Kingdom Hearts: Birth by Sleep (A FanFiction)

Disclaimer: If I owned kh it would come out in English first.

P.S. everything in italics are from the kh1 manga v.1


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Long ago the world was united and filled with warm light.

It was a dusty, desolate field. The only sign that anyone had ever lived there were a few indistinct ruins. Canyons enclosed the entire area and only parched weeds had managed to squeak by with any semblance of survival.

Ven couldn’t help but shutter, for despite the stifling atmosphere this place was a graveyard. Already hundreds of thousands of people died because of Thanroe’s vendetta, and the list had yet to be completed. Of all the keybladers only the chasers where left. Ironic really, because they where the ones who started all this.

People loved the light, and eventually began fighting over it.

As he walked through the rows of keyblades as dusty and dead as the field its self, he couldn’t help but feel his anger rise. All this death and destruction simply because Thanroe had been told no, and he didn’t even take it out on those who denied him his wish in the first place. He took it out on everyone the chasers had called friends. All those who once called Thanroe himself friend.

Soon Ven found himself at a set of crossroads between the rows of weapons. In the center stood three blades that looked as dusty and disserted as the others. They were the original blades of the chasers which had been cast aside when it had been discovered that they would not be strong enough for the upcoming battle. But they would make a perfect supplement for the new blades.

Then, darkness found it’s way into people’s hearts.

Ven was not the only person at the crossroads. Terra and Aqua had come like he, in full battle dress, to meet their fate. The armor was heavy, bulky and not very well liked, but it was necessary.

Suddenly a sonic boom like sound pierced their helmets. Something was coming. Through the dust it was hard to make out exactly who or what but that didn’t matter. They didn’t need to see him to know it was Thanroe. As he stepped closer and closer more of his face had could be seen.

He was haggard and old looking, but by no means feeble. His bald head was bent forward but his eyes looked straight ahead. All of this made him look fairly creepy but he one thing that made his appearance all the more cynical was that fact that he was no older then twenty-five years old. He must have done so much dark magic that it aged him prematurely.

Darkness consumed the hearts and light of the people, and in a flash it spread…

For a second his image flickered and split into two identical visions. The second then quickly shifted into armor like the chasers wore except more streamlined. Blaze. It had to be.

Ven had prepared to lunge at the traitor when a hand stopped him. Of course, the level headed Terra wasn’t going to let him rush into things. Then the enigmatic knight did something wholly unexpected: Terra himself took off running as fast as he could to clear the gap between the once friends.

Thanroe and Blaze stopped just as Terra started to pounce. The old magician simply raised his hand and caused the solid rock in front of him to rise, smashing into Terra midair.

And the world disappeared into darkness.

Terra buckled and rolled, tying not to break his neck despite the thick armor. He didn’t even have a chance to catch his breath before Thanroe raised his arm again. For a moment Terra felt fear trickle down his spine for he was sure that Thanroe was going to raise the ground out from under him a second time and start bouncing him like a rag doll.

That didn’t happen. Instead he raised the platform he was on, cutting Terra off from being able to attack or join his friends. He couldn’t attack but he could be attacked. Blaze jumped and on the way down sent a massive jolt of lightning downwards. It was less then one minute into the fight and already his armor had saved him, but the shock had caused massive cracks in it. If he wasn’t careful his armor would crumble like clay.

No sooner had the sparks died then he heard a rushing sound. Thanroe had neglected to take into account the chasers own talented magician. Aqua had used her power to raise the earth in a shower of debris catapulting Ven to Terra’s level. He didn’t even miss a beat as he landed and rush forward.

But a glimmer of light remained in the hearts of children…

Ven’s oncoming assault was met by Blaze’s blade. From out of nowhere a enormous jut of ice aimed for Blaze missed by inches and pushed the two combatants apart. Somehow Aqua had found her way up to the second level of the battle field.

Hundreds of feet above, Thanroe flicked his wrist and a hurricane appeared gathering up dozens of the dead keyblades. The hurricane twisted and tuned until it was nothing but a long thin snake then it headed straight down. Blaze did a side flip and landed on it perfectly as if it were a skateboard.

Blaze raced neck and neck with Aqua while sending towers of ice and wind to crush her; she dodged every one of them but at this rate, her agility would soon run out . Before she even truly noticed what happened Ven had attacked Blaze from above, all the while coming to her rescue.

