Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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  1. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    I'm never in any fighting scenes! Darn you, Ampex.

    Lol, nice chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one!
     
  2. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Now that you mentioned it..it's true. Don't worry I'll make it come true!:) *winks* This Friday you should expect your character to fight and defend!:)



    Oh yeah...new note.



    KHCtE 2 Note: When it comes out, you should private message me of what update you want on your character. Also, when it begins the prolouge shall come first and then the first chapter, everyone will have a short scene to their character due to the amount of characters I have. (Which is awesome!)
     
  3. Doukuro Chaser

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    That is awesome!
     
  4. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Oh yeah...few minute I just finished the character list:D Note: I'm still excepting joiners, all the way to chapter 45 (Note: Chapter 45= last chapter) Also, in KHCtE 2 I'm still going to except:)


    Looky! All the character that joined! SOrry if I missed anyone, I was going through the pages in a quicky to see who joined it ( I went through the very first page:) )

    1.Mexony: Character-Mexony
    2. rexmildd15: Character- Rexmildd

    3. thedarknessgrowswithin: Character- Jack Skell
    4. Way_2_The_Dawn: Character- Luke
    5. Firekeyblade: Character- Angel
    6. Destined: Character- Tybic
    7. AnimeGirl104: Character- Valerie
    8. sora is cute: Character- Eden
    9. Paladin12345678: Character- Marcus
    10. Sorikai: Character- Kirsty
    11.~Amber~: Character- Amber
    12. Xaale: Character- Xaale
    13. Thalassa_Shells: Character- Rinn
    14. BamaSebastian: Character- Sebax
    15. Soranspartanti: Character- Keath
    16. Wisdom Form Guy: Character- Austin
    17. Ampex: Character- Ampex
    18. ~Sasumi~: Character- Zoe
    19. JorrellVsRoxas: Character- Jorrell
    20.yosha-the female warrior_ :Character- Jessica
    21. Random Angel: Character- Lynn
     
  5. Doukuro Chaser

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    I don't see my person...
     
  6. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Oh really, well um, who's your character? I'll add her in the list if you tell me:) Sorry I didn't put yourperson in *hugs* forgive me.
     
  7. Doukuro Chaser

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    Its Lynn

    And I could never be mad at you *huggie*
     
  8. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Yeah:D Well I put your name up there:)
     
  9. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    I CAN JUST FEEEEL THE LUUUV HERE!!! *hugs everyone*
     
  10. Sumi suicidé

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    sweet dude! thanx 4 da list, it'll help keep track of dudes 4 sure
     
  11. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Cool.

    Lol, I wasn't trying to pressure you with the fighting scene. It was more of an observation.

    Friday is today
     
  12. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well everybody, I'm sure this week was interesting, hehe...(yeah..not good a jokes alot) Well anyways here's the next chapter, there will be a cycle of characters, so it'll be hard keeping track of all characters, please do not feel bad that your not in this chapter, I'm trying to have all characters in and hey guess what, On Sunday or Saturday I might add in two chapter, so keep a close eye on this thread if you'd like. If there's anything you would like to discuss with me about this story, preview slide show, picture title, or anything Private Message me or email me. Well enough of my chit chat , let's read this chapter!:D



    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth 2-Note: When we go to other worlds by a Gummi Ship, some of the worlds,
    should contain costumes, like you know when Sora was turned to
    little lion in Pride Lands:D Tell me what'd you like to wear in a
    world so I don't make a mistake:)




    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 27: Turns.





    Maleficant laughed at Marcus. "Don't be silly, together...I will help you." Maleficant stuck her hand out, waiting for Marcus' hand to hold hers. "Shut-up!" Marcus yelled. Her face changed " You refuse to let me help?" she glared. Marcus nodded and took some more steps back. "Rexmildd, you were controling her! You used her!" he said quietly enough for him and Maleficant to hear. Maleficant scoffed, " SO! What are you going to do about it!? Tell her sister, the imbecile Mexony who doesn't even care for her cute little sister!" she said.

    "I would but she's not here... but I'll save Rexmildd, I can feel that you used her abit too much!" Marcus charged jumping on Maleficant, knocking her down to the dirty dirt. "Imbecile! Do you know who I am!?" Maleficant struggled, standing up. " Ptff yeah. You the woman who will die in a few minutes!" Marcus yelled, he jumped over doing some flips kicking her across the face. "Take that!Errrr-AAA!" he attacked. Maleficant rubbed her cheek, and took out her staff. " You tough, but can you take this?" she grinned. Marcus panted, from the adrenaline. " Mirror!" she yelled out, striking her hand out. With a thunder bolt of light, there were two Maleficant's.

