Kingdom Hearts: Apocalypse ~ Volume 1 - Space (Chapter 13)

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  1. Jade Rhade King's Apprentice

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    Xell.... I have a new character to fall in love with... 'tis all your fault, Zott... (gah! RHYME.... >.<) Xell... I think I'm in love....
     
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    AHHH! 'TIS FLETCHER!!! Yeah, I only made it a few lines in before I had to start my comment.... time to finish the rest of the chapter before I say anything else....

    And that reminds me why I love L so much....

    *sigh* I really hope nothing bad happens to Xell... ingenius with his name, by the way. Oooh, maybe L will meet Xell? I suppose I shall see in the next chapters...
     
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    Awwww!!!! My heart just melted... again.... yes, I had to stop reading and start typing this before I forgot to.... I'll continue reading now...

    Yes, I know; I did it again by stopping to comment before finishing to read, but I couldn't resist... ROY/RIZA FOREVER!!!! Yes, I shall finish read this time...

    YAY 'TIS PARTY!!! I haven't said anything about Xell this entire post, so.... *hugs Xell*
     
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    'TIS XELL!!! Yeah, I shall finish reading now... I have to say that Xell is one of my new favorite OC's now... (did you already guess that? :p)

    And I'm pretty sure that's everyone on the list... I don't know if I can handle Xell and Near on the same team, though... my poor little head might explode from all the adorable-ness in one area...

    I have to say, I'm impressed. This story's gone much farther than I would have thought possible from the opening chapter, and I LOVE IT.
     
  5. Zexion of the Twilight The conflicts within my priorities....

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    I have two more sins I'd like to fit in the story.
     
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    Kingdom Hearts: Apocalypse ~ Volume 1 - Space (Chapter 21)

    Chapter 21 - The Last Homunculus - The Chimera Heartless, again...

    The Chimera Heartless flew over Central's hospital. It landed on the rooftop, knawing on the flag. It was thought to be a symbol from God that Amestris shall fall.

    "What was that shadow passing by?" Regret asked.

    "I dunno, come on, Fletcher! Let's investigate!" Russell ran for the stairs.

    "Wait for me, brother!" Fletcher pleaded, sprinting to follow his older brother.

    "Heh, now's my chance." Regret thought aloud. He dawned his old clothes and headed straight for the rooftop through the window.

    The Chimera Heartless tried to bite Regret's arm off, buy the homunculus was too fast for it. He jumped onto the heartless' back and tried to wrestle it to the ground. "Nice monster, pretty monster, just die monster!"

    The Tringham Brothers reached the rooftop and stonespiked it's claws and hindlegs down to the floor, making sure it stayed in place. "We'll call the military over!" Russell assured.

    "We'll get them here, just stall it!" Fletcher yelled.

    "Alright, will do, Tringham Brothers!" Regret screamed. The two brothers left to get the military while Regret pondered how to beat it before anyone got to the scene and escape in time. "Hm, ah! The flagpole!"

    Regret smashed the stonespikes, freeing the heartless. It then tried to wiggle Regret off. "I don't think so!" Regret shouted. As soon as the heartless flew directly above the flagpole of the hospital, Regret punched downward with all his strength. "Bye, bye, birdie!" Regret stretched his body out like a parachute just in time before he was impaled by the flagpole with the heartless. He quickly fled from the scene just as the authorities arrived. The heartless continued to twitch and move, however.

    Chapter 21 - The Heroes of Space - The Parting of Ways (no, not the Doctor Who episode)

    All of them assembled at the docking bay, each of the teams (except the Master, Commander, and Soldier team) boarded a gummi ship.

    "Report to us if you find anything strange." Xemnas reminded everyone.

    "Take care, because we won't care." Saix just randomly commented.

    "Hope that the winds of change are with you!" Xaldin hoped.

    All of the gummi ships blasted off into space, each bound for adventure.

    Chapter 21 - The Keybladers of Destiny - The World Consumed by Darkness

    Sora, Riku, and Kairi return to Destiny Islands, now crawling with heartless and an ever growing Darkside boss heartless. "I call dibs on the big one!" Sora called.

    "You're gonna take that on alone? I don't think so." Riku responded.

    "Hey, why do you two go on without thinking of me?" Kairi asked, naggingly.

