Traditional Art KH drawings (take two)

Well I've posted some of them before...now with a little bit of darkening and edits. I've also added some new ones...

http://kingdom-triforce.deviantart.com/art/Beach-Boy-Roxas-67427648

http://kingdom-triforce.deviantart.com/art/Sunset-on-Destiny-Islands-67427127

http://kingdom-triforce.deviantart.com/art/Chibi-Cloud-Comics-67792261

http://kingdom-triforce.deviantart.com/art/Weekends-on-Destiny-Islands-67792614

If u have a deviantart account, plz leave a post or two. Otherwise, I'd appreciate some comments...

PS: 1 of them isn't a KH drawing, that was a lie...

 

I love the Roxas picture. And the Cloud comic was SOOOO cute!!! You did a really god job! =D
Love them! <3

 

I do have a DA account, but I'll just post here to keep it all gathered. :x

Roxas: MUCH BETTER. This is a good hardness for the lineart tone, just remember to make the lineart on Roxas harder as well or he'll lose the attention from the viewer over the board and blade. Kudos to the eyes, the pupils have a wonderful shade! :D Take extra heed to the big toe, I swear to god toes are sneaky to get right..

Destiny Islands: This also became better with some hard lines. A pointer I can give you right now is to think about the sunset(?) scenery - it will shine on the gang, so it will also create shadows. If I were you I'd let the hardest lineart be on the side the shadows would be. (Kairi and Riku's back, Sora's front more to the right)

Cloud comic: XD Wow... Wrong choice of paper, the lines borks it up. If you can, you could draw the lineart with a pen, then tape it to the window on a bright/sunny day, tape a clean sheet of paper on it and redraw the lineart - this is how you can get clean lineart and it's completly free. :3

Sora: The only thing I'd want you to change is the arms - make it a tiny amount thicker so that he has a little sense of muscles. (Not like Riku muscles, of course) The vest is a bit too straight looking where the opening is, let it twist a little inwards. If you like, let Kairi and Riku stand on their own shadows.

 

I dunno if I really want to take the effort to edit the comic and that Sora picture. As I said before, they were REALLY QUICKLY done. Besides, I have a huge load of Homework, extra activities, etc. (aka life) that I need to look into before I have time to fix any drawings so...

Aside from all that, I'll probably start Computer graphics rather than pencil in about a month if I'm lucky cuz I hope to get photoshop and a graphic tablet of some sort by then...(I'm getting a CS3 and a 6x8 tablet all for a $60 buck value...no joke. It's great when ur friend's parents are professional graphic designers...)

 

You should do what is most importaint in your schedule, of course. :3 Your quickies are good, just keep the suggestions in mind should you want to spend more time on some of your work. (trust me, it can quickly turn into a months work depending on how much work you put into it, mostly the colours part)

You're so lucky!! :> I barely know any adult who has computer skills at all.. Barely.

 

lol that's wat every1 says...Either way, I'm focusing mainly in this Chibi diograma I'm making. I hope to finish it by Halloween with colors n stuff...

 

The last two were pretty good.