Within seconds Ven had found an opening in Blaze’s seemingly impassible defense and took it. He sent a bolt of lightning straight to the traitor’s heart but he missed. Instead, it just got wrapped around his hurricane board, doing nothing. Somehow the fight had gotten to the top titer of the field. Blaze flew across a huge gape and landed beside his bother, Thanroe.

Children gathered their glimmers of light and recreated the world.

Ven jumped on the tail of he hurricane, trying to get across but he was unable to keep his balance and fell off right at the edge of the canyon. Unable to grab the side and pull himself up, he fell. About half way down he tried to use his Keyblade to stop. It didn’t work, actually all it did was pull a three ton rock down with him.

Aqua jumped, trying to help but the hurricane just drug her back down. The fall cracked her helmet, so now her blue eyes and turquoise hair were visible. While Ven landed on his feet.

He then came over to make sue she was all right, but there was no need. Before she was all the way up she raised her keyblade and sent her personal favorite spell, honeycomb, at Terra. Instantly he was trapped in a glasslike bubble which broke his fall. By then it was too late to notice that the hurricane had came up under him and pushed him up further.

Without so much as a flick of Thanroe’s wrist the hurricane stopped and put Terra down right beside him. he charged but that was a bad idea. Thanroe sent a blanket of ice up his right arm freezing it in place. Terra stumbled back and watched as the ice crept even further up his arm.

The recreated world, however, was no longer united… It was divided into several smaller worlds.

Somehow Ven had gotten up to the top and charged at Thanroe, who just caught the boy’s face in his hand and, looking right at Terra, squeezed. The cracking of the helmet sent a chill down Terra’s spine. Had it cracked his skull too?

Terra rushed forward desperate to save his friend but Blaze just bade his pet hurricane to knock him down off the cliff.

Still clutching Ven’s face in his hand, Thanroe walked to the edge of the cliff, his brother beside him. Making sue Aqua was watching he let out a burst of dark energy that froze Ven’s entire body, and then he simply let go. He then watched with a sick kind of pleasure as Ven bushed agents the side of the cliff as he fell, with each contact breaking another chunk off the icicle.

He landed right in front of Aqua. Using his eyes, the only part of him still mobile, he begged her to fix it. To use her magic to make the pain go away but, of course she couldn’t, no matter how much she wanted to: she had used all her magic to save Terra before.

Because the true light was still hidden deep within the darkness…


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Sora had been sitting on the little island watching the sun set for about ten minuets before Riku came up behind him. It was something they had always done since before Kairi had come to the island. It was their time to hang out after homework and school. It was a ritual never missed (unless they where out saving the worlds).

Seeing the look on his friend’s face, Riku could tell something was wrong. Sora’s normally bright face was twisted into a grimace that showed he was thinking hard about something unpleasant. That in it’s self was a rare occurrence. Sora never thought hard about any thing… at least he never used to.

Sora had changed over the months they had been separated and Riku was finding more and more things that weren’t the same to him. It wasn’t necessarily a bad change, but it was different. Sora was more responsible and more observant. Many had remarked on how much the spiky haired child had matured. But Riku had changed too: he was more relaxed and less completive. It was a nice change, for everybody.

“We were wrong. Everything’s changed.” Sora said without even looking at his friend.

“What made you change your mind.” The blond asked.

“School.” Was the boy’s only reply.

“Come on Sora, your going to have to do better then that.” Riku said, trying to coax the entire truth out of the keyblade master.

Sora sighed and pulled a stack of papers from his back pocket. It was today’s test. Handing it to Riku, he gave a little smile at the big red “F” on his paper.

“Nothing we learned matters. Not here.” He said sadly and waited for his friend’s reply.

For a moment there was only silence then Riku spoke, obviously choosing his words carefully.

“It dose matter… Just not on test.”

Sora turned to look at his friend. How could Riku say that?

“Oh really? How?” The brunet demanded of him.

Riku just smiled in response.

“Well, at least now you can beat Tidus with a sword.” He said with a grin.

“Tidus? What about you?” Sora teased.

“Maybe with a bit more practice.” Riku returned.

Sora and Riku just stared at each other for a minute, challenging each other to be the first to laugh. Eventually they cracked at the same time.

Suddenly their jubilant moment was interrupted by an ear splitting scream from the main island. Soon several more followed. Something was wrong. Terribly wrong.

