KHV High School

This is the story of people that we all know that go to a high school.Some you may know and love and others you may hate and dislike.This story is about a school in central America(even though some aren't even from there but aw well) where they all go to high school.

Characters
There alot of characters so to hide them i placed a spoiler tag.

Spoiler

Sarah Cupcake(nicnamed Cupcake)
Adam Daxma
Kyle A. Flame
Jecht Neo
Summer Hotie
Carla cherry
Michelle ilraysm
Ginny Len
Belle O. Witesorah
Taylor beat
Grace reptr
John Chevalier
Jack Xephos
James Starkiller
Jessy Oranj
Chester Cin
Jane Jayn
Emma G. Intas
Principle larry D. watch
Prf. Kay C. Deraine
Mr Dan R. liku
Ms Mary Rosey
Ms. Natalay O' Destany
Mr. Percival Bismol
Mr. Nate Arc


More characters will be put in later

Now to the story...

It's a Monday morning on the 12th of September and Adam, Kyle and the crew meet outside the school building. Adam stares at Carla a few feet away at the benches. As the two girls gossip about something that happened the other night, Jecht looked amused at Adams face and Kyle looked angry with Adam. He pulls him away from the two girls, Summer and Sarah, and bring Jecht with him along with Adam. They come into a huddle. Kyle begins in an angry hushed tone.
"Adam just ask her out already. You like her and she seems to like you. Just ask her out already and save us the looks."
"Well the way he looks is kinda funny" Jecht laughed.
"In that case why don't you just ask out Sarah hmmm??" Adam asked as he toned down with a slightly calmer tone.
"Well dude we're friends and I think you should ask her out, not just for your benefit but as well as your embarrassment for the way you act when you see her" he said as Jecht laughed.
"Give me a few seconds to get ready" Adam said. He then turned around and closed his eyes.

Jecht looks at Kyle and they smiled. They had had the same idea. Jecht mouthed without actually saying it.
"On three" and then he counted with his fingers in the air...one...two...three!!! and they both push Adam away from them into the group of girls where Carla was. The girls noticed him immediately. Belle got a fit of laughing while Michelle tried to stop from laughing while restraining Belle. Michelle then said "Carla we have to go....ummm...we promised Ms. Rose we'd get to her class early enough to set up a drama demonstration for freshmen. Ginny come on!!" she said to Ginny who was waiting for something to happen. She looked over-excited,then disappointed when she had to go.
"Bye" she said. Adam had frozen up and Carla looked uncomfortable with the situation. Then out of Nowhere Adam had said something.
"My Adam name is hi...." and he looked so embarrassed. He then said "bye..." and turned around and went to the guys before he did any more damage. As he reached the guys who were back with Sarah and Summer, he hit Kyle on the head and then hit Jecht in the head who were both laughing. Then Summer asks, "Can we be let in on the joke?" a

Sarah asks "Umm, Is it Carla?". She then looked at Adams face.
"These two idiots just made me look like an idiot jock!" he said half Angry, half laughing.
"You are a jock. Your Captain of the football team" Jecht responded with amusement.
Adam then said, "Well I'm not an idiot am I? Otherwise I'd be as smart as you two put together" he said which wiped the smile off Kyles face but Jecht didn't mind. Sarah then said "Lets just get to class...Professor Deraine will give us detention if we're late for biology..." she said with a sigh.

They group walk into the school and the place is full of life. James Starkiller was kissing his girlfriend Jane Jayn. Principal D. was prowling the halls. He catches the two of them kissing and pulls them both into his office while they're both laughing and giggling. John Chervalier was hanging with Jack Xephos by the science labs. They were in the same classes as the them.

Sarah seemed to stared at John for a few seconds and then when summer snapped her fingers she was back to herself and the walked in. They sat in the two middle desks, with summer and Adam at one, and Sarah, Jecht and Kyle at the other,while the teacher came in.

"Hey class whats up!" the professor exclaimed upon entry. Professor Deraine was always one of there favorite teachers because she always was in touch with the students. She even allowed them to use her first name in her presense but the class didn't except for Sarah and Summer.

Sarah then exclaimed, "Hey Kayleah!".

