Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

thanks fer noticin' lolz
but you dont have to type out meh full name lolz

 

aha!

aha!add me in!i made this guy up.add another person!
uh.
Name:Keath kingten
He wears what sora wears, but the base colour is sandy like.
I have clouds sword and spiky hair.mwhahaa.
and he has a tattered cape.

 

Sure thing! I'll add you in the next chapter:D

 

I like typing out teh names.

 

Yay! New Chapter Today!

 

Well guys today is Friday. The day I type up a new chapter. It is..short, sorry. But I hope you enjoy this chapter.:) Also I here days are getting better haha:D





Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 23: Slashing and running.








Keath was holding a cloud sword walking slowly. Anxiously he kept looking around incase heartless came to attack him. Walking slowly he could hear tattering and shaking from bushes behind him and ahead. "I feel the presence of heartless... I can sense them." he whispered. As he walked a heartless jumped out with it's claws ready to scratch, but before the heartless could attack Keath turned around in a whip and slashed the heartless with his sword. "I can feel more...come out!" he yelled " Come and face me you fiend! You can't hide forever!" he yelled. With heartless sworming.

Around him it was like...Another Side Another Side. Keath thought like he was Roxas face the heartless surrounding him. "Yes..." he grinned. Keath ran for one and slashed it with his cloud sword. His clothes were getting dirty by the dust and dirt flying up. As he turned he did a quick spinn attack. Hitting all the heartless in a spin. "Ha!" he scoffed. "That ALL!?" he asked laughing. Panting he could hear a whisper " I ram pa ta lady." said a voice. Keath turned around seeing nothing but he heard someone surrounding him in his air. "Scared...well let's see if your scared of this." said the voice. A big trap metal net came flying catching Keath.

"What...What the!?"

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Sebax kept on running and running, dodging the attack of Xaldin's wind spears. " You'll never get me alive." he whispered while running. "WIND!" Xaldin yelled. Sebax kept on running and running and running and continously, until something ruined it. Another member came out. It was Axel. " Need help Xaldin?" he grinned. "Fool, go back to the hut I don't need you. I can take care of this wimp by my self!" Xaldin said.

Sebax gave a glare to Xaldin, "Who ya'callin wimp! Mister...dreadlocks loser, who got defeated by Sora the greatest fighter in the world which is-AH!!! What the hell!" Sebax yelled. Axel put his fingers on his neck and pinched harder. "Surrender..buddy!" he grinned. Sebax lost foot and fell on the ground scratching himself. The blood streamed from his left temple, hurting alot. "Ow, ow ow." he whined. Axel walked over and grabbed the collar on him. "Change your mind?" Axel said gripping on tigher. Xaldin walked over and took his lance out poiting it directly to his heart. " Come...join us." he laughed.

The lance of Xaldin's was getting closer to stab his heart but Sebax yelled "STOP!!!" he whined. Xaldin looked at him. "Be one of us." he grinned. Sebax struggled. "I'm already a NOBODY! Before...I.. I got caught and died but I knew that..with my strong heart I'd be a nobody! Pleas ya go to believe me!" Sebax yelled. Axel looked over his shoulder. He gave a nodd to Xaldin and let go of of Sebax's collar.

Xaldin's spear went straight to Sebax and with a -
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Valerie jumped onto the heartless and attacked it bigtime Luke stopped distracting it and released a big blow of flurry fire and ice. Tybic ran over to Luke and joined in with a big blow of lightning. "Take that heartless!" Tybic laughed but then choked on his saliva. " You ok?" Luke grinned. Tybic nodded, "Yeah I;m fine..just alittle..choking."

Valerie laughing on the heartless, she thought it was over but it wasn't. Someone pulled over her covering her mouth and eyes. He whispered, " Today..now.. find Sora and the gang with me. Let's pull the strings together and find them." he laughed. Tybic gasped and dropped his keyblade, getting the heartless hitting him, knocking him to the hard concrete wall. "Tybic!" Luke gasped, he threw his keyblade at the heartless like a bommerang. He ran over to Tybic, seeing his head bleeding from the back. His clothes were ripped up. Wow...that heartless had alot of strengh. "Dude you okay!?" Luke asked.