The two boys stated to run towards the island. Something told them that this might have to do with the letter they got form the king a few days ago. It hadn’t told them much, but what it did say gave the keybladers the impression that something was going on. Something big.

They didn’t even bother with the boats. Untying them would take too much time they just swam to the opposite shore. From there it took ten minute to run up the path to town.

By then the blanket of night had fallen, but tonight that it wasn’t the same cool, calming blanket that usually fell on Destiny Islands. Tonight it was a thick, foreboding type of darkness that reminded Riku of the true darkness. The same frigid, suffocating darkness that had became his entire being for more then an entire year. The darkness that almost destroyed his heart and his friends. The same darkness that he vowed he would never see again.

As they approached the town they saw what all the commotion was about. Heartless hundreds of them everywhere. But that was the least of Sora and Riku’s problems. The true problem wasn’t the heartless themselves, rather it was their commander.

“ Xigbar?” Sora asked.

“Missed me?” asked the Freeshooter.


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Worlds away from our heroes something just as strange was happing.

In a spotless white room, sat the Oracle. She was a being hailed as all-knowing, but in fact, she was far from it. If she know everything she would not be in this situation. She would not be in this hell.

Behind her in the bight, white room shadows grew and pooled into a human form. A shadow. It had no distinguishable features other then the outline of its original self.

The shadow walked over silently and sat down beside the statue, but just because he made no noise did not mean that he was not noticed.

“It is done.” He said, his voice gave. It was obvious that whatever was ’done’ wasn’t something particularly pleasant.

If she could The Oracle would have smiled at his attitude, but she couldn’t move a muscle except those needed to speak. She couldn’t even see the shadow due to the long cloak hood covering her eyes. All she could see was white. The same white she had seen every second of every day for ten long years.

“Thank you, Blaze.” She said.

“I don’t like this. Was what happened before all for nothing?” He asked.

“If you can just trust me Blaze, just for a little while, you and I will be released form our prisons and then we can release and rejoin our friends. You want that, don’t you?”

“Aero, of course I trust you, but I think it was a bad idea to just let that damn Organization reform. They are sloppy and unpredictable.” Blaze said looking at her.

“They will also be invaluable allies. They will lead the keybearers right where we want them. And with them we will be able to break free from our prisons.” She said, reminding her friend of exactly what was at stake.

“I still don’t like it.” The shadow replied.

“Sacrifices must be made.” Aero said, her voice slopping into a sad little whisper.

“Sacrifices must always be made. The rewards will be well worth it. ” She continued bitterly.

“I do miss being able to see my reflection.” Blaze admitted.

Aero gave a bitter little laugh.

“As don’t I… As don’t I.”


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So what did you think? Please tell me. Also if you have any idea for new worlds let me know. Just nothing over PG-13, since that’s the highest the cannon went. NO FLAMES!! Constructive criticism only. Don’t tell me I’m doing something wrong unless you tell me what I can do to fix it.

P.S. Aqua, Ven and Terra will be in the story and not just in flash backs. It will take a few chapters though. This will be a long fic. Easily fifty plus chapters.

P.P.S I've posted up to chapter six on fanfiction.net. So take a look at it there if you want to.

 

Hmm, nice...although there was just a little error in the grammar...for instance, the dialogue...instead of:

“We were wrong. Everything’s changed.†Sora said without even looking at his friend.

“What made you change your mind.†The blond asked.

Should be:

“We were wrong. Everything’s changed,†Sora said, without even looking at his friend.

“What made you change your mind?†the blond asked.

If the dialogue ends with a period, it should close with a comma instead, and the word after it (like 'he', 'the', etc.) should be lower-cased (not names though).

Also try to make it move just a tiny bit faster, to keep readers' interested hooked better.

Otherwise, great job! :) Keep it up! I just hope I'll have the time to read all 50 chapters. :sweatdrop:​

 

I like it ^^ good job.

 

Wow, noice. This is really good. 50+ chapters!?!!? X_X You're. . . not kidding, are you? Well then, guess you'd better get typing, 'cuz I'm waiting to read more. Lulz, Hai Nymphie! Anyway, I'd love to give you constructive criticism, but I've got a D in Eglish II right now. Let's just say I'm not the best in punctuation/grammar/spelling, lol. Rep for you. . .

