Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth

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  1. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well because I forgot to post up chapter 19 on Sunday*sigh*. I'm making it up. Today is Wednesday in my time. On Friday you could expect two chapters. Thursday I'm typing one in Microsoft and that'll be chapter 19. Next it will show what's next. Scrolling down you will see Chapter 20. So Friday will be TWO:D Two chapters in one new thread. So basically it's cool and exciting:D Two chapter*snickers* It'll be longer to read. Oh yeah so today's Wednesday, I'm starting to type up the chapter. It might take me three hours to type up two chapters. Each chapter takes an hour or more. So I'm going to make it long:D Be sure on Friday to check it out!


    ~Mexony Posted: 4:04 p.m Bramp.
     
  2. Doukuro Chaser

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    ooo i can not wait!
     
  3. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I just finished chapter 19 and i'm doing chapter 20 tomorrow! So get ready and also:D...I might have a snowstorm tomorrow! but i;m going to school though because I wanna get some stuff done after my missed day today anyways1` Get ready to read long! *laughs*
     
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  5. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well guys I’m making it up to you :D. Like I said, two chapters J, which is good. It takes ours to do this so yeah. Anyways two chapters in one thread. Be sure to read happily, teehee!




    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 19: Run.




    Kirsty and Xigbar were both walking down the woods. Kirsty chucked a cracker into her mouth, giving the sigh of sweet crackers. “So what do we do now?” Kirsty asked chewing on the cracker. Xigbar shrugged. “I’m not quite sure, but-.” Xigbar stopped and turned around, he could hear footsteps going fast. “What’s wrong dude?” she asked digging in the cracker box. Xigbar shooked his head and turned around continuing on. “I thought I heard something, maybe it’s just my conscious.” Xigbar said fiddling with his fingers. Kirsty nodded. “I wonder, do they know we’re leaving the Organization?” she asked. Xigbar shooked his head, “ I didn’t tell anyone, it’s been past hours and I’m tired of being the ‘bad guy.” Xigbar said closing his fist.

    “No one should know.” Kirsty repeated. “But we do.” Said a voice. Xigbar glanced behind and saw his Superior and some guy. “ Hear that Superior? I am fit to replace the other member and I’m a best hearer. Also, these guys are planning on leaving.” The black hooded figure said. The Superior, Xemnas, looked at Xigbar and glared, you couldn’t read his lips but he was saying something. Xigbar gulped and took Kirsty’s hand and started running from Xemnas and the black hooded figure. Xemnas pointed at Xigbar, all disappointed. “Xigbar you traitor.” He said. The black hooded figure grinned and looked at the Superior, Xemnas.

    “Shall I assassinate them… Superior?” he asked. Xemnas nodded and opened a corridor with some last words. “Make sure you assassinate them fully. Especially the girl.” Xemnas walked. The black hooded figure nodded and began to run while jumping.




    Xigbar and Kirsty were running as fast as they can. They could see the black hooded figure getting closer and closer. “Damn!” Xigbar whispered. Kirsty looked up and saw Xigbar with a bloody ear. “ When did that happen!” she exclaimed. Xigbar shrugged and put h is hood on to stop the blood spreading all over his Organization coat. Kirsty ran faster and released her keyblade out. She slashed the tree with a big swish and made the trees and branches fall down. “Sorry Nature, but it’s the only way!” she said knocking some more down. “What are you doing?!” Xigbar worriedly said.

    Kirsty looked over and mouthed one word. Xigbar nodded. “ Ahh…ok.” He said. Xigbar opened up a portal and they went in it. “That’ll take some time for the black hooded figure to get through ALL the trees and branches.” Kirsty snickered.
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    Demyx was walking holding Xaale’s and Amber’s hand. “So where are we?” Lynn asked in a tired voice. Roxas shrugged and fell to the ground. “I’m beat.” Eden dropped to the ground and stretched out her legs. “Oh my gosh, that’s the longest walk I ever had, especially when we’re in the fricken woods!” she said. Amber sighed. “ My feet hurts.” She mumbled. Xaale took out a cookie from her pocket. “ Um… where did you get that from?” Amber growled. Xaale took a bite and shrugged. “ From a cookie jar.” She said. Angel slapped her face in disappointment. “Oh dear god.” She said. Amber growled and walked closer to Xaale. “ That’s MY cookie jar and MY cookie!” she yelled. Xaale shrugged. “ Well you should at least share!” she said. Amber scoffed, “ Share!? Well you should at least ask!” she yelled. Angel and Lynn looked at each other, Eden and Roxas were playing rock-paper-scissors. Demyx’s hand were getting pulled from the girls.