Professor Deraine responded looking stern.
"Don't call me that! You can call me Kay C. Deraine, Professor Kay C. Deraine or you can call me Kay. Just don't call me Kayleah"
Proffesor started smiling.
"Okay class now, I've decided that we are going to see what they use in fireworks and use the various powders used". The class was delighted. The principle then came in.
"I'd like to bring these two back to you" and he pushed James and Jane into the class.
"Take a seat guys" said Professor Deraine. Jane took a seat beside Adam and summer, while James sat beside John and Jack. James high fived Jack and sat down. Taylor Beat and a couple of the other students were in the back left corner playing card.

"Guys down the back stop playing cards and get your lab coats and goggles on" she said as she gave each table a set amount of the different powders. It was like adding water to a cyclone....there's always a tragedy. They all got out there Bunsen burners with a spatula and put them over the flame with the different powders.

It was going great until Taylor just said "Hmmm....lets see what happens when you mix these with more of the powders". He poured all the powders he was given into the Bunsen burner at once, along with Grace Reptar. Adam just sees it and goes for Grace as he he sees that Jack is going to pull Taylor away from his Bunsen. They get them away from the Bunsen and get down as they explode.
They get up and then Kyle just says to Taylor and Grace "You idiots! I'd say are you as stupid as you look but that would be an understatement"
Taylor bit back "sorry for exploring the possibilities" he says as Professor Deraine takes them out of the room and Adam and Jack gave each other respect and patted each other on the back.

They all walked out of the class talking about what had happened where grace and taylor decided to as taylor said "explore the possibilities".As they walked out Sarah stared at jack who left with john,james and jane and then sarah just says blankly
"Jacks cute isn't he?" she said as she stared at him as he walked away.
"What?" said kyle looking confused and jealous.
"Nothing..." she responded as they walked up the hall.As they walked to religion with Prf. R. liku.As they walked up the corridor they saw Jessy Oranj in a lip lock with Chester Cin.It was fierce and every few seconds jessy slapped him across the face.They were the 6th years known for making up and breaking up.

They went passed the notice board beside the door to the staff room.All the sport announcments were up.Adam goes over to look at it and exclaims
"yes! i have a game tommorow!" he said so loud Chester and Jessy just stopped kissing even though as they stopped jessy slapped him across the face.then summer just asked
"Why is that so great?" .
"Because i haven't had a game in a good while and it'll be good to really let myself fly!" he said with anticipation.
"Lets just get to class" said jecht as they went to religion where they got into a giant debate with prf. piku over what religion is.

Adam and the gang were off to english.Adam was kind of afraid of english class today because he knew carla and her friends were in a joint class with them.He walked the halls with some stuff on his mind....what did she think of me from the last time...they're going to laugh once i go into the room... and he entered the room full of people and not even a single breath could be heard.He and his friends walked in.
"Hello class" ms. rosey said as they came in.
the whole class was a disaster.They were put into pairs and Adam was matched with Carla.Adam asks
"Can i be with jecht" and jecht replied
"ya i want to be with adam.Michelle can go with carla!" he said hopefully but ms. rosey just said
"No i picked pairs and thats it.Now class with your partner you decide on a part in the play we've studied in "Romeo and Juliet" and re-enact it with your partner" and as she said this all the girls said
"The kissing scene!" at the same time and Adam froze up.

The whole class broke into kissing and ms. rosey started laughing and went outside because she couldn't control herself.Carla grew close to him...her hand touches his thigh...she leans in....and the kiss goes perfect.They were there for 10 seconds until they broke away and jecht comes ploughing through them kissing michelle.They break a table as they fell kissing each other and ms. rosey comes in.
"Two of you out here now!" they both exit the room and jecht high fives adam and kyle as they exit and jecht says as he exits
"So worth it!" he said excitedly.
They left the class all thinking about the whacky things that were happening to them today.

Adam and kyle came together outside the door with sarah and summer.The first thing kyle says in a sighed kind of voice
"how did it go..." and he replied
"it went perfect!!!" and then he looks at kyles face and then says
"Who died?".
"Well...i was paired up with belle.she decided on the kissing scene like everyone in the class.When we both agreed we just...froze...then jecht and michelle come ploughing through the two of us,making us crash through the desk and she landed on top of me" adam seemed to find a second meaning to it and then sarah says
"Ampel kissing time" sarah and summer agreed.
"Easy for you to say sarah" he said exasperatedly as they left.

