I got inspired by two things 1. the video in my sig 2. A picture from Deviantart I'll be adding two extra girls that are the core to the Zodiac feature. To the Sohma's, zodiac members can hug each other without transforming, but in this.... The rule is that Zodiac members can't hug the opposite gender without transforming. And they can't hug members of the opposite gender or get under too much stress. So, let's begin! And I would appreciate if any of you could tell me with Zodiac animal Namine is most like the Rooster, Monkey, Sheep, Horse, Snake, or Tiger. Chapter 1: The Two New Visitors ------------------------------------- Sora and Roxas were at the beach, just lazing around. Riku and Kairi were in the secret place, looking at old memories. A splash was heard by Sora. Sora ran to the source of the noise and found two girls. One had brunette hair and the other had a blackis brown hair color. Their eyes couldn't be seen since they wer closed. "Roxas! Come over here! I found two girls!" Roxas came running over and stared. How'd two girls end up here? And wasn't there a splash? How were they dry? It didn't look like a drop of water had touched them. "Don't just stand there, help me!", Sora yelled angrily. "Alright! Sorry, I zoned out.", Roxas said while picking up the girl with the blackish brown hair. Sora picked up the other girl. They headed towards the treehouse, and put the girls in separate beds. One of the girls stirred, then opened her eyes. "What happened?", she noticed the other girl, the one with brunette hair, "Valerie! I've gotta help!" She jumped up to help her friend, but tripped over Sora. Then there was two boom sounds and smoke and there was a small boar sitting on top of a brown cat. --------------------------------------- If you want me to type more, then say the word and I'll try my best!
the cat is kyo sohma and the boar is...(oh, what was the name?)... oh, right! the bor's name is kagura sohma. sorry, i haven't read much fruits basket, i'm kinda just starting. my friend got me into it.
Sorry Sorry, but I'll make the chapter, even if you were wrong. Chapter 2: The Zodiac Curse Part 1 -------------------------------------- "Ow... Hey... How'd I get paws? And why are you so heavy?!" Sora was using his newly found paws and claws. Once free from the heavy weight of the boar, he stared at his tail, then Roxas. "Is it me? Or did you get bigger?" Roxas stared. The other girl, that was known as Valerie as boar girl's friend, woke up and rubbed her eye. "Why does everyone have to be so loud?" Valerie looked at the little boar on the floor. "Well hello, Eden." Valerie picked up the boar. "What did you do?" The boar, Eden, stared up to Valerie and grinned. "What do you mean? I just tripped, that's all. I better get my clothes. You too, cat boy, get your clothes before you change back." Eden was set down by Valerie and Valerie put Eden's clothes on her back. Eden quickly trugded outof the treehouse and juped into some early greenery. ~~Meanwhile~~ Sora went out of the treehouse and both Eden and Sora changed back. Eden quickly put her clothes on, and Sora blushed as he put his clothes on. --------------------------------------------- End of part one! Not that bad, but oh well...*shrugs*
AAAAAAAAHHHHH!!! i think my brain just melted from my own stupidity... anyway, it is a great story so far... i am sorry for being wrong i now realize why i was wrong the boar was ON TOP, not on bottom... okay... too bad i didn't get my cookie...
The Zodiac Curse Part 2 ------------------------------------------------------ Eden quickly went into the tree house and sat next to Valerie, who was sitting on the small bed. Sora came in and sat on another bed. “How did you and Sora turn to animals?” asked Roxas shakily. “It’s from a curse. I call it a gift, but if I was the cat,” she inclined her head to Sora, “I would call it a curse. I’m the boar, and Valerie is a dog. We are member of the Zodiac; we have done nothing to let the curse take over us. We just have it. We land in different worlds, only to stay for as long as the curse lets us. We have met many people, but haven’t aged at all. Time is not a problem. I’m still eleven, and Valerie is thirteen. Though we have had this curse for thousands of years. We’ve been like this for so long; I forgot what year this is. Maybe our millionth. I don’t know.” “Eden is right about everything. The curse will affect anyone who touches us, and their friends. Even nobodies. The cat isn’t part of the Zodiac, but its just there. The one who is the dragon will turn into a seahorse; it’s the closest thing to a dragon.” Sora sighed. “Better go and find Riku and Kairi, and Namine too.” Sora goes up and went to the secret place, little did he know, Valerie, Eden, and Roxas were following. Sora found Riku, Kairi and surprisingly Namine. Namine was sketching down Sora and Kairi’s poapu picture. “Hi peoples! What’s up? Nothing for me, except now we’re all cursed by the Chinese Zodiac.” “Ha, Sora, you’re so funny.” Kairi hugged Sora and two booming sounds came as well as smoke and there was a rabbit on a cat. Why is everyone falling on me? He thought. Again, he clawed his way out from under Kairi and looked kind of annoyed. Valerie looked annoyed as well, as did Eden. They both thought he was cute. Him with another girl? That crossed the line. “NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!” Eden shouted, but accidentally ran into Riku. Another boom sound and smoke later, a boar was sitting on top of a rat. Now it was Riku’s turn to be annoyed. Now he was going to be crushed by a boar, while he was a tiny rat. ------------------------------- Well? How is it? Comment and enjoy!
