king mickey's poems and raps

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  1. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    Issho Ni

    A thousand seas filled with fallen tears
    consisting of sadness and indescribable fears
    are invading the beautiful land of the rising sun.
    People running from a disaster so big
    it even makes the most emotionless man terminally sick.

    At world’s end the earth shook endlessly
    like the 2012 apocalypse arrived way too early.
    Many lives were taken.
    Even more were left broken, alone and forsaken.

    No matter how many power we have to control each other,
    Mother Nature decides all our fates one way or another.
    You’re not alone, we’re in this togetherIssho ni
     
  2. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    This is one of the few poems I have seen that can actually get a point across within so few lines. You are doing a great job, can't wait to here more and I am not sure if this is about the recent tragedy in Japan but that is what it reminded me of. This poem is more than just words it is a light of hope for those who have been caught in the disaster. Thank you for having the kindness to make this poem.
     
  3. Styx That's me inside your head.

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    So far I have read "White Turned Black" and "Issho Ni". You have a lot of talent for rhyme and imagery in your fingers. The former had an especially nice flow to it, and the latter conveyed an admirable message. I like these pieces, and I'll continue to read more.
     
  4. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    Thanks, I appreciate your kind words and I'm glad you liked those pieces n.n.

    Today

    Gunshots echoing in the ravaged streets.
    A leader that won’t ever ever recognize defeat.
    Jet fighters flying circles in the Eastern air
    like bombing cities is the solution for unending despair.

    Oil fever is what holds people’s minds nowadays.
    Black gold means money, money equals power raise.
    Millionaires take a shower in millions of dollars
    while poor little children are f*cking dying of hunger.

    People want to move from our dying Earth to space
    even though we haven’t got the means to survive in that place.
    Black and white aren’t different, that is not the case.
    We have one common goal, we all want worldwide peace.

    We can’t deny that we are screwing this world up.
    We have to act before we get out of all our luck.
    Earth is our home and it’s our only one
    for we didn’t get two. It’s destruction cannot be undone.
     
  5. Daxa~ #stalker

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    Ok I really like your poems.
    They all have a beat to them,kinda like a rap?(or it could be my brain acting up again)
    But anyway,they are really good,and its obvious you really mean what you are saying.
    And the one you just did,Today,thats just like something my friend said in her debating final!
    :D
     
  6. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    OOOOhhhhhh, I love this one. (BTW Daxa, I also thought of rap) This has a good beat to it, the rhythm holds steady and the words don't steer away from the subject you are getting at. (Which I believe is GO GREEN) I believe your songs could be a big hit . . . . Viral Video anyone lol but seriously, love your work and keep it up my friend ^_^
     
  7. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    The Famous Minds

    Ready to claim the fame
    that’s mine to gain. I’m just sayin’
    I ain’t shy to say what’s on my mind.
    I’ll stay kind but be vigilant, there’s a villain inside
    ready to burst out if there’s a simple mind to unblind.
    For I will enlighten those who need enlightment.
    This treatment will surely shock them.
    They will understand the true meaning of slavery
    when they come to the conclusion that it’s me who enslaves them.
    I’m the king, the master, the fear, the hope, the cheer, the laughter.
    I’m everywhere so you have nowhere to hide.
    In this community democracy is the thing you won’t ever find.
     
  8. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    K this one has a nice beat but could you explain the . . . what is it about???
     
  9. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    First of all, the poem itself is about slavery and dictatorship. The underlined words, the letters that are in a bigger size and the bold words are telling who it is that dictates the world of today, the so called villain. You could find out yourself but if you can't find it then just read this:

    It's about the illuminati that controls some famous people. Not saying that I believe in it but yeah, that's the subject of this poem, the illuminati myth.

    You can make words with the bigger sized letters (the famous minds -> famous people), the bold words (enlightment enslaves them) says that the illuminati enslaves the famous minds and the normal people and the underlined words (there's a villain that this community won't ever find) means that no one will ever know whether or not this villain exists etc.

    I hope this 'enlightens' you a bit :p
     
  10. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    You know!!! Im just joking but thanks for clearing that up, I had noticed the different font styles but paid no attention to them *sigh* and another one bites the dust lol . . . But yeah I kind of like the idea of making poetry with hidden messages within it . . . I might look into that and write a few myself ^_^
     
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    Oh wow.
    I really love the new poem,and the hidden message....epic idea xD
    Keep writing!! :D
     
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    The Flame Guru

    To all the haters, go far away, shoo!
    Before it gets ugly and I turn into scrappy-doo.
    Let me at’em, let me at'em! I am the flame guru.

    You’ll even get burned when I have a cold. Behold
    this inferno of rhymes, could be a little bit bold.
    But no worries, no boo-hoo-ies, I will never scold.
    Just tellin’ the truth that simply has to be told.