    “Guys this is getting ridiculous.” Eden sighed. Amber and Xaale growled. “Argh…AHHH!!!” they both yelled slapping they’re hands together. “Ima get you!” she yelled. They both tackled each other until a big noise interrupted. They all turned around. “Oh (beep)” A random bear was there. “Since when was there a bear in the woods!?” Demyx asked. Roxas shooked his head, “ That’s not a bear it’s a heartless bear a big mean, rusty, ugly, weird, bear also-.” Lynn grabbed Roxas by the hand and began to run. “RUN!!!!” Demyx squeeled running. Amber and Xaale ran behind and everyone else, ran.

    “Since when was there a heartless bear!” Angel asked. Demyx shrugged and released out his Sitar. “Dance water dance!” he quickly said. Water clones of himself appeared and stand guard, of the heartless bear. Everyone was screaming as they ran, no way could they get they’re…precious face. Hurt. As Everyone ran they lost sight of the heartless. “It’s gone…right!?” Lynn panted. Roxas slapped his face continuously. “Stupid, stupid, stupid!” he said. Everyone looked at him. “ I just remember I had a keyblade and what do I do? I run without knowing I had one! I would’ve smashed that bear!” he yelled. Amber growled and smacked herself. “True dat!” Everyone sighed…

    “But wait, where’s the food?”

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    Jack was laying there still, he felt something weird. Wait, he doesn’t have a heart, remember? Jack sighed and turned over on his side, he could only hear the sound of rivers and leaves falling. He couldn’t understand, why was Rexmildd admitting all this? Isn’t she a bad guy? Jack sighed and looked at the footsteps that were infront of him. He looked up and saw a person he never seen before, red eyes, dark brown hair with a big cast on his head. “Hello.” He grinned. Jack stood up and shot fire at him but missed.

    “Don’t fret, I’m not an enemy. I in the Organization ha.” He glared. Jack sighed and chuckled pointing a fire at him. “ If your in the Organization where’s your coat?” the unknown person smiled . “I didn’t feel like it and besides it wasn’t my size.” He smiled. Jack nodded. “ Name?” he asked putting his hand away. “ I’m Devon the magnificent magic.” He grinned. Jack laughed.
    Devon took a card out. “ Your card says your already dead and also that your alive Confusing ain’t it. Well I have an order from my boss. He said to give you a secret. Mexony lives in Canada and is planning on killing you. She found out that you found out the biggest secret and she’s going to murder you because… she hates you..” he said. Jack froze. “ Now in order to murder her before she murder’s you, you have to drink this potion to become stronger and darker.”
    Jack grinned with an evil smile.


    “Deal.”

    (Coming up next)
    1. Rinn gets a challenge
    2. Marcus and Namine fight to find



    (Shall be posted later due to not having time, not many has shined.)
     
  6. Doukuro Chaser

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    I loved it! But next time i get to hold Demyx's hand!
     
  7. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Hahaha, fighting about cookies. Cute, lol. :lol:

    Love the chapter, and the random bear. Great story!
     
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    My cookies! XD You get my character so well...
     
  9. Doukuro Chaser

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    Yes she does....*ish eating cookies*
     
  10. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Yup yup! I promise not to take your cookies!

    *waits till back is turned and takes cookie from jar.*

    No one saw anything. Anyone who saw me will be poked for all eternity!

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  11. Amber PLUR

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    lol I don't store my cookies in a jar, I store them in the cookie vault in my castle!

    (We're getting off-topic, let's take this into my castle so CtR doesn't hunt us down)
     
  12. Doukuro Chaser

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    Good idea *hides under table*

    Great chapter! xD
     
  13. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Yeah, I agree. I forgot about the vault, lol. Watch out, I may know the combination.
     
