While sitting on a six-hour drive bak home, I drew this over the weekend... It's currently a rough draft so don expect TOO much from it. (added with the fact my scanner jacked up again) And before I move on, I wana see if there's anything that's flawed or needs improvement. (shirt designs in particular would b helpful <<)
Nice job, good shading. You seem to pay attention to detail a lot, except when it come to hair and faces. To me, the guys all look the same and the two girls look the same, and it makes them hard to tell the difference. Riku needs to have more of a serious and long face, while roxas has a rounded down baby face. Also, chins shouldn't be pointed so much, especially for the guys, which are more like rectangles.
This is very good.Its nicely detailed.You are talented.Although the top part of the picture I can't see it that well.But everything else is nicely done.
You only came up with one face per gender it seems. In this style hair and facial structure are the main focus as far as identifying characteristics. Oddly enough you put the least effort into them. When you do a finished product try not to use the universal face.
meh, thx for your comments. Note: All the cropped off edges such as the top and the left/rite side was cuz of my scanner.
if thats kairi on the middle right she looks like Lucy from elfen lied after her hair is cut, dont know why but she reminds me of her
Thats true, You need to emphasise expression on both face and smile, I can barely tell who is who. Try and make their expression different, and then it'll look even more awesome! You have amazing potential!! ^^ I envy the way you draw In perfect detail!!!
