Kh-vids.DeathNote

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  1. Paladin12345678 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Ok, before this starts, the latest cast list.

    Light: Repliku
    L: ICSP
    Ryuk: Paladin12345678 (me!)
    Light's first kill: Redsonic
    Light's second kill: Xendran (sorry, first name I thought of)
    Soichiro Yagami (Neku)
    Touta Matsuda (Pika_Power)
    Ukita (Soranspartanti)
    Misa Amane (CTR)
    Rem (DPWolf)
    Near (ILoveRiku)
    Mello (Absol)
    Teru Mikami (Pyro)
    Aizawa (TheDarknessGrowsWithin)
    Mogi (Daxma)
    Watari ( TwilightNight)
    Raye Penbar (Firekeyblade)
    Naomi Misoura (Amber)

    I sat in an empty realm. It was bleak and desolate, as if all life had ended. Both sky and earth were a uniform ash-gray colour. It was as if Armageddon had come. I was sitting on the edge of a cliff, the precipice leaning over a seemingly bottomless chasm. Behind me two other creatures played dice.

    “Paladin, why don’t you play with us?” one of them asked.

    “Nah, I think I’ll pass,” I replied. I was deep in thought. There was a very interesting person IRL…

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    “Repliku, you still with us?” the teacher asked. Repliku let out a startled gasp, jerked from his almost-sleep. The teacher noticed this and sighed.

    “Do you mind translating this passage into English, ignoring how it quite obviously foreshadows coming events?” the teacher asked. Repliku stood up. The teacher was always as little bit weird. He kept thinking that he was part of an anime or something. Sometimes he’d look at Repliku and mutter, “That kid needs some Prozac before he goes in his killing spree.”

    Repliku sighed and translated, “Follow the teachings of God and receive his blessings. So it shall be, and the seas shall become bountiful, and the raging storms shall subside.”

    After a short time-lapse of somewhere between a few minutes or a few hours, Repliku was walking home. He was reading a book, which is a pretty strange thing to do if you’re walking through a heavily-populated city. Then again, the streets were pretty much deserted. Repliku remembered when he had asked his teacher about the odd lack of pedestrians.

    “It’s to save time. They can’t have the art staff wasting time drawing so many extra people,” he had answered with a sage-like nod. Repliku had slowly backed out of the classroom.

    Repliku grumbled and swatted his ears with the book he was holding. For some reason he was picking up depressing radio broadcasts about murders and suchlike. As Repliku stopped at a crossing, his book mysteriously disappearing and more people magically appearing, he decided to think very loudly.

    Day in, day out, it’s always the same news, Repliku thought.

    How ridiculous, I thought.

    More importantly, though, Repliku continued.

    How can I finish someone’s mental sentences? I finished.

    There was another mysterious time-lapse as Repliku once again found himself at school, this time wearing a snazzy brown jacket over his shirt and tie. He knew he made the school uniform look good.

    But where the hell did my book go, I was reading that! Repliku wondered angrily, And more to the point, why the hell do I have those weird time-lapses?

    Of course, this chain of thought broke off as Repliku spotted a threatening black notebook materialize out of thin air and slowly float to the ground. Repliku raised an eyebrow, both at the slow descent and the materialization. The book fell into the light and Repliku was somehow able to read the title from all the way up from his classroom; Kh-vids.DeathNote.

    Another annoying time-lapse and Repliku was down in the school grounds, approaching the notebook. He picked it up and read the title again.

    Kh-vids.DeathNote? Like, a Note of Death… connected to Kh-vids.net? Repliku thought. He opened the notebook.

    Oh that’s thoughtful, Repliku thought, Someone wrote instructions for a deadly weapon. Let’s see here… The human whose Kh-vids.net username is written here… shall die? Repliku dropped the notebook.

    Yeah, right. That’s just weird… and emo… It’s like one of those annoying chain letters on YouTube. Damn those gullible-

    Repliku’s thoughts were cut off by another time lapse. This one dropped him off right in front of a train as it hurtled by, causing Repliku to jump in shock.

    Damnit time lapses are annoying! he grumbled inwardly. He noticed the top of the Note protruding from his bag. How the hell did that get in there? Whatever, it’s not like I want to kill Kh-vids.net users anyway…

    There was another time lapse.