Alright. And of cousre, I forgot to thank Oneesama for inspiring as well! Give a cheer for AnimeGirl104!!*applaud button* Chapter 3: Rise of The Zodiac ------------------------------------- Eden sat up and got her clothes once again, and ran out of the Secret Place. "You better get your clothes, rat boy." Riku scurried out and jumped into some greenery. There was some smoke and Valerie ran out and got Riku's clothes. Namine ran out to help in whatever way possible. Sora grabbed his clothes, and Kairi did the same, not knowing what was happining. Another two poofs, and Sora and Kairi quickly dressed themselves in the smoke that appeared. After everyone was dressed, everyone, but Sora and Kairi, went into the Secret Place. When Sora saw Riku, "animal" instinct took over for them both. "Stupid Cat." "Dumb Rat!" Valerie and Eden saw some sparks inbetween the two. They laughed nervously, since they new what might happen. It was only natural that the cat and rat fought. "Oh no...", Valerie and Eden said in unity. They both knew this would be an interesting time being in this world. ------------------------------------ The chapter ay suck, but I feel kinda lazy. I have a four day weekend starting tommorrow, so I'll alot of time writing for all of you.
I have a 3 day weekend. you haven't answered my question. Roxas is the seahorse,right? Well,Namine does have Kisa's personality... Do you think you could put Nikolle in? In case your wondering,she's the horse of the Zodiac.(she was born in the year of the rooster,but she's a horse)
You know that answer to that question. About Nikolle... I don't know... If I do, I'll put her in as a rooster because she's the rooster.
Oh...he he.^-^; I swear Nikolle wants to be the horse,period. She thinks Akito is the horse and Akito is her favorite character.(O_o) plus,she doesn't fit rooster at all! she eats her own Zodiac animal!>_<
Chapter 4: To Sora's house we go! ------------------------------------ After Eden and Velerie explained about the Zodiac curse, they all went back to the main island. "Where are you gonna stay at?", Kairi asked curiously. Eden shrugged. " Stay at my house! Roxas moved in, but he's my nobody, so he is me. Two more people won't be a problem.", Sora said with his signature smile. Valerie literally shaked her head up and down like there was no tommorow. Eden and Valerie blushed. Sora and Roxas were the first people that they had chrushes on in thier travels. ~~At Sora's house~~ Valerie and Eden were quiet the whole way to Sora's house. The curse led the to someone that they can't even hug, no matter how much they want to? And he's cursed by the cat. What will happen when he turns to his other form? ------------------------------------------ I know... It sucks...
Chapter 5: The Beads of Neko Sora ---------------------------------------------------------- Eden and Valerie suddered at the idea of Sora's other form. Eden suddenly was reminded. She had to give Sora his beads, since he was the cat. "Sora! You need something if you're the cat.", Eden gave Sora a bracelet of medium sized black and white beads. She put it on his wrist. " Thanks but no thanks. The crown necklace is enough for me.", Sora almost took off the beads when Valerie jumped at him, then changed into a small brunette puppy. Sora was once agian a brown cat. "Why'd you do that?!", Sora asked, angrily. "To prevent the evil side of the cat from coming!", she barked. Things went silent. Sora was confused, there was another form for the cat? "We forgot to mention, the cat has an evil side. The beads are a way of keeping the demon locked away. As long as the beads are on, everyone is safe." "Woah..." Riku, Kairi, Roxas, and Namine said in amazed, yet scared unsion. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Keep in mind that the beads will come off. Maybe that'll be the last chapter, and I'm planning for the demon to come out and when it does, after the demon is sealed away and blah, blah, blah... I'm planning for the curse to be broken and Eden and Valerie to stay on the islands with Sora and Roxas.
Thanks for your comments and votes! If this goes well, I'll make a new story! How does that sound? Chapter 5: Overseas Parents ---------------------------------------------- Everyone was at Sora's house, they all went into his living room and at down. Valerie and Eden sat next to each other. Sora was pacing around, still thinking about that demon Valerie said about. He looked at his black and white bead bracelet and sighed. He sat down and thought it over again. " I've never seen Sora think like this! If this keeps going, Sora might become Einstien!" Sora got annoyed after that. "Damn rat...", he mumbled under his breath, then he looked at Valerie and Eden. If they went away, their curse would would still be at full power. If they didn't, he would end up being a cat everytime he went under alot of stress or a girl hugged him. And it doesn't look like that they know how to break the curse. If they did, he wouldn't be the cat. " Wanna stay at my house, you two? My parents are overseas, and they won't be back for a year." ----------------------------------------------- A year?! And that's plenty of time to break the curse. Oh course, it won't be a real year, just a year in the story.