The day seemed to flying from that point.They had three double class in a row which was an way to do the timetable in their opinion.They had ms N. O' destany for art.Thee through whatever they could think of on the page.Then they had mr. P. Bismol for history.They talked about how the african american population were mistreated in the past and are still discriminated against to this day.For their last double they had mr. N. Arc for Computers.They always loved computer classes with him because he taught them the inworkings of videogames.They left for the front of the school.
Adam said
"Well, i'll see you guys at the game tomorrow.We're going to trash them" he said and then jecht came out of the school.Summer said gleefully
"Have fun..." and he replied
"Of course! I'm meeting michelle tonight at here place and we're going to watch DVD's at her place!" he said with absolute delight.
"Lucky..." Kyle said a bit angrily.

Another day begins.Jecht struggles out of bed and staggers down the stairs,little did he know that this was happening to all his friends except for Adam.He was down on the field practising plays.He had been there about 2 hours with his team.They huddled up once more about half an hour before the game with his friends in the stands and to his surprise...carla.
"OK guys you know what were doing and if you get injured just get back up.I mean rugby..." and before he could finish the rest of the team said exactly what he was about to say
"...is alot tougher.theres no protective gear and less rules" and then adam said kind of confused
"Exactly".
they went out on the field a half an hour later thinking they were going to trash them.It began to rain very badly.They all thought they were going to win no sweat...they were wrong.Good strategy adam thought as he heard faint cheering by carla,her friends and his friends.
He went pulled out all the stops this time and they pummeled him into the ground.Mud was all over him and the other team laughed."Time Out!!" he called and huddled his team up.
"Since you seem to think that i talk about rugby so much how about i show you" and two minutes laters one the team says
"The chances of this working are about as likely as me getting struck by lightning" and adam replied darkly
"That could still be arranged...just follow what i said and you'll do fine.The protective gear keeps weighing me down anyway" and they went back on the field.

The whistle blew and the ball reached adam but he passed it to the guy on the far left...The guy stood there as the guys streamed past adam...then adam pulls his protective gear off over his head and the ball is passed to him...he ploughs through the guys still going by him and runs as fast as he possibly can.He can see the people behind him during the rain and roars "watch my back!" through the rain to his teammates.Suddenly on from the opposing team comes against him but he ploughs on.he's inchs from the line and panics slightly.Another guy catches him on the back and he needs to think...then oen of his teammates pulls the guy off his back and another ploughs into him giving him the momentum to reach the line.There are cheers from the stands and someone hits adam full force into the face.He goes down...he feels his head hit the ground.He got up with great difficulty and saw it was the captain of the other team and he hears him roaring at the referee
"what the f*ck was that.surely that didn't count!he took off his gear!" and the referee replied
"Well after that punch that did count" and next he see's blurryly kyle coming out of the stands and he throws one almighty punch to the other captain and he went down.Adam just just loses consiousness.
"See ya guys" said sarah as her mother picked her up and soon the group were all gone home.

Adam has a very weird dream in the nurses office.He dreamed he was a guy named "Daxma" and he was having a very bad day which goes devestatingly wrong:

Daxma walked thinking about everything and realised when have they ever they been friends to him.They aren't my friends.He had reached one line of houses in front of Kiari appartment.He just had to jump over them and he'd be there but all of a sudden a guy in jet black Armor appeared."Hello, young Daxma" the figure said in an old crackling Voice."I'm number one of the faith deciders and i've come to extend to you my hand in hopes that you will except my offer to take a position in my ranks and to destroy those people you call Friend.You will become my number two because, unlike alot of people you understand there are no differance between darkness and light but the fact of division.Will you except my arm of generosity".