    “GOD FREAKING DAMNIT!” Repliku vocalized his stress. He was sitting at his desk with the Note opened in front of him. Repliku grumbled, rubbing the bridge of his nose, and read.

    “Details of the death must be written within forty seconds of writing the person’s username, otherwise they will simply die of a heart attack…” Repliku read, “The user then has six minutes and forty seconds to write the cause of death. So… they can either die easily or painfully? This is… really emo.”

    Repliku flopped down on his bed, “So I write a username and someone dies?”

    Repliku leaped from the bed and sat down on the desk. He drew a pen from his pen pot and set it against the page. As he did so, he made sure to cram as much awesome and drama into these moves as he could.

    Still got it, Repliku thought. His pen froze on the page.

    “Wait, on the offchance this thing works, would that make me a murderer?” Repliku wondered. Moral dilemmas are fun. Repliku turned on his computer and clicked on to Kh-vids.net. Once there he discovered that Redsonic had posted yet another Riku code. The post was dated very recently. Repliku clutched his pen tightly in anger. He wrote.

    Redsonic. Repliku dropped his pen and sat back in his swivel chair. A heart attack in forty seconds? We’ll see.

    Forty seconds passed. If there was supposed to be some sort of supernatural sign, it didn’t show. Repliku snorted.

    “I should’ve known it would be a no-show.” Repliku swivelled his chair and rolled across his bedroom floor towards the TV. He switched it on and rolled a comfortable distance back. It was the news.

    “This just in,” the newscaster reported, “A young man was found dead in his apartment today. He was discovered by his roommate dead at the keys of his computer minutes ago. -“

    The camera was inside the person’s room. The dead body was slumped against his desk, hands still splayed across the keyboard. The glowing computer screen showed the site Kh-vids.net.

    The username was Redsonic.

    Repliku’s stomach froze and beads of sweat rolled down his face. His eyes were wide in horror. He almost fell off his wheelie chair. The newscaster continued, oblivious to the young man’s horror.

    “Despite being quite healthy, it appears the heart attack struck him dead in a matter of seconds. Doctors are baffled-“

    Repliku switched the TV off. He stood from his chair.

    “Coincidence…” Repliku stammered, “It has to be a coincidence!” It was as if he was trying to convince the TV that what it had just reported was wrong. Repliku stared at the Note. Redsonic’s username sat there, the black ink like blood. Repliku closed the Note.

    “Son, it’s 6:30, don’t you have schoolwork to do?” Repliku’s mother called up the stairs.

    “Y-yeah! I’ll get to it!” Repliku answered, forcing his voice to stay calm. He grabbed the Note.

    For some reason, my feelings of horror are now being overwhelmed by an odd need to test a weapon of deadly power on another person. Man, do they sell drugs for bipolar people? Repliku thought. His mood swung yet again to discover that while he had been thinking, a time lapse had snuck up on him. He was now sitting once again in class, this time wearing a fuzzy green jumper. To his right, an ugly kid in a black hoodie was harassing a nerdy kid for twenty dollars. Repliku knew the dude’s username. Maybe he could kill him.

    So now I think about killing someone who I barely know, and has done nothing more than bullied some kids? Man, there’s something wrong with me, Repliku thought.

    There was another time lapse. It was now night time, the end of school. Repliku was outside, walking away. The same nerd from before was arguing with two others about whether Xbox360, PS3 or Wii was better.

    Once you look around, you really wonder whether you’d be doing society a favour by getting rid of these people, Repliku thought.

    Ahead of him, a teenage girl was walking home. A man on a motorcycle raced past her.

    “Hello hottie!” he called. He swerved the bike in front of her. His friend cut the girl off from behind with his motorbike.

    “Whoah, you really picked a hottie this time!” the man’s friend praised.

    The man took off his sunglasses, “Hey hot stuff, need a ride?”

    Repliku noticed this event as he walked into the service station to get his weekly overdose of Skittles. He loved to Taste the Rainbow. He narrowed his eyes.

    “Do I know you?” the girl asked.