    I stay gold at my worst.
    Blindfolded I find the right words.
    My curse is my luck, the very truth is that you suck.
    I hit surprisingly like a sudden thunderstruck.
    You don’t belong here, much like the little ugly duck.

    I'm fly without red bull.
    You are softer than sheep's wool.
    You speak garbage, a mouthful.
    I'll call it ke$ha-awful.

    Please enter the exit and take a short bow.
    Surrender ‘cause this game is really over now.


    Under The Sand

    I have told her so many times
    that you’re crazy in your head, you're no good.
    Yet she chooses for you.
    Guess she’ll have to notice it for herself.

    You use drugs, not ‘cause you need it but just for fun.
    You are a player and a damn big one at that.
    You gossip about ‘friends’. You are not trustworthy, not at all.
    Here I swear, if you hurt her even one freakin’ time-I’ll let you experience hell
    and burry you under the sand.

    Errr, well
    let’s just say that I’ll take revenge. Avenge her.
    No killing here. Besides, your death will set you free,
    like you deserve that. No deliverance, only vengeance you will see!
    You deserve unending fear!

    I may be younger, I may be weaker but I’m not afraid of punks like you!
    You’ll pay for the things you shouldn't do.
    I hate your kind. The anger-makes me blind.
    Now here I swear, if you mistreat her one more time-No more sins and no more crimes.
    It’ll be your last. You’ll be part of the past.

    Oh please girl, one last time! You sure want to share your life
    with a guy like him? Please, don’t let yourself be mistreated.
    You deserve so much better. Unblind yourself from all this love.
    Just read his love backwards and you will see that he’s as evol as they come.

    So here I swear, I’ll protect you
    from all the bad things he would do.
    No mercy, no pity for the likes of him.
    He’ll get buried under the sand by my own hands.
    He’ll pay for his sins and burn down in hell.
     
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    You have a great gift of letting your emotions and views on things shine through your poems. I'm not one to properly judge since I don't really lurk around the creativy corner much but I really like them. Well done and keep up the great work (:
     
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    I really like the two new poems,and the second ones really deep.
    Keep writing!!! :D
     
  15. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    Redemption

    Let it
    let it
    let it rain.
    Wash away doubts and explain
    how do I regain His trust
    before I would go insane?

    Blow it
    blow it
    all away.
    Keep your preach for another day.
    I know I’m the one to blame.
    I know that I lost my game.

    Let-the-wind-take-all-the-sins-that-I regret with all my heart-to-have-made.

    I am
    I am
    I’m afraid
    of the monster inside me.
    It turns me into something that
    I don’t really want to be.

    Ev-ery-time-I-watch-in-to-a-mirror I see someone else in-front-of-me.

    Empty
    empty
    empty shell.
    The turtle left it’s hotel.
    No emotions left inside.
    ”I’m a monster!” the man cried.

    He
    couldn’t live
    in the state
    he was in
    so he pulled
    his gun
    and took a last look at the sun.
    First he grinned, then he sighed:
    Should I fall or will I rise?”


    When two dogs fight over a bone ...

    They both came from the homo erec-
    thus they’re the same. It’s an insane game
    between two titans ready to unshame-
    fully claim victory and take their father’s place.
    Face it and chase your ambition.
    Listen to the oracle and finish your mission!
    Start the ignition, blast off to submission.
    Fly off like Mary Poppins and slay the twins
    that already envisioned my vision
    but didn’t respect my decision.
    Claim the throne, your rightful place,
    in the homebase of the king that you’ll soon replace.

    Rap Battle

    I took a shot at writing some rhymes that would be fitting for a rap battle. Therefore I warn you that the following piece has extremely explicit content (cursing blablabla y'know, bad words) and may not be sooting for some of you. So yeah, enter at your own risk -- king_mickey rule

    Poco loco like the freakin' diablo.
    Spitting sh!t he doesn’t even understand.
    Man, he’s the star of the musical Cats
    hence he’s a civilian of pussyland.
    No offence but when I commence, it only starts where your crap ends.
    It’s a freelance, you have no chance at all Ken,
    now shoo before I make a Barbie outta you.
    You only wanna be with the marines ‘cause you want se(a)men.
    You are a ****** like Justin Bieber,
    when I hurt you, you’re like ‘huhuuuuh, that was mean, man!’.
    Let’s dig into that pun a little deeper.
    I’ll fck your hoe and after I’ll sing ‘that’s one less lonely girl’, zing!
    I made a hoe-joke about a joke’s hoe. I’m the punking, comprendo?
    I have a question, is there a squirrel in here?
    ‘Cause someone has stolen your nuts that you hold so dear.
    What is it fool? Ya think you’re floundering in a swimming pool?
    Sorry to disappoint you but that’s your own piss you’re swimming into.
    I’ll skyrocket you in 30 seconds to mars, or maybe to the moon
    ‘cause you need some space to put your ugly ass into.
    You smell like piss … make sense ‘cause you ain’t sh!t.
    My time’s up, tag, the *** here next to me is it.