"No.I will never join you." and daxma portals a note to his hand and a giant stone casket.The note said;
Kiari, i'm going away forever,I see that i'm not appreciated in your
Eye's or anyone elses for that matter.I've protected everyone and i'm
tired of being the guy taking the beating.You've never suported me at
all.Neither has sora or roxas or Kaori or even Mexo for that matter.
Within this casket you'll find,Two giant Gun Blades,an assault rifle gunblade,
My Lexicon,A giant Sycth,Learne's Daggers in a necklace which is meant
for Asuka which you have to give to her and last but not least three guantlets
with the essence of the white lightning state.There is one for you,one for Kaori
and One for Mexo.They will allow you all to access the white lightning state.
I will never give anyone my keyblades Because they go to my Grave.
I'm only giving you those because the faith deciders will be after you not
because we're friends.Good bye forever....

The old suited man then says "Why don't you just ask for their help???".

"Because i'm the defender.There are three types of people in this world,Defenders,the Defended and Attackers.I'm the defender they're the Defended because they don't have the power to take you down.While i am..." he said not finishing."They wouldn't miss me...".
Daxma threw Terra,Aqua,Ven and the dark soldier aside.

The old armoured man made an intrigued noise"Why don't you join us???" the Armored figure asked.

"Because...I'm not going to give in..." and daxma portalled the casket along with the note to kiari.

“Why don’t you absorb the knights and that soldiers energy.That would increase your power 100 fold!!!”.

“Because they are legendary hero’s, some of the chosen to weild a key blade…”.

"If thats the way you feel...I'm going to have to do what my servants couldn't do.Take down you..." and suddenly with the whirl of the wind 20 of keyblades surrounded him.Faith surrounded him from every angle.Giant dragon Faith came swooping down from the Sky.A giant vortex appears under him.The keyblades suddenly stop whirling around him."Now daxma Will you give in" and a giant cackle came from inside his helmet.Daxmas head was drooped out of sight.

Theme Music;http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAMbCmK0iHg&feature=related

“Never...." and the faith backed away.Within five second Wind was slowly whirling around him and keyblades were starting to fade into existance.Going from invisibilty to existance.They were every keyblade daxma had ever obtained. The wind was becoming so fierce that it was blowing the faith away."...Will i ever give in" and daxma ran straight towards all the faith.It was like he was dancing through them and destroying them with savage slashes with an extraordinary look of raw power.He was ripping the buildings apart, the buildings were folding ever some of the faith.As soon as he slashed with one keyblade he grabbed another keyblade whirling around him and the one he just used just went into the keyblades around his very being.The dragons blew giant gusts of white fire but daxma just transports and daxma was straight above them and with a fierce slash he destroyed one of them.Daxma Was annilating them until there was none left.

The Armored old man says "Now it's time for you to meet with the Darkness‘s Deepest depths,Daxma“ and the Armored old man grabbed a keyblade, the exact same as the warrior he took on in the crossroads.The armoured old man slammed down on him and he grabbed the giant keyblade his darkness once owned and guarded.The Armored man made contact and knocked daxma so hard he went flying through so many buildings that daxma crashed into twilight tower and it folded over him.With a single Jolt of lightning it broke off of him.The armoured man came powering into him with a giant slash which slashed him in the face leaving a giant gash along his face.”Daxma are you ready to join me and live or fight me nobly and die???”.

“I will continue to fight you“ and with a gust of wind daxma transported behind him but The Armored Old man turned around and guarded.Suddenly they jumped into the air and broke into a power struggle either, missing each other or clashing there blades together.There beams of light streaming out with every clash of there key blades which sliced the surrounding landscape.The landscape will be destroyed after this he thought.Suddenly daxma made one slash to the mans helmet and it fell apart to see the face of Master Xeahnort, the one terra,aqua and ven had fought and the very Master xeahnort that was the dark soldiers master.

“I guess you know me,Blizzija!!!!” and daxmas right arm was frozen but at that the key blades around daxma spun around him.So did Xeahnorts and they were in a clash.“I think I shall destroy ven first and then I’ll kill sora and I’ll kill the girls and the children all in the one blast unless the girls beg…xeahnort just blast him back to the same clearing he was at,at the start.Daxma jumps at him and full force and Xeahnort slams back and daxm is thrown off his Balance and knocked him into the only building left standing.”Aren‘t you going to go into the White lightning state daxma???” he asked.

“No, because I don‘t need the white lightning state because I will destroy you without it…“ said daxma.

“So you think you‘ll live then“ xeahnort said in surprise.