    “I believe we met on the Internet,” the man continued, “Does the username Xendran ring a bell?” He chuckled and both he and his gang advanced on the girl.

    “Someone!” The girl called, “Please, help me!” Repliku glared out at the scene from within the fluoro-lit interior of the service station. The Note was open.

    Xendran.

    Now, what will happen?
    Repliku wondered.

    The girl ran. She raced away from the brutish man and across the road. Xendran mounted his motorbike and chased after her.

    “Xendran, look out!” One of his gang yelled. He was too late. The truck that came careering out of nowhere smashed head-on into Xendran’s bike, leaving nothing but twisted metal left. The girl continued running until she was out of sight.

    Repliku’s eyes widened. This settles it. This Note… it’s for real…

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    “It’s been five days so… I’d better get going…” I muttered to myself.

    “Hmmm?” a creature asked, “You going somewhere Paladin?”

    “Hate to tell you,” its friend continued, “But our whole world looks like this.”

    “That’s true, but I dropped my Note,” I told them.

    Both creatures laughed uproariously.

    “Looks like you really screwed up this time,” laughed the first creature.

    “But wait a sec,” the second asked, “Didn’t you already trick the old fart into giving you a second Note? Don’t tell me you lost both of them!”

    “You must have some idea where you dropped the thing!” the first insisted.

    “Yeah…” I said, walking up to another precipice. White light poured from down below, a winding staircase leading down into a whirling bowl of light.

    “The human world.” I jumped.

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    Repliku walked into his house, soaked through from the rain. His mother was waiting for him and almost had to beat his exam results out of him. Repliku handed her the results and took off. His mother was about to talk to him when she discovered that her son had once again been an antisocial arse and run up to his room.

    “Don’t you want anything to eat? I can get you anything,” his mother called up.

    “It’s ok. I’ll take a potato chip…” Repliku paused, “And EAT IT!” He closed the door. Below, his mother had an eyebrow raised at the odd emphasis on eating chips.

    Repliku sat down at his desk. He opened the Note. Rows of usernames had been etched into the notebook’s pages. Repliku flicked through the pages. He slowly began to laugh. He knew that it was going to be one of his insane laughs, ones that lasted a few minutes at a time. It sounded weird as well, as if he was running out of breath.

    “I see you like my notebook,” I said. Repliku turned and saw me staring out at him from the darkness of his room. Lightning flashed.

    “OMFG!” Repliku screamed, falling from his chair. He bashed his head against the wall as he fell. He looked up at me. Of course, if he was expecting something else, he was to be disappointed. I was just my Kh-vids avatar. I held my Fork of Truth in my hand.

    “Sup,” I said, waving, “Judging by your lol, you’ve worked out how to work it… either that or you were choking to death, it’s kinda hard to tell.”

    “Don’t knock the lol!” Repliku snapped.

    “Y’know,” I said, sitting down on his bed, “I was going to launch into a lot of expositional talk with you, but I can’t be arsed to now that I’m here. How about I just explain everything to you between chapters?”

    “Between… what?” Repliku was confused.

    “Ah, screw it,” I dismissed, “The name’s Paladin by the way.”

    “Hey, son?” Repliku’s mother knocked on the door, “Are you having expositional dialogue with otherworldly beings in your room again?”

    “Answer it you antisocial noob,” I prodded Repliku.

    “Bite me Paladin,” Repliku snapped, answering the door.

    “I thought you might like some cookies,” Repliku’s mother said, offering the basket.

    “Kookies!?” I muttered, my eyes fixed on the basket. Repliku took the basket and set it on the desk. His mother walked off and Repliku shut the door.

    “She couldn’t see you?” He asked.

    “My Note is connected to Kh-vids.net, and you as well. Since you possess the Note, only you can see or hear me. Plus, only people with accounts on Kh-vids.net can possess the Note, and by extension, know of my existence.”

    “… What?” Repliku asked.

    “It’s a whole lot of 4th Wall-breaking nonsense, just ignore it,” I waved the question aside, “Anyway, you have the Note now, you can’t go to an afterlife, you were an accident and nobody likes you.”

    “Yeah well, I don’t care,” Repliku brushed me off, “I’m going to clean up the world one name at a time! Soon, only people who are hardworking and honest will remain! Cue montage!”