    Today pt. 2

    My raps comprise so many things-
    it should be called a franchise.
    Pretty much like pedophilia within the Church has become one.
    It is smirched by pastors who think that
    planed kneecaps is the monastery’s “leave-price”.
    Sayin' "This is what God wanted me to do, son."

    Oh sh!t man, did he really say what I think he said?
    Well, guess what, I do not give a damn!
    I'm here to share my question of today's life:
    Is this really where our society’s at?!

    A killer in disguise-
    I’ll chastise despised scum with my outsized ‘male chicken’
    and quicken their advised demise.
    My way of handlin’ will even sicken the sickest psychopaths.
    After that I’ll cut’em into pieces and serve’em
    to Kim Jong the 2nd with a portion of rice.

    I’m hip-hobscene, it’s in my genes.
    An organism between human and machine-
    determent and wise-crueler than 1961 Berlin.
    Politicians faker than The Crimson Chin,
    a fictional character of a fictional magazine.
    They’re like a spleen, we can live without’em too.
    Just wait and see.

    Fin.

    My sole soul

    I will never sell my soul,
    it’s worth more money than the world’s best dope.
    F*ck it, here’s there truth, I AM dope itself so
    don’t be shocked if you see me on top of the shelf screamin’

    Now high but was low before.
    Turning yo peace into an endless war.
    Raisin hell a-gain.
    And so way past go.
    But whatever happens,
    I’d never sell my soul.

    Watching this dude standing before me and doubting
    if it’s his ass or the hole between his cheeks that’s shouting.
    Two things I know for certain, it kinda reeks and
    there’s always crap coming out when it's spittin'.

    Whatever your rank,
    I’ll take you on - done - still here I am.
    Hell’s risen once a-gain.
    And so way past go.
    But whatever happens,
    I would never sell my soul.


    Point Zero

    Roads intertwined, fate just got redefined.
    Mankind’s on the same line, the same fate for all to unwind.
    As the moonlight’s shining upon their faces, it leaves traces
    of happiness but also of fear and sadness.
    Tears dropping constantly in an ocean of sorrow-
    an ocean destined to overflow today or tomorrow.

    We find ourselves in a place I call Point Zero.
    This was a co-operation against a common foe disguised as a hero.
    The Big Factory is now shut down. No use for talking about a ‘civilization’
    ‘cause that concept isn’t around anymore in our once called nation.

    Away with this clown with a crown on his head,
    infiltrated his house and put his head full of lead.
    The floor turned red, fluid dripping from his forehead,
    instead of the blue blood he thought he had.

    'Twas a time when the operation of the machine became so odious,
    made us so sick at heart that we couldn't take part anymore.
    So we put our bodies upon the gears,
    upon the wheels, upon the levers,
    upon all the apparatus ‘cause we had to make it stop.

     
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    Sail With Me

    You lift me up high in the skies
    just to let me fall like a meteor crushing down to Earth.

    You love’er don’t ya? Miserable fool!
    You give it your all and get the half in return.
    Will you ever learn? Just admit it, you’re her tool.


    No more! You see, I'm so sick of it.
    You disembarked this friendship
    and let me sail it alone for too many months.

    Now you’re the captain, sail it to wherever you like
    but don’t expect me to be on it, nah, first I need respect.

    It stops here, ran out of fuel
    so boarded the lifeboat in order to move on.
    This is the end, without future renewal.


    Moving On To The Present

    I’m breaking lose from these chains that bound me
    finally setting my soul and body free
    I’m luke, walking the sky, free as a bird
    no more slammin’ my face into the dirt
    Imma be what I was meant to be
    happy to the third
    I ain’t sure but I guess I’m moving on
    no more doubtin’ and hurt
    nah, that’s part of the past
    now I’m present in the present
    and it’s pleasant
    to look around me
    and see all the people that I love and love me back
    I know that I will never be alone
    no
    love is not what I lack
    it’s a soulmate
    somebody to share this life with
    for eternity
    I know she’s there
    and one day
    fate will bring her here
    until that day
    I keep walking high in the sky
    going with the flow
    without any sorrow
    just living my life
    and looking forward to tomorrow.

    Lit Fuse/Explode (Skit)

    You made me furious
    so I’ll return the favor back
    Imma get you mad
    ‘Am I fat?’
    Yes you are but just a reminder,
    your chest is flat
    so look at it positive,
    that evens up the fat.
    ‘Am I ugly?’
    No, you’re not ugly
    gorgeous on the outside
    yet hideous on the inside.
    You hide your true self
    why?
    Scared that no guy
    will like you if you don’t live what you lie?
    Yeah, you let me down
    big time
    Final summation,
    I hate what you are now
    a stupid egocentric cow
    I hope this all blows up in your face
    ‘cause in that case
    you’ll know I was right
    and you were wrong
    but I’m sure you’ll know that
    by the end of this song.