 

Chapter 2: Miss Izzy

Dissclaimer: I don't own it and nither does my muse, Syth.


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Sora knew for a long time that Xigbar was dead, in fact he had been the one to kill him. So how was it that he was standing right in front of the keyblade master? How was it that he was once again fighting for his life? It didn’t make since, nobody could come back from the dead.

Sora’s mind raced a mile a minute. It wasn’t because he was worried about loosing, he knew that point to be mute. He had defeated Xigbar before with Goofy and Donald almost perpetually knocked out. With Riku fighting along side him this time, it was only a matter of time before Xigbar was defeated.

Perhaps more important question wasn’t how he was revived, rather how many were. How many of Sora’s defeated enemies were walking among the living? What about Vexen? Xaldin? Zexion? Demyx? Would he have to fight them again as well? He wasn’t just concerned with Organization XIII, he was concerned about all the other nobodies. Were they back as well; was all his work for nothing?

His thoughts no longer had time to wonder. The fight was on.

Riku ran and made a swipe at Xigbar’s neck. With normal nobodies it would have worked, but this was no ordinary nobody. (If they could even be ordinary, because they don’t really exist.) At the last moment the Freeshooter disappeared and reappeared twenty feet away, with his guns pointed right at the back of Riku‘s head. Putting his itchy fingers to the test, Xigbar sent a round of bullets at the teenagers and then disappeared again, this time reappearing in the middle of town.


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“Hey Aero?†Blaze asked softly when the silence had finally become too defining for his nerves.

“Yes Blaze?†The Oracle replied, sounding slightly exasperated. She needed to sleep but she wasn’t going to send Blaze away; he was the only socialization she ever got.

“You and I both know that we choose our paths, but you don’t like the one you’re on. So why not just fight it?†The shadow knew that it was one of those stupid questions you ask when you were bored before he even talked it.

Aero made a little noise halfway between a laugh and a snort.

“ You think I didn’t.†It wasn’t a question.

“Well you’re here.†Blaze said, his voice taking on a slightly sarcastic tone.

“Sacrifices must be made.â€

Her voice was flat a dull, as if she were an annoyed babysitter answering a five year olds question.

“Huh?†Blaze replied, causing Aero to sigh. He had never exactly been the sword in the armory.

“I loved my sister too much.â€

“Ohh.†He said, as if that small sentence cleared up every question of the cosmos.

“Speaking of which…†Aero trailed off, knowing that he would guess the rest of the thought.

“All I have to do is wait for the twins to fall asleep. Then I can slip into their dreams and get them to help. Easy…though I kind of feel bad for manipulating them like that.†He admitted ashamedly.

“This is a hell of a time to grow a conscience.†Her voice had grown harsh and gained a chastising quality that put a strange thought into his head: what if the Aero he knew was dieing and the person was actually someone else? Someone more sinister; a new Aero.

“Better late then never. But what about you, when did you loses yours?†Blaze’s voice had lowered to match hers.

“I never have. Listen, it won’t really hurt the boys. All it will do is make them really tired. Nothing permanent. Take my necklace, it will let you use some of my power instead of letting them do it all.†She explained, trying to calm the boy’s nerves.

When Blaze walked over to get said trinket, Aero could tell that her ploy worked to an extant.

Now why can’t manipulating him always be that easy?


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The town was pure pandemonium with the heartless destroying everything in sight. Several buildings were on fire and people were running around randomly, trying to escape the beasts. It didn’t help that the fight between Xigbar and the Keyblade masters was reaching it’s peak.

Apparently Xigbar had learnt from his and Sora’s last battle. He refused to stay still any longer then the time it took for him to fire one round of bullets. This and the fact that Sora and Riku had no potions left over from their last adventure made fighting him difficult.

Riku had less then a third of his health left and both he and Sora were fresh out of magic points. If this didn’t end soon he wouldn’t have to worry about what happened to Destiny Island.

Riku stopped to catch his breath for a second and Xigbar saw an opportunity. He disappeared from in front of Sora and reappeared, intending to take the chance to finish off the brat, but that didn’t happen. The moment before his finger taped the trigger he was disappeared.

“Bleig? What happened to you? You used to… What kind of monster have you become?â€

Standing on the edge of half-ruined town was a middle aged woman with blood red hair. Miss Izzy. Kairi’s mother. She was simply standing there staring at the Freeshooter with a look of nothing less than betrayal on her face.

