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  1. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Great chapter there Roxas. I'm lovin' it so far. :D
     
  2. Soku Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Man those Ch. 5 flashbacks made me kinda sad. Good Chapter Roxas!
     
  3. DarknessKingdom The Kingpin of the TV

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    Yeah, I remember reading it too...just without the flashbacks...
     
  4. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Just simply, amazing.

    I like how every character here acts like the real ones...especially perverted DA xD

    I never knew you were such an awesome writter Roxas...Well I do now xD.
    All the descriptions! The Dialogue! The narrating! Th---*has heart attack*


    And that last chapter was truly sad. Anyone who can go that deep into emotions is in fact an amazing writter :D
     
  5. Misty gimme kiss

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    I'm in tears. ;.;

    Such a nice chapter, and I love that song. :D

    Keep at it!
     
  6. Roxas OG

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    I'm so glad everyone. I was sad writing it too. Then I realized that I have to kill someone in the next chapter, so I can't let my emotions get in the way. Speaking of which, maybe there will be a new one today. I'll start writing the rest of 6 now :).
     
  7. Misty gimme kiss

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    *Waits*

    I'm a very impatient person. <<
     
  8. Roxas OG

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    Sorry, Misty. I listened to Sum 41 for about 3 hours this morning between writing the word "Rat" and "stumbled" so I'm still working on it XD

    (actually, I just listened to half hour of power like 8 times).
     
  9. Darkandroid Gets it Together

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    Are you implying I'm like that in real life. XD

    And Roxas I look forward to the next chapter, I wonder who dies.
     
  10. Misty gimme kiss

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    I get distracted while writing, too. Take your time, I'm sure the chapter will be great no matter how long it takes.
     
  11. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Bah, I should probably read KHVR I. :/
    But maybe when I have 15 hours to spare xD


    Uhm...I'm scared of saying 'yes' xD
     
  12. Roxas OG

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    Hmm... 15 hours, I think it could be read in a few. Well, it depends. I'm renowned for speed rading and I read it in under an hour but it's different for me; I read everything. Most people I know said it takes like 5 hours to read.
     
  13. Misty gimme kiss

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    I read quickly too.

    But defiantly read it. Even if you skip some of the chapters that don't have much important in it, still... Read it!
     
  14. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    No I am a quick reader. It's just that I heard that it was a tad long and I just made an estimation xD.

    Hmm, 5 hours? Thanks for telling me.
    I'll read it tomorrow then. I have the whole morning free.
     
  15. Roxas OG

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    New chappie out now. I like the final quote best :).
     
  16. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    I just read it and, it was really good ^_^;
    Yes the final quote was good.
     
  17. Antidote Façade

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    Yes! Finally someone from the forum dies >D

    I only started reading Chap. 6 about 5 mins ago and I'm finished already. Very short, but the death of rat made me forget about the length. With the explosion, Zel got turned into a human torch, and rat's hand basically melted away before a piece of grenade perforated his skull and burst out through the front of his face/nose..? UGH xD Imagine your brains pouring out infront of you being the last thing you ever saw. Charming.

    So.. Sara is feeling guilty about having to kill them, cos she's supposed to be protecting them? o_o I thought she was supposed to be cold and not care about anyone other than herself or her team, so long as they accomplish their goals. Oh well, guilty killings will make it all the more fun to read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
     
  18. Roxas OG

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    The thing is, the whole reason Wild Seven was formed was to give hope and reason to the youth living in an awful society. Now, because of the government's game, she's being forced to kill them.
     
  19. Darkandroid Gets it Together

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    Very nice chapter. 2 dead I wasn't expecting that. Nicely done rat. =P

    I like the part at the end, Sara will be looking at the game in a totally different perspective now.
     
  20. Zexion of the Twilight The conflicts within my priorities....

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    Dangit, Rat, he killed himself!