    At that, we were whisked back in time to the period before I met him. He was writing in the notebook frantically, his radio blaring out the Kira Theme next to him. Every now and then another person would keel over dead, accompanied by a sparkly swipe of Repliku’s pen.

    Back in the present, somehow our conversation had gone on until sunrise.

    “And I… I WILL BE THE GOD OF THIS NEW WORLD… forum,” Repliku exclaimed triumphantly.

    “… You’re freaking insane, buddy,” I said with no possibility for understatement.

    “Yeah well, I hate you.”

    “Likewise, buddy.”

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    You know, while I wrote this I had no idea whether I was writing it as a comedy or serious. It ended up being a weird mixture of both. I was watching the actual episode as I wrote this, and at some points I copied the dialog word for word. I realized this wouldn't work and so brutally abridged Light and Ryuk's first encounter. I swear to myself that I will try and write one chapter per episode. Don't worry ICSP, your turn shall come soon!

    Ok, could anyone PM me a summary of Death Note by episode? That way I don't have to overtax my already-strained bandwidth. Death Note doesn't air in Australia. There might be some tasty, sparkly rep in it for you!
     
  2. P Banned

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    Cool!

    It might help if I had seen episodes of Death note (worse off than you. New Zealand for me!), but ignoring that, good job!

    I wonder, will I get a place?
     
  3. Amber PLUR

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    XD So you're addicted to cookies?

    I wonder if I'll be anywhere in here...

    Eh, probably not. I can't think of anyone who would fit me XD
     
  4. gerlert_fav2005 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Haha!-No wait!

    One of the rules thingy of the Death Note it says that you need to have seen the person's face and name to kill him... O.O
    yeah but this is Kh-vids.Death Note. *shrugs*

    I snorted about the whole Fork of Truth. XD

    And the only thing I remember is that in episodes 2 they introduce L and in episode 3 Misa is introduced.
    Who would be Misa here?
     
  5. Haseo Knight of Light

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    Will Repliku go crazy in the end. I wonder who's gonna be Near.
     
  6. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    .............>_> DON'T KILL ME!.... I'll give you kookies of UBER AWESOME NOOB PWNING LEET HAX ROFLMAO!... I'm random XD..... Really, don't kill me... I'm too young to die TT_TT... And AnimeGirl104-chan will be saddies....
     
  7. Repliku Chaser

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    Very well done. I was laughing. I seem to be rather bipolar at moments shifting from one mood to the next. I have such a god complex! I hope you continue it because I want to see how the other characters turn out as well.

    Maybe Light Repliku stares at their avatars. >.>
     
  8. Princess Celestia Supreme Co-Ruler of Equestria

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    WOW Dude... just wow.

    I never thought our rivalry would go into Death Note status...

    I like it!

    And more importantly...
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    (I'm gonna make a new "I am Justice!" just for this fan fic.)
    But in my avatar... my face is covered! You cannot kill what you cannot see. You see, the thing is, you will be caught, and when you are, you will be tried and excecuted. What you are doing is evil Repliku.
     
  9. Paladin12345678 Twilight Town Denizen

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    I... I can't believe it. My Death Note fanfic has completely infiltrated the Interwebz! I... AM.... JUSTICE!
    @Pika_power: Check out this chapter, you are officially Matsuda! Plus, I randomly cast Neku as Light's dad
    @Amber: Maybe I'll make you that American chick from the investigation team that Light kills in an epic way
    @gerlert_fav2005: I thought about that rule, but decided it would be too complicated. Mah Fork is from LFG, look it up
    @Haseo426: Until I looked at Wikipedia I didn't know of Near's existence. I'm that early in DN o_O. I have no idea if Repliku will go crazy... actually, my Repliku has so far been crazy
    @Repliku: Yes, I had a lot of fun with your bipolar nature. Really it's because Light was so bipolar. I knew I'd have no chance with an actual personality :p
    @ICSP: Good news! This chapter contains your 'I AM JUSTICE' moment. It was SO EPIC in the anime! Don't be fooled though, you are L, but in DN L poses and the 1st, 2nd and 3rd best detectives in the world. In this you're still ICSP, but under an assumed username of L. Yayz for the Phoenix sprite!