  14. Doukuro Chaser

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    Really? What is it? xD
     
  15. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well everyone here is the next chapter! As I said two chapters today! Hopefully you'll like this chapter!





    Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth
    Chapter 20: Think



    (Before)
    Rinn sat down on the backyard of her place. She seemed to be sketching something. Rinn looked up and grinned, " It's almost complete... if I finish drawing Riku's shoe it'll be a complete hard working master piece!" she said excitedly. As she drew there was a noise in the bushes. "Huh?" she turned around and saw nothing but the bush, it was just sitting there but than looking closely."What the-?" Rinn stood up and walked forward to the bush. She sensed there was something there.

    Her midnight blue eyes got a little lighter, than before. She heard a growl from the bushes, as she got closer yellow eyes appeared. "Whoa..." she studdered. When she got closer the heartless jumped out over her. She squeeled falling down from that scare. "What the-what! A heartless! Since when did the heartless comes here!" Rinn asked herself. She saw the heartles getting closer to her sketch Riku. "No!" she yelled. The heartless ripped the Riku sketch to pieces, Rinn's face turned all sad. "No... I-no-worked ugh! Your gonna get it!" Rinn yelled.


    (Now)

    Rinn was running, she tripped over the stumps of the trees. She saw heartless' up ahead. Bringing out her moon shaped staff she slashed them into black ashes. But the hearts flew up. "So this is what it feels like... being in Kingdom Hearts player mode. Sweet" she whispered to herself. As she panted more heartless' charged and with her moonshape staff, she attacked. Rinn's hair was flowing from the speed she was going. Her skater clothes were dirty.

    After a one day experience fighting non-stop, and finding out about Kingdom Hearts her clothes were dirty and muddy, her face was abit bruised up from falls and landings. Everywhere hurts her but she had to fight because nothing would leave her alone! She ran away from home from the heartless', she left everything behind except for herself. Now she was all alone having trouble with the heartless'.

    She ran and ran, then Rinn tripped. "Ooof!" she squinted. She looked at her leg seeing blood streaming. "Darnit.." she muttered under her breath. The heartless jumped from behind onto Rinn's back scratching her. " Get...OFF!" she screamed. Her eyes turned ice blue. She rised up and made her weapon turn into a moon shaped keyblade. She attacked the heartless to get off, "Holy..." she said. As she saw more heartless' coming towards her she didn't understand why were they chasing her!? Non-stop!

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    "Mexony." Namine breathed. "Who's that?" Marcus asked rubbing his elbow. " A person who dreamed this." Namine said. "Dreamed? Well why she start this I mean...I didn't expect it but..ptf never mind." Marcus sighed. Namine looked up and held out her sketch book with her special tool. "I'm going to do something..make it appear make it last." she said. Marcus nodded and looked at his hand with a stare. " Why is my hand fizzy!?"

    Namine looked up and revealed the picture. " We're going on our own Marcus.. but don't worry will meet again... I promise. I'm going to find Roxas and the others to see if they're okay." Namine said. Marcus nodded, " Promise. Well bye Namine we will meet again." Marcus waved. Namine nodded and waved closing her book. Marcus dissapeared.
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    Marcus fell in the woods landing on a branch. "Ow..she'll need to draw a drawing of me landing in a soft place other than a branch." he whined As he looked up he saw someone walking. Someone with black hair and green streaks. " Hm...found you?" he whispered cocking his head.



    To be continued.


    Sorry if it was short but I had a brilliant plan in my mind....typing a long chapter and it'll be the 21 chapter:D Man I never knew I go this far and thanks for the cooperation but when should this story end? Chhapter 40? 30? 25? or....50*gigglessnortgiggle*


    Stay tuned to the longest chaper you'll read from me!:)
     
  16. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Ooh, interesting. I don't really get the end, but that's okay.
    And as for the combination (thinks) I dunno.
     
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    Great chapters (of course) Keep going. COOKIES!!!
     
  18. Doukuro Chaser

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    So nice bur short. Good job
     
  19. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    I like things short.
     
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    Me too.....and....yeah....the cookie thing...:D....