KH-Vids Royale: Remake [chapter #11]

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  1. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Omg.... That was incredibly funny, the beginning at least - it was like seeing two kids in an amusement park. XD The ending was so sad though.. Just happened so fast and everything.

    About the previous chapter I can't help but think there's a reason Vivi almost stepped into a danger zone... I think Hissora doesn't know of it and end up getting too close to it.
     
  2. Alex C: Kingdom Keeper

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    Lul, I think there was better chapters. But only cause they had little things going on. Not that this wasn't something I just mean like most of them a lot of story took place and this one was mostly just two parts.
    1. Getting supplies
    2. The drive of their lives

    So ya but still intense and cool.
     
  3. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Woah, this one was so scary yet it was so incredibly cool.

    With the glass and all o.o
     
  4. Darkandroid Gets it Together

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    Ah that chapter saddens me. I was hoping to last longer than that. D=

    But at least I got to drive on the island, even if it did cause my death. XD
     
  5. Yukai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Yeah. RvR is alive because Boris said "couldn't take two in one hit" at the end. That means that DA died and RvR somehow survived and escaped.

    Anyway... THAT WAS SOO COOL! >=D
     
  6. no-reality_allowed ¢ℓαιяνσуαηт ℓσνєкιℓℓ

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    Boris is going to take all the porn and treats from the gas station now before I can get there D:
     
  7. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Oh no, poor Pooka.

    Well, at least DA didn't die from drunk driving.
     
  8. *Sora* Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Don't mean to burst your bubble, Sora 13, but I'm pretty sure the Sora in this story is me. xD Seeing as how I was the Sora in the original KHVR.
     
  9. Alex C: Kingdom Keeper

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    Erm, no. xD It's me. Roxas told me he'd put me in the story. I talk to him about it. 0.0 He'd tell me by now that it's not me... >.> <.<


    Everyone knows it's me. P:
     
  10. Laurence_Fox Chaser

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    Cin said he deleted Chapter 10 and has to get it from Roxas next time he signs on. <_>

    How this was managed I don't know.
     
  11. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    Alright guys, Alex refuses to come online at the same time as me. So if ANY of you see him online, ask for the story please and give it to me so I can post. This is getting ridiculous, and trust me, you're not the only ones pissed.
     
  12. Final Banned

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    Hey everyone, it's March of the Dogs again.

    Sorry to have to be the one to say this, but Roxas has quit KH-Vids and MSN. He's cutting all ties with KH-Vidsers. He will most likely no longer be working on KH-Vids Royale, (but if he does make more, he will send them to me, and I can get them to you, Cin.)

    So basically, you will be seeing no more of Roxas.

    Seriously, this time xD
     
  13. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    As surprising as this may sound to everyone. Roxas just gave me chapters 10 and 11. I'll post 10 now for funnzies.
     
  14. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Woah, this chapter was freaky with Hissora and all. But still awesome and very good written. It was like scary/fun. :3

    And kinda disgusting <>

    And awesome that the story is back up :3
     
  15. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Sweet, it's still comin'...i hope.

    This chapter was exciting. A wee bit of lovin', a wee bit of killin'. Perfect! Can't wait to see what happens next. :3
     
  16. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    Even in the last three days of his pitiful and pathetic life Vivi is still pimpin'
     
  17. Mish smiley day!

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    lol, it seems I forgot to read chapter 9 and 10. P:

    I totally LOL'd at the part where it said DA had met me irl and how he wanted to find me. xD Then he goes and dies, well I guess we'll never have our tearful reunion! ;3; And RVR isn't dead? That's confusing, I thought that Roxas had just forgotten to have Monkey say that RVR had died.. hmm.

    DS' characterisation was pretty good. P: He seems cool even though he was crying and yadda
     
  18. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Jade and Laurence are gonna clash like a world war... Only a matter of time before someone snaps!

    And my god, Hissora was one scary character - you could just feel Vivi's panic as you read, thinking to yourself "gtf away, man!!!". More scary than Boris was imo. o.o Not the death I espected, but it's nice to see DeathSpank once more.
     
  19. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    lol, *update*

    Roxas just gave me chapter 11, yay. Enjoy guys.
     
  20. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Wow, it's so short.

    But I like it, not completely how I imagine NRA but it was okay. I'm not like ' ZOOMG WTF HECK YEAH AWESOME CHAPTER!!!1' it's more like just okay. But I like how the whole thing was a emotional part, and that makes it a bit special :).
     
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