“Wouldn’t you like to know?†He asked, causing Miss Izzy to show the boys exactly where Kairi got her temper from.

“How dare you! How dare you use the techniques Te-†Her ear splitting shrieks were suddenly cut off as Xigbar, or Breig, appeared roughly three inches from her face.

“Listen here, the Chasers are dead. All of them, so what ever I was taught by them I can do what ever I want to with. Not that I was ever bound by their rules in the first place.†He sneered.

It appeared that, for some reason, he had hit a soft spot. Miss Izzy pulled her elbow back and gave Xigbar a right hook so powerful, it seemed almost unnatural for it to come from this small woman.

“Go, get out of here and if I see you or any of the other five anywhere near my island again I’ll kill you.†This was very out of character for the kind woman the boys had grown up with.

“How do you know him?†Riku asked after the Freeshooter had left through a path of darkness.

Miss Izzy wasn’t listening, instead she was staring at the kingdom key in Sora’s hand.

“May I hold it?†She asked him in a voice so soft it was almost reverent. Slightly creped out by the entire situation, the boy just nodded and handed her the weapon.

After a moment of examination, she handed it back to Sora with just as much reverence as she had received it.

“Odd that you should be chosen as his successor when you two are so different.â€

“Who’s successor?†He asked, but it was too late. Miss Izzy had already turned to leave and either could not hear him or was ignoring him. About thirty paces away she turned her head and spoke a few words before continuing on her way:

“Oh, Boys? I’d appreciate it if Kairi didn’t know about this.â€

Sora gave his friend a very confused look, to which Riku just shrugged.


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It was times like this that made King Mickey very grateful that Gummi paths didn't have speed limits. He had known for quite a while that their was a new threat terrorizing the worlds, but he didn't know what. The King had been researching the possibilities when he caught word of (for lack of a better term) the bad guys' target.

Destiny Island. Sora and Riku's home. It made sense that they would go after the only people who could stop them, but something didn't feel right. Ansem had said that these new 'bad guys' had something to do with what happened ten years ago, and if that were true, Sora and the gang just might be over their heads with this one.

Last time thousands of solders, on each side, went to battle and no one returned. The outcome of that battle had decided the fate of all worlds. Because of the Chasers loss, the worlds had to be separated, and the memory of them ever being united erased from the minds of most.

Mickey had lost a lot of friends last time, and he wasn't going to let it happen again.

Soon he was landing of the sandy beaches of Destiny Island. Smoke rose from the center of town, informing him that he was too late. Damn it! In a last desperate attempt to reach his friends, he ran as fast as his little legs could carry him up the well beaten path towards town.

Within minuets, the mouse found his friends on the edge of the half destroyed town. They looked exhausted and confused but, thankfully, not severely hurt.

The boy’s heads turned in unison as they heard the King approach.

“Your Majesty, what are you doing here?†Sora’s exasperated voice told the Mickey just how much he and Riku needed hi-potions.

“Your safe. I was afraid I wasn’t goin’ to make it in time!†The mini monarch sighed in relief.

“Your Majesty, what’s going on? How is it the Organization has returned?†Riku asked, almost certain that The King would know.

“I don’t know.†The mouse answered honestly. Before then he hadn’t even known that they where back, but it didn’t surprise him.

“What’s going on?†Sora asked, causing the mouse to bow his head and look at his over sized shoes.

“I guess I’ve got some explainin’ to do.†The mouse sighed.

“But we should probably find Kairi before I explain things.â€


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Kairi was found in the children’s secret spot, where they had agreed to meet in the event of an emergency. To say she was surprised to see Mickey and hear the tail of Sora and Riku’s fight with Xigbar would be and understatement. Ever since they had gotten the King’s letter Kairi had been expecting him but not like this. Not with his returning marking the return of Organization XIII.

“So now that Kairi knows what happened, I want to know what’s going on.†Riku demanded.

The mouse sighed. This was going to take a while.

“Now, I don’t know very much but I’ll tell you what I do know.

“About ten years ago the keyblades started appearing to the heroes of each world. They helped the heroes keep peace in the worlds. But then somehow keyblades got into the hands of villains. It was chaos. The worst of the worst was Thanroe. I don’t know much about him except he was the badist of the bad. He even scared Terra.†Mickey gave a little shudder. When he saw the looks of confusion on Sora, Riku and Kairi’s face.

