Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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  1. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Okay, I really appreciate it.

    I will give you credit, I promise! But I don't want to take your whole concept of Kingdom Hearts coming to Earth...

    How bout instead...never mind I'm confuseled. I'll decide later.
     
  2. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    :D Okay. Take your time Xaale:)
     
  3. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Friday is here again, and a new chapter dawns above our heads!
     
  4. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Today is Friday, a day to end great-fully. Yes I've been seeing stories like mine, but as long as if it's okay with me than happy-happy:D So carrying on, I might make some spelling mistakes because I have a cut on my point finger, which I usually type with with the rest of the fingers. Please enjoy this chapter and comment write after reading this.

    I still add characters if your wondering. I'll take any character as long as they have a name and some information:) Let's read and scroll:D!!!





    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 25: Thing's change



    Luke sighed laughing along with Valerie. "He's still going berserk with the heartless.'' Valerie smiled. Luke crossed his arm looking down thinking about something. Valerie looked over at Luke and saw his head down with his crossed-arms. "What's wrong Luke?" she asked. Luke looked at her and sighed "How am I going to fight if my keyblade was...crushed?" he asked her with a low voice. Valerie's head nodded and looked at Tybic. " I'm sure things will turn out well." she cheered. Luke looked at her and smiled, "Your right."

    Tybic stopped attacking, the heartless spilt in half with it's roar beating outloud. Tybic jumped off and wiped his sweat off his forehead. "Feels like I've gotten lighter, lost some weight or something. Trust me this heartless should be gone." Tybic panted. Luke looked at the heartless and saw it turn to two heartless, abit shorter than the orgininal but...now there were two! "I think I can't trust you Tybic... there are two of' em now." Luke said. Tybic looked up "Huh-WOAH!" his face went suprised. He froze, when he thought it had beaten the heartless, but just caused two. Valerie looked around and sighed. "Oh great, now we have to continue this battle!" her eyes rolled.

    Tybic sighed, "Let's get back to fighting guy...and girl." he added. Valerie nodded with a "that's right" smile. Luke looked at his hands and sighed. "I don't have a-" Valerie nudged Luke. "Luke-buddy! You don't need a keyblade to fight a heartless. Just believe in yourself and you'll see what'll happen when you fight with your heart,soul and body." Valerie said with a wink. Luke nodded. "Your right...once again." he grinned. "Thanks Valerie."

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    Demyx's gang continued to run like crazy. None of them doing anything but running. Everyone held some milk and cookies in their hands. "Why are you eating whil you run...wouldn't you get sick Amber and Xaale?" Angel asked giving jump leaps while running. Xaale and Amber looked at Amber "Powers my running up. Since it's....SUGAR!!!" Amber bursted. Xaale eyes widened. "COOKIES!" she screamed. Roxas wa s amazed that he tripped over. "Ahhh! Man down!MAN DOWN!" Roxas yelled. Everyone stopped and with Demyx, he picked up Roxas and carried him while running. "Roxas no offense but... your heavy for me." Demyx said with a pant while running.

    "I know, because you got skinny arms like Axel. But Axel can carry me but..how come not you!?" Roxas said. Demyx snickered abit and sighed. " I don't workout like him." he said. Roxas nodded, "Righht..." ehe sighed. "WATCH OUT!" Lynn alerted. Until the heartless bear disappeared.
    Everyone stopped. "Okay...what just happened?" Xaale dizzily said. Demyx dropped Roxas rubbing his back. "Woo! That was a workout.." Demyx said. Until the bushes made a noise.

    Larxene walked out along with Zexion. "..." they stared. Zexion sighed, "Well my hypothesis wasyou guys running away with I knew, we'd meet again." Zexion spoke. Larxene smacked Zexion and looke at Demyx and Roxas. "Xemnas knows." she said. Demyx got angry and walked to Larxene. "You told! Didn't YOU!?" he was furious. Larxene electricuted him away. " Get OFF me! Besides... Xemnas found out. He noticed your weren't doing your mission... the secret one." Larxene yelled. Xaale and the other girls looked at Demyx. "Demyx?" Eden spoke. Zexion walked forward and grabbed Angel's hand holding it smoothly. "We're going seperate." Zexion said. Larxene scoffed and pulled Amber and Eden hands. "Come on! We have to go seperate. " WHY?" Amber whined. Larxene glared at her. "Tell her Zexion!" she sighed.

    "Xemnas is out searching for us. If he finds us all together, easily we will get killed because he's bring a hurd of heartless." Zexion explained. Amber looked at Demyx with watery eyes. " I want to be with Demyx..." she whispered to herself. Demyx looked at the girls sad faces. Lynn waved and turned away. "Let's go. Before the heartless come." Lynn said walking. Demyx sighed and turned. " Let's go girls."

    Larxene left off with Eden and Amber. She had to carry Amber, because she was too depressed to walk. Eden had to keep up with Larxene because she walked really fast.

