Kingdom Hearts 3-The Encounter

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  1. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    Interesting story, that last chapter was really funny! I can't wait for more =).
     
  2. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    Thanks!

    Hey guys I made a few sigs for the story:
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    Update!!!

    Chapter 5-The Lions, the Memory Witch, and a Roxas

    "As I scream, aim, and fire, the death toll grows higher!" Roxas was singing his favorite song, Bullet For My Valentine's Scream, Aim, Fire. The song, however, has more screaming than singing." God has spoken through his consience. As I scream, aim, and fire, the death toll grows..."

    "Roxas!" Kairi was sick of Roxas screaming. He was a good singer, but not a good screamer."Please return back to your state of just listening to yout portable CD player." Roxas stuck his tongue out towards her and slammed his headphones on. She, however, could still here the music.

    Namine wanted to change the subject."So.....where is fake Sora?" Riku just looked up and pointed. In the window, the gang saw a huge world with jungles, an elephant graveyard, a HUGE desert, and a odd shaped mountain. They didn't know this world, but with one look at his screen, Riku said...

    "The Pride Lands." Riku looked up more info."Turns outsiders into animals, has a king, clear of heartless as of now, and is home to Pride Rock." Riku pointed at the mountain. He then faced his friends."When we get down there, our forms will change. We'll be animals."

    "So..." Kairi put in."...Roxas won't change?" Next thing Kairi knew, she was on her back, pinned down by Roxas.

    Roxas was smiling."Now, you will get the punishment." He let out a sinister laugh. He hocked and slowly progressed a trail of saliva towards Kairi's face. She was nuts now. She was geeking out like crazy.

    "Okay, Roxas." Riku interrupted the torture of Kairi."We need to find Sora's teleporter." They looked and looked, and they found it. There was a huge platform, able to fit about twenty people. The platform had a control panel on its right side.

    "Okay." Roxas chimed."Time to scream, aim, and fire." This ticked off Kairi........alot!

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    "Tell us where it is, or we will beat it out of you!"

    Fake Sora was atop Pride Rock, swinging around Oblivion with his tail. He was in full lion form, alongside a lionness with light brown fur. She had scratches all over her ears, showing that she was a fighter. To their front stood a proud Simba, standing his ground to protect Nala. They were both growling, both hurt by their friend turninng on them.

    Simba bellowed."You betrayed us! We'll never tell you where it is!" Simba lunged at Sora, both topling of Pride Rock. Below was a cluster of bushes, so both knew they would have a cushioned fall. They both tried to get hits in. Simba mauled at Sora, but he dodged every blow. Sora tried to counter, but Simba dodged his blows also. Nala and the lioness brawled while Simba and Sora fell. Simba finally slapped Sora down, making him fall faster. They finally reached the bushes, feeling no pain as they landed. Both Simba and Sora jumped out as quickly as possible, Sora now retreating.

    "Come on, Zira!" Sora shouted. The lioness named Zira ran down the mountain's side, running towards the savannah with Sora.

    Simba tried to see if Nala was okay. When she looked over and gave him an okay, He rocketed after the troublesome duo. He then saw a beam of light shoot from the sky towards the direction of the Elephant Graveyard. Simba looked up and smiled."This must mean another goofy group is visiting the Pride Lands."

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    "Whoa!" Roxas shouted. He tripped over Namine and Kairi, landing face first in the dirt. The group looked around and saw everything was bigger. Then they realized they were all turned into lion cubs. Roxas had light yellow fur, with spikey hair resembling his usual 'do'. Kairi had red fur, darker fur where her usual hairline was. Riku was bigger since he was the oldest in the group. He had silver fur with a short, dark grey mane, resembling his hair. Namine was albino, with blonde fur where her hairline was. They all looked at each other.

    Namine stared at Roxas for a long time. Awww, she thought, he's even cuter her.

    They were brought back to reality when they heard someone running towards them."Hide!" Roxas blurted. They hid in a crater, barely hiding their tails. Sora and Zira ran in, both stopping to sniff the air. Awww, Kairi thought, he looks cute as a lion.

    Sora stopped sniffing and growled, his red eyes even darker."I smell a Roxas..." Roxas made a little squeal, muffled by his paw.

    Zira sniffed again."Do you mean that smell of belches and flatulence?" This ticked Roxas off a little.

    Sora heaved a sigh."Yes...the smell of farts and burps. That's the Roxasis Dorkius scent." He followed the scent to the edge of the crater...

    ROAR! Simba jumped out of nowhere and bellowed."Get out!" Sora ran as fast as he could, tripping over his paws at least four times. Zira followed at blistering speed. Simba didn't move a muscle."Are you friends of Sora?"

    When the coast was clear, Namine came out."Simba, we are friends of Sora. Do you know what's wrong with him?" The others didn't know how Namine knew the massive lion king's name.

    Simba turned to them and smiled."Follow me and we'll talk it over. Let's hope the Roxasis Dorkius scent doesn't make any of the pride leave."

    BTW guys, the song at the beginning isn't my favorite song, some of you know that I've been using Roxas to tell stuff about me( not personal ) my favorite song by them is in my sig, if you know the words :p
     
  3. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    Go Simba! Great chapter! I just have one suggestion: You should use italics when a person is thinking something. That was your best chapter yet, keep it up!
     
  4. Juicy Chaser

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    Erm.. its... okay.. lol. Not THAT great, but a nice place to live.

    Sorry, but I honestly have no idea what your talking about....


    I was slightly confused about this chapter.. I don't know if my brain is fuzzy but it didn't make much sense to me. Or maybe I'm just tired. I did however, like how you had Roxas singing scream aim and fire. That made me laugh. So your favourite song is tears don't fall? That used to be mine, except... now it reminds me of my ex. *shudder* I'd like to see a bit more explaining in the next chapter, keep it up though.
     
  5. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    That's neat how you live in another country, I've always wanted to go to the UK
    Yea, Scream, Aim, Fire is my second favorite( after Tears Don't Fall ) but I'm sorry if that brought up anything bad :( I've never had a girlfriend and really don't know what it's like, but I've seen about it enough in movies and stuff....but I'm sorry I brought that up....
    I'm gonna explain more about this in the next chapter...
    What confused you guys though? just so that I can explain

    What did you guys think about the sigs?
     
  6. Juicy Chaser

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    Nah I think my brain is just confrazzled a bit I can't make sense of words. I'll re-read the last chapter tomorrow when I'm less tired :D

    Don't worry about the ex thing.. just makes me wanna strangle him thats all.

    Nice sigs *thumbs up*
     
  7. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    Oh okay :D

    I have been in girl situations, however, so I know how you feel. When one of my friends was dating my other friend and they got into an argument, she came to me and spilled out all here feelings and stuff. She told me of some tortures she wanted to do to him...o_o...tortures I never want to hear about again.....
    so every time they fought, she came to me and I soon got them back together over, and over, and over.....and over again....

    thanx!
     
  8. Juicy Chaser

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    After re-reading the last chapter, I appreciate more now.

    Omg a roxas lion cub would be adorable!
    I can rly imagine Kairi and namine too lol
    But Riku? A silver lion lol

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
     
  9. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    thanx Obsessed!:D

    Guys, I should have the next update up by Monday or Tuesday
     
  10. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    HAHA!!! That good!