“Who said anything about living…” and daxma broke into a run and Xeahnort summon ten times the amount of faith he did before.He teleported straight ahead of him near the rubble of twilight tower about 3 km away.He sent powerful “ija“ spells and powerful slashes and moves.But daxma just ran..He ran slashing everything out of the way.He slashed the spells away, making great creaters in his wake.In Daxma‘s eye‘s it was all in slow motion.He remembered everything in his life.All the Good all the Bad and in general everything about himself.He jumps high into the sky and teleports behind xeahnort and slams him down over the vortex which he hovered over.

“Daxma is that the best you can do“ he said slightly exhausted.

“Faith intertwinment!!!!!!!!!!!!” and daxma puts his hand into his chest and takes out his own heart with his left hand.Daxma put his left hand to the ground under him.His heart was a radiant blue colour and raiant blue lightning.Everything just stopped while he built up thunder.He could feel it draining the energy from everything around him.The sky went completely cloudy with jet black clouds.Thunder from the clouds hit his heart and it started raining.His daxma’s clothes were being destroyed due to the power.The very ground he stood and the ground around him was being eradicated. Master Xeahnort looked, for the first time in the battle, completely Horrified and frightened.Suddenly daxma jumped and with one almighty punch,the attack exploded, almost completely destroying master Xeahnort except for his old frail body which sank into the vortex which seemed to expand for a few seconds after its masters death, taking terra,aqua,ven and the dark soldier down to it’s depths.Daxma just fell head first into the vortex, to his death.Kiari,Mexo,Kaori,sora,roxas and the kids will never know that they were inches from death or about my demise.They never cared for and yet they will never know that I saved their lives one last time Daxma felt one tear in his wake
and Daxma fell to his death,cold,lonely and unloved…

Adam woke up with a giant startal.He literally jumped out of the bed onto his head.He saw the nurse who helped him back into the bed."Oh,what happened" and adam looked around to see sarah,summer,kyle and jecht.kyle then replied
"lets just say the other captain is probably still asleep after what i gave him, by the way on a completely unrelated subject, the principle gave me detention for clocking there captain" he laughed.
Adam tried to remember what happened
"Oh ya now i remember" he said with glee.
""Well then you can tell us what you were thinking when you did that because the chances of what you did working are about as likely as kyle is to get some common sense" said sarah as everyone laughed including kyle until he finally says
"hey!" in anger.then adam replies
"Well i thought that the one way to do it is the painfull way.I haven't felt pain like that in awhile,for about 4 years" he said as he lay back.

Adam came out of the nurses office the next day.The Nurse insisted that he was to stay over night just in case.He met up with Sarah and Summer outside the history room to talk and they see something breaking out.
"...We're over and thats it" said Jane as her voice began to raise in the hall.
"Please i didn't mean to do what i did" said james and jane replied
"Then you think Grace is a sl*t?" Jane asked and James replied
"No of course not!" he said incrediously and she replied
"We're over!!!" and she stormed away and as she bumped into sarah,summer and Adam she began to talk about the history they had the last day.
Adam had been unable too do it due to being in the nurses office.
He told mr. Bismol and he completely understood and thought it be fitting for his display that none of the team get homework from him for today for there teamwork at the game and the unusual play they came up with.
"I have to admit that you used your head adam,i'm sorry to say you had used it in more way than one" looking at the bandage on his head.
"They talked about black history again which was getting more and more interesting by the lesson.
"OK class we've got your first testin history for the year on friday so study or..." and he said in a dark scary voice "fail!!" and they went out slightly scared.
Adam then see's jecht and kyle.
"Hey guys come over here" he said.
"Guys how about we all stay over at my house and watch "longest Yard"??" and jecht asks
"Is it OK if i bring Michelle??" and adam replied
"Ask her to bring Carla and you have a deal".
"OK, done and done" he replied as he texted michelle.
"What class do we have next??" asked kyle.
"P.E...If anyone asks i left my P.E. gear at home" said Jecht with shifty eyes.
The guys were a bit suspicious but went to P.E.

The night went well... all except for sarah... The most embarassing night of her life, in front of the guy she was crushing on.

The next morning she was in the hallways, by herself. A few students made some faces as if they were scared then started laughing. She didn't think it was funny at all.