    The ocean water was all gone, replaced by the barren land beneath. The three climbed their way up to the floating piece of the island to fight Darkside.

    It, having been beaten multiple times, had prepared for battle. Darkside summoned dark versions of the keyblade wielders to tire them out first.

    "So, fighting shadows, now? The one Riku sent at me in Neverland was pathetic, this one'll be the same!" Sora shouted. He easily dispatched his match.

    "That's offensive, showoff!" Riku responded loudly as he sliced through his shadow.

    "You two never wait for people who can't keep up!" Kairi yelled. She slashed her shadow clone in half.

    Darkside, clearly outmatched, summons two clones of him.

    The keybladers just chuckled and charged up the power of light in their keyblades. They unleashed it, shredding the heartless apart and releasing the hearts.

    Chapter 21 - The Mickey Mouse Club - Guess who's back, back again?

    Mickey, Donald, and Goofy landed in the Gummi Ship bay, then finding the castle empty. "Hello, anyone home?" Donald asked nervously.

    "Hyuk, we're back!" Goofy shouted loudly and carelessly.

    "Something doesn't feel right..." Mickey commented on the ominous scent in the air. "I smell darkness." The three got their weapons out.

    A muscley heartless arm reached out of the shadows to grab Goofy, but was repelled when Goofy opened the book the Olympian Gods gave him and Donald. "Yikes! Wait, that arm seemed familiar."

    Donald thought for a moment. "Hey, wait, that was the arm of the heartless Xehanort has around!" Donald suddenly concluded.

    "Xehanort, come out!" Mickey demanded. "I know you're there!"

    "Haha, you realize?" Xehanort's voice echoed through the docking bay. "Come by the Cornerstone, I'm waiting."

    "Xehanort! What did you do?!" Mickey asked furiously. Pluto whimpered sadly, worried that something may've happened.

    Chapter 21 - The Nobody Party - Twilight Town Revisited

    Roxas, Kixur, and Namine arrive at the abandoned mansion. "Ok, Xemnas instructed us to come here and then open the letter."

    They all look closely at the letter:

    You three will be stationed here, the Dusks should've already cleaned up the mess inside. Get friendly with the people in the town (Roxas, I think you already know them somewhat), patrol around a lot (Don't wander around alone), and have fun registering in the school.

    -Xemnas​

    P.S. All of you must follow these instructions, including the school part. MUHUHAHAHAHA!!!!


    "Aww!!!" they all whined simultaneously. "Dangit!" they whined again.

    So, we have to live here?" Kixur asked. "Nice place, but you two already know that."

    "Hm, I guess I get my old room again." Namine thought aloud.

    "Well, time to settle in before we catch a cold." Roxas suggested. Good thing we're getting rid of the Organization sometime soon... I can't stand school, helping Sora with Geometry was hell.
     
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    Chapter 22 - The Last Homunculus - Not alone anymore...

    Regret wanders around in the desert. "Dang, I read these were hot, but it is blazing!" He tires out, despite being homunculus, and drops off a dune. He wakes up in a small village. "Eh, the whole place is empty."

    He walks around until he ends up in the town square, where a premature homunculus was found by Regret. "Oh, hello there. I'm sorry, but there's no Red Stone I can fed you." The abomination munches the last of its Red Stone, which wasn't much to begin with.

    He looks in pity at the thing. "You must only be a few weeks old, but I think there is a way I can help you." He touches the homunculus with his palm, and then begins to transfer souls from himself to the other homunculus. He drops to his knees after the process was complete.

    "Are you ok?" the newly fed homunculus, now fully transformed to match a human being, helped Regret.

    "Yeah, I'm only a little tired." Regret responded. "My name is Regret, I am just like you."

    Chapter 22 - The Organization Misfits - Reminiscence

    "I'm bored!" Demyx screamed through the cockpit. "There's nothing good to do! I wanna pilot!"

    "If we let you pilot, we'd end up crashing into a meteor, like last time!" Zexion countered back. "You wiped out most of our backup supplies and devastated the alpha site!"

    "Not to forget how you stole my fireworks and lit up the beta site on fire." reminded Axel.

    "Oh yeah, you also flooded the gamma site." Zexion butted in. "It took months just to get the sharks out."

    "And we can't forget about the Delta site, you..." Axel was interrupted.

