, throwing dust at someone and running away. In fact, I've totally forgotten the context of that scene o_O

 

Tomorrow is the new chapter. Friday is the day I type it all out. After is Saturday which means another one. We're getting close to the ending. If you have any questions to ask me, please ask on comment or private message or anything other way to want:)

 

Shoot, dang, drat....and etc...

I forgot you accepted to put Sebax into this and I haven't gotten so far in the chapters...

A suggestion, if I may?

http://kingdomheartsfanfiction.wikia.com

You could put any novels or characters for public view there, and anybody who hasn't read everything won't have to worry about other posts that distract from the plot.

I'm even going to post my own Sebax series there myself one day.

Sorry, I haven't read alot of your greatest (In my opion) Fanfic, Mexony. I like your art though!

 

Well guys today is Friday, the day where I type our new chapter. Seeing that you enjoy it, credits goes to you:) Any question ask, any request ask by private message. Let's read!


Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 35: Connect





Daisuke dropped to the ground and looked up at them. " Quit attacking." he whispered. Opening a portal he crawled in it, Xigbar gasped and yelled " Your not getting away!" he ran in the portal also. " Xigbar!" Kirsty yelled. Xigbar ignored, and before they could get in the portal, the portal disappeared. " Damnit." Luke whispered. Tybic looked at all of them and gave thumbs up." Well all did a good job. We all ganged up together on that Daisuke guy." he grinned. Everyone looked up. Valerie nodded, " Your right, we did. Fighting together was really fun." she laughed.

Luke nodded, " It was really fun." he smiled. Kirsty smiled but then put a question-y face. " I don't understand something..." she said to the three. The three looked up at Kirsty cocking their heads. " What?" Valerie asked. " He said, quit attacking. What was that supposed to mean?" she put her hand under her chin to think. Everyone nodded, " Suppose he meant not to attack him, or something else." Tybic answered. Luke looked at Tybic, then nodded. " Your right." he finally said.

Valerie looked at them and began to walk, " Come'on guys, let's go get something to eat." she smiled. A grumble went through one stomach. " Hehe." Luke laughed. Kirsty looked at Tybic. " Wasn't me." he admitted. " It was me." Valerie laughed, continuing to walk.
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The wave washed Jack out, getting all soaked up. " You guys are all imbeciles." Jack scoffed. Amber walked over, and pulled his collar. " Shut it, Jack." she threw him. Jack went flying hitting the tree. He looked at them and then looked away. " I'm done here, for good." he said. Xaale just looked at him and wiped her lips from what happened. " What do you mean your done!?" Angel called to him. Jack looked at her and gave a little chuckle. " Let's have a little seperate game." he gave thumbs up. " Why the thumbs?" Lynn asked, crossing her arms.

Eden sighed, " Probably he's giving up." she said. Roxas shrugged. " I'm not sure." he said. Larxene made her kunai's disappear, Demyx panted and made his sitar go out. Zexion opened a portal and walked right through it. " Where you going Zexion?" Demyx asked. " Home." he answered, closing the portal, right after him. " I do not want to know.." Roxas surrendered. Jack opened up a ball and made it going on each person. " Hey!" Angel tripped in the ball. " Let's see you be seperate for once!" He laughed, throwing the fire in the way, the trees burned and blew off the guys and girls. "

"Have a nice trip." he pointed out.
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The two both fell to the ground, they puffed and looked at eachother. "Your good." Mexony admitted. Keath wiped the sweat off from the rush. " So are..you" saying it with a pant. Mexony made her weapon disappear. Keath put his sword away and looked at her. " What's with your look on relief? You know all this isn't over." Keath said. Mexony nodded, " I started it, that's why." she said. Keath's eyes grew.

"How?" he asked. Mexony sighed, "Let's put it short, I wished and boom." she said making an explosion noise. Keath nodded, " So, you know the rules to here." he quietly sai.d Mexony shook her head, " That's a pyshic thing, I just wished it. Half the people already know what's going on and know who it is, but don't know my appearance." she giggled. Keath grinned, " Your okay, so..now what?" he asked. Mexony shrugged, " Um.. well since sun is rising..we should head for quaters and stuff. Fight some more." she said.

Keath nodded, " I guess?"
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Len was running, slashing heartless one by one with her keyblade. " Take that." she grinned. The heartless kept coming, because the keyblade was there, something was special about it. SLashing more heartless, Len stopped, and threw her keyblade like a ball. Throwing it off, the heartless stopped and went after the keyblade that went flying across. Len laughed, and began to run off without it.

" I knew it would work." she encouraged herself. Sticking her hand out, her keyblade came out, with a shine. The heartless weren't there. The ran to far, following the keyblade. " Let's give you a break." she smiled. The keyblade disappeared,she put her hands through her pockets and looked around the alley she ended up in. " Free lemonade." said a sign. She smiled wider and walked forward to the stand and saw no one, but the stand. " Might as well take one." she sneeked. Grabbing a cup quickly, a rope came with a bi net, trapping her around. " What the?" she grabbed the nets, it seemed the ends had metal chains.

"I got you!" said the voice.

To be continued.

Well there was an accident, I clicked the post by accident which posted it, so I had to press edit to type it all. It was hard for me to type in this certain way. Also welcome to our new character in the story. Not made up from me, but she asked to join in. I'll add her name in later in the list, due to my buisiness. Sorry if it was short, I had no idea what I was doing, my hands are cramping up. Please comment if you'd like and I hoped you liked it.

 

Nice chapter!!!

 

Ooh!!! SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

great chapter !!keep up ^_^

 

I apologize for not posting up and new chapters, it seems that I've fallen behind and writing down data of each chapter, and looking at all profiles of each characters, I'm sorry. Please accept this dinner *Gives*