"Hey Sarah, you okay?" Xephos asked her walking down from the hallway.. Sarah shrugged.
"Everyone keeps laughing at me," she said, her eyes tearing up.
"Oh... I'm sorry about what happened last night.. Is your hand okay?" he asked.
"I had tp get some stitches but.. It's fine or whatever," she said. Xephos nodded.
"Okay, I guess... I'll be seeing ya," he said. He really wanted to say more, but instead he'd wait until she was in a better mood.
"You to," Sarah replied.

Jecht came down the hallway, with Kyle, Summer, and the new student, Emma on his side. She'd look at Kyle a few times and smile. it was like a little high school crush fest was going on... She seemed to suit him though...
"And so, she just walked out, with it all over her brand new clothes!" Jecht laughed. The others had also laughed. Sarah's rage came up and she walked up to Jecht.

"You need to shut your face for the day," Sarah said.
"Aww... Looks she's mad again," Jecht said in a baby tone. Sarah grabbed the collar of his shirt and slammed his back into the lockers.
"Shut the hell up!" she said.

"Jeez Sarah! It's only a joke!" he said pushing her off. Sarah made a fist, and was gonna raise it to punch his shoulder or kick him in the shin. She felt a cold soft hand grab her fist.

"Is there a problem?" Kay asked from otuside the classroom.
"No.. nothing at all," Jecht said then walked away, with Sumer and Emma tailing behind him. Kyle seemed to stay back.

"He plays extreme dodgeball in the park, get him there," Kay winked. Sarah laughed slightly and nodded. She decided to walk on down the hallways...
"Hey Sarah.. you okay?" Kyle asked.
She nodded.
"Of course," she said. She saw Adam running up to her.
"Hey.... you left last night in such a rush, i didn't get to ask if you were okay..." he asked out of breath.
"Carla and Michelle's been worried too... they wanted to know if you were okay," he said.
"I'm fine..." she said.

"what exactly happened?" Adam asked.
Sarah took a deep breath, not really wanting to tell a story, but here it went.

"Well, last night, you know how i invited Xephos to come watch the movie with us and how me and the other girls went into the kitchen to make popcorn... Jecht came out of no where with a kitchen knife, acting like he was gonna stab me. He startled me at first and accidentally sliced my hand after my reaction brought upon to puching him. I was handling the butter for the popcorn at the time and I spilled it on the front of my shirt and white jeans.... And all jecht could do was laugh. So I stormed out and went to the hospital to get stitches," she explained.

"That is SO like Jecht," Kyle sighed.
"Yeah, adn the next time i see him.. i'll push him in a trashcan," she said. She turned and started walking to her next class. jecht came walking down the opposite side of the hallway.

"Hey there miss- OOF!" he started. Sarah had actualy pushed him in a trashcan.
"See!?" she called down the hallway laughing that he had brown garbage on the back of his pants.

"Are we even?" Jecht asked.
"We're even," she chuckled.

Adam decided it wasn't enough."Jecht you idiot.I thought you being with michelle would calm you down but i was wrong.Now I will show what will happen if you do stuff like this.It's OK this is just a kind of theory of what i'll do to you" and adam kicked over the trashcan and began to roll it towards the door and he put the lid on it.
Kay came over to him "what are you doing there Adam" she asked suspiciously.
"Just developing a new theory on gravity.How depending on your surroundings will depend on how much damage is done to a living organism" and kay just said
"Carry on" she said walking past and adam rolled him to the top of the steps infront of the school.

"This is for what happened last night" he put his foot on the trashcan and said under his breath fast "...and for pushing me into carla the other day" and he kicked him down the stairs in the trashcan and hit alot of students.
Jecht climbed out and adam asked
"Learned your lesson?" he asked with satisfaction.
"Yes" he replied.Adam went down to help him out of the trashcan and then adam said "If anyone asks Taylor did it" the laughed and they went into Computers.

 

Amusing xD For some reason I found it easy to relate to the characters... :3

If you want to continue this into a fairly long story you're gonna have to work on the layout slightly. Big chunky paragraphs are a pain to read.

But I like it 8D
*subscribes to thread*

 

OK.Well i intend to post more and more and more and then i update the front page with the new stuff.If you guys want you can give me pics for your character.