    "Who's the real one, Marcus?" they both said. Marcus glanced at bothed of them. " I-I." he couldn't finish, Marcus wasn't really sure who was which. "Well, I'll answer that for you sweety." she laughed. They both ran over to Marcus, the one behind Marcus, charged. Quickly he whipped around punching in, but the mirror shattered, making blood on his knuckles bleed. The real Maleficant grabbed Marcus, and with a fast hand she put the metal band on his wrist. " Ha Hahaha!" Maleficant laughed, for victory. " I got you!" she smiled. Marcus looked at the metal band. " No you do- AHH!" with a shock on in, electrifying his body and making him lose his HP. " Say that again, Marcus." she chuckled.

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    Rinn awoke, on the sandy beach. Nothing was there, it appeared that she was under some wooden shelter. " What...happened?" she wondered. Looking around she saw a girl sitting on the sandy beach with a wooden stick, drawing all over the sand with it. Rinn stood up, "Who's she?" she whispered to herself. With one step, Rinn dropped to the sand, she was weak. Appearantly that guy had some kinda of power. "Oi! Hey, you over there!" Rinn called out she get her attention. The girl turned and saw her calling her. She dropped the stick and crawled over to her, grabbing the sand and pulled.

    "Yeah?" she asked. Rinn looked at her and snapped out, " Um...where am I?" she asked. The girl cross her arms and looked at her, " At the beach, not any normal beach, Gravexin put traps and troops of heartless' around this place. For you and me...not leave, but he just left. When you were about to awake..." she looked around. " I'm really not aloud to tell you this but--- Hey, I'm Muxene." she waved. Rinn waved, " I'm Rinn. " she said. Muxene looked around once more, and faced Rinn. " Can you remember anything?" she asked. Rinn shooked her had, but remembered only one thing.

    "I know who wished this." Rinn spoke. Muxene nodded, " Mexony, I know. She's my friend." she said. Rinn's eyes widened, " Seriously!? Mexony is your friend?" Rinn gasped. Muxene nodded , " I'm going now, to where I was, Gravexin might give me a lecture." Muxene tsked. She crawled back over to where she was taking the stick in her hand. Now...the two were distance. Rinn looked and felt something uncomftorable in her shoes. She took off her shoes seeing a crunched up paper there. Unfolding the paper, she read it.

    Dear Rinn.

    Suprised are you? Rinn, Rinn, Rinn. For the truth, I know you talking to Muxene, and you already know my name. I'm not happy. Anyways, I'll be back with some handcuff's. I'm going to treat you and Muxene like a slave. Oh but don't try to run, if you do, you'll die. Also, already do you know that you can't walk. That's my special magic I made. It's called, sleep. You know, like when your feet sleep when it doesn't move for a while. But this one if different, and difficult. Now please, rest for now. I'll be back by say 8:00 p.m. with some food for you two lovely ladies. Now, rest. I'll be back Rinn. *kiss blow*

    Kiss blow!? Yuck... Rinn sighed and just layed there, closing her eyes she can hear the ocean waves moving and her breathing, with a heart beat.

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    To be continued.

    I'm sorry for not showing some more characters, you see, that was my plan. Until a family member asked to come on. But I hope you liked it. Expect my Tomorrow which is Saturday and Sunday that I will have some new chapters up. Two. Exicting yes, anyways sorry I had to type this story so short. I didn't even get an hour... Note: That's my limit on the computer.

    Please forgive me, with a present I'll have two new chapters by tomorrow, I computer swear with carrots:D Please comment.
     
  13. Paladin12345678 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Ohcrap, Marcus is a little slave puppy! ZOMG OH NOES!
     
  14. Sumi suicidé

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    sweet dude! Rinn was blown a kiss? HOLY CRAP!!!
     
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    Ooh can't wait for the next update~

    XD I miss my character... But it's ok, I understand~
     
  16. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    *shudders* that dude is creepy... you do know you can stand up when your legs are asleep, right?
    *stabbs creepy dude* (i forgeted his name... and i hope i never remember *shudders*)
    RIKU, SAVE MEH!!!!! *glomps riku*

    and btw, for holloween town in KHCTE 2, i wanna be like a goth cat or something =D
    for atlantica, i am NOT wearing the creepy shell bra *shudders* i'll stick with a tank top, thanks
    and for pride lands, im the same color as sora =D
    =D =D =D
     
  17. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I guess that promise thing was a bummer. Um anyways, after cleaning the whole house I'm now ready to type up the new chapter:) Please read and comment.

    KHCtE 2 Note: Having more characters could be a struggle, but I want anyone to particapate if they feel
    like it. If you have a new character you want to join in KHCTE or KHCTE 2, just say so:D





    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 28: Bad luck





    After fighting heavy heartless' Luke, Valerie and Tybic were resting somewhere hidden. Behind a building was there place, they needed to rest. " So...if we find the guys, everything... will be alright?" Tybic quiestioned. Luke shrugged, " Not sure, the three just vanished in liquid, so it will take some time.Alot." Luke answered. Valerie stood up , " Well I think we'll find them, if we believe in ourselves we'll find' em!" Valerie grinned. Luke and Tybic nodded giving thumbs up. Back to where it was. It was silent. Listening carefully, there was roar.