Tybic raised his hand and pointed over to Valerie. "What?" he asked. "V-." he said. Luke cocked his head "V?" he said. Turning around he saw a guy in a black coat taking hand of Valerie.
"Oh crow! Valerie!" he yelled. Valerie saw Luke staring at her, she struggled and tried to bite his hand off of her mouth but couldn't. "You see...the further darkness the further happiness." he said. "Name Jack." he laughed. Valerie's eyes widened but then she snapped out of it, kicking her feet in the air.

To be continued.

Well I hoped you liked it:D Sorry for the grammar and mispronoucing. Also, sorry it was short.I'll type up the next chapter next Friday. Enjoy and comment please, if'd you like.

 

What's gonna happen to Val-sama?!

 

awwww, no rinn...
oh well

 

Sorry about not adding your character in this chapter. But I promise she'll be in the next ones. I just wanted to shine on some people. Hope you understand. Anyways today is Monday in where I live. So Friday I will post up the new chapter:)

 

Right now I'm worrying about Val-sama in this story!

 

I hate Mondays. Today is Monday for me. Your chapter cheered me up though, since I forgot to read it Friday. PoorSebax, impaled with one of Xaldy's spears. Ooh, Xaldy is in my sig, for once. Finally someone besides Demyx, besides the fact that he's in there anyway. Friends~s! I crack up whenever I see it.

 

Guys, because I have nothing to do this week. I decided to do one chapter just once . I have nothing else to do right now. Though this'll be short, please forgive me. Also I can see there are other threads like mines. I'd say it's must've been an inspiration to my story. Well I don't really mind. Anyways, enough of my rambling. Continuing on!:D Here's an early chapter before Friday:D




Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
Chapter 24: strength





Valerie kept srpinging her feet in the air, trying to get the boy "Jack" to release her. Luke's eyes widened looking at the boy and Valerie together. He cared about Valerie, he didn't want another person to go away mysteriously. Besides, shes been helping since they met. Luek released his keyblade and boomeranged it to the boy.

"Take this!" he yelled, running. The keyblade came towards, but Jack grabbed hold of it and grinned. "Is that all?" he asked with his evil eyes. His free arm holding the keyblade he crushed it with his fiery powers. It burned to ashes. Luke's eyes widened, "Cra-." he said, breathing in and out from the fast running.

Tybic eyes opened clearly. He looked at the person holding Valerie and Luke just standing there like he was frozen or something. Tybic got up and walked over. He thought of a strategy to get Valerie out of the guys hands. If I crawl around and climb on with my keyblade ready, I might be able to attack him directly and get Valerie out of trouble! This should work. Tybic stayed low, and crawled through the adrenenline places. Obstacles were ofcourse in the way. But all he cared about was to get Valerie out of there.

Luke looked around, he saw no sight of Tybic. "Aww man." he breathed. Looking he can see Valerie kick her feet crazily. "Where the hell is Tybic, when you need-" Luke stopped and saw Tybic right behind Jack with a crawl. Luke grinned and began to run again. Jack laughed, and looked at Valerie. "Your friends are so hopeless." he said straight to her face. Valerie's eyes changed in a smiley.

Jack cocked his head. "What's with the happiness imbecile? No ones saving you so lose your hope. They're giving up." Jack scoffed. "Oh really?" Tybic interruppted from behind. Jack turned his head around and before he could dodge Tybic struct his keyblade through his right leg, making a big blob of blood streaming. Jack let go of Valerie, covering his right leg, making the flowing stop. Black ashes came out, it looked like he was fading. He was!
Valerie looked at Jack and kicked him across his face. She then looked at Luke and flew down to him. "You alright?" he asked. Valerie nodded. "Let's beat this heartless and get out of here!" she grinned. Tybic slashed Jack so many times. Jack let out magic out attacking Tybic back. Jack jumped off to a city building and sat down. He thought it was over.

Valerie cheered, Luke clapped and Tybic...well he went berserk with the heartless, thinking it was still Jack.

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Jack hid behind and tried to get bandages out his pocket to cure himself. "Your quite the strong boy Jack. But...I know your fading so I'll help you out." said a voice. Jack looked up and glared. ''So...what are you going to do with me?" Jack asked. He grinned, "Things you will like. You will not regret this." said the voice.