    "I get the point!" Demyx yelled.

    "Good," Zexion sighed in relief. "I see you finally learned your lesson."

    Chapter 22 - The Mickey Mouse Club - Cornerstone of Corruption

    The Mickey Mouse Club make their way through the castle, whacking away heartless that have turned the castle to the darkness. The cornerstone should've protected this world, but what happened to it?! Xehanort! I'll get the answers out of him even if I have to fight him! Mickey thought while slicing apart Neo Shadows.

    The three arrived in the throne room, where shadows of the team faced them. "Oh please, these things again?!" Donald hopped up and down angrily of the continuous barrage. "THUNDER! FIRE! BLIZZARD!" The magic was strong enough for the hot-headed duck to shred those shadow versions into pieces.

    "Donald, may'be you should calm down!" Goofy suggested goofily.

    "Aw, shuddup you big palooka!" Donald furiously responded.

    They all go into the Hall of the Cornerstone, where Xehanort stood along with Guardian in front of a corrupted Cornerstone of Light. "Hahaha, the darkness seems to be stronger than even light, oh meddlesome King!"

    "Xehanort! What did you do with my people?!" Mickey demanded the answer while pointing the keyblade at Xehanort.

    "Oh, probably surrendering to the darkness by now..." Xehanort commented with a chuckle.

    "Let my people go!" Mickey demanded, jumping at Xehanort and swinging his keyblade horizontally.

    Guardian grabbed the keyblade and threw Mickey to the corner. "I am even stronger now, able to physically manifest myself. Even the keyblade cannot defeat me!"

    Guardian is about to grab Donald, but Goofy opens the book again and releases the gift of the gods. "What... is that?!" Xehanort demanded an answer.

    An impenetrable field deflects even Guardian, a heartless that specializes in defense. Goofy looks at the article in the book:

    An Absolute Terror Field, AT Field for short. The wall that separates the soul from other souls. It can be used in the physical realm by certain individuals who are granted this power or part of a species capable of erecting the barrier at will.

    Donald grabs the book and the pages automatically flip to another page. A stream of light flies through the Guardian out of nowhere and appears in Donald's wings like a keyblade. He also reads off the article:

    Lance of Longinus, a holy lance, is a weapon of the light. This is one of the only weapons that can pierce an AT Field. The darkness-corrupted can be purified by a blessing from the spear. Any creature of the darkness fears the weapon because it gives an uneasy feeling and can irradiate them instantly.

    Donald smirks and throws it through Guardian again, wounding the heartless even more and goes back to Xehanort. "Ah, blast you and your king!"

    "No thank you, Xehanort!" responded Donald, throwing it into the Cornerstone of Light, purifying it and cleanses the world of darkness.

    "I... will not... disappear... NEVER!" Xehanort opens a dark Corridor and escapes before the light overwhelms him.

    The Lance of Longinus reappears in Donald's hands. "NOW we are in luck! Thank you, Olympian Gods!"

    Chapter 22- The Ed, Al, and Winry Adventures - ..... and now for something completely different!

    Al and Winry mops the gummi ship, inch by inch. "Winry, is this really necessary?" Al asked while taking a break on the pilot chair.

    "Yes, Al, Ed'll see this place squikkie clean and, if he gets it dirty, I'll KILL HIM for it. He'll then be forced to keep his clothes clean..." Winry explained with a smile.

    "Uhh, ok! I'll do whatever you say, Winry!" Al pledged, scared for him and his brother's life. Al goes into the janitor’s closet when he slips on the slippery floor and knocks everything over.

    "Al! Are you all... Whoa!" Winry slips as well and lands on top of Al.

    Ed wakes up and looks at them in the closet, staring. "Ya know, there's a time and place..." Ed commented with his eye twitching.

    "Gah! Brother! It's not what it looks like!" Al screams in defense. "Me and Winry weren't..."

    "Don't take me for a fool, Al! I know about the Birds and the Bees!" Ed counters, irritated.

    "Ed! We were just mopping the floor and..." Winry also defended.

    "Riiiiiiight, but don't you like it dirty?" Ed questioned Winry. "I go take a nap and suddenly you two are busy doing something? I see how it is!" Edward stomps out to the cockpit and pushes the hyperdrive button. "This'll be a bumpy ride, but you like that, don't you lovebirds?!"