    Zexion held Angels hand. "Um..Zexion. You can let go now." Angel spoke. Zexion blushed and let go. "Sorry." he said. Angel nodded and contiued walking with Zexion.
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    Rinn sighed. "Never mind." she said Venn walked behind her. " So...Rinn. You fight?" Venn asked. Rinn though (dumb question)! "Ofcourse I do!" she said. Venn nodded and laughed alittle. "How bout we fight...with our memories." he coldy said Rinn's eyes widened stepping back.

    "You okay..Venn? Your acting strange.'' Rinn pointed out. Venn walked to Rinn and took her hand and hugged her with a cold feeling. "Darling I'm okay as ever...but what I want to know is...are YOU okay?" he grinned. His evil eyes began to go more darker. A shock came on her knocking Rinn out coldy. "AH!" she screamed was her last words before she was knocked out.

    Venn faded turning into his original self. He had Red hair like Axel's, blue eyes, and a Organization coat with fuzzy shoes. " My plan worked. Tricking the girl as if I was Venn. That guys dead..." he laughed out. "Now...time for you...Sebax and Muxene." he laughed.
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    Rexmildd breathed in and out with black ashes hitting around her. SHe looked at Marcus. "I-Impossible!" she breathed. Marcus looked at her. "Your tough for a ten year old." Marcus said. Rexmildd sighed, until a shock hit her on her wrists and legs and chest heart. "AH!" she whined. He could see Rexmildd shaken. "STOP!!! Your going to kill me!" Rexmildd cried. With a opening portal.

    Maleficant walked out and looked a Rexmildd. "Imbecile. Your no help, just a pathetic girl who thinks she can take on anything and KNOW ANYTHING!" Maleficant said coldly. Rexmildd looked up with black tears on her. "You monster..." she glared. Maleficant took out a control and pressed the button hitting Rexmildd shockingly. "STOP!!!" she cried. Malefiant laughed. "Good bye. Rexmildd!"Maleficant laughed. Before she pressed the button a thorn hit her wrist hardly. Rexmildd's metal bands disappeared a flower took hold of her carrying her away. "DAMNIT!" Maleficant cursed. She sighed and turned around seeing Marcus.

    "Little boy..you lost? I have the right home for you." she glared. Marcus' looked at her taking steps back.
    "No." he said.

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    To be continued.


    I hope you like it:D Yes...very serious chapter...:) I hope you liked reading this. Please comment.Sorry for my mistakes while you read. Next Friday is a new chapter. If we're lucky. Sunday might be a bonus chapter, coming out early. Like chapter 24:D

    Forgot to add...I made my decision of my last chapter to this story. Chapter 45 is where it'll end But don't worry. I have the same story but it's Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth 2 Which will have more characters and the same characters that have particapated in the first one. So yeah.


    Anyone else who wants and upgrade on their characters or add another new character tell me:D Let me know.. So it can be down in my list:D
     
  5. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    HOW COULD YOU KNOCK ME OUT!!!!
    *flatens evil dude*
    i wanna go to CANDY MOUNTAIN!!! XDDDDD lolz
    with a squirrle named Bob and a flamethrower XDDDDD. jkjk...
     
  6. Paladin12345678 Twilight Town Denizen

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    ZOMGMARCUSISGOINGTOFIGHTMALEFICENTOMGQWTFBBQ! *takes a breath*

    Wow, this just keeps twisting and turning.
     
  7. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    ...the scary part is i actually understood that... o.O
     
  8. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Really? Well glad you understand:D Yes I love twisting this around, makes this more interesting:D
     
  9. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    I feel irony in this chapter.
     
  10. Doukuro Chaser

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    I loved these chapters (read last three chapters just now)
     
  11. Paladin12345678 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Me: *Aragorn voice* Are you frightened?
    KK13: Yes.
    Me: Not nearly enough.
     
  12. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thankyou:D I really appreciate that:)
     
  13. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    heyyy....you put my character jailed!!!oh noes!
     
  14. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    We'll see what'll happen with your character. Might get..fighty-time:)
     
  15. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    What has happened since chapter 21. I have missed it.
     
  16. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    ...*stares*
    *slashes you with keyblade*
    CHA!!!!
     
  17. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Omg am I still in Demyx's gang or has he left us?!?!?

    Man, why are Amber and I obssessed with cookies?
     
  18. Doukuro Chaser

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    who isn't?


    I thought of my charter like a more serious troubled girl but this is much better
     
  19. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Yeah.......

    I'm going to start my thread soon but I really don't want the exact same thing, them coming to earth.

    Man you people must think I am totally copyright thefting Mexony but I will give her credit. LOTS of credit.
     
  20. Ravenyuki Traverse Town Homebody

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    This story is awesome! It made me laugh and think. In my opinion, Kh should never come to Earth.