 

LOL that is so funny

but come one Adam, Captain of the Cheerleading team? I hate cheerleading xDDDDD

 

Wow.....I never though someone would do this

but it sounds like an RP....well yes seriously it would...hey mods can be teachers!

And well,the rest is up to you....I want to read this out of curiosity.

good luck.

Edit: On a sidenote....maybe cupcake can help you write this, she's good with stories and it would help to have different pov's in respects to the writing.

 

They group walk into the school and the place is full of life.James Star killer was kissing his girlfriend Jane Jayn and Principal D. watch was prowling the halls and catches the two of them kissing and pulls them both into his office while they're both laughing and giggling.John Chervalier was hanging with jack Xephos by the science labs.They were in the same classes as the them.
Sarah seemed to stared at john for a few seconds and then when summer snapped her fingers she was back to herself and the walked in.The sat in the 2 middle desks,with summer and adam at one and Sarah,Jecht and Kyle at the other,while the teacher came in.

"Hey class whats up!" proffesor Deraine was always one of there favourite teachers because she always was in touch with the students.She even allowed them to use her firstname in her presents but the class didn't except for Sarah and Summer.Sarah then says "Hey Kayleah!" and Professor Deraine responded looking stern "Don't call me that.You can call me Kay C. Deraine,Prf. Kay C. Deraine or you can call me Kay just don't call me kayleah" he she said with her smiling."Okay class now, i've decided that we are going to see what they use in fireworks and use the various powders used" and the class were delighted.The The principle came in."I'd like to bring these two back to you" and he pushed James and Jane into the class."Take a seat guys" said pfr. Deraine.Jane took a seat beside adam and summer while james sat beside john and jack.James high5'd jack and sat down.Taylor Beat and a couple of the other student were in the back left corner playing card.

"Guys down the back stop playing cards and get your lab coats and goggles on" she said as she gave each table a set amount of the different powders.It was like adding water to a cyclone....there's always a tragedy.They all got out there bunsen burners with a spatula and put them over the flame with the different powders.It was going great until taylor just said "hmmm....lets see what happens when you mix these with more of the powders" and he pours all the powders he was given all unto the bunsen at once along with Grace Reptr and adam just sees it and goes for grace as he he sees that jack is going to pull taylor away from his bunsen.They get them away from the bunsen and get down as the bunsens explode.They get up and then kyle just says to taylor and Grace "You idiots! i'd say are you as stupid as you look but that would be an understatement" and taylor bit back "sorry for exploring the possibilities" he says as prf. Deraine takes them out of the room and adam and jack gave each other respect and patted each other on the back.

 

Okay, now it's getting a little harder to read. When a new person speaks, skip a line
like
"Insert Kay's Dialogue" she said.
"Insert Adam's Dialogue" he said.

and when you're using comma's, space after you set it. Make sure to use correct punctuation.

If you want, you can send it to me through PM and I can 'clean' it up, in case of spelling errors, because I see a lot in this one..

But it's still a good story <3
Just tidy it up =)

 

Oh my Gawd. Awesome. xD I was in here! Haha. :glomp: Aww. I really like it. *Subscribes*​

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Woah.....you added me into the story?

I'm so happy!.....just a bit surprised....how did you actually...erm..nvm.

Anyways aside from a few grammar and spelling errors, I say this is good.

Since this story is meant to have lots of characters I say third person omniscient is the way to go.

but, divide the dialouge like Cupkake said, and give this a bit more spacing and voila.

Oh me being close to xephos was pretty accurate considering, i think we might make good friends IRL.

*reps* keep it up.

Edit: Maybe you should just use our username, since people who read this might not understand much just by reading names they don't know who they belong to, and use our full names when it may seem neccesary.

 

That was awesome xD
I was gonna offer to do the whole edit for punctuation thing but Cupcake will do a good job ^_^

It amuses me how obvious peoples names are xD

 

They all walked out of the class talking about what had happened where grace and taylor decided to as taylor said "explore the possibilities".As they walked out Sarah stared at jack who left with john,james and jane and then sarah just says blankly
"Jacks cute isn't he?" she said as she stared at him as he walked away.
"What?" said kyle looking confused and jealous.
"Nothing..." she responded as they walked up the hall.As they walked to religion with Prf. R. liku.As they walked up the corridor they saw Jessy Oranj in a lip lock with Chester Cin.It was fierce and every few seconds jessy slapped him across the face.They were the 6th years known for making up and breaking up.