    Empty The Glass

    The glass is more than full,
    it overflowed
    so I’ve emptied it
    but no need for refilling
    I’m putting the glass aside
    along with all the memories
    of us, putting it in the closet
    outta my sight
    Yeah, this fight meant the end for us
    I couldn’t handle it anymore
    our relation was just
    you asking my help when you needed it the most
    that was it
    that’s no friendship
    that’s using somebody for your own benefits
    I was not a friend, I was like a ghost
    a host of your life, an outsider
    trying to infiltrate
    to let you know of my existence
    By the way,
    ever thought that a friendship is to bear with two?
    You didn’t take that responsibility,
    you let me handle it by myself.
    That burden is just not mine to bear
    handling a friendship alone isn’t quite fair.
    So this means the end,
    I say goodbye
    and wish you good luck in living your lie!

    A Friend In Disguise

    People every day leaving their lives
    Death killing’em all as a friend in disguise
    You think you trust somebody
    Wait ‘till they change
    Into something horrible
    Only worthy to live in a cage
    I speak outta experience
    I’m not talking a friend
    No, I’m talking deliverance
    The end of a burden to a certain extent
    Somebody you thought you’d know your whole life
    Thinks you ain’t gonna cut it
    Like a blunt kitchen knife
    Well, she thought of me that way
    So cut off her legs
    And showed her who runs this day
    But as I’m walking away, she begs
    Please don’t leave me,
    I’ll change for the good
    Well, you’re too late for that,
    you see, I am leaving for good
    You should’ve when you could’ve
    I showed patience enough
    So get used to my absence
    it’s the only thing you'll still get from me love.


    You Wouldn't Know

    You wouldn’t know
    That you changed to this
    You wouldn’t know
    That it’s you I’ve missed
    I feel like I don’t exist
    And though your heart insists
    You wouldn’t know

    Leave your truths and lies
    You sowed our demise
    Though I cannot forget you yet
    No I cannot forget you yet
    You led my heart to death
    But you wouldn’t know

    You wouldn’t know
    That I’ve done it all
    You wouldn’t know
    That I was your doll
    Always answered your dying call
    I’m falling an endless fall
    But you wouldn’t know

    A thief that stole my pride
    Darkness in disguise
    This time I want me to forget
    Yes now I want me to forget
    ‘Cause you led my heart to death
    But you wouldn’t know

    You didn’t wanna try
    You let me live a lie
    And you didn’t know

    This is our goodbye
    I’ve tried so many times
    And you didn’t know

    Though I cannot forgive you and
    I don’t seem to forget you yet
    You led us both to death
    But you’ll never know


    If you're wondering, yes, this one is based of Foo Fighters' "I Should Have Known". I liked the lyrics and I wanted to write something that had the same structure and tempo of that song.

    Longing To Belong

    The real me but altered and refined,
    fictitious and build by my own mind.
    I am my alter ego,
    based on ideals and what is divine.

    Before I was a mere rock
    in this world of golden plains.
    Without appropriate blood
    running through my veins.

    These days, I shine
    like all the rest who
    have blessed me to be accepted
    in this society of common kind.

    Yet here I lay,
    still the same rock inside,
    now with a golden shine
    and I’ll remain this way
    ‘till the end of time.
     
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    Oh wow....
    Amazingly,your poems are getting better each time!
    Really really really good work hun <3 <3
    Keep writing please!
     
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    They really are amazing. I guess it's the same for everyone. The worst moments and feelings make the best art. These newer poems I can really relate to. I'm really glad you wrote them. :)
     
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    An Unbreakable Spell

    I remember how it was one year ago
    I still wanna cry but I cannot though
    You are now part of the past
    And I know that the two of us didn’t last
    So I have to forget what happened
    And move on
    That’s the sole reason why I’m still writing these songs

    This is part of my recovery
    I’m a junkie in rehab
    I need some time to recap
    And regrab my old life
    So in order to do that
    I double slap the sad me
    ‘til the old me comes back
    Yeah
    On the outside I’m always smiling
    But on the inside, the real me is slowly dying

    Ugh, I hate when these lyrics become pessimistic
    Because all I want is that y’all stay optimistic
    But still, this is reality
    Love can be a fatality
    Back then, I was like a resident of Heaven
    When it was just a regular day on Earth I was havin’
    So just
    Keep your two feet on the ground ‘kay?
    Because then, if you do fall,
    The fall won’t be as deep as mine was that day

    And
    I am not afraid to say
    That I still love this girl on this very day
    It's just that I now love her in a whole other way

    If you're listening:
    Yes, since then a lot has changed
    But the enchantment you cast has always stayed.