Jack still looked at him. "Why are you helping me?" he asked. The figure grinned and held his hand out for Jack's. " I want to help you because it's the right thing. Darkness should never let the piece of dark fall to light." he said. Jack grinned and took hold of his hand. "Can you stand?" he asked in concern. Jack tried but fell hard on the concrete ground. "No...damn kid stabbed his keyblade through my right leg." he huffed.

''Hmph. Hold still Jack, let me cure you." he said. Jack nodded and closed his eyes. He could feel the figures cold hands on his leg squeezing hard. "Ow.." Jack quietly said. "Cure." the figure said. Jack opened his eyes, and saw no blood and no scratches." How'd you.." he stopped. The figure looked at him and grabbed his hand. "let's work together and take some darkness in us." he said. Jack's eyes narrowed but stopped. He was confident. "With your strength and my mind. We can be a boss." he said.

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Something wrong? No,no..can't be. AM I really meeting a person in life but...No! He's from a trailer scene in Kingdom Hearts..he can't...wait..Got an idead. Rinn thought with a grin.

Venn looked at her curiously. "Um...what are you-hey!" he squinted. Rinn took hold of his cheeks and began to pull them verticaly and horizantaly. "I need to know if you are Venn, or just a trickster trying to murder me or make a scheme on me." Rinn mumbled. Venn was trying to get her hands off his face. "You sure your Venn?" Rinn asked, still streching his cheeks. After she stopped and examined his armor, poking him. "Please...stop?"

Rinn didn't, she needed to find out. "I am Venn!" he said. Rinn stopped and looked at him. "Surely, your not Roxas right...?" Rinn asked. Venn cocked his head. "Roxas!?- Whos that?" he asked. Rinn sighed and slapped his head. "You should know..he's Nobody of Sora and looks exactly like you!" she exclaimed. Venn cocked his head.

"I'm...confused."

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Later Demyx's gang stopped. They found some cookies and milk, so they stopped and took a break. "How's your butt?" Angel asked with a grinn. Demyx turned around and gave thumbs up. "Poor Dem-Dem." Amber comforted. Eden looked at Amber and went to Demyx holding his hand. " You sure you don't want us to check." she asked smiling. Demyx's blushed.

"All you girls are so nice but-" Roxas scoffed and smacked Demyx. "All you girls!? Demyx, can you not see that I'm a boy! Blonde spikey hair? Male! Any more-" "Anyways as I was saying, your all nice to me, better than my Organization- "OUR!" Roxas yelled.

Demyx ignored him and took all the girls in his hands and hugged them, with nice smooth kisses on their forhead. They girls laughed saying one word "Demyx..." they sighed. Demyx smiled and gave Roxas a huge smile. " Please...don't." Roxas mumbled.
Demyx laughed and smacked Roxas back, but this time on his face.

"Hey! I gave you a head smack and I get the face smack! You'll get revenge you'll get.
ROAR!!!!


"Oh no...it's back." Demyx worridly said. Everyone jumped and ran off

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH'


To be continued.


I hoped you liked it. It was an early chapter and also I had time:D Please comment if you'd like:D Sorry for grammar and spelling mistakes. Wait for Friday!There will be chapter 25!

 

i liked it =D 8D XD
although i might be a bit more subtle... lolz

 

Eek! Angwy Woxas is a Non-Kawaii Woxas!

 

I like you Tybic has become this little ball of adrenaline filled, ready to attack anything that moves, kind of kid.

I'm coming for you heartless...

 

Well thankyou for feeling that way:D And thanks ago. Yes Tybic is becoming stronger and stronger by the minute and chapters:D

 

Wow, I think it is some sort of curse that wherever Amber goes there is randomly cookies and milk. Lol.

 

Interesting story. I think you've inspired me to make my own fanfict. o.o

 

I agree with Hexin. You really inspired me to write a fanfic about this. Too bad you took the idea before me. Brilliant story, and I really love how you write it. I look forward to reading this every Friday.

If you would give me your permission, I'd like to write a very similar fanfic to yours. I'd definatly give you all of the credit for the idea.

You can say no. Meh, I really don't mind if you say no.

 

Sure I don't mind you writing your own fan-fic. Already people have began to write this. Feel free to write it:) But to makesure, I will be reading it:) Thanks, I appreciate how you like my writing in it. Yes Friday's are the best. The best way to end a weekday:)

Really? Wow:D I appreciate that. Thanks for the comment, truely I'm happy:D