They went passed the notice board beside the door to the staff room.All the sport announcments were up.Adam goes over to look at it and exclaims
"yes! i have a game tommorow!" he said so loud Chester and Jessy just stopped kissing even though as they stopped jessy slapped him across the face.then summer just asked
"Why is that so great?" .
"Because i haven't had a game in a good while and it'll be good to really let myself fly!" he said with anticipation.
"Lets just get to class" said jecht as they went to religion where they got into a giant debate with prf. piku over what religion is.

 

XD

very interesting indeed, omg, Cintrus.

Repliku in religion class XD.

Oh please write more, its so short, and I want to see more.

Xephos X Cupkake?

 

i wonder the same thing xD

<3

lovely part though XD

 

Adam and the gang were off to english.Adam was kind of afraid of english class today because he knew carla and her friends were in a joint class with them.He walked the halls with some stuff on his mind....what did she think of me from the last time...they're going to laugh once i go into the room... and he entered the room full of people and not even a single breath could be heard.He and his friends walked in.
"Hello class" ms. rosey said as they came in.
the whole class was a disaster.They were put into pairs and Adam was matched with Carla.Adam asks
"Can i be with jecht" and jecht replied
"ya i want to be with adam.Michelle can go with carla!" he said hopefully but ms. rosey just said
"No i picked pairs and thats it.Now class with your partner you decide on a part in the play we've studied in "Romeo and Juliet" and re-enact it with your partner" and as she said this all the girls said
"The kissing scene!" at the same time and Adam froze up.

The whole class broke into kissing and ms. rosey started laughing and went outside because she couldn't control herself.Carla grew close to him...her hand touches his thigh...she leans in....and the kiss goes perfect.They were there for 10 seconds until they broke away and jecht comes ploughing through them kissing michelle.They break a table as they fell kissing each other and ms. rosey comes in.
"Two of you out here now!" they both exit the room and jecht high fives adam and kyle as they exit and jecht says as he exits
"So worth it!" he said excitedly.
They left the class all thinking about the whacky things that were happening to them today.

 

Adam and kyle came together outside the door with sarah and summer.The first thing kyle says in a sighed kind of voice
"how did it go..." and he replied
"it went perfect!!!" and then he looks at kyles face and then says
"Who died?".
"Well...i was paired up with belle.she decided on the kissing scene like everyone in the class.When we both agreed we just...froze...then jecht and michelle come ploughing through the two of us,making us crash through the desk and she landed on top of me" adam seemed to find a second meaning to it and then sarah says
"Ampel kissing time" sarah and summer agreed.
"Easy for you to say sarah" he said exasperatedly as they left.

The day seemed to flying from that point.They had three double class in a row which was an way to do the timetable in their opinion.They had ms N. O' destany for art.Thee through whatever they could think of on the page.Then they had mr. P. Bismol for history.They talked about how the african american population were mistreated in the past and are still discriminated against to this day.For their last double they had mr. N. Arc for Computers.They always loved computer classes with him because he taught them the inworkings of videogames.They left for the front of the school.
Adam said
"Well, i'll see you guys at the game tomorrow.We're going to trash them" he said and then jecht came out of the school.Summer said gleefully
"Have fun..." and he replied
"Of course! I'm meeting michelle tonight at here place and we're going to watch DVD's at her place!" he said with absolute delight.
"Lucky..." Kyle said a bit angrily.
"See ya guys" said sarah as her mother picked her up and soon the group were all gone home.

 

Im in a story and im not even told? Lulz, people need to tell me things, i'll read this when my eyes refocus themselves.

 

actually in school im different from what i am here, so you might have me perfectly, if i ignore *******s and hang around mostly with my girlfriend then you've got me down fine, if not ahwell.

 

Ya, when you can't see a person in a physical sense you can see them for what they are.

 

True, it is your story anyway, you could make a ballerina crimefighter for all that matters, not like it's supposed to be a reflection on who i actually am.