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    Repliku was in class again. Kids were talking all around him while the teacher blathered on, oblivious.

    “Repliku?†the teacher broke off, “Could you please translate this plot-related foreshadowing… I mean, sentence?â€

    Repliku grumbled and stood, picking up his book as he did, “Having finally made his dream a reality, he was overwhelmed, both by the magnitude of his achievement and the joy and happiness that it brought him.â€

    The teacher blinked, “And you can’t see that it foreshadows your life? ... Get the hell out of my classroom.â€

    The kids all picked up their bags and moved out. Repliku lingered, making sure he kept the Note hidden. I stood up and rubbed my neck.

    “That was so boring! I thought it’d never end…†A kid phased through me. I poked his arse cheek with my Fork of Truth. The kid jumped into the air and raced away down the corridor. I chuckled and Repliku sighed.

    A time lapse snuck up on us. We were now in the courtyard leaving the school. I bugged Repliku some more, but he refused to talk to me. Eventually, he muttered out of the corner of his mouth that even if he did care about my existence it would look weird if he was talking to air. I stabbed him with my fork. Good times.

    Another time lapse brought us to his room. Repliku was sitting at his desk, his eyes alight with the glow of the screen. Another noob had started spamming on the forum again. Repliku wrote in a frenzy, his sparkly pen flashing across the page.

    “Why are you working so hard?†I mumbled around three masticated cookies. Chocolate chip. Mmmmmmm…

    “Super-intelligent rant,†Repliku muttered back, still absorbed.

    “Wha?â€

    “I was going to launch into a long speech about sleep and my performance, but since you wouldn’t explain everything last night I gave you a taste of your own medicine,†Repliku answered, smirking.

    “Just wait until I find my fork…†I threatened.

    Repliku’s sister knocked on the door. Repliku sighed and answered the door. His little sister walked in, blathering something about quadratic equations. I munched on more cookies as Repliku sat her down to help.

    “By the way buttmunch,†I mumbled, “If anyone else touches the Note they can see me.â€

    Repliku’s eye twitched and he showed me a finger of gratitude. I chuckled.

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    With Repliku so absorbed in the spammers and troublemakers on Kh-vids.net, he was oblivious to the goings-on in another part of the forum. The worried moderators had opened a frenzied chat topic dedicated to the recent deaths. Posts loaded with startling frequency until someone managed to uproot the discussion and get it on Ventrilo.

    “There’s been fifty-two deaths so far!†someone argued, “This forum is dangerous, someone is killing off members!â€

    “But all these members have been troublemakers,†another said, “There has been less and less overall trouble on the site since these death-“

    “Last time I checked, murder is murder no matter who the victim is!†A third butted in. Another member entered the chat.

    “Am I too late?†Pika_power asked.

    “No, nothing much has developed,†Neku answered, “We’re just arguing so far.â€

    “Then we have no choice but to call in L!†someone yelled. The chat instantly faded into silence.

    “Who’s this L guy?†Pika_power asked.

    “Sorry for not informing you earlier,†Neku told Pika, “But L’s mostly been a secret among the Mods so far. He’s an enigma, a member of similar rank to us. He wanders the site, taking on jobs that he’s personally interested in. L’s the greatest mind in this forum, even topping ICSP. He’s our trump card, and we need him.â€

    “No need to contact him,†a new voice uttered, “He’s already on the move.â€

    The chat was filled with quizzical outbursts. The mods managed to silence them and a beep sounded in all of their headsets as they were connected to L’s private chatline. There were a few surprised outbursts as each person taking part in the chat saw a huge Gothic L plaster itself across their computer screens.

    “Greetings fellow members of Kh-vids.net,†L said, his voice obviously changed with voice-changing software, “I am L.â€

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    “So, why exactly are we here? I asked. Repliku had found an old, abandoned house and we now sat within it. Several bottles and the Note lay on the floor in front of Repliku.

    “So far I thought I could pass this off as a record of criminals,†Repliku said, mixing the bottles together, “But since they could see you if they touched it, I’m walking a fine line. I need to be careful.â€

    “But why’d you just set fire to it?†I asked. Indeed, the Note was now ablaze.