    " Heartless?" Valerie asked, gasping. " Yeah..." Luke said. Tybic jumped up and looked at both of them, " Well what are you two waiting for, we got to defeat the heartless." he walked away with his weapon in his hand. Valerie nodded along with Luke. Both stood up. " Ya'know. Maybe..it isn't a heartless." Valerie said. " It could be someone...we know?" The two were confused. Until an explosion boomed.

    "Okay..that's a heartless." Tybic said. Luke shook his head. " Wait... let's see it first before we charge." he said. Valerie nodded, " That's right. We got to see the size of this thing!"

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    "You can't keep on running!" Daisuke yelled laughing. Kirsty and Xigbar was sprinting now, both their legs were tired now. After running for hours. " We should stop, Kirsty." Xigbar suggested. Kirsty shook her head, "No! If we stop he'll catch us and execute us!" Kirsty said. He nodded, " Your right but...we will stop eventually." Xigbar said. Kirsty nodded, and held his hand abit tighter. " Let's try our best" Kirsty winked. Xigbar nodded and ran abit faster, running explosions were right behind them

    " Hey guys! Give up and it'll all be over!" Daisuke sighed, the sound of him, he was getting all stressed out. With a bigger explosion the wind pushed Xigbar and Kirsty far. "AHHH!" they both yelled, hoping nothing bad will happen.
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    Valerie, Tybic and Luke were listening very carefully. With the noise getting closer they could hearing yelling. "What the-WOAH!" Tybic dodged quick seeing two people fast them knocking right into the bushes. Valerie walked over to the bush, there was nothing but a girl sticking there. " Oooh. That hurts." she said rubbing her forehead. '' Your telling me, hitting a damn bush, ruins my coat." he said. " Wait a sec..I know that guy voice." Luke mumbled. " Xigbar!?" Tybic ran over. Seeing Xigbar stick his head out with a girl he cocked his head. " Who the hell are you?" he questioned. "Also..who is she?" Valerie asked. Xigbar picked up the girl and placed her on the hard surface to get out the bush.

    "Thanks, Xigbar." she said. Looking over she looked at Valerie, Tybic and Luke. " Sorry, I'm Kirsty." Kirsty said.
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    Jack layed down on the hammock he made himself out of leaves. " No one to fight." he said. Looking over he saw some people walking with a Mohawk dude, blondy girl and a emo. "Perfect."
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    "I new it! walking, we meet up with this group!" Larxene sighed. Demyx looked over and stuck his tongue out. " Well atleast we're all together!" Lynn nodded and turned around. She sensed there was something. "Guys...there's someone with us..someone unknown." she said. They all turned around, seeing nothing but trees. Hearing a voice they listened closely. " I must say your smart girl. But let's hear this. I'll use my clone magic to get all you people!" Running out was Jack with mutiples of him. He grinned.

    "It's you!" Xaale pointed. Running forward she jumped grabbing some sticks, throwing them at him. "Everyone..fight!" Amber said jumping forward kicking eighty-nine times. Eden did a backflip and a highjump grabbing five Jack's attacking. The real Jack was fighting Xaale. No one could tell which was one was the real one. Walking forward is was different... Demyx was confused. " Don't just stand there! Fight!" Angel said. Demyx nodded.

    All the girls gathered together. " Who's the real one?" Xaale questioned. " Not sure but...yeah, not sure." Angel said. " Use real sight magic." Eden said. "True.." Lynn said. " I can throw cookies around as a distraction, clones don't eat them, only one." she grinned. They nodded. "break." Lynn laughed.
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    The figure laughed at Keath. " Try and get out!" he laughed some more. Keath looked around and went through his pockets to find some magic bombs. Which explode through metal, leaf, fire,water and earth. " Oh really?" Keath grinned. He knew he would injure himself, but he had to get out. Throwing the magic bomb it landed neer the metal bars. Keath ran to the other corner taking out his Cloud sword, slashing it through. " COME ON!" The figure said. The bomb exploded making fire rise really high, exploding alot of stuff. "AH!" Keath covered him self. The fire was on him, luckily he quickly said water and then said cure.

    The figure scoffed and left. Keath stood up and looked around. No longer there was nothing until someone made a noise behind. "Ow, Ow." she said. " I knew it! I should've never done portal! I need to work on that!' she whined. "Who're you!" Keath said, pointing hs sword out. She looked up and looked away. " I'm...I'm...Mexony." she ducked hiding her head, so she wouldn't get hit, incase he alreayd knew who made the wish. " Mexony?" he cocked his head.


    To be continued

    Abit of a twist but worth it:D Hope you liked it, please comment if you'd like.Sorry if I made mistakes in there. Anyways, I'll be um..drawing the title page. New version but it'll take longy:D
     
  18. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Lol, I always laugh when I read your story because you always use exact numbers. I think that's funny, but I don't know why.Lol. Nice chapter~
     
  19. Doukuro Chaser

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    lol dont waste the cookies! xD
     
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    lolz roxas is emo lolz XD