Traditional Art Kh Mistakes 2 comic

It's read by panels, 1-7
There are mistakes in there, the colouring for me wasn't easy, because I'm not a great colour-er.
The way I drew it still needs some work, but I think I did good. I showed Rexmildd, she liked it, also my daddy:) Even though he found it.. inappropriate. ( I was sleepy and bored)
Tell me what you think:)


http://no14mexony.deviantart.com/art/Kh-Mistakes-2-You-Promised-82381891

 

What the hell is a "wee-woo?"

You may want to watch your grammar on the 5th panel...and work a little harder on the eyes. And Xigbar's hair should be black, not gray/whitish. Keep working at it, though!

 

The last panel was funny and then same thing, color it into a solid kind and it would be okay.

 

^ Agreed!

But it's so cute! it caught of little bit of humor but it was cute! xD
Xigbar, owes me that money. >:/

 

lol that was funny, but the colouring was a bit off and needs improving and the drawings wern't the best but it was good