    “Arson helps me think,†was Repliku’s only reply.

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    “The inherent difficulty of this case lies within its massive scope,†L informed the gathered members, “And believe me, what we are facing is an act of mass murder, one that is unforgivable. To crack a case like this, I will need the utmost co-operation of all the members, especially ones based in America.â€

    “But why America?†Both Neku and Pika_power asked at once.

    “There is strong evidence that the killer is American, or at least hiding out in America. If you need proof, I will give you evidence after my direct confrontation with this killer.â€

    “A direct confrontation?†Neku muttered.

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    Repliku slid the Note into his desk.

    “Isn’t that a pretty obvious place to hide it?†I asked, “You left your keys in the…†I trailed off.

    “Is that a Repliku bobble-head on those keys?†I asked in disbelief.

    Repliku snatched the keys away before I could see more, “Shut up.â€

    Repliku proceeded to explain in detail an elaborate setup to hide the Note, involving 3-D explanatory diagrams and fire. Lots of fire.

    “Wow, you put a scary amount of thought into this,†I noted.

    “I told you,†Repliku answered, “Arson helps me think.â€

    Outside, hundreds of people were on their cell phones. They were e-mailing several sites in the Internet, all dedicated to one person.

    Kira.

    Repliku brought up one of the fansites. The Legend of Kira.

    “Looks pretty cool,†I observed, “Is it about you?â€

    “Yeah,†Repliku said, “On the Internet, where you can remain anonymous, you can really express what you truly believe. In public, people are scared of what others think. But here, I can tell that people love Kira. I’m making the bad people go away.â€

    Repliku chuckled, “This is… just as planned.â€

    I jabbed him with my fork.

    “WTF?†He screamed, “WTH was that for?â€

    “If you turn that into a catchphrase,†I threatened, “You’ll have so many holes that people will use you for ventilation.â€

    “Uh, I’m sorry for the interruption,†the onscreen newscaster stammered, “Now we have a special news bulletin from the moderators of the site Kh-vids.net, the one connected to all the recent deaths. Here now is their official spokesperson.â€

    A man dressed in a neat charcoal suit was now shown sitting behind a desk. His nameplate showed the name Lind L. Taylor. Taylor stared at the camera.

    “Good evening,†he said in a clipped accent, “My name is Lind L. Taylor, otherwise known on KH-vids.net as L.â€

    On the chatline, the members were still talking.

    “But I don’t get it,†Pika_power said to Neku, “He’s never shown his face before. Why would he chose to do it now?â€

    “It means that he’s serious about this,†Neku answered, eyes fixed on his own TV. We’ve followed all your orders, L. Time for you to validate what you told us.

    “People across the globe are being murdered by a serial killer known as Kira. I promise you, Kira, I will hunt you down and I will find you,†Taylor continued.

    “You’ll never get me!†Repliku exclaimed at the TV screen, “Without the Note there’s no evidence to convict me! I’m untouchable-“

    “Believe me, Kira, I have a good idea what your motivation is,†L continued, “But what you are doing is evil.â€

    Evil. That word struck a chord in Repliku. He stood, his chair rolling back.

    “You think I’m evil!?†Repliku yelled at the TV, “I AM JUSTICE! I protect the innocent and those who fear evil! I will become the God of this new World-“

    “Forum,†I added.

    “AND THOSE WHO DENY THAT SHALL DIE!†Repliku wrenched his chair back to his desk and pulled a pen from the pot beside him. He popped the cap and scrawled a gigantic L across the page of the Note. Repliku capped the pen and laughed.

    “I guess you were too stupid, L,†Repliku laughed at the TV. The golden forty seconds passed.

    Taylor let out an agonized scream, clutching his chest in pain before finally slumping across the desk, lifeless. Repliku stared at Taylor’s dead body, standing and pushing the chair aside.

    “What’s wrong L,†Repliku taunted the dead man on the screen, “You got nothing else to say?†He laughed, his usual choking, insane laugh.

    A gigantic, Gothic L plastered itself across the screen. Repliku stared at it in shock.

