KH-Vids Royale

Wow that was really good Cin.
I see why you were so busy =P.
Good grammar and way of telling =D.

 

That noob battle... it was so EPIC!!!

Great job Roxas, the entire thing so far has been amazing! One question though...

Is this game happening 8 YEARS after the first one... or 8 GAMES? I'm kinda confused about that...

 

Good job, last chapter was... odd.

That random lady in the memories chapter was funny.


OH and when is the next chapter going to be up?

 

Wow, it's really great Mari ^_^
Though sometimes I got a little confused about who beeing who, but I got into it.
Keep it up n_n

(Btw page 8 in chapter 1 won't show up :/)

 

With me, too.

I likeded this, Mari! =D Very nice!

I don't see how you could draw so MUCH, though... o.O; That'd be my biggest problem... XD;

 

You guys know she stopped making them :/

 

Yeh... But does that take away from the awsome fact that she DID it period?

 

Much more humorous than your first Roxas, I really enjoyed this after doing nothing for a week xD

I love you Roxas for giving me #13 :3
and that epic n00b battle was so intense I literatly almost choked on a cookie I was just eating......mostly at the part when CFF fed Sweq his intestines........I really liked that part =D

I totally second that idea >___>



Best part ever xD

 

...I was re-reading chapters KHVR and KHVRII 1-7, and Roxas may be willing to shoot me for this, but.... I have to say, I think the mood was a bit better in KHVRI. It was more intense... as I read the first one, I was growing vaguely sick from everything occuring. KHVRII seems to be focusing more on teh epic n00bness than anything else. There needs to be more teamwork within the teams. I'm not saying everyone must do something meaningful, but in comparison to the first KHVR, I'm not getting the same kind of urgent life-or-death struggle that kept it so captivating. Don't get me wrong, I still love KHVRII, I just think you need to focus more on the "OMG-we-could-die-at-any-moment" factor that you wrote so effectively in KHVR.

...yes, you may kill me now for daring to dispute the great wisdom of Roxas...

 

Once CFF and Sweq are gone, the intensity will rise.

 

Chapter 2, up and running.

(For those of your who are wondering)

I don't proofread my work. UnfortunetlyI'm still looking for someone to, because I'm too lazy. Anyone interested?

 

Again, another enjoyable chapter. Not sure what else to say. XD Can't wait for the next one.

 

Thank you, DA.

Basically, if you want I can explain what DA said in 6 paragraphs. I won't, though. I do completely agree with you, Jade. It's been bothering me, and it will for sure be fixed.

 

Hmmm, are you going to keep the comedy? (Doesn't really matter if it's a yes or a no >_> )

 

The comedy might start to get alot darker once CFF dies......hopefully I'll get in some funny lines =D

and when I mean funny, I mean like a joke.....not Sweq or CFF humiliating funny >_>

 

Well, that might happen...unless if you die in the next chapter xD.

I hope I'm not giving Roxas ideas lol

 

There will still be comedy but it's time for me to start cracking down on what this is meant to be; a horror-thriller-action story. Also, the next chapter is still a bit quirky and funny in general, but that's because I started writing it after I finsihed 7, with all that air in my head.

Ch. 8 now out.

 

That chapter two was nice! Poor Bikini Girl....

 

Lol, I like that part when they were talking about oreos. And good idea to but Mark in there, next chap should be interesting. But I don't think DA will be able to handle the suspense of him not knowing if dead yet.:D

 

Yeah, I'm scared that he'll commit suicide in real life!

Not really.