I am making a story about kingdom hearts 2, after sora saves to world(s) once again. I hope you like plez comment, and just so ya know I did'nt plan any of what im going to write i just made it up while I was writing. ENJOY! p.s. I do 2 chapters at a time _________________________________________________________________ Chapter 1 ** "It" Begins** Sora: Hey Riku, aren't you glad to be home again? We can finally relax, like how we used to! Riku: Ya, I plan on dunking you in the water some time this summer... Sora: HA! You wish. Riku: I wouldn't say that if I were you... *starts pushing sora in the water* Kairi: Boys! Stop fooling around! Riku: Aw c'mon Kairi, were just havin fun! Sora: SPEAK FOR YOUR SELF! Riku: Quite you! Kairi: Ya, anyways Roxas and Namine called me on the phone, it seems they are pretty bored, so is it ok If I invite them over? Sora: shure its alright with me as soon as Riku stops drowning me. Riku: FINE! You big baby. Sora: Oh please you just jelous that im just like flamin hot cheetos. Riku: how is that? Sora: they red hot... just like me Riku: HA! Then how just so happend to have the biggest record of having girls ask me out?! Kairi: KNOCK IT OFF! Sora and Riku: Sorry ma'm Chapter 2 *Namine and Roxas comes over* Kairi: they are here! Sora: Finally! Namine: why hello Kairi, sorry that were late traffic was just a pain today! Kairi: No problem Riku: Hey Roxas, You know, Your other half is begining to be a real pain I mean, Im not being paid enough to deal with him! Sora: ~steps on Rikus foot~ Anyways.. Riku: OW! That was unnesscessary behavior young man! Kairi: huh, Boys thease days... Anyway, you guys just go outside and ill make a snack Sora,Rku,Namine,Roxas: Ok ~everyone goes outside~ Roxas: You know I wish something would happen, its so boring now not having a reason to use the keyblade. Sora: I know what your saying Im just so bored. Riku: you might wanna be carful on what you wish for, Look! Namine: Oh My Gosh! ~Kairi Run Outside~ Kairi: I made some... Oh my gosh.... _________________________________________________________________ That is all I made so far If alot of people like it, ill go on and make more. Besides, don't you wanna know what they are looking at...:rockdover:
If Roxas and Namine are the inner halves of Sora and Kairi, they're not just going call anyone using a phone and ask to come over...
This is a different "take" on a fanfic, but it's okay none the less. Reminds me of a script sort of. Anyways you have some spelling errors and I believe you may have forgotten to type in some words in certain parts. In your "Author Notes" at the beginning you should state your idea of Namine and Roxas. Mainly that they are still a part of Kairi and Sora, but are characters themselves.
I'm liking it so far. CONTINUE! I'll be checking back later on.. please let me know when you have new chapters up. Please? Thanks!