    “In… Incredible,†a synthesized voice breathed on the TV, “I had heard reports but… I’d never have believed it if I hadn’t just seen it with my own eyes. Kira, you can kill people without actually being there in person!

    “I should tell you, the man that you killed, Lind L. Taylor, was a prison inmate with his execution scheduled for today. He had previously registered a membership for Kh-vids.net under the username L, and I adopted his persona. Of course, his kind was never really your target, but it seems that you do not have access to police information as his arrest or picture was never broadcast on the TV or Internet,†the voice continued, oblivious to Repliku’s mounting horror.

    “He’s got you there,†I chuckled.

    “But don’t let that fool you,†L continued, “L is real, I do exist. Now… TRY TO KILL ME!â€

    “You… you son of a-“ Repliku muttered angrily.

    Pika_power and Neku heard L’s outburst, as well as what followed. In the background, L continued taunting Kira to kill him. Both Repliku and I were staring dumbfounded at the TV.

    “Hmmm,†L mused, rubbing his chin in real life, “It seems that there are people you can’t kill. You’ve given me a useful hint. To return the favour, I’ll give you something I think you’ll find interesting.

    “Although this was announced as a worldwide broadcast, it actually only aired in the North American region,†L continued, seemingly enjoying himself, “We were planning to air it in other regions, but now you’ve told us where you are. Your first killing was found in North America, and I used this to deduce that you are in North America. Thank you for showing us your location. It won’t be long now before I can sentence you to death.â€

    The Kh-vids.net members listening were dumbstruck.

    “L… certainly lived up to his reputation,†Pika_power observed.

    “Of course,†Neku said, “He’s proved that Kira exists and that he is here in North America.â€

    “Now, I am very interested to know how you can kill people without touching them,†L continued over his mike, “But I can ask you these questions once I catch you. Let’s speak again soon.â€

    Repliku glared with pure rage at the TV. He rubbed the bridge of his nose.

    “He’s going to sentence me to death?†he chuckled. ood, still glaring at the TV.

    “I accept your challenge, L,†Repliku spat. I looked around, confused as the Kira Theme started up at a very loud volume. Repliku didn’t seem to notice.

    Each one has to hunt down the other without knowing their name or face, I thought, And the first identity to be revealed will die. This is $)@&%^@ epic.

    “L.â€

    “Kira.â€

    “I will hunt you down and I will eliminate you!†Both Repliku and L vowed in unison. Once again, I wondered how two people so far apart could synchronise speech. I suddenly saw both Repliku and L in a split-screen together, L’s face hidden in shadow. They both yelled;

    “I AM JUSTICE!â€


    Good night, happy reading forum goers! :D

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  10. ♥AL90♥ Hollow Bastion Committee

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  11. Paladin12345678 Twilight Town Denizen

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    *coughs* How come nobody is posting here? I'll have to wait until the 2nd of July before I can start watching Death Note again, so please try to keep this thread alive before then. We could also discuss member's roles and perhaps audution for them. So far:

    Light: Repliku
    L: ICSP
    Misa: Catch The Rain (makes sense, she's a mod)
    Ryuk: Me
    Light's dad: Neku
    Matsuda: Pika_power
    Amber: Mrs. Penbar (At least I think that's her name)
     
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    Wow... I had just read this, and from what I see, it is so awesome in so many ways I cannot begin to describe it!!

    ^^ Cool!! You're giving us all audition thingies?

    Hmm... I wonder if I get a mention in this story... xD

    Hm.. Guess not but keep the awesome work up!! I'll be keeping a close watch for the next part of the story!!
     
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    If CtR's Misa, I nominate DPWolf as Rem!
     
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    Great...

    Who the hell is Matsuda? Just a brief bio please.

    Thanks for including me.
     
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    Matsuda in DN is a guy that works as a detective. Unlike the others that work with him, he's a happy-go-lucky guy that is oblivious to many things... =D


    Go ahead and continue with your story! I luv it! X3
     
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    .....who's this Amber person?.......and that was definitely epic. Seriously...keep going. This is very interesting. man...ICSP as L......this going to get good.
     
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  20. EraserRain Banned

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    You copier!!!!! Madiyasha already made this!!!!! YOU SUCK!!!!!! EPIC FAIL!!!!