Here's the next chapter... So Val will stop nagging me o_o; Chapter 6: Animal Dinner ------------------------------------------------ " YES! WE WILL SO STAY!!", Valerie and Eden yelled in front of Sora's ace.Sora was so shocked he fell over. "Okay, okay! I'll put up some inflatibale beds in the living room.", he said. Valerie and Eden giggled, they were staying with te cutest guy ever! But they also failed to realize that he could be the most dangerous as well. Riku and Kairi were in the kitchen. Kairi was munching on a carrot and Riku, some provolone cheese. It seems that animal instincts were having it's affect on them already. Sora came back, with a growling stomach. " Anyone want dinner?", he asked. Valerie and Eden went straight to the kitchen and got some things out of the fridge.Valerie waited in the dning room while Eden made salmon, salad, mini pizzas, and some steaks. It was all done within an hour, so when she placed all the food and sat down, everyone started to eat. She and Valerie took a steak, Kairi took the salad, Riku took the pizza, and Sora had salmon. "It's like you knew what we wanted.", Kairi said. "Years of experience does the trick for her! And she know alot about animals and their diets, she has to or else why would she cook?", Valerie said, grinning. "Thanks Eden.", Sora, Valerie, Riku, and Kairi chimed. Eden blushed rose red. "Hey, where's Roxas and Namine?", Eden asked. All of a sudden, a white tiger ran through the kitchen, carrying a gold seahorse in her mouth. Eden ran after the tiger. "Namine! Don't eat Roxas!", she yelled. Everyone else just ate, for they knew Eden had it under control. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Done! Happy peoples?!
Ha ha...Seafood fit for a tiger.XD Kidding,Kidding.... Actually...in the fanfic I made,Kurix was also the dog.It kinda fits cause in my opinion,I think Kurix would be a major pervert.(and you know how Shigure is in the anime.XD) Marly was the snake..which fits alot... Axel was the rabbit....I don't know why.... Demyx was a water dragon(He was like an aquatic Mushu.XD) aw why am I rambling? I loves it!Please write more!^-^
Here's my present to kh-vids.net, a new chapter! Chapter 7: Berserker ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- While Eden was taking care of Namine not eating Roxas, the doorbell rang. "I'll get it.", Sora said, getting up and walking to the door. He opened it to find Saix. In pure shock, Sora slammed the door in his face. Oooo that hurts. Saix tried to keep his temper for about two seconds... but he summoned his weapon and destroyed the door. "I CAME TO SAY HELLO! HELLO!", he yelled. Namine and Roxas had changed back, though Roxas passed out from lack of water. Eden ran to a closet and gave Namine and Roxas some of Sora's clothes. Sure it didn't fit Namine, but something is better than nothing. Saix still had his weapon in his hand, it had smashed part of the floor as well. Weird thing is, he was wearing a tuxedo with a tie. He looked calm before, but now... oh boy. The tux was casual."Nyah!", Sora yelled, running and hiding behind Valerie. Just imagine, the cat hiding behind the dog. Well, Riku was silent, walking past Saix, still breathing heavily with his weapon still in the floor. Riku walked outside, and to the beach and started laughing. Eden was still tending to Namine's and Roxas's needs at the moment, so she had no idea what was going on, even with the large sound of splitering wood. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Is it me or did our posts suddenly dissapear?o_o; but we weren't spamming...were we? Oh forget it. The chapters Hilarious!Please write the next one right away!... Nyah..all my fabulous suggestions...gone.*sighs sadly*
Chapter 8: H-Hello Six Sora was still cowering behind Valerie. “Don’t let him hurt me! He’s scary…†Sora whimpered. Eden, Roxas, and Namine had just walked into the room, gaping at what had happened. Now Roxas was just annoyed “Are you sure you’re my other, Sora?†Sora looked behind him and saw the trio. “But he’s the beserker! You weren’t the one who fought him!â€, he whimpered. “And he was a higher member then me, so I had to follow everything he said!†Roxas scoffed. Sora paused a bit; Saix was calmly took his hands off his weapon and started tidying himself up. “Just use oblivion to kick his butt!†Sora yelled at Roxas. Valerie was blushing since Sora was cowering behind her, not just anyone, her. Saix, after tidying himself up, walked up to Valerie and bowed. “My apologies miss. I am Saix.†He said. Valerie was a little disgusted, but hided it with a half growl, half smile. Riku had walked back in and hadn’t said a word. He just walked back in and continued eating his mini pizzas. --------------------------------------------------------- Here it is! Sorry I took so long!
.... I think I jut figured out the term 'scaredy cat' while reaing this. poor wittle Sora.... Though Riku kinda made me laugh the way he was reacting to everything.XDDD so all in all,great chapter!:3