“Terra was the leader of the Chasers, the original keybladers. I knew him and he was the bravest person I have ever known. He knew a lot more about what Thanroe was up to but he wouldn’t tell any one. I don’t even think he told the rest of the Chasers.

“Eventually all the good Keybladers were called to fight all the bad. Thousands and thousands of keybladers fought and none of them were seen again.

“All I know is that Thanroe is back and he probably has something to do with Organization XIII’s return.â€

Their was a sharp intake of breath from the entrance to the cave. Mickey hadn’t noticed Miss Izzy standing there or he wouldn’t have said half of what he did.

“So you’re going on another adventure?†She asked softly.

Kairi said nothing, for there was nothing to say.

“Well then you might want to pack a few things. A change of cloths, your key chains, maybe a picture of your parents, your brothers.†That last part was obviously directed towards Riku, who was the only one with any siblings. When Kairi, Riku, and Sora were silent Miss Izzy took this as an opportunity to continue.

“It would probably be a good idea for you to tell your parents what’s going on., but tone down the danger a little bit.†She said, flashing them a smile that told them it was not simply a suggestion.

As they left Riku whispered something carefully into Sora’s ear, so Kairi wouldn’t hear.

“We never told her about the Key chains.â€
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The moment she was sure the children where out of ear shoot Miss Izzy tuned to Mickey.

“What you said meant a lot to me.†Her voice was full of the utmost sincerity.

“Well Miss Izzy I meant every word.†Mickey said causing her to smile.

“I know we don’t know each other very well, but could I ask you a favor?†The red head asked. The King just nodded his consent.

“Can you give this to Ansem?†She asked, handing him a sealed letter.

“Of course Miss Izzy.†The mouse replied.

“Mickey, I need you to look after Kairi. I can’t survive loosing anything more… not to him.†She was about to cry, but it didn’t matter. It had to be said.

Half an hour latter all five where gathered by the King’s Gummi ship to say their farewells. It was obvious that the day was starting to take it’s toll on the middle aged momma. The few lines on her face where accented by the wary look in her eyes.

Kairi didn’t know it but she was the reason her mother was trying as hard as she could not to cry. The young girl stood beside her friend, each with a full knapsack slung over their shoulder looking like little soldiers.

The sight was too like one she had seen ten years ago. It was too painful, too close to home to bare. She almost couldn’t, but she had to. Sora, Riku and Kairi were chosen for this and that meant they had to do it. It meant Izzy had to watch her baby go off to war.

“Mom, are you okay?†Kairi asked when she noticed her mother playing with the violet and lavender ring on her right hand. It was something she did sometimes for no apparent reason. Kairi knew there was something special about that ring but she never asked. Any time Kairi asked about her mother’s past she would just get this far away look in her eyes like she was remembering something very bittersweet and ignore the question.

“Yes sweetie,†She said and then added as an after thought, “I want you to have this.†Miss Izzy said using her teeth to pull the slightly too small ring off her finger. Holding her daughter’s hand out flat she placed the ring on her palm and closed the girl’s fingers around the tiny bit of metal.

“Promise me you’ll wear this? It will protect you.†Kairi couldn’t say no, she immediately put the ring on neglecting to look at the inscription on the inside band. The ring fit perfect and somehow Kairi got the impression that the miniature work of art was truly made for her.


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Okay so I know this one was a little scattered and I sucked at writing the king, I tried. Sorry, but I had to lay down some things for the rest of the story. I love foreshadowing and if I spend half a page talking about something it probably will be important latter on. (Wink wink, nudge nudge)

Just to let you know Kairi’s family will be the only ones who make an appearance in this story unless I decide to add in Riku’s brothers. That will be a trip.

One more thing, Nobody’s parents were Chasers!!!! Sorry I see that one on message boards all the time.

P.S. The twins are not oc’s. they are from a real fandom. If you can guess who they are you get a cookie.

What do you think. Are Aero and Blaze good guys or bad? Or something in between?

Karlie

 

*begs for more*
PLZZZZZZ!!!

 

Wowww!!!!
This is really good!!!! ^.^
I can't wait to read more of this!!! ^-^
I think you're pretty talented at writing this!

Foreshadowing is fun. :D